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@ -146,7 +146,10 @@ define SV = Character ('Street Vendor', base, color="#F8E120", who_outlines=[(1,
define carl = Character ('Mr. Carldewskii', base, color="#E19E40", who_outlines=[(1, '#03223B')])
define Drf = Character ('Dr. Fernsworth', base, color="#253354", who_outlines=[(1, '#334573')])
define FRT = Character ('Fang Reed & Trish', base, color="#4963A5", who_outlines=[(1, '#FFFFFF')])
#experimental colors
define FangAndTrish = Character('Fang and Trish', base, color="42DFA8", who_outlines=[(1, '#183623')])
define NaserAndNaomi = Character('Naser and Naomi', base, color="22DFA8", who_outlines=[(1, '#2036B3')])
define TeamMember = Character('Team member', base, color="D32552", who_outlines=[(1, '#445F42')])
#Extra image translations
#siloettes
image stellaSilo = im.Flip(im.MatrixColor("stella/stella neutral.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1)), horizontal=True)
@ -330,6 +333,23 @@ image carldelewski flip = im.Flip("other/carldelewski.png", horizontal=True)
image fangdad unimpressed flip = im.Flip("fangparents/fangdad unimpressed.png", horizontal=True)
image naser handout flip = im.Flip("naser/naser handout.png", horizontal=True)
image fang adorable flip = im.Flip("fang/emotive set/fang adorable.png", horizontal=True)
image anon concerned flip = im.Flip("images/anon/base set/anon concerned.png", horizontal=True)
#fang with amber pendant
image fang neutral amberpendant = "images/fang/basic set/fang neutral w amber pendant.png"
image fang neutral amberpendant flip = im.Flip("images/fang/basic set/fang neutral w amber pendant.png", horizontal=True)
image fang angry amberpendant = "images/fang/basic set/fang angry w amber pendant.png"
image fang angry amberpendant flip = im.Flip("images/fang/basic set/fang angry w amber pendant.png", horizontal=True)
image fang sad amberpendant = "images/fang/basic set/fang sad w amber pendant.png"
image fang sad amberpendant flip = im.Flip("images/fang/basic set/fang sad w amber pendant.png", horizontal=True)
image fang considering amberpendant = "images/fang/basic set/fang considering w amber pendant.png"
image fang considering amberpendant flip = im.Flip("images/fang/basic set/fang considering w amber pendant.png", horizontal=True)
image fang happy amberpendant = "images/fang/basic set/fang happy w amber pendant.png"
image fang happy amberpendant flip = im.Flip("images/fang/basic set/fang happy w amber pendant.png", horizontal=True)
image fang surprised amberpendant = "images/fang/basic set/fang surprised w amber pendant.png"
image fang surprised amberpendant flip = im.Flip("images/fang/basic set/fang surprised w amber pendant.png", horizontal=True)
image fang unimpressed amberpendant = "images/fang/basic set/fang unimpressed w amber pendant.png"
image fang unimpressed amberpendant flip = im.Flip("images/fang/basic set/fang unimpressed w amber pendant.png", horizontal=True)
# vfx
image black = "#000"
@ -344,14 +364,29 @@ image guitarpick = "/images/other/pickthrown.png"
image projector9 blurred = im.Blur("images/cgs/projector9.jpg", 1.5)
image projector9 normal = "images/cgs/projector9.jpg"
image fangonamp = "images/cgs/finalamp.png"
image schooloutside normal = "images/backgorunds/outside school.jpg"
image schooloutside normal = "images/backgrounds/outside school.jpg"
image schooloutside blurred = im.Blur("images/backgrounds/outside school.jpg", 1.8)
image sodacan blurred = im.Blur("images/other/sodacan.png", 1.8)
image fangdadlarge = "images/fangparents/fangdadneutral large.png"
image lighter = "images/other/lighter.png"
image amberpendant = "images/other/amberpendant1.png"
image fangphone = "images/other/fangphone.png"
image fangphonelayer1 = "images/other/fangphonelayer1.png"
image fangphonelayer2 = im.Alpha("images/other/fangphonelayer2.png", 0.4)
image nonalcoholic = "images/other/soda.png"
image amberpendant = "images/other/amberpendant1.png"
image chadshark flip = im.Flip("stella/chadshark.png", horizontal=True)
image chadshark = "stella/chadshark.png"
image home fang night blurred = im.Blur('images/backgrounds/home fang night.jpg', 2.0)
image home fang night lessblurred = im.Blur('images/backgrounds/home fang night.jpg', 1.5)
image home fang night barelyblurred = im.Blur('images/backgrounds/home fang night.jpg', 0.5)
image d01_blur = im.Blur('images/cgs/d01.jpg', 1.5)
#extra chapters other images
image fangroomfuture = "images/backgrounds/fangroomfuture.png"
image livingroomdayalt = "images/backgrounds/livingroomdayalt.png"
image projector9_blur:
"projector9 normal" with dissolve
@ -367,6 +402,75 @@ image schooloutside_blur:
pause 1
repeat
#phone bgs for video calls
#caller bgs
image anonday_videocall_bg = im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/backgrounds/foodcourt.jpg", 0.9),(0,40,576,920))
image anonnight_videocall_bg = im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/backgrounds/room anon dark.jpg", 0.9),(100,40,576,920))
image fpvcblack = im.Scale("images/other/black.png", 565, 1100)
image call_ended = im.Scale("images/other/black.png", 656, 700)
#callers
image anon_vc_neutral = im.Flip(im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/anon/base set/anon neutral.png", 2.0),(900,250,653,800)), horizontal=True)
image anon_vc_neutral_alt1 = im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/anon/base set/anon neutral.png", 2.0),(800,250,653,800))
image anon_vc_concerned = im.Flip(im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/anon/base set/anon concerned.png", 2.0),(900,250,653,800)), horizontal=True)
image anon_vc_happy = im.Flip(im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/anon/base set/anon happy.png", 2.0),(900,250,653,800)), horizontal=True)
image anon_vc_grin = im.Flip(im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/anon/base set/anon grin.png", 2.0),(900,250,653,800)), horizontal=True)
image anon_vc_unimpressed = im.Flip(im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/anon/base set/anon unimpressed.png", 2.0),(900,250,653,800)), horizontal=True)
image no_caller = im.Alpha('images/other/black.png', 0)
#fangphone effect - video call with Anon mainly
layeredimage fangphonevideocall:
group midlayer:
pos (370, -20)
rotate 1
attribute blackmid default:
"fpvcblack"
group talkerbg:
pos (446, -35)
rotate 1
# xzoom 1.3 #anon's cam is shitty
attribute bgday default:
"anonday_videocall_bg"
attribute bgnight:
"anonnight_videocall_bg"
attribute call_ended_bg:
"no_caller"
group talker:
pos (410, 65)
rotate 3
attribute anonneutral:
"anon_vc_neutral"
attribute anonneutralalt1:
"anon_vc_neutral_alt1"
attribute anonconcerned:
"anon_vc_concerned"
attribute anonhappy:
"anon_vc_happy"
attribute anongrin:
"anon_vc_grin"
attribute anonunimpressed:
"anon_vc_unimpressed"
attribute call_ended:
"no_caller"
always:
"fangphonelayer1"
group toplayer:
attribute basic default:
"fangphonelayer2"
#additional flips
image naomi future flip = im.Flip('images/naomi/naomi future.png', horizontal=True)
image fang d happy flip = im.Flip('images/fang/future sets/fang d happy.png', horizontal=True)
@ -382,6 +486,7 @@ image other_fang_home_prom_stars = "images/cgs/stair1.png"
#additional BGs
image park_night = "images/backgrounds/park night.jpg"
image home_fang_dim = "images/backgrounds/home fang dim.jpg"
#WAOH ITS THE TITLE SCREEN!!!!
label splashscreen:

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@ -10,73 +10,73 @@ label chapter_12C:
show fang neutral flip at sright with dissolve
F "I wish I could get some help for the other periods, this took way too long."
Lucy "I wish I could get some help for the other periods, this took way too long."
F "Fuck, man. Trish keeps staring at me during class expecting me to talk to her, I gotta avoid Reed and Stella now because they're always around her too, it's agonizing!"
Lucy "Fuck, man. Trish keeps staring at me during class expecting me to talk to her, I gotta avoid Reed and Stella now because they're always around her too, it's agonizing!"
F "I keep having these dreams where she mans up and I'm forced to talk to her again! They feel more like nightmares now!"
Lucy "I keep having these dreams where she mans up and I'm forced to talk to her again! They feel more like nightmares now!"
F "Rosa is too busy to help{w=0.2} - with the exercises, I mean - but I hope the camping trip will be fun."
Lucy "Rosa is too busy to help{w=0.2} - with the exercises, I mean - but I hope the camping trip will be fun."
A "Well it's done. All of it."
F "Thanks, Anon. You're a pretty cool guy."
Lucy "Thanks, Anon. You're a pretty cool guy."
A "No problem, I just like helping you, I guess."
F "...and without asking for anything in return."
Lucy "...and without asking for anything in return."
F "..."
Lucy "..."
hide fang
hide anon
show kissu1
with fade
F "You're so good to me."
Lucy "You're so good to me."
A "Thanks. F-{w=0.3} Lucy."
F "Is there nothing you really want from me?"
