deduplicate large segment of script at the start of prom night, tweak leadup scripts to transition smoothly, remove soulful-but-redundant error handling block in storyline
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"She giggles and lays down. Her head resting on my shoulder and her wing becoming a blanket as we look back to the stars."
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"We stay laying a while longer, keeping the red moon company."
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scene black with fade
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stop music fadeout 1.0
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"..."
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stop music fadeout 3.0
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scene black with Dissolve(1.5)
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pause .5
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"..."
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pause 1
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return
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@ -478,7 +478,12 @@ label chapter_12D:
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"Except the sunburn."
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"Ow."
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stop music fadeout 1.0
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stop music fadeout 3.0
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scene black with Dissolve(1.5)
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pause .5
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"..."
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pause 1
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return
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@ -1,404 +1,6 @@
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label chapter_13A:
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#Prom is Complicated
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"{cps=*.2}-- One Month Later --{/cps}"
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pause .5
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play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg' fadein 0.5
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pause .5
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"It’s prom night."
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"My old man was kind enough to send over his old tuxedo from his time at high school."
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"It took a bit of sewing, but I got it looking pretty good."
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pause .5
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"Judging by the wine stains on the sleeves, Dad’s made a lot of important announcements in this tuxedo."
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"Gives it a bit of history, I guess."
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pause .5
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scene home fang outside night
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show naomi prom neutral flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 0.6
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with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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"When I arrive at Fang’s place with a cheap corsage I see the Pomegranate Parasite waiting outside the front door."
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"Great."
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pause .5
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"And dear god, how can she move in that dress."
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"The top half looks like it’s been shrink-wrapped to her body."
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pause .5
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"And I'm one hundred percent certain there's nothing beneath the bottom half."
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pause .5
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show anon prom neutral flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 1.5
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show anon:
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easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.1
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with dissolve
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pause .5
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show naomi prom neutral with dissolve
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N "Oh, I already knocked Anon."
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N "Naser will be out in a moment to invite us in, I’m sure Fang will be getting ready too."
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N "I’ve heard the two of you are going to prom together!"
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pause .5
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"Ladies and gentlemen, the next Sherlock Holmes."
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pause .5
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A "No, I just happen to be here in a suit to go golfing."
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"I ignore her, focusing instead on not stabbing my palm even more on this flower’s thorns."
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pause .5
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"Fuck it, free is free."
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"And nothing more free than a five finger discount from the neighbor’s yard."
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pause .5
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N "You and Fang just make the cutest couple! Did you two sign up for prom king and queen?"
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A "Nah. She said something about the ‘fascist sexist monarchy system’."
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show naomi prom happy with dissolve
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N "Well, Naser and I have entered and we are going to be prom royalty. Ooooh, I can not wait to wear that beautiful tiara, I picked it out and everything and the crown for Naser-"
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"I’ve already tuned her out."
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pause .5
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show naomi prom neutral with dissolve
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pause .5
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"Naser opens the door."
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show naser prom neutral behind naomi:
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yalign 0.1 xalign -0.3
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with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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show naomi prom neutral flip with dissolve
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"Well if that isn’t the fanciest jacket I’ve seen in a while."
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"It’s certainly better than the background of Avatar he always wears."
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pause .5
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Nas "Sorry to keep you waiting, Naomi."
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show naser prom unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
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Nas "This thing is a nightmare to get over my wings."
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pause .5
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show naser prom happy with Dissolve(.25)
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Nas "Oh, Anon! Come on in, didn’t know you were already here."
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"He waves for the two of us to enter, pecking Naomi on the cheek when she passes."
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stop music fadeout 4
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pause .5
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scene home fang night
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show anon prom neutral flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
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show naser prom neutral flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 1.3
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show naomi prom neutral flip:
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yalign 0.0 xalign 1.2
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with Fade(1, 0, 1)
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pause .5
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"Fang’s Mother speaks up from the kitchen."
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FM "Oh! Oh! Is that Anon?"
