Implement latest chapter 4 revisions
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@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ label chapter_4:
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"With that, the call ends, and not a few seconds later that I get a text notification."
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pause .5
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"D-man:{fast}{w=0.3} 61193 Chriton Road."
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"D-man:{fast}{w=0.3} 61193 chriton road."
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"D-man:{fast}{w=0.3} go the long way around the neighbor doesnt chain his dog lol"
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pause .5
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@ -483,7 +483,7 @@ label chapter_4:
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#Flip Vinny sprite in, make sure feet contact Inco sprite at crotch level
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I "{cps=10}{i}whyyyyy{/i}{/cps}"
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I "{cps=10}{i}Whyyyyy...?{/i}{/cps}"
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show sophia annoyed at moveinright(0.2) with eidissolve
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@ -590,7 +590,7 @@ label chapter_4:
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I "Hello ma'am. Thank you for having me."
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unknown "Oh, I didn't know we had someone visiting, I would've cleaned up more{cps=5}...{/cps}"
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unknown "Oh, I didn't know we'd have guests so soon, I would've cleaned up more{cps=5}...{/cps}"
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Sp "You can just call me Sophia, dear."
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@ -702,7 +702,7 @@ label chapter_4:
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I "I was invited!"
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"Focusonherfacenottheotherthing...s"
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"Focusonherfacenottheotherthing{w=.4}...s"
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I "What the heck are you doing here?!"
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@ -1405,14 +1405,27 @@ label chapter_4:
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O "I just have a lot of art{cps=5}...{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}"
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show olivia pool somber with eidissolve_nd
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show olivia pool neutral with eidissolve_nd
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extend " stuff I have to do. Sorry."
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pause 0.5
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"Damien's little brother steps out from the small deck."
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show vinny sad at moveinright(0.65) with eidissolve
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Vi "But, you said we'd play some time today."
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show olivia pool somberdown with eidissolve
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"She tries to back her uncertain tone up with a shaky smile."
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pause 0.5
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O "M-maybe later, Vinny."
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show olivia pool somber with eidissolve
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O "Uh{cps=5}...{/cps}"
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O "Have fun?"
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@ -1437,9 +1450,11 @@ label chapter_4:
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show inco at movex(0.65)
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show spr_grill at movex(0.0)
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show spr_poolside at movex(0.2)
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show vinny at movex(1.0)
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with None
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hide spr_poolside
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hide vinny
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show inco left behind damien
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show damien left
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with eidissolve
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@ -2373,7 +2388,7 @@ label chapter_4:
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O "{cps=5}...{/cps}Wait."
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"Olivia looks down for a moment before she jerks her head back up, her face becoming a darker tinge of green."
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"Olivia looks down for a moment before she jerks her head back up, her face gaining a reddish hue."
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show olivia at setx(0.5), nudgeup()
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show olivia angry left with eidissolve
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@ -3249,7 +3264,7 @@ label PartyEnd:
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O "About right."
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pause .5
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"As Olivia rolls down a small metal ramp I hadn't noticed, we catch Damien on the bottom step."
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"As Olivia rolls down a small wooden ramp I hadn't noticed, we catch Damien on the bottom step."
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show damien shocked at moveinright(0.3) with eidissolve
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@ -3371,50 +3386,78 @@ label PartyEnd:
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Vi "You finally came to play again!"
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show vinny at sety(), backmovex(0.55)
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show vinny at sety(), slideinplace1(0.55, 0.02)
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"The rambunctious boy hoots and hollers as he clambers atop her."
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"The rambunctious boy hoots and hollers as he bounces in circles around her."
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show vinny at setx(0.55), jumping()
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"Olivia huddles her arms and looks aside in my direction, feeling the stares from the table."
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Vi "Livy, let's play cannon!"
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show vinny at sety(), jumping(0.0, 3)
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"I give her a reassuring thumbs-up."