Lucy "Is there nothing you really want from me?"
A "You mean repay? I don't know, things are too good now, though."
F "More naps?"
Lucy "More naps?"
F "Or perhaps hugs?"
Lucy "Or perhaps hugs?"
F "Hand holding?"
Lucy "Hand holding?"
pause 0.5
"I'm sweating profusely."
F "Or maybe...{w=0.4}a kiss?"
Lucy "Or maybe...{w=0.4}a kiss?"
A "Kiss?{w=0.1} With that huge snoot?"
F "Why? Are you afraid? Have you never kissed a dinosaur before?"
Lucy "Why? Are you afraid? Have you never kissed a dinosaur before?"
A "No?"
F "Not even a human girl?"
Lucy "Not even a human girl?"
A "{cps=*0.5}Uhhh...{/cps}"
F "So I'm your first?{w=0.2} That's exciting."
Lucy "So I'm your first?{w=0.2} That's exciting."
A "This is so weird, I don't know how I'm feeling right now. Don't you feel weird too?"
F "I've kissed shorter snouts, yours can't be that different."
Lucy "I've kissed shorter snouts, yours can't be that different."
F "Uh...{w=0.3}look Anon, if it doesn't work out..."
Lucy "Uh...{w=0.3}look Anon, if it doesn't work out..."
F "...It won't change anything.{w=0.3} Right?"
Lucy "...It won't change anything.{w=0.3} Right?"
A "Promise?"
F "Of course I promise! Get over here you fucking pussy!"
Lucy "Of course I promise! Get over here you fucking pussy!"
A "O-okay."
F "I won't bite, though I've never had human before..."
Lucy "I won't bite, though I've never had human before..."
A "Okay, here it goes..."
scene black with fade
@ -85,51 +85,51 @@ label chapter_12C:
A "Well?"
F "T-thats just the lips!"
Lucy "T-thats just the lips!"
"..."
F "T-the tongue, come on."
Lucy "T-the tongue, come on."
"..."
F "What are you doing?!"
Lucy "What are you doing?!"
A "Your mouth hinges way back, I have to hang my jaw."
F "Dont do that, its stupid!"
Lucy "Dont do that, its stupid!"
A "Wait, {i}you{/i} open wide now."
F "Thats even sillier."
Lucy "Thats even sillier."
"..."
F "*glug*{w=0.2} *hack*{w=0.2} *urk*"
Lucy "*glug*{w=0.2} *hack*{w=0.2} *urk*"
A "Oh god how long is your tongue?! I think I almost threw up."
F "*cough*{w=0.2} Oh god *cough*{w=0.2} I think I reached your tonsils! *hurk*"
Lucy "*cough*{w=0.2} Oh god *cough*{w=0.2} I think I reached your tonsils! *hurk*"
A "Shit sorry sorry sorr-"
F "No no. Its fine.{w=0.2} Let me think."
Lucy "No no. Its fine.{w=0.2} Let me think."
F "Lets try the other one again."
Lucy "Lets try the other one again."
A "O-okay…"
"..."
F "Dont open as *mnph*...{w=0.4} wide."
Lucy "Dont open as *mnph*...{w=0.4} wide."
"..."
F "Wait…"
Lucy "Wait…"
"..."
F "Tilt to the side… like this."
Lucy "Tilt to the side… like this."
"..."
@ -139,21 +139,21 @@ label chapter_12C:
A "I dont know…{w=0.2} Ill probably never get the hang of this."
F "Really? I uh… {w=0.2}think it was… {w=0.2}nice."
Lucy "Really? I uh… {w=0.2}think it was… {w=0.2}nice."
A "Wait seriously?"
F "Y-yeah. Youre not a {i}bad{/i} kisser."
Lucy "Y-yeah. Youre not a {i}bad{/i} kisser."
A "Bullshit."
F "Seriously, here."
Lucy "Seriously, here."
"..."
"..."
F "Dont be shy now…"
Lucy "Dont be shy now…"
A "Lucy."
@ -163,11 +163,11 @@ label chapter_12C:
show kissu2
with fade
F "See? Getting better."
Lucy "See? Getting better."
A "Mmm…"
F "I can feel your heart beating. Its so loud."
Lucy "I can feel your heart beating. Its so loud."
stop music fadeout 1.0
scene black with fade
A "Y-yeah,{w=0.2} same."
@ -222,15 +222,15 @@ label chapter_12C:
Ro "{i}But I see the stars at night so well, so Stella has slumber parties often!{/i}"
F "{i}Anon! We should go to!{/i}"
Lucy "{i}Anon! We should go to!{/i}"
A "{i}Wait what why?{/i}"
F "{i}We can go stargazing Anon. Just imagine it.{/i}"
Lucy "{i}We can go stargazing Anon. Just imagine it.{/i}"
A "{i}But camping? Cant we just-{/i}"
F "{i}Cmon Anon. Dont you want to watch the stars together with me?{/i}"
Lucy "{i}Cmon Anon. Dont you want to watch the stars together with me?{/i}"
"{i}Lucys pleading eyes lock onto mine.{/i}"
@ -274,9 +274,9 @@ label chapter_12C:
Ro "Guess thats just him."
F "Come on, quit teasing him."
Lucy "Come on, quit teasing him."
F "Who cares if he hasnt evolved to fire yet?"
Lucy "Who cares if he hasnt evolved to fire yet?"
"I trip into the tent and tear the whole thing down."
stop music fadeout 1.0
@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
show fang neutral at sleft
with easeinleft
show anon neutral flip at acenter with dissolve
stop music fadeout 3.0
Ro "I never pictured Fang coming over."
Ro "Lucy really is lucky to have you."
@ -327,10 +327,11 @@ label chapter_12C:
"Lucy gets that look in her eye and snatches the bigger one right off."
St "Eventide draws near. I believe it best we sojourn from the fated ones, Rosa. My scrying glass awaits."
pause 0.5
"What."
show fang neutral flip
F "Er, what? I dont speak… whatever the fuck that was."
Lucy "Er, what? I dont speak… whatever the fuck that was."
Ro "*giggle* I believe Stella means that the sun is setting and we need to go set up her telescope."
@ -338,7 +339,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
"Rosa and Stella take their plates of imposter kebabs and start walking to the other end of Rosas yard."
show fang neutral at sleft with dissolve
stop music fadeout 1.0
play music "audio/OST/middle_of_nowhere.ogg" fadein 1.0
hide rosa
hide stella
@ -348,11 +349,11 @@ label chapter_12C:
"With nothing to do but wait for night time I also begin to remove kebab."
F "Bleh. I think Stella undercooked this. Gimme some of yours."
Lucy "Bleh. I think Stella undercooked this. Gimme some of yours."
A "No way, you have your own."
F "Well I want yours too. Youre supposed to share with your girlfriend."
Lucy "Well I want yours too. Youre supposed to share with your girlfriend."
"Damn her and her filthy ptero-logic."
@ -366,19 +367,19 @@ label chapter_12C:
"Once she pulls away Im left holding a crispy yet clean wooden stick."
F "Mmmm… {w=0.4}Stolen food is the best food."
Lucy "Mmmm… {w=0.4}Stolen food is the best food."
show fang happy with dissolve
A "Well that was uncalled for."
F "Here, take the gross one."
Lucy "Here, take the gross one."
"Lucy hands over her undercooked kebab."
A "Whatever, I like it rare anyways."
F "You should be thanking me, then."
Lucy "You should be thanking me, then."
"She leans her head into my shoulder."
@ -386,15 +387,15 @@ label chapter_12C:
"I hold the stick over the fire to char a bit more."
F "Thats just going to burn the outside."
Lucy "Thats just going to burn the outside."
A "Cant be harder than roasting a marshmallow, right?"
F "Did Rosa bring any?"
Lucy "Did Rosa bring any?"
A "Think so. Save your kebab stick for them."
F "Think Id rather use a regular stick off the ground than get a greasy marshmallow."
Lucy "Think Id rather use a regular stick off the ground than get a greasy marshmallow."
A "Heh."
@ -403,19 +404,19 @@ label chapter_12C:
"Somewhere in the distance I hear Stella yelling at Rosa about leaving the telescope cap on."
F "..."
Lucy "..."
F "Rosa said earlier that Im lucky to have you."
Lucy "Rosa said earlier that Im lucky to have you."
A "You feel lucky? Im thinking its the other way around."
F "I do."
Lucy "I do."
F "Rosa was right, I wouldnt have thought about going camping back in first semester."
Lucy "Rosa was right, I wouldnt have thought about going camping back in first semester."
F "Guess I really have been changing a lot."
Lucy "Guess I really have been changing a lot."
F "... Your kebabs on fire."
Lucy "... Your kebabs on fire."
A "Huh-{w=0.3} Shit!"
@ -433,7 +434,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
"I put the stick in biting range and she gnaws the chunk off."
F "Yeah, Its not undercooked anymore. Thats for certain."
Lucy "Yeah, Its not undercooked anymore. Thats for certain."
A "Looks like I poured jet fuel on it."
@ -445,23 +446,23 @@ label chapter_12C:
"Reminds me of home."
F "The stars do?"
Lucy "The stars do?"
A "Hm? Oh. Yeah, there wasnt a lot of light pollution around Rock Bottom."