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pause .5
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play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' fadein 0.5
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Nas "Here we go."
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pause .5
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show fangmom neutral:
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yalign 0.0 xalign -0.5
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show fangmom:
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easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
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with dissolve
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pause .5
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"The small pterodactyl comes out, a bowl she’s struggling to stir in her arms."
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FM "My, aren’t you handsome."
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pause .5
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FM "Pictures! I need to get pictures of you and Lucy!"
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"She sets the bowl aside on the coffee table to frantically search for a polaroid camera."
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FM "To think Lucy would have such a wonderful young man to take her to prom!"
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pause .5
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show fangmom:
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easein_back 1 xalign -0.2
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FM "Aha! Found it. Hold still, dear."
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pause .5
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play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg' ## CC0
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pause .275
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show white with Dissolve(.15)
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pause .5
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"ARGH! Like getting slapped in the face by the Sun’s dick!"
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pause .5
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show anon prom sad flip
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show white:
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linear 2 alpha 0
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pause .5
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"I blink the blindness away. So that’s why Naser has those fucking aviators."
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hide white
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pause .5
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FM "Lucy will be downstairs in a bit, she’s just getting the last of her makeup on!"
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FM "In the meantime, take a seat! I’ve got some cookies in the oven that are almost ready!"
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show anon prom neutral flip with dissolve
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A "Er, yes, thank you ma’am."
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show fangmom:
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easeout_cubic 1.2 xalign -1.5
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pause .2
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show fangmom neutral flip with dissolve
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hide fangmom with dissolve
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pause .5
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show anon:
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easein_back 1.5 xalign 0.4
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show anon prom neutral with dissolve
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"I take my seat in the usual spot, sinking in and feeling the pillows conform around my spine."
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pause .5
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"This thing must cost a fortune."
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"Fang’s dad is a police commissioner if I recall."
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"That explains the luxurious furnishings."
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pause .5
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"Now that I think about it, I’m surprised I haven’t seen him yet."
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pause .5
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show fangdad neutral:
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yalign 0.1 xalign -0.1
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with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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FD "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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show anon:
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easein_back 0.75 xalign 0.5
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show anon prom neutral flip with dissolve
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pause .5
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"I hope I didn’t just ruin these slacks."
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pause .5
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A "Good evening, sir."
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A "I didn’t even see you in your chair, sir."
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A "My apologies."
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pause .5
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FD "Don’t sweat it, son."
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FD "Thing about humans, as well as many carnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement."
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FD "You’d be surprised how effective staying quiet and stationary can be."
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show fangdad happy with dissolve
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FD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing-"
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play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickbigpunch.ogg'
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show fangdad unimpressed:
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easein_elastic 1 xalign -0.05
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FM "Sweetheart." with vpunch
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pause .5
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FM "No. Intimidating. The suitor."
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pause .5
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show fangdad:
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ease_cubic 1 xalign -0.1
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show fangdad neutral with dissolve
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"The big guy deflates a bit in his chair."
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FD "Point is, don’t get any funny ideas."
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A "Yessir."
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pause .5
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show naomi:
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ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
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ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
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N "We’re all taking the NasCar, right?"
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Nas "Yeah, yeah."
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Nas "Once Fang gets down we’ll skedaddle."
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show anon prom neutral with dissolve
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A "So until then we just sit and chill?"
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pause .5
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show naomi prom happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
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N "We could take more pictures!"
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pause .5
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show dimmer_light behind fangdad, anon, naser, naomi with Dissolve(.25)
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"{cps=*.3}Please no.{/cps}"
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pause .5
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show dimmer_light:
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linear 1 alpha 0
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show fangmom neutral:
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yalign 0.0 xalign -0.5
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show fangmom:
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easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
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with dissolve
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FM "Oh! I would love to make this a little photo op!"