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Vi "Cannon!{w=0.3} Cannon!{w=0.3} Cannon!{w=0.3}"
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show olivia happy with eidissolve
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"Actually, this is perfect, thank you Vinny."
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"A growl reverberates from Olivia."
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show olivia cheerful with eidissolve
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"This is something Olivia's able to give, when she was so worried about just taking."
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O "Oh, you wanna play cannon then?"
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show vinny at sety(), jumping()
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"I hope she goes for it..."
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show olivia considering with eidissolve
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O "Uh, I'm a little tired, Vinny-"
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show vinny at nudgeup(), movex(0.525)
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Vi "What? No! C'mon Livy! You promised we'd play today!"
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Vi "Like old times!"
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show olivia neutraldown with eidissolve_nd
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O "{cps=5}I...{/cps}"
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show vinny at sety(), movex(0.575)
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show vinny sad with eidissolve_nd
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Vi "{cps=10}Pleeeaaase?{/cps}"
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O "{cps=15}Ohh...{/cps}"
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show olivia somberdown with eidissolve_nd
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O "Alright, alright. You win."
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O "I did promise..."
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show olivia grindown with eidissolve_nd
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O "You wanna play cannon then?"
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show vinny neutral at jumping(), movex(0.55)
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Vi "Yeah yeah yeah! Cannon!"
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O "Alright then. Ready?"
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show inco at movex(0.25)
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show damien at movex(0.1)
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show olivia at movex(0.4)
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with None
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show spr_poolside at moveinleft(0.0)
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show olivia right
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show olivia happy right
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show inco skeptical
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with eidissolve
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show vinny at movexy(0.5, -0.1)
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pause 0.5
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#Turn Olivia and Vincent toward the pool
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O "Alright then. Ready?"
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#Raise Vinny sprite above Olivia horizontally
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Vi "Round loaded!"
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Vi "FIRE!"
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window auto hide
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play sound [ "<silence .2>", snd_slapstick_whoosh ]
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show olivia:
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pause 0.5
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show inco shocked at nudgeup()
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pause 0.75
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pause 0.7
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hide vinny
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play sound snd_water_splash
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"{i}SPLASH!{/i}" # REMOVE THIS LATER
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#Vinny sprite zooms to the pool, loud splash sfx
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pause 0.5
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pause 1.0
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"Oh god this was a bad idea-"
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#Vinny sprite zooms to the pool, loud splash sfx
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"Oh God, this was a bad idea-"
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show vinny neutral left swag behind spr_poolside:
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xpos 1.1 ypos 0.2
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@ -3461,7 +3504,7 @@ label PartyEnd:
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#Clapping SFX
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Ra "*Whistles*"
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Ra "{i}FWEEEEEEEEEE{/i}"
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Sp "Randy!"
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show olivia considering with eidissolve_nd
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O "N-no. shut up"
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O "N-no, shut up."
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O "Anyway-"
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Vi "Can we do it again Livy?"
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show olivia happy with eidissolve
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show olivia grindown with eidissolve
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"Olivia smiles and pats his head."
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@ -3518,6 +3561,7 @@ label PartyEnd:
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show damien sheepish
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show vinny right
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show olivia happy
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with eidissolve
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"It's weird seeing it, but as she readies Vincent for another launch, the gator girl has a bright toothy smile I never thought she had."
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L "Uh, Mr. Payne{cps=5}...{/cps}"
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Vi "Ahahaha, WOOO!"
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Vi "Ahahaha{w=.4} WOOO."
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Ra "Alright, I get it."
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Ra "Alright I get it."
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show randy happy at moveinright(0.6, m=.3)
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with eidissolve
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show randy happy at moveinright(0.6, m=.3) with eidissolve
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Ra "VINCENT!"
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show vinny swag left at moveinleft(0.8) with eidissolve
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#Vinny sprite in front of Randy sprite
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Vi "Yeah dad?"
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show randy neutral with eidissolve_nd
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"Vincent perks up and immediately rushes off."