A "In the brief time I was in scouts, I got to look at the constellations a bit."
F "Name a few."
Lucy "Name a few."
A "I dont remember now, this was like a decade ago."
A "...{w=0.3} Orions belt?"
F "Anyone can name Orions belt."
Lucy "Anyone can name Orions belt."
A "Uh… big spoon and lil spoon?"
F "You mean the dippers?"
Lucy "You mean the dippers?"
A "Also yes."
@ -469,13 +470,13 @@ label chapter_12C:
"Her head leans on my shoulder and I cant help but smile."
F "Something like this, then?"
Lucy "Something like this, then?"
A "Eh, close enough."
A "I think you can see Mars too, its supposed to be the red one."
F "Uh… I think thats the moon, Anon."
Lucy "Uh… I think thats the moon, Anon."
A "..."
@ -485,19 +486,19 @@ label chapter_12C:
A "Still managed to get my badge though."
F "Arent you the big strong man."
Lucy "Arent you the big strong man."
A "...{w=0.3} Fuck it. A compliments a compliment."
"We gaze up at the night sky in companionable silence."
F "Oh! Look!"
Lucy "Oh! Look!"
"Lucy points to the sky at a shooting star."
A "Well hey, you got a wish?"
F "Thats not a shooting star, dork."
Lucy "Thats not a shooting star, dork."
A "It isnt?"
@ -516,23 +517,23 @@ label chapter_12C:
"Man, being here with Lucy, after such a wonderful night…"
"I feel like no matter what, everythings going to be just fine."
F "...I feel the same."
Lucy "...I feel the same."
"Im just going to start biting my tongue."
F "Thank you for being here with me, Anon."
Lucy "Thank you for being here with me, Anon."
A "I mean… {w=0.3}This was all you. And Rosa and Stella too."
F "No, you big dweeb… {w=0.3}I mean…"
Lucy "No, you big dweeb… {w=0.3}I mean…"
F "Youve always been there for me even when I was so mean to you."
Lucy "Youve always been there for me even when I was so mean to you."
F "I dont know what kind of road I was going down when you met me, but…"
Lucy "I dont know what kind of road I was going down when you met me, but…"
F "But I know it wasnt a good place to be. I dont know where I was going to end up if I never found you."
Lucy "But I know it wasnt a good place to be. I dont know where I was going to end up if I never found you."
F "You saved me, Anon. And Ill always be grateful for that."
Lucy "You saved me, Anon. And Ill always be grateful for that."
"She sits up and looks down to me with that warm smile of hers."
@ -566,7 +567,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
"Lucys eyes open as she smiles impishly at me."
F "I love you."
Lucy "I love you."
"Yeah.{w=0.3} Me too."

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@ -126,10 +126,10 @@ label chapter_12D:
#Fang has the zoomies
F "And whats over there? Are those seahorses{cps=*1.5} holy crap I have to take a video of this.{/cps}"
show fang adorable at sleft with dissolve: #maybe try this with a block: statement?
show fang adorable at sleft with dissolve: #maybe try this with a block: statement? removed: at sleft - no change
ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 0.75 ypos 0.1 xpos 0.6 #OK
pause 1.0
linear 0.1 xzoom -1.0
linear 0.1 xzoom -1.0 #maybe the xzoom is causing the issue? tried removing it, didn't help
ease_cubic 0.3 zoom 0.8 ypos 0.1 xpos -0.2 #ok
pause 1.0
linear 0.1 xzoom -1.0
@ -142,9 +142,10 @@ label chapter_12D:
ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 0.3 xpos 0.6 ypos 0.33
pause 1.0
linear 0.1 xzoom -1.0
pause 0.1
repeat
"I shrug apologetically at the attendant who has given up entirely."
#contingency plan lol, fucking renpy
# show fang adorable with dissolve:
# zoom 0.8
# yalign -0.1

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@ -248,10 +248,10 @@ label chapter_13C:
"Cant say Id imagined shed ever willingly wear one of these."
pause 2.0
scene home fang night with dissolve
scene home fang night
show fang c prom happy:
xalign -0.3
show anon prom neutral flip at acenter
show anon prom neutral flip at acenter
with fade
A "Yeah, been here a while."
@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
"Suddenly I feel another tug on my arm, this time Fangs mom dragging me back into the middle of the room."
scene home fang night
show anon prom neutral flip at scenter
show anon prom neutral flip at acenter
show fangmom neutral at fmleft
with dissolve
stop music fadeout 1.0
@ -441,9 +441,9 @@ label chapter_13C:
show fang c prom happy:
xalign 0.9
show naser prom neutral:
xalign 0.1
xalign 0.1 yalign 0.1
show anon prom neutral:
xalign 1.1
xalign 1.1 yalign 0.1
with fade
"Pulling into the schools parking lot by the gym, I take in the view."
stop music fadeout 1.0
@ -454,15 +454,15 @@ label chapter_13C:
"Inside is about as well decorated as outside."
"Those nerdy little chinese lanterns are strung about from wall to wall."
scene prom with fade
scene prom
show naomi prom happy:
xalign -0.2
show fang c prom happy flip:
xalign 0.9
show naser prom happy:
xalign 0.1
xalign 0.1 yalign 0.1
show anon prom neutral flip:
xalign 1.1
xalign 1.1 yalign 0.1
with fade
N "Oh! Oh! They go with my dress!"
@ -521,6 +521,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
scene prom with fade
show naser prom neutral flip at nright
show anon prom neutral at aleft
with dissolve
"I follow him to the food table."
"I dont even recognize most of these dishes."
@ -558,9 +559,9 @@ label chapter_13C:
show fang c prom neutral flip:
xalign 0.1
show naser prom neutral flip:
xalign 0.9
xalign 0.9 yalign 0.1
show anon prom neutral flip:
xalign 1.1
xalign 1.1 yalign 0.1
with dissolve
"Naomi is attempting to talk to Lucy, overwhelming her with questions"
@ -975,7 +976,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
"I watch her enter the restroom and reenter the gym."
"Think theres lemonade and stuff by the food tables."
show trish prom neutral flip at sright
show trish prom neutral flip at sright with easeinright
T "Hey, you."
"Raptor Jesus on His cross of rock, give me strength."
@ -1036,10 +1037,10 @@ label chapter_13C:
F "Yeah. Fresh air sounds pretty good right now."
"I hold my hand out and Lucys hand links with it."
scene outside school night with fade
scene outside school night
show anon prom neutral at acenter
show fang c prom happy at sleft
with fade
"Walking out of the stuffy gymnasium were met with the cooling evening air."
"I feel all the tension leave my body as Lucys body presses close to my side."

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@ -803,7 +803,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
show anon prom neutral flip at aright
show fang prom d neutral with dissolve
"Reed wades through the crowd and grabs Fangs shoulder from behind."
show fang prom d shock flip with dissolve
F "Yah! What the-"
F "Reed, why arent you on stage?"
@ -1652,12 +1652,29 @@ label chapter_13D:
xalign 1.05
show stella neutral flip with easeinright:
xalign 1.05
Re "Need a light, amigo?"
pause 0.5
#tentative line to make Reed's question a bit less random?
"Diverting my attention back at my masterpiece of a firepit, the realization slowly dawns on me that I have nothing to start the fire with."
Re "Need a light, amigo?"
show anon neutral flip with dissolve:
xalign 0.5
show lighter at sleft with dissolve:
zoom 0.42
rotate 40
ease_cubic 0.6 yalign 0.5 xalign 0.5
hide lighter with dissolve
"Before I can respond, he reaches into his pocket and fishes out a lighter which is promptly tossed my way."
show lighter at scenter with easeinbottom:
yalign 0.5 zoom 2.0
"Catching it out of the air, I only briefly catch the words FUCK COMMUNISM engraved in its side when I hear yet another car approaching."
hide lighter with easeoutbottom
show anon neutral with move:
xalign 0.25 yalign 0.0
"Recognizing it by sound alone, I see the NasCar glide to a halt next to Rosas car."
"That name might still be dumb as hell, but I gotta admit its growing on me."
@ -1874,8 +1891,15 @@ label chapter_13D:
"He grabs one of Nasers empty cans and tosses it in my lap."
#get can held up, blur bg?
scene d01_blur with dissolve
show nonalcoholic at scenter with easeinbottom:
yalign 0.4
zoom 1.3
"Holding it up to the light, I barely make out the words NON ALCOHOLIC written in microscopic font."
hide nonalcoholic with easeoutbottom
scene d01 with dissolve
A "So you mean theyre-"
Re "Totally sober, dude."

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@ -20,9 +20,8 @@ label chapter_14C:
"Thinking back, I think theres a park nearby that has a decent vending machine."
scene park fair
show anonc neutral at aleft
with fade
with dissolve
"Mentally retracing my steps from my senior year I manage to find the park."
@ -250,7 +249,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
F "I wish I could stop it from happening. They're perfect just like this."
A "Kids can be, Jack mean to each other."
A "Kids can be, mean to each other."
F "But not cruel.{w=0.4} The world makes them cruel."
@ -347,7 +346,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
scene c04 with fade
stop music fadeout 1.0
play music "audio/effects/beach loop 2.ogg" fadein 1.0
play ambient "audio/effects/beach loop 2.ogg" fadein 1.0
"Catching up with Lucy was the happiest I felt in years, the memories came rushing back as we walked under the hot sun."