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pause .5
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scene black with dissolve
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pause .5
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play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
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pause .275
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scene home fang night
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show naser prom neutral flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign -0.1
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show anon prom sad flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
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show naomi prom neutral flip:
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yalign 0.0 xalign 0.8
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with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
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pause .25
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play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
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pause .275
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scene home fang night
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show anon prom unimpressed flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
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show naomi prom happy flip:
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yalign 0.0 xalign 0.1
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with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
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pause .25
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play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
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pause .275
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scene home fang night
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show anon prom grin flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
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show naser prom happy flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2
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with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
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pause .25
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play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
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pause .275
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scene home fang night
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show fangdad happy flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
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show anon prom shock flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
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with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
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pause .25
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play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
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pause .275
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scene home fang night
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show fangmom unimpressed:
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yalign 0.0 xalign -0.2
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show anon prom neutral flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
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show fangdad neutral flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 1.0
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with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
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pause .25
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play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
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pause .275
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scene home fang night
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show anon prom neutral flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
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show fangdad unimpressed flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
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show fangmom neutral flip:
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yalign 0.0 xalign 0.6
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with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
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pause .25
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play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
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pause .275
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scene home fang night
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show fangmom neutral flip:
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yalign 0.0 xalign -0.15
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show fangdad neutral flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 0.2
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show anon prom neutral flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
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show naser prom neutral flip:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1
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show naomi prom neutral flip:
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yalign 0.0 xalign 1.05
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with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
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pause .25
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play sound 'audio/effects/cameraMult.ogg'
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pause .275
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scene black with Fade(.1, 1, 2, color="#fff")
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"Thirty photos later and I never want to see another camera again."
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"Fang’s mom decided to take pictures of every possible combination of us."
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"I don’t know which was worse, having to pose with Naomi or Fang’s dad digging his murder claws into my shoulder."
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"I’ve lost nearly all feeling in that arm."
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"Pretty sure that’ll leave a bruise worse than my accelerated hug with the stair bollard last month."
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pause .5
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"At least the pics with Naser were a nice reprieve."
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"We ended up looking like the blues brothers, standing side by side in fuck ugly suits."
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pause .5
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stop music fadeout 4
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"Just as I was about to resign myself to premature blindness from the camera flash, my saviour arrives."
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pause .5
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F "Oh, Anon, you’re already here!"
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play music 'audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg' fadein 0.5
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pause .5
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label chapter_13C:
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#Prom is Suprising
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pause 3
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scene black with fade
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stop music fadeout 1.0
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play music "audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg" fadein 1.0
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"{cps=*0.2}-- One Month Later --{/cps}"
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"It’s prom night."
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"My old man was kind enough to send over his old tuxedo from his time at high school."
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"It took a bit of sewing, but I got it looking pretty good."
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"Judging by the wine stains on the sleeves, Dad’s made a lot of important announcements in this tuxedo."
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"Gives it a bit of history, I guess."
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scene home fang outside night
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show anon prom neutral at aleft
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show naomi prom neutral flip at sright
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with fade
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"When I arrive at Fang’s place with a cheap corsage I see the Pomegranate Parasite waiting outside the front door."
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"Great."
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"And dear god, how can she move in that dress."
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"It looks like it’s been shrink-wrapped to her body."
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N "Oh, I already knocked Anon."
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N "Naser will be out in a moment to invite us in, I’m sure Fang will be getting ready too."
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N "I’ve heard the two of you are going to prom together!"
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"Ladies and gentlemen,{w=0.3} the next Sherlock Holmes."
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A "No, I just happen to be here in a suit to go golfing."
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"I ignore her, focusing instead on not stabbing my palm even more on this flower’s thorns."
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"Fuck it, free is free."
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"And nothing more free than a five finger discount from the neighbor’s yard."
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N "You and Fang just make the cutest couple! Did you two sign up for prom king and queen?"
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A "Nah. She said something about the ‘fascist sexist monarchy system’."
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N "Well, Naser and I have entered and we are going to be prom royalty. {w=0.2}Ooooh, I can not wait to wear that beautiful tiara, I picked it out and everything and the crown for Naser-"
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show naomi prom happy flip
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"I’ve already tuned her out."