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show vinny neutral swag at moveinleft (0.35) with eidissolve
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Vi "Oh I know!"
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Vi "Oh,{w=0.3} I know!"
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show olivia surprised left at moveinleft (0.8) with eidissolve
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show vinny at movex(0.35, 1.5)
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show vinny right with eidissolve
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show olivia somber left at moveinleft (0.8) with eidissolve
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"Olivia turns back to the rest of the group with an uneasy smile."
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show damien at movex(-0.05)
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show vinny at movex(0.05)
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show lizhead at movex(-0.15)
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show inco at movex(0.1)
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show randy at movex(0.75)
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show olivia at movex(0.5)
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show damien at movex(0.05)
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show vinny at movex(0.15)
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show lizhead at movex(-0.05)
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show inco at movex(0.2)
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show randy at movex(0.45)
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show olivia at movex(0.7)
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with None
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show sophia neutral at moveinright(0.25)
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show randy left
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show sophia neutral at moveinright(0.3)
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show olivia surprised
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with eidissolve
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pause 0.5
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"Mrs. Payne steps forward with a sigh."
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"Mrs. Payne steps forward, her hands held up and wavering."
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pause 0.5
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Sp "Olivia?"
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O "H-{w=.4}hi,{w=.4} Auntie."
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"Ms. Payne and her husband approach, both with nervous smiles."
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"When she speaks, it's with a certain restraint, holding her excitement back."
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"As though worried if it showed too much she'll change her mind and go back in."
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pause 0.5
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O "{cps=5}I...{/cps}{w=.4} didn't miss much, right?"
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Sp "I'm so glad you came out, dear."
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show damien at movex(-0.05, 1.5)
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show vinny at movex(0.05, 1.5)
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show lizhead at movex(-0.15, 1.5)
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show inco at movex(0.1, 1.5)
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show randy at movex(0.75, 1.5)
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show olivia at movex(0.5, 1.5)
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show sophia at movex(0.25, 1.5)
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with None
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show randy left with eidissolve
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pause 0.5
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show black behind sophia, olivia, randy:
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alpha 0.4
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show vinny behind black
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show olivia behind randy
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with dissolve
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pause .5
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pause 0.5
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nudgeup()
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"And then pulls Olivia into a hug."
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pause .5
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pause 0.75
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Sp "I'm so glad you came out,{w=0.3} dear."
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pause .5
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"The older woman kneels in front of her, and wraps her arms around Olivia."
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Ra "Aye,{w=0.3} you always know how to liven up a party,{w=0.3} Lil Ace."
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pause .5
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show olivia somberdown with eidissolve
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show randy at movex(0.7)
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pause 0.5
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"As she's hugged from both sides by Damien's parents,{w=0.3} I see Olivia's smile quiver."
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pause .5
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Ra "Aye, it's been too long, Lil Ace."
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pause 0.5
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"Finally her own arms come up and she returns the hug from them."
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"Randy's hand ruffles her hair while his other arm also encircles both Olivia and Sophia, and while Olivia does her best to avoid his palm."
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pause 1.0
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show olivia somberdown with eiDissolve(1.0)
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"I can see the tiny smile on her face."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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"Time seemed to pick up speed after Olivia had come out."
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"Mr. Payne and Damien returned to the grill, managing to prep and cook a final serving of meaty goodness for an early dinner."
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"Damien and his father returned to the grill, managing to prep and cook a final serving of meaty goodness for an early dinner."
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"I decided I could go for seconds, and get a few scraps of this and that."
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"I nearly drop my food when I get a rough pat on the shoulder from behind."
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"It's Mr. Payne. He looks down at me with a thankful smile."
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pause 0.5
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"Mrs. Payne and Mr. Ferris had continued their conversation till Mr. Ferris' throat ran dry."
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"And Damien, but at least he looked apologetic about it."
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show inco neutral left at setx(0.5)
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with eidissolve
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show inco neutral left at setx(0.5) with eidissolve
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"But now things are winding down."
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