Fix some sentence errors throughout the chapters
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@@ -1917,7 +1917,7 @@ label chapter_1:
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hide solly
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pause 0.5
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"With a violently loud blow of his whistle the couch also takes his position to show the proper technique."
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"With a violently loud blow of his whistle the coach also takes his position to show the proper technique."
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show inco concerned
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@@ -2217,7 +2217,7 @@ label chapter_2:
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show inco shocked at setx(0.6), nudgeup()
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"The girl lets out a laugh as lays an arm around my shoulder, her smile growing wider"
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"The girl lets out a laugh as she lays an arm around my shoulder, her smile growing wider."
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"Heat creeps along my face as her muzzle nears my ear, especially when a puff of hot air blows by the lobe."
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pause 0.5
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