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show naser prom neutral at ncenter with dissolve
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"Naser opens the door."
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"Well if that isn’t the fanciest jacket I’ve seen in a while."
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"It’s certainly better than the background of Avatar he always wears."
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Nas "Sorry to keep you waiting, Naomi."
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Nas "This thing is a nightmare to get over my wings."
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show naser prom happy flip at ncenter with dissolve
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Nas "Oh, Anon! Come on in, didn’t know you were already here."
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stop music fadeout 1.0
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play music "audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg" fadein 1.0
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"He waves for the two of us to enter, pecking Naomi on the cheek when she passes."
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scene home fang night
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show anon prom neutral at aleft
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show naser prom neutral at ncenter
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show naomi prom neutral at scenter
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with fade
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"Fang’s Mother speaks up from the kitchen."
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show fangmom neutral flip at sright with easeinright
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FM "Oh! Oh! Is that Anon?"
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Nas "Here we go."
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"The small pterodactyl comes out, a bowl she’s struggling to stir in her arms."
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|
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FM "My, aren’t you handsome."
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|
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FM "Pictures!{w=0.2} I need to get pictures of you and Lucy!"
|
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|
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"She sets the bowl aside on the coffee table to frantically search for a polaroid camera."
|
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|
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FM "To think Lucy would have such a wonderful young man to take her to prom!"
|
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|
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FM "Aha! Found it.{w=0.3} Hold still, dear."
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|
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scene white with fade
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show black with Fade(0.14, 0, 0, color="#fff")
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show black
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show white
|
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pause .01
|
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show white with Fade(0, 1, 3, color="#fff")
|
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pause .01
|
||||
scene home fang night blurred with dissolve
|
||||
pause 0.1
|
||||
scene home fang night lessblurred with dissolve
|
||||
pause 0.1
|
||||
scene home fang night barelyblurred with dissolve
|
||||
pause 0.1
|
||||
scene home fang night
|
||||
"ARGH! Like getting slapped in the face by the sun’s dick!"
|
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|
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"I blink the blindness away. So that’s why Naser has those fucking aviators."
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|
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# scene home fang night
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show anon prom neutral at aleft
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show naser prom neutral at ncenter
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show naomi prom neutral at scenter
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show fangmom neutral flip at sright
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with fade
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|
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FM "Lucy will be downstairs in a bit, she’s just getting the last of her makeup on!"
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show fangmom neutral flip at sright:
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ease_cubic 2.5 xpos -0.5
|
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pause 2.0
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hide fangmom with dissolve
|
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FM "In the meantime, take a seat! I’ve got some cookies in the oven that are almost ready!"
|
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|
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A "Er, yes, thank you ma’am."
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"I take my seat in the usual spot, sinking in and feeling the pillows conform around my spine."
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show anon prom neutral at aleft:
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ease_cubic 2.5 xpos 1.5
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pause 1.5
|
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hide anon with dissolve
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|
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scene black with fade
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scene home fang night
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show anon prom neutral flip at aright
|
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with fade
|
||||
"This thing must cost a fortune."
|
||||
|
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"Fang’s dad is a police commissioner if I recall."
|
||||
|
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"That explains the luxurious furnishings."
|
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|
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"Now that I think about it, I’m surprised I haven’t seen him yet."
|
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pause 0.5
|
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show fangdadlarge at sleft with easeinleft:
|
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xalign -0.5
|
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FD "So…"
|
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|
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"I hope I didn’t just ruin these slacks."
|
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|
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A "Good evening, sir."
|
||||
|
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A "I didn’t even see you in your chair, sir."
|
||||
|
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A "My apologies."
|
||||
|
||||
FD "Don’t sweat it, son."
|
||||
|
||||
FD "Thing about humans, as well as many charnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement."
|
||||
|
||||
FD "You’d be surprised how useful staying quiet and stationary can be."
|
||||
|
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FD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing-"
|
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hide fangdadlarge
|
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show fangdad neutral at sleft
|
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show fangmom unimpressed flip at fmcenter
|
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with dissolve
|
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|
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FM "Sweetheart."