A "So you dont know at all how Reed and Trish are doing?"
@ -406,7 +405,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
A "Oh. Well, we can still go check it out."
stop music fadeout 1.0
stop ambient fadeout 2.0
scene outside moes
@ -416,8 +415,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
show anonc neutral at aleft
show fang c happy flip at sright
with fade
stop music fadeout 1.0
play music "audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg" fadein 1.0
play ambient "audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg" fadein 1.0
"I can see the old piano in my peripheral vision."
A "Ive been asking so much about what youre doing now, but what happened while I was away?"
@ -516,7 +514,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
F "But you can't play..."
A "Then {i}you{/i} play."
stop music fadeout 30.0
stop ambient fadeout 20.0
scene c05 with fade
"As we sit by the piano, I think she understands why I'm teasing her like that."
@ -677,7 +675,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
F "All the more reason for me to help!"
A "...Alright then. My motel isnt too far from here."
play music "audio/effects/apartment loop.ogg" fadein 5.0
play ambient "audio/effects/apartment loop.ogg" fadein 5.0
scene apartment morning with dissolve
"I wasnt kidding when I said I had a lot to unpack."
@ -723,9 +721,9 @@ label chapter_14C:
A "That would be great. So...{w=0.3}tomorrow then?"
F "Tomorrow, yes."
stop music fadeout 1.0
stop ambient fadeout 1.0
scene city morning with fade
play sound "audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance.ogg" fadein 5.0
play sound "audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance.ogg" fadein 3.0
"We made our way towards her car door, but before getting in, she once again embraces me, this time a little stronger."
show c09 with dissolve

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@ -598,9 +598,10 @@ label chapter_14D:
A "It is, then."
F "Youre such a dweeb."
#ENDING 4 THEME GOES HERE
#stop music fadeout 3.0
A "I know."
#play music
scene d04b with fade
"That didnt stop Lucy from shuffling closer until our legs were pressed together."

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@ -0,0 +1,626 @@
label chapter_1xN:
#Naomi Arc One
"{cps=*0.2}-- April, 201M2021 BC --{/cps}"
scene livingroomdayalt with fade
play music "audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg" fadein 1.0
image fang pendant unimpressed = Composite(
# (1412, 1500),
(1412, 1500),
(0, 0), "fang unimpressed",
(0, 0), "amberpendant"
)
show fang pendant unimpressed at scenter with dissolve
# yalign 0.4
# xalign 0.1
show fangphonevideocall anonneutral at scenter with easeinbottom:
yalign -0.4
hide fang with dissolve
F "-Im just saying is that he shouldnt have tried-"
A "Sweet tooth, you shouldnt just kick your teacher in the nuts."
"I growl at the phone in my hand."
"Hes lucky hes in college right now."
F "I dont want to hear it."
A "Yeah, but still.{w=0.3} So whats the punishment?"
"With a huff I turn my phone around the living room, slowly being rearranged to fit more useless people."
F "Setting up for baby bros going away party."
A "Daaawww, such a caring sister."
show fangphonevideocall anongrin with dissolve
"I dont even have to turn the screen back to see Anons shit eating grin."
F "Dad says I gotta clean up after, too."
A "If youd move out Fang-"
hide fangphonevideocall with easeoutbottom
show fang angry at scenter with dissolve
F "{cps=*2.0}Trying to!{/cps}"
show fang sad with dissolve
pause 0.5
hide fang with dissolve
show fangphonevideocall anonneutral at scenter with easeinbottom:
yalign -0.4
"I finally look back at my screen and I see him giving me his soothing, calming face."
"Even seeing that look from him stings."
F "I didnt mean to shout."
A "Its fine Fang. Im lucky to have a dorm room, I doubt dad wouldve sprung for an apartment again."
A "Hes still pissed about that security deposit."
"Ah, right.{w=0.3} That was my fault."
F "Wasnt my fault. Reed was the one to bring the carfe."
A "{cps=*0.5}Riiiight.{/cps} Still{w=0.3}, I thought you and Trish would be moving in together."
# show fang angry with dissolve
F "Fffffffffuck her. She wanted to move in with Reed instead."
A "Really?"
F "Really!"
pause 1.0
A "It was the late night jam outs, wasnt it."
F "No!"
A "Ha!{w=0.3} You owe me ten bucks!"
show fangphonevideocall anongrin with dissolve
"Stupid Anon and his stupid bets and his stupid always being right!"
"Damn it, I know Im fucking blushing right now. I just fucking know it."
A "I-"
F "Dont you say it!"
A "Told-"
F "Anon!"
A "You-"
F "Ill hang up!"
show fangphonevideocall anonconcerned with dissolve
A "Okay okay. Sorry I asked."
show fangphonevideocall anonneutral with dissolve
A "But whatre you gonna do now?"
# show fang considering with dissolve
"I exhale deeply and feel all the weight of my current predicament land on my shoulders."
F "I dont know. Maybe Stella-{w=0.3} what?"
show fangphonevideocall anonneutralalt1 with dissolve
show fangphonevideocall anonneutral with dissolve
show fangphonevideocall anonneutralalt1 with dissolve
show fangphonevideocall anonneutral with dissolve
show fangphonevideocall anonneutralalt1 with dissolve
show fangphonevideocall anonneutral with dissolve
"Anons head is shaking rapidly and his hands are waving like crazy."
F "I dont see what the problem would be with Stella as a roommate."
hide fangphonevideocall with easeoutbottom
show fang unimpressed at sleft with dissolve
show fangdad neutral flip at sright with easeinright
FD "Oi!{w=0.3} Stop slackin Lucy. The living room aint gonna clean itself!"
"Not now! I still want to talk with him!"
show fangdad neutral at sright with dissolve
hide fangdad with easeoutright
A "Ah man.{w=0.3} I guess I should go?"
hide fang with dissolve
show fangphonevideocall anonneutral with easeinbottom:
yalign -0.4
"No no no! Damn it!"
F "Urgh.{w=0.3} I need to finish this. Im sorry Anon."
A "Its fine, and I wish I could be there now, but the scholarship and all…"
A "Plus the whole dorm fumigation thing and having to change rooms."
A "Fuckin roommate got lucky during it in a spare theater room."
A "The bastard."
A "Well talk later, Fang. Have fun with the party okay?"
show fangphonevideocall call_ended_bg call_ended with dissolve:
yalign -0.045
# yalign 0
"Before I can say I love him the screen fades to my wallpaper."
"The wallpaper of me and him together on christmas."
"I sigh one last time and pocket my phone."
"The cool and smooth texture of polished stone makes me realize Im holding the necklace again."
"Anon…"
"..."
hide fangphonevideocall with dissolve
stop music fadeout 2.0
scene livingroomdayalt with fade
play music "audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg" fadein 1.0
show fang neutral flip at scenter with dissolve
"Thirty minutes till Naser gets back now."
"Everyone that came is just casually chatting, already snacking on all of moms better dishes."
"Shame about dads guacamole though."
"For them, that is. It may be fucking delicious but the aftermath isnt pretty."
"I shudder involuntarily at the thought of my last birthday party."
"No wonder he married mom."
"The banners hung up with thumbtacks from under the couch (and abc gum) flying gallantly above the staircase, people start to trickle in to celebrate Naser officially pissing off."
"He got accepted into a prestigious medical school back last august."
"Still remember him prancing around like there was ever a chance hed get rejected."
"I started going to community college around the same time, he has no idea the grueling experience ahead of him."
"Then again, he does this kind of shit perfectly."
FM "Lucy, would you be a dear and dim the lights?"
"I snap back to reality."
"Nasers close school friends are all ready and perched out of sight of the entryway."
show chadshark at scenter
show stella happy at sleft
with easeinleft
"I notice one of his old team mates even brought Stella along when I turn the light knob."
hide stella
hide chadshark
with dissolve
scene home fang dim with fade
# home_fang_dim with fade
"Maybe Anon was right in his rant a few weeks ago about girls having it easier?"
"Nah, thats bullshit."
show fang neutral flip at scenter with dissolve
"Trish comes barreling in through the door like theres a blizzard outside."
show trish happy at tleft with easeinleft
T "Fang! It took a while but Reeds distracted!"
show fang happy with dissolve
F "Oh thank fuck."
F "Definitely dont need him being arrested today of all days."
show fangdad neutral flip at sright with easeinright
FD "Arrested for what?"
show trish surprised with dissolve
show fang surprised with dissolve
pause 0.5
show trish very happy with dissolve
show fang happy with dissolve
FangAndTrish "For being the most wanted guy in Volcano high."
"That line doesnt work anymore but he hasnt given me a new one yet."
F "Do you need anything else, Dad?"
FD "Dont think so. Your mothers got an entire bakery going at once in the kitchen, but she hasnt needed help before."
FM "Dear!"
show fangdad neutral with dissolve
pause 0.5
show fangdad neutral:
ease_cubic 3.0 xalign 2.0
"The old man limps back towards the kitchen, shoulders slightly hung about being fucking told by mom in seconds."
show fang neutral flip with dissolve
show trish neutral with dissolve
F "Okay, spill.{w=0.3} How?"
T "I asked Rosa to clear some time for him. She took it to mean a classic date night."