|
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|
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FM "No.{w=0.2} Intimidating.{w=0.2} The Suitor."
|
||||
|
||||
"The big guy deflates a bit in his chair."
|
||||
|
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FD "Point is, don’t get any funny ideas."
|
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|
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A "Yessir."
|
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|
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hide fangdad with dissolve
|
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show naser prom neutral at nleft with easeinleft
|
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|
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N "We’re all taking the NasCar, right?"
|
||||
|
||||
Nas "Yeah, yeah."
|
||||
|
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Nas "Once Fang gets down we’ll skedaddle."
|
||||
|
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A "So until then we just sit and chill?"
|
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show naomi prom happy at sleft with easeinleft
|
||||
|
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N "We could take more pictures!"
|
||||
|
||||
"Please no."
|
||||
|
||||
show fangmom neutral at fmcenter with easeinleft
|
||||
|
||||
FM "Oh! I would love to make this a little photo op!"
|
||||
|
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scene white with fade
|
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show black with Fade(0.14, 0, 0, color="#fff")
|
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show black
|
||||
show white
|
||||
pause .01
|
||||
show white with Fade(0, 1, 3, color="#fff")
|
||||
pause .01
|
||||
scene home fang night blurred with dissolve
|
||||
pause 0.1
|
||||
scene home fang night lessblurred with dissolve
|
||||
pause 0.1
|
||||
scene home fang night barelyblurred with dissolve
|
||||
pause 0.1
|
||||
scene home fang night
|
||||
"Thirty photos later and I never want to see another camera again."
|
||||
|
||||
"Fang’s mom decided to take pictures of every possible combination of us."
|
||||
|
||||
"I don’t know which was worse, having to pose with Naomi or Fang’s dad digging his murder claws into my shoulder."
|
||||
|
||||
"I’ve lost nearly all feeling in that arm."
|
||||
|
||||
"Pretty sure that’ll leave a bruise worse than my accelerated hug with the stair bollard last month."
|
||||
|
||||
"At least the pics with Naser were a nice reprieve."
|
||||
|
||||
"We ended up looking like the blues brothers, standing side by side in fuck ugly suits."
|
||||
|
||||
"Just as I was about to resign myself to premature blindness from the camera flash, my saviour arrives."
|
||||
|
||||
F "Oh, Anon, you’re already here!"
|
||||
stop music fadeout 1.0
|
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play music "audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg" fadein 1.0
|
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show good_fang_home_prom_stars with fade
|
||||
pause .5
|
||||
|
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scene stair2 with Dissolve(2)
|
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pause 1
|
||||
|
||||
"Lucy comes downstairs in a white dress."
|
||||
|
||||
"The back of the dress trails down the stairs behind her."
|
||||
|
|
|
|||
|
|
@ -1,254 +1,19 @@
|
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label chapter_13D:
|
||||
|
||||
#Prom is Memorable
|
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scene black with fade
|
||||
|
||||
"{cps=*0.2}-- One Month Later --{/cps}"
|
||||
play music "audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg" fadein 1.0
|
||||
|
||||
"It’s prom night."
|
||||
|
||||
"My old man was kind enough to send over his old tuxedo from his time at high school."
|
||||
|
||||
"It took a bit of sewing, but I got it looking pretty good."
|
||||
|
||||
"Judging by the wine stains on the sleeves, Dad’s made a lot of important announcements in this tuxedo."
|
||||
|
||||
"Gives it a bit of history, I guess."
|
||||
|
||||
scene home fang outside night
|
||||
show anon prom neutral at aleft
|
||||
show naomi prom neutral flip at sright
|
||||
with fade
|
||||
|
||||
"When I arrive at Fang’s place with a cheap corsage I see the Pomegranate Parasite waiting outside the front door."
|
||||
|
||||
"Great."
|
||||
|
||||
"And dear god, how can she move in that dress."