F "Couldve just told him Stellas boyfriend would be here, hed stay miles away."
T "Figured hed forgotten by now, you know him."
F "Right, and what about you? Last time you threw a glass of juice on the old man."
F "We seriously dont need any arrests tonight."
"Trish blows a raspberry and looks away."
T "Maybe if he wasnt such a pig."
F "*Ahem*"
T "You know what I mean. Im telling you, him and Moe are-"
Moe "Lucy! Yer ma sayz Nasah is on is ways!"
F "Shit, hide!"
"Everyone in the room scatters, hiding as best they can in our living room."
"I even see Stella and the old varsity Football captain dive into the closet."
"The door creaks open and Naomi leads Naser in slowly."
show Naomi neutral flip at sleft with easeinleft
show Naser neutral flip at sleft with easeinleft
Nas "-are Mom and Dad dancing again? I cant see-"
#remove dimming effect here
"I twist the dimmer knob to full brightness, making Naser shade his eyes."
Nas "Wha-"
Everyone "SURPRISE!"
F "Naomis pregnant!"
NaserAndNaomi "WHAT!?"
FM "GRANDBABIES?!?!"
"Dad swats my crest with one hand."
FD "No, since youre leaving us for college next week your Mother thought we should throw you a going away party."
FM "Oh, yes, I invited all your school friends, too."
"I see the little gerbil on a treadmill in his head spinning aimlessly until comprehension dawns on him that his privacy has been violated."
Nas "Oh.{w=0.3} My yearbook."
FM "Dont worry dear, I put it back in your dirty laundry pile where it was left!"
"Aside from the peanut gallery this is fairly standard dinner banter."
Nas "Moooooooooomm, not in front of my friends."
Chet "Chill man, we know how it is, your Mom is just gonna miss you."
"The other track members nod in agreement."
N "Its great everyone came! Lets all enjoy the party!"
"A holler of agreement and the whole thing kicks off as though it had been going on for hours already."
"I make a beeline for the food table with Trish, stealing enough grub to keep me sated through the whole ordeal."
"Ordinarily Id just hole up in my room and annoy everyone by playing Frankly I Did Do a Little Winning, but…"
"Damn skinnie costing me two hours of my life by resolving blood feuds."
"Whatever, its not like these jocks want to talk with me."
"But Stella, jeez shes got the attention of all the boys."
T "Its weird, right?"
F "I know. Like, how?"
T "I mean, Ive seen her talking a lot with that hot dog chick thats near your place."
F "What are you implying?"
T "Cmon, you gotta admit her set up is a little seedy."
F "Shes chill, Trish. Not some kinda… multitasking prostitute."
T "Pffft. Not even."
"Ah, I know that pout well."
F "No vegan options?"
T "Herbies matter!"
"Dads head whips around at Trishs shout."
"The rooms temperature drops as the two glare at each other."
F "Trish!"
"I give her a quick reality check with my elbow."
"Everyone awkwardly returns to their own tiny dinner talk, Dad getting the patented look from Mom as she pulls him aside."
T "Hes SO a dirty cop."
F "And you wouldve been in cuffs again."
"Trishs small chuckle is enough to know she wont actually start another argument tonight."
"I scan the room again as I nibble on some of the tiny sandwiches Mom made."
"Aside from Stella being swarmed by boys three times her size, Chet and Naser are bro-ing it up with some crazy looking handshake and Naomi is talking with mom."
T "Youre doing it again."
"Hm?"
"Oh."
"My thumb circles softly over the surface of polished stone."
T "Anon texted me earlier, yknow."
F "Really?"
T "He said you owe him ten bucks."
"FFFFFFFFFFFF-"
F "{cps=*0.6}FFFFFFFFFFFFFFuuuuuuuuuuuuck.{/cps}"
T "You gonna tell me why?"
F "No!"
"Oh no, not the sad eyes."
pause 0.5
"Damn it."
F "May have made a bet on the roommate thing."
"Trish tries to headbutt me, but I already have her at arms length with my palm on her face."
F "For your info, I bet in your favor."
"Trish finally relents, leaning back against the wall."
T "I just got out of a loud house, Fang. Id like to experience having a good nights sleep for the first time in my life."
F "Yeah and leave a sister out in the cold."
F "What am I gonna do now?"
F "Its not like I can move in with Anon."
F "Unlike Naomi and Naser."
"I want to be jealous."
"Thinking about how they get what I want so badly."
"But even with Nasers scholarship, Dads spending so much for him."
"But…"
"Naser deserves it."
"He deserves the fucking world after putting up with me."
"I glance over to him nervously trying to bridge some conversation with Mom and his teammates."
"Naomi of course close behind him to direct the whole thing."
unknown "Hey!"
"Someone calls to me from across the room."
"Oh, its just the ex-captain of the football team."
"Still wonder how Stella managed to catch this guy."
Team member "Hey, youre the chick that played during prom last year, right?"
Team member "Come on, play somethin and liven up the place a bit!"
"The other track team members holler in agreement."
"Trish isnt facing me but she has an odd look going on there."
F "Well, hey, it happened."
T "Oh boy."
F "Was it just like you always imagined?"
"She smirks and looks at me from the corner of her eye."
T "There was a bit more groveling involved."
T "I kind of forgot about it, honestly."
T "You gonna play?"
F "Eh, sure, why the fuck not."
F "I was getting bored anyway."
"I high five Trish as I pass her by."
"In my room I take the time to consider which weapon I want to slay it with."
F "What would he pick? Probably at random."
F "Aha! I got it."
"I set down my three favorites at the foot of my bed and sprinkle some cracker crumbs in front of them."
"Then with a quick tap of my foot I let my most loyal minion decide."
"RAYmbas mechanical mouth makes quick work of the crumbs, choosing first my good ole artcore hollowbody."
F "Good boy!"
"I quickly tune my proffered weapon, watching as RAYmba finishes its dinner before returning to its dock."
"I pat my robotic pet for doing an amazing job and head back to my waiting audience."
"Only to nearly get kneecapped by Naomis stupidly fat tail."
"Who would even like a girl with such a disgusting, lardy tail."
"Unlike mine."
F "What the fuck!"
"She scowls."
F "Were you trying to bust my knee? You stupid beige bitch."
N "I didnt mean too. I was simply heading for the bathroom up here. It seems that Chet and-or Stella are currently using the other bathroom."
"She turns her nose and continues down the hallway."
"Im half-tempted to brain her with my beloved guitar."
"Feh."
"I turn and make my way down the steps."
"Trish scooches to give me enough space on the stairs to set the guitar on my knee to play."
F "What should I start with, do you think?"
T "Shit, its been forever since we heard My Fucking Maw, Man."
F "Wasnt it called Im Way Too Hungover?"
T "No, Reed just fell backwards when he told us and didnt bother correcting himself."
"Sounds like something hed do, yeah."
"Most of the party-goers are already looking my way in anticipation."
"I run the first few stanzas in my head a couple of times and begin strumming."
"My fingers glide along the fretboard easily enough and my pick wildly plucks the cords."
"The party is cheering and stamping out a drum beat for me to play to."
"Even Trish beside me is joining in on the makeshift metronome."
"I let loose a hard and fast rift, taking the chance to actually feel out the crowd."
"All of the jocks and even Stella are loving this."
"I can see Dads snear slowly vanish as Mom repeatedly steps on his foot."
"Naomis the last one I look at, and Im expecting one of her vicious sneers."
"Instead shes looking like someone took all her hopes and dreams and flushed them down the drain."
"I nearly miss my next note, so I focus back on my guitar."
"With an extra flourish I end the punk song with a fist pump."
"The room hollers, demanding more amazing music from me."
"But…"
F "Oi! Im just the ambiance, pricks."
F "Its baby bros party, after all."
"With the spotlight on Naser now I decide to just sit back on the stairs."
T "Still gonna play?"
F "Eh… Thinking something slower now."
F "Dadll pitch a fit if they start a mosh pit."
"We chuckle together, my fingers now lazily strumming a mellow tune for the party."
"Its a simple song, one Ive learned perfectly from granny."
"So perfectly I can look out as everyone else chats and enjoys the calmer atmosphere."
"Naser and Chet have started arm wrestling."
"Stella and some of Nasers old teammates are talking like crazy about something."
St "-and its like wrestling!"
unknown "No way, that sounds retarded!"
unknown "Yeah, spaceships awrasslin?!"
St "Yeah way! Its really cool!"
Chet "It really is, bros! Weve been marathonin it erry weekend!"
"The jocks start jeering and tossing their solo cups at him."
"Giving Naser the chance to finally win."
"Both Chet and Naser sheepishly hold a hand behind their heads while Naser gets showered in praise from his parents."
"Naomi ducks under his other arm and embraces him, rubbing muzzles together."
"Wait, no. That didnt happen."
"Only Naomi did the nuzzling."
"Nah, those two are a whole room away, probably didnt see it right."
"When they separate Naser follows Chet back to the enthralling conversation on wrestling spaceships or whatever with Stella."
"A purple hand breaches my line of sight."
T "Hey, Fang! Hellooo!"
F "Yeah?"
T "You bridged that last song into Mussolini Macho Mystery perfectly, you didnt even notice?"
"I just now realize I am, in fact, playing a completely different song than when I started."
"Trish and I continue making small talk through the rest of the party while I keep the ambience upbeat."
"One of the track members spills some popcorn on the floor below him."
"I should start thinking of ways to get out of cleanup."
stop music fadeout 3.0
pause 3
scene black with fade
pause 1
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@ -1,3 +1,4 @@
label chapter_7:
#Concert Day
I "{cps=*0.2}-- One Week Later --{/cps}"
@ -174,9 +175,9 @@ label chapter_7:
A "Doesnt ring a bell."
St "O-oh… well… Uh… How would you like another?"
St "O-oh…{w=0.3} well… {w=0.3}Uh… {w=0.3}How would you like another?"
A "Eh… I got time to kill, sure."
A "Eh… {w=0.3}I got time to kill, sure."
"She pulls her deck of tarot cards from… {w=.3}somewhere…"
@ -218,7 +219,6 @@ label chapter_7:
A "The fuck does that mean?"
St "Uh… {w=0.4} er… {w=0.2} {cps=*1.4}Gottago,naturecalls,seeyouattheshow{/cps}!"
hide stella neutral alt
show stella neutral alt flip at sleft with dissolve
play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg'
hide stella with easeoutleft
@ -234,16 +234,11 @@ label chapter_7:
"Oh yeah."
"I step up to the stage to see the bands point of view."
hide anon neutral flip
show anon neutral at sright with dissolve
hide anon neutral at sright with easeoutright
scene moebackrooms
show anon neutral at aleft with easeinleft:
xalign 0.0
ease_cubic 0.5 rotate 90 yalign -0.5
show anon neutral flip with move:
ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.5
show anon neutral flip:
ease_cubic 0.5 rotate -90 yalign -0.5
pause 0.5
#anon fall
play sound 'audio/effects/anonDumbassFall.ogg' volume 1.3
scene moebackrooms at shudder
@ -290,7 +285,7 @@ label chapter_7:
A "I just tripped on one of the wires up here."
show trish unimpressed flip
show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
T "Sucks to be you."
@ -298,7 +293,7 @@ label chapter_7:
A "Should I plug them all into a surge protector so you guys dont fall during the concert?"
show trish annoyed flip
show trish annoyed flip with dissolve
T "What?"
@ -308,7 +303,7 @@ label chapter_7:
A "Whose?"
show trish unimpressed flip
show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
T "...Reeds."
@ -373,7 +368,7 @@ label chapter_7:
"The band is doing one last sound test, Reeds bass drum bearing another new logo for VVURM DRAMA that doesnt look half bad."
"Trish has a wicked grin on her face and I can practically see the dollar signs in her eyes."
scene moebackrooms
scene moes pizza
show fang hiding at sright
with fade
"And Fang…"
@ -446,13 +441,16 @@ label chapter_7:
stop music fadeout 1.0
F "Weve got sweet music to play."
scene moebackrooms with fade
scene moes pizza
show dimmer_darker
with fade
if LeftStage:
show trish neutral at tleft
show fang neutral at scenter
show reed neutral flip at rright:
xalign 1.3
with dissolve
play music 'audio/OST/The.ogg' fadein 1.0
"Showtime"
@ -461,11 +459,17 @@ label chapter_7:
"WHAT."
"They go right into their next song with gusto."
scene black with Dissolve(1)
"..."
"An hour later and the band is wrapping up their last song for the night."
scene moes pizza
show dimmer_darker
show trish neutral at tleft
show fang neutral at scenter
show reed neutral flip at rright:
xalign 1.3
with dissolve
"I take my eyes off the stage to get a read on the crowd."
"Easily a good hundred people showed up to see VVURM DRAMA, better than any of us expected."
@ -503,7 +507,23 @@ label chapter_7:
"{i}Actually{/i} cheering this time."
play music 'audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg' fadein 1.0
show trish happy at tleft
show reed happy at rright:
xalign 1.1
show fang happy at scenter
with dissolve
pause 0.5
show reed happy flip:
xalign 1.35
show trish happy flip
with dissolve
show fang happy flip with dissolve
pause 0.5
show trish happy
show reed happy:
xalign 1.1
show fang happy
with dissolve
"The bandmates faces light up, and they all glance at each other."
"The hard work has taken its toll on the three, giving them varying degrees of perspiration."
@ -511,7 +531,7 @@ label chapter_7:
"The sweat is trickling down Fangs forehead, Trish has gone from an afro to dreadlocks, and Reed is providing the restaurant with a nice ocean scent."
"Fang finishes with a furious flurry of strumming on her fretboard."
show fang very happy with dissolve
F "Woooooooo! THANK YOU LITTLE TROODON!"
"The crowds approval is obvious, even in the makeshift mosh pit where I see Stella getting fake curb-stomped."
@ -521,17 +541,20 @@ label chapter_7:
"Rosa is on the other side of the room, too entranced by the music to care."
"Eh, I dont see any blood so shes good."
scene moebackrooms with fade
scene moebackrooms
show anon neutral flip at acenter
show fang very happy at sleft with easeinleft
with fade
show fang very happy at sleft with easeinleft:
yalign 0.2
F "ANON!"
"Before I could react I was swept up in a blur of feathers."
hide anon
hide fang
show fang hug at acenter:
hide anon
hide fang
with dissolve
show fang hug at acenter with dissolve:
yalign 0.0
"Fang wrapped her arms and wings around me and kept rocking back and forth."
@ -542,7 +565,7 @@ label chapter_7:
"I tune out the alarms screaming in my head and hug her back."
hide fang hug
hide fang hug with dissolve
show fanganonhug with dissolve:
yalign 0.0
@ -569,11 +592,12 @@ label chapter_7:
"Trish looks like shes sucked on a lemon with how twisted her face is."
"The tiny triceratops pulls Fang out of my hands, and I can picture my fist twisting that horn right off her face."
hide fanganonhug
hide fanganonhug with dissolve
show fang neutral flip at scenter
show anon neutral flip at sright
show trish neutral at tleft
with dissolve
T "Hmmm... "
A "Great show, right?"
@ -639,7 +663,7 @@ label chapter_7:
show fang neutral at scenter
show reed neutral flip at rright:
xalign 1.3
with dissolve
play music 'audio/OST/The.ogg' fadein 1.0
"Showtime"

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@ -1,3 +1,4 @@
label chapter_8:
scene black with fade
#Study Session
@ -5,7 +6,7 @@ label chapter_8:
play music 'audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg' fadein 1.0
"{cps=*0.2}-- A Few Weeks Later --{/cps}"
scene bandroom
scene bandroom with fade
"Things have cooled off since the concert back in February."
pause .5
@ -66,7 +67,7 @@ label chapter_8:
T "Fuck, he found us."
"The last students trickle in through the doors and take their seats."
scene auditorium
hide reed with dissolve
"Mr. Carldewskii takes the stage with an electronic mic."
show carldelewski at scenter with easeinright
@ -92,7 +93,7 @@ label chapter_8:
show spears angry with dissolve
play sound 'audio/effects/spearYellRumbleVoice.ogg'
Sp "ALRIGHT YOU LITTLE PUNKS."
Sp "ALRIGHT YOU LITTLE PUNKS." with vpunch
Sp "LIKE THE MAN SAID, WE HAVE MIDTERMS TO DEAL WITH IN JUST A FEW WEEKS."
@ -111,17 +112,17 @@ label chapter_8:
Sp "ARE THERE ANY QUESTIONS?"
"Judging by the dead silence, there wasnt any."
hide spears angry
show spears neutral at scenter with dissolve
show carldelewski at sright with easeinright
show spears neutral flip with dissolve
pause 1.0
hide spears with easeoutleft
stop music fadeout 1.0
"The principal gives a single approving nod and exits stage right."
show carldelewski at sright with easeinright
carl "Alright you kids, youre free to frikin' go."
hide spears with dissolve
hide carldelewski with dissolve
play music 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 1.0
@ -130,29 +131,27 @@ label chapter_8:
"The four of us wait until the auditorium is half empty before getting up and making our way to the door."
play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadein 1.0
scene outside school with fade
"Our motley crew make it to the front lawn of the school and Reed falls flat on his back in the freshly mowed grass."
scene outside school with fade
show reed neutral with dissolve:
xpos 0.0
ease_cubic 1.0 xpos 0.6
ease_cubic 1.0 xpos 0.5
pause 0.1
show reed neutral at scenter with easeinleft:
xalign 0.0
ease_cubic 1.0 rotate -90 yalign -0.5
#original code
# scene outside school with fade
Re "Later guys."
show fang neutral at sleft with easeinleft
show anon neutral with easeinleft:
xalign 0.3 yalign 1
hide reed with dissolve
show fang neutral at sleft with easeinleft:
xalign -0.2
show anon neutral at acenter with easeinleft
# xalign 0.3 yalign 1
show trish neutral at tcenter with easeinleft
show reed neutral at sright
hide reed
#This was Reed's original exit, which is contradicting the narrative
# show reed neutral flip at sright
# hide reed neutral flip with easeoutleft
@ -197,7 +196,7 @@ label chapter_8:
hide anon neutral
show anon neutral at turnaround:
xalign 0.9
xalign 0.9 yalign 0.1
F "A-actually…{w=0.3} I was thinking…"
@ -243,7 +242,7 @@ label chapter_8:
"Must not expose skeleton arms."
scene home fang day
scene home fang day with dissolve
"After a little while of being simultaneously fried alive and bathed in sweat, we finally make it to Fangs place."
@ -253,7 +252,7 @@ label chapter_8:
"Bill Withers begins to blare inside my head again. God just fuck off, FUCK."
scene home fang day
scene home fang day with dissolve
F "Come on, Anon. We can study in my room."
@ -270,7 +269,7 @@ label chapter_8:
"She holds a door open to a pitch-black room, and I tentatively step in."
F "Aaaaah, home sweet home."
scene fangroom
scene fangroom with dissolve
"Fang flips on the lights and Im not quite sure what I expected."
@ -282,8 +281,9 @@ label chapter_8:
"I plant my hands in my pockets nonchalantly, looking around for a chair or something."
show fang neutral at sleft with dissolve
show anon neutral flip at aright with dissolve
show fang neutral at sleft
show anon neutral flip at aright
with dissolve
F "Just sit on the floor, dweeb."
@ -366,9 +366,8 @@ label chapter_8:
"Well I tried."
F "Here, like this."
hide fangguitar
show fanganonguitar
with dissolve
"Fang grabs another guitar and motions me to copy her hand movements."
"I try to mimic her hands on the fretboard but it feels like my fingers are twisting into pretzels."
F "Not like that, your hands gonna get cramped as fuck like that."
@ -402,7 +401,9 @@ label chapter_8:
A "Why-"
stop music fadeout 1.0
"Shes standing right behind me!"
hide fangguitar with dissolve
show fanganonguitar
with dissolve
"Shes standing RIGHT THE FUCK BEHIND ME!"
"Her body presses against my back and her arms come around, each of her hands taking my own and guiding them into proper position."
@ -516,11 +517,12 @@ label chapter_8:
pause 1.0
F "...Wait..."
hide fanganonguitar with dissolve
show fangguitar with dissolve
"She takes the guitar from me and sits on the edge of her bed, toying with the chord I was strumming."
F "I...{w=0.3} I think Ive figured that song out, Anon."
show dimmer_light behind fangguitar with dissolve
play music 'audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance - Demo.ogg' fadein 1.0
"Her tail slaps a simple beat on her mattress as she slowly builds up a rhythm in her strumming."
@ -549,12 +551,13 @@ label chapter_8:
"All of which sounded beautiful, melding together into a harsh yet intoxicating piece of dissonant serenity."
stop music fadeout 1.0
"Eventually she started to diminuendo, the fading softness of strings and harshness in her humming as she slowly laid the guitar to rest."
stop music fadeout 1.0
hide dimmer_light behind fangguitar with dissolve
"The music had stopped but her own emotions warred on."
hide fangguitar
show fang hiding at scenter with dissolve
"Fang sat there, looking down at her guitar realizing she showed me something she had never shown anyone before."
"Fang bit back tears, fighting the sob that threatened to spill from her."
@ -570,7 +573,7 @@ label chapter_8:
"That wanted to pretend that no one else mattered,"
"That part was ejected. {w=0.2}{i}Forcibly{/i}."
hide fanganonguitar
hide fang
show fanganonhug
with dissolve
@ -602,12 +605,10 @@ label chapter_8:
"I let her move away, choosing to sit next to her on the soft mattress."
hide fanganonhug with dissolve
show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
show fang happy flip at scenter with dissolve
# show fang neutral at sleft with easeinleft
# show anon neutral with easeinleft:
# xalign 0.3 yalign 1
show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve:
yalign -0.4 xalign 0.4
show fang happy flip at sright with dissolve:
yalign -0.45 xalign 1.2
"Her eyes are puffy and red, and once again her make-up has left tracks of orange and black on her cheeks."
@ -636,14 +637,16 @@ label chapter_8:
"She looks at the guitar and then me. Her surprise slowly turns to happiness."
F "Sure I can. Hold up a second."
hide fang with dissolve
"She stands from the bed and goes for another one of her guitars."
"Along the way she grabs a shirt off the floor, using it to wipe her face."
show fang happy flip at sright with dissolve:
yalign -0.45
"When she comes back Fang sits closer than before, our shoulders together."
F "So, for the opener-"
play music 'audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg' fadein 2.0
"After what feels like hours of back-and-forth to learn guitar, my arms feel like theyre about to fall off."
@ -686,25 +689,34 @@ label chapter_8:
"Not that kinda jam session. {w=0.2}Fuck."
A "So whats the whole pirate princess thing about?"
"She doesnt have a candle so Ill be fine."
show fang unimpressed flip at scenter with dissolve
show fang unimpressed flip with dissolve
# play sound 'audio/effects/anonDink.ogg'
show guitarpick with dissolve:
subpixel True
xpos 0.6 ypos 0.6
#wind up motion going the opposite way?
block:
ease_cubic 0.3 xpos 0.70
play sound 'audio/effects/anonDink.ogg'
show guitarpick:
subpixel True
xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
block:
linear 0.3 xpos 0.26 ypos 0.14 rotate -65
linear 0.2 xpos 0.35 ypos -0.15 rotate -65
play sound 'audio/effects/anonDink.ogg'
ease_cubic 0.2 xpos 0.45 ypos 0.35 rotate -65
ease_cubic 0.2 xpos 0.35 ypos -0.15 rotate -65
# play sound 'audio/effects/anonDink.ogg'
show anon fear with dissolve
"A guitar pick bounces off my eye."
A "Gah!"
F "I told you not to mention that!"
show anon concerned with dissolve
A "I know, I know, sorry, geez!"
show anon neutral with dissolve
A "But, really though. What was the deal with that?"
pause 0.5
show fang neutral flip at scenter with dissolve
show fang neutral flip with dissolve
F "{cps=*0.4}... Its just{/cps}… Something that I did sometimes."
A "What, play pretend? {w=0.3} All kids do that."
@ -730,7 +742,7 @@ label chapter_8:
Re "{i}{alpha=0.5}Fang wasnt Fang.{/alpha}{/i}"
"Hmmm…"
show fang happy flip at scenter with dissolve
show fang happy flip with dissolve
F "Anyways, go ahead and just try playing."
"She reaches over and plucks a string on the guitar I'm holding."
@ -740,14 +752,15 @@ label chapter_8:
stop music
"And then…{w=0.3} All hell broke loose."
# hide fanganonhug with dissolve
hide anon neutral
show fangdad neutral at scenter with dissolve
hide fang happy
show fang shocked at sleft
show fang shocked flip at sright with dissolve
show fangdad neutral at sleft with easeinleft:
yalign 0
show anon concerned with dissolve
FD "What the {b}HELL{/b} are you doing here, Anon?"
play music 'audio/OST/you can_t sage here.ogg' fadein 1.0
show anonfacecloseup at truecenter
pause 0.5
show anonfacecloseup at truecenter with fade
"Yep, thats me. Youre probably wondering how I got in this situation."
@ -771,10 +784,25 @@ label chapter_8:
"Anyways, back to the show."
show anonfacecloseup at truecenter
hide anonfacecloseup at truecenter with fade
FD "Out. {w=0.3}{b}Now{/b}."
show fangdad with move:
ease_cubic 0.2 xalign 0.2 yalign -0.2
show fangdad at sleft
show anon concerned at scenter
with move
pause 0.2
show fangdad flip at scenter
show anon concerned flip at sleft
with dissolve
pause 0.2
hide fangdad
hide anon
with moveoutleft
pause 0.1
show black with fade
"It takes all my strength to prevent my bladder from doing its best Stella impression right about now."
"I silently head to the door with Judge Dredd to my back, catching a sympathetic glance from Fang on the way out."
@ -785,18 +813,18 @@ label chapter_8:
"PTERO-CLAWS HURT LIKE CRAP, MAN."
scene home fang outside night
scene home fang outside night with fade
FD "The next time I catch you alone with my daughter, I will use your head as a rubix cube."
show anon neutral flip at acenter with easeinright
show anon fear flip at acenter with easeinright
show fangdad unimpressed flip behind anon at sright with easeinright
"He gives me a shove off the porch and I hear the door slam behind me."
show anon neutral flip with dissolve
hide fangdad unimpressed flip
show fangdad unimpressed at sright
hide fangdad unimpressed with easeoutright
"He gives me a shove off the porch and I hear the door slam behind me."
show anon neutral flip at turnaround
stop music fadeout 1.0
@ -844,7 +872,7 @@ label chapter_8:
"A text? Shit, thats rare."
hide anon neutral
hide anon neutral with dissolve
show anonphone at scenter with moveinbottom
"Fang: Hey"
@ -946,7 +974,6 @@ label chapter_8:
return
label GetStartedOnStudy:
play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' fadein 1.0
"No, I should focus more on my midterms."
A "Id rather get started with studying, actually."
@ -1032,7 +1059,7 @@ label chapter_8:
hide fang with dissolve
"In conductors, electrons are free to move around and flow easily. This is not true for insulators, in which the-"
A "In conductors, electrons are free to move around and flow easily. This is not true for insulators, in which the-"
F "*{cps=*0.4}SNNNRRRRRRRRRK{/cps}*"
@ -1152,13 +1179,25 @@ label chapter_8:
"She shoves the photo in my face that I immediately make out as a bathtub with an infant Fang and Naser playing in the water."
show fang surprised with dissolve
"Well it IS kinda cute…"
"Before I can open my mouth, Fang jabs me in the ribs."
show fang angry with dissolve
F "{cps=*1.3}Oh my god mom{/cps}, he doesnt have time for this!"
"Fang pulls me off the ground and begins to push me towards the door."
show anon neutral flip at acenter
show fang angry flip at sleft:
xalign 1.3
with dissolve
hide anon neutral flip
hide fang angry flip
with easeoutleft
show fangmom at turnaround
scene black with fade

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@ -74,11 +74,15 @@ label chapter_9:
F "OVER HERE, ANON!!"
"Fang and Trish are sitting in the front row."
show fang happy at scenter
show trish neutral at tleft
show fang happy at scenter with dissolve:
xalign 0.1
show trish neutral at tleft with dissolve:
xalign -0.1
"Next to them is Reed huddling behind a cart with the projector hed fixed on it, messing with the cords."
show reed neutral flip at rright with dissolve
show reed neutral flip at rright with dissolve:
xalign 1.35
A "Whats the deal? Why are we sitting in the front all of a sudden?"
@ -95,7 +99,7 @@ label chapter_9:
A "I...{w=0.2} see..."
show anon neutral with dissolve:
xalign 0.9
xalign 0.7
"I take my seat next to Fang."
@ -183,7 +187,7 @@ label chapter_9:
show spears neutral at scenter with dissolve
stop music fadeout 1.0
play sound 'audio/effects/spearYellVoice.ogg'
Sp "ALLLRIGHT!"
Sp "ALLLRIGHT!" with vpunch
Sp "AS YOU ALL KNOW, GRADUATIONS COMING UP SOON."
@ -305,7 +309,7 @@ label chapter_9:
pause .06
show black with Fade(0, 1, 3, color="#fff")
pause .5
play sound 'audio/effects/anonTheaterFall.ogg'
play sound 'audio/effects/anonTheaterFall.wav'
"Theres a loud crash right next to me and the entire room becomes black."
"Did I faint?"
@ -318,7 +322,7 @@ label chapter_9:
scene auditorium with fade
show anon sad at acenter
show anon sad at acenter with dissolve
"The lights come back on and my eyes burn."
@ -360,7 +364,7 @@ label chapter_9:
"This is Rock Bottom all over again."
show fang sad flip at sright
show fang sad flip at sright with dissolve
"Fang tugs at my arm, trying to get me to follow."
@ -379,7 +383,7 @@ label chapter_9:
scene hallway
show anon neutral flip at aright
show fang sad at sleft
with dissolve
F "Hey…"
"How is this happening to me?"
@ -419,6 +423,7 @@ label chapter_9:
F "Just needs some time to forget it happened."
"The squeak of sneakers catches my attention and I turn to see Reed approaching us down the hall."
stop music fadeout 2.0
play music 'audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg' fadein 1.0
show reed unimpressed at rleft with easeinleft
@ -536,14 +541,11 @@ label chapter_9:
"I guess Reed might have a point…":
"Trish can still burn in hell for all I care."
scene hallway with fade
show anon neutral flip at aright
show fang neutral at scenter
show reed neutral at rleft
stop music
stop music fadeout 3.0
with dissolve
stop music fadeout 1.0
Sp "Three MONTHS!"
Sp "THREE MONTHS from graduation and you PULL A STUNT LIKE THIS?!"
@ -564,7 +566,7 @@ label chapter_9:
show fang neutral at scenter
show reed neutral at rleft
with dissolve
Sp "You have five minutes to explain why I shouldnt do that right now."
"I couldnt hear Trishs full response through the door but she was obviously crying."
@ -623,10 +625,10 @@ label chapter_9:
"I enter Spears office and my eyes are immediately drawn to Trish sitting in front of his desk surrounded by crumpled up tissues."
show trish sad at tleft with dissolve
show anon neutral flip at aright with dissolve
show spears neutral at scenter with dissolve
show trish sad at tleft
show anon neutral flip at aright
show spears neutral at scenter
with dissolve
Sp "Trish, is there anything you would like to tell Anon?"
"Ive never seen her like this."
@ -775,20 +777,20 @@ label chapter_9:
"I open the door to see Fang again, expression complex, leaning against the doors frame."
play music 'audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg' fadein 1.0
scene hallway with fade
show fang sad at sleft:
show fang sad at sleft with dissolve:
xalign 0.5
show reed considering at sleft
show reed considering at sleft with dissolve
"Reed has taken my place beside her with a comforting arm around her shoulder."
"If this was any other situation I might have felt a bit jealous."
show reed considering flip with dissolve:
show reed considering flip:
xalign 1.4
show fang sad at sleft with dissolve
show anon neutral flip with dissolve:
show fang sad at sleft
show anon neutral flip:
xalign 0.75
with dissolve
F "Hey."
"A heavy sigh escapes my lips."
@ -853,7 +855,7 @@ label chapter_9:
A "Its nothing bad, promise."
Re "Its a good call, dude."
show reed neutral flip with dissolve
F "Mmmmm…"
A "You can go first."
@ -938,7 +940,7 @@ label chapter_9:
F "Bye."
show fang sad at scenter
show fang sad at scenter with dissolve
hide fang sad with easeoutright
"Fang turns away from Trish and starts walking away."
@ -949,9 +951,9 @@ label chapter_9:
Re "Give you some privacy, amigo."
show reed considering:
show reed neutral flip:
xalign 1.4
hide reed considering with easeoutright
hide reed with easeoutright
"..."
@ -1083,9 +1085,8 @@ label chapter_9:
"Time for the Walk of Shame."
scene hallway
show anon neutral at acenter
with dissolve
"As I make my way through the hall I do my best to ignore the passing jeers from teens I dont even know."
"I guess its already spread to the lower years too."
@ -1111,7 +1112,8 @@ label chapter_9:
scene outside school with fade
show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
show fang sad flip at scenter with dissolve
show fang sad flip at scenter with dissolve:
xalign 1.1
"Within an hour Ive fallen back to square one."
@ -1132,11 +1134,11 @@ label chapter_9:
show anon fear flip at aleft
"My field of vision is filled with a soda can, and I freeze up like a deer in headlights."
show sodacan blurred with easeinleft:
show sodacan blurred:
yalign -0.1
xalign -0.1
zoom 0.25
linear 0.1 xalign 0.15 yalign 0.2 rotate 60
ease_cubic 0.1 xalign 0.15 yalign 0.15 rotate 60
menu:
"Duck.":
"The can smacks me in the forehead while I was mid-stride, and I shift my footing to try and regain balance."
@ -1147,15 +1149,16 @@ label chapter_9:
play sound "audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg"
show sodacan blurred:
linear 0.1 xalign 0.3 yalign 0.3 rotate 90
linear 0.3 xalign 0.5 yalign 0.7 rotate 60
linear 0.1 xalign 0.3 yalign 0.25 rotate 90
ease_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.5 yalign 0.7 rotate 60
hide sodacan blurred with dissolve
hide fang sad flip with dissolve
show fang shocked flip with dissolve
"Except my foot catches on the edge of the stairlip and slips."
hide fang with dissolve
show anon fear flip at aleft with easeinleft:
xalign 0.0
ease_cubic 0.5 rotate 90 yalign -0.5
#[Falling animation and CGs here]
scene outside school with vpunch
pause 0.5
scene outside school with hpunch
@ -1184,7 +1187,7 @@ label chapter_9:
scene schooloutside_blur at wiggle
#scene outside school
show anon neutral at aleft:
xalign 0.5 yalign 0.0 rotate -90
xalign 0.5 yalign -0.4 rotate -90
ease_cubic 2.0 rotate 0
with fade
@ -1194,6 +1197,8 @@ label chapter_9:
A "Am I? Ow."
show anon with ease:
yalign -0.1
"Nothing seems to be broken…{w=0.3} Ive been in worse."
"Honestly my egos more injured than I am."
@ -1211,8 +1216,9 @@ label chapter_9:
show outside school
scene black with fade
F "Oh no. Ohhh no. Let me help you up."
show fangcarriesanon at aright with dissolve
show schooloutside blurred
show fangcarriesanon at aright
with dissolve
"She tucks her arms around my shoulder and pulls me to my feet again."
F "Lets just get to the bench over there."
@ -1227,7 +1233,7 @@ label chapter_9:
hide fangcarriesanon with dissolve
scene outside school with fade
scene outside school
show anon neutral at acenter
show fang neutral flip at sright
with fade
@ -1264,11 +1270,12 @@ label chapter_9:
"Fang helps me to my feet and over to the cab, opening the door so I can shamble in."
scene taxi day with dissolve
D "...Shit, kid, you look like you got into a fight with a steamroller and lost."
A "Mmm."
scene taxi day
D "Now wherere you kids heading on a school day? Maybe the hospital?"
@ -1351,9 +1358,9 @@ label chapter_9:
"Wait…{w=0.3} Fang is coming over to my place?"
"Fang is coming over to my place?"
"Fang is coming over to {i}my{/i} place?"
"Fang is coming over to my place?"
"Fang is coming over to my {i}place{/i}?"
pause 0.5
"I dont want her to see how I live!"