|
||||
|
||||
"It looks like it’s been shrink-wrapped to her body."
|
||||
|
||||
N "Oh, I already knocked Anon."
|
||||
|
||||
N "Naser will be out in a moment to invite us in, I’m sure Fang will be getting ready too."
|
||||
|
||||
N "I’ve heard the two of you are going to prom together!"
|
||||
|
||||
"Ladies and gentlemen,{w=0.2} the next Sherlock Holmes."
|
||||
|
||||
A "No, I just happen to be here in a suit to go golfing."
|
||||
|
||||
"I ignore her, focusing instead on not stabbing my palm even more on this flower’s thorns."
|
||||
|
||||
"Fuck it, free is free."
|
||||
|
||||
"And nothing more free than a five finger discount from the neighbor’s yard."
|
||||
|
||||
N "You and Fang just make the cutest couple! Did you two sign up for prom king and queen?"
|
||||
|
||||
A "Nah. She said something about the ‘fascist sexist monarchy system’."
|
||||
|
||||
N "Well, Naser and I have entered and we are going to be prom royalty. Ooooh, I can not wait to wear that beautiful tiara, I picked it out and everything and the crown for Naser-"
|
||||
|
||||
show naomi prom happy flip
|
||||
|
||||
"I’ve already tuned her out."
|
||||
|
||||
show naser prom neutral at ncenter with dissolve
|
||||
|
||||
"Naser opens the door."
|
||||
|
||||
"Well if that isn’t the fanciest jacket I’ve seen in a while."
|
||||
|
||||
"It’s certainly better than the background of Avatar he always wears."
|
||||
|
||||
Nas "Sorry to keep you waiting, Naomi."
|
||||
|
||||
Nas "This thing is a nightmare to get over my wings."
|
||||
|
||||
show naser prom happy flip at ncenter with dissolve
|
||||
|
||||
Nas "Oh, Anon! Come on in, didn’t know you were already here."
|
||||
|
||||
"He waves for the two of us to enter, pecking Naomi on the cheek when she passes."
|
||||
|
||||
scene home fang night
|
||||
show anon prom neutral at aleft
|
||||
show naser prom neutral at ncenter
|
||||
show naomi prom neutral at scenter
|
||||
with fade
|
||||
|
||||
"Fang’s Mother speaks up from the kitchen."
|
||||
|
||||
show fangmom neutral flip at sright with easeinright
|
||||
|
||||
FM "Oh! Oh! Is that Anon?"
|
||||
|
||||
Nas "Here we go."
|
||||
|
||||
"The small pterodactyl comes out, a bowl she’s struggling to stir in her arms."
|
||||
|
||||
FM "My, aren’t you handsome."
|
||||
|
||||
FM "Pictures! I need to get pictures of you and Lucy!"
|
||||
|
||||
"She sets the bowl aside on the coffee table to frantically search for a polaroid camera."
|
||||
|
||||
FM "To think Lucy would have such a wonderful young man to take her to prom!"
|
||||
|
||||
FM "Aha!{w=0.2} Found it. Hold still, dear."
|
||||
scene white with fade
|
||||
show black with Fade(0.14, 0, 0, color="#fff")
|
||||
show black
|
||||
show white
|
||||
pause .01
|
||||
show white with Fade(0, 1, 3, color="#fff")
|
||||
pause .01
|
||||
scene home fang night blurred with dissolve
|
||||
pause 0.1
|
||||
scene home fang night lessblurred with dissolve
|
||||
pause 0.1
|
||||
scene home fang night barelyblurred with dissolve
|
||||
pause 0.1
|
||||
scene home fang night
|
||||
"ARGH! Like getting slapped in the face by the sun’s dick!"
|
||||
|
||||
"I blink the blindness away. So that’s why Naser has those fucking aviators."
|
||||
|
||||
scene home fang night
|
||||
show anon prom neutral at aleft
|
||||
show naser prom neutral at ncenter
|
||||
show naomi prom neutral at scenter
|
||||
show fangmom neutral flip at sright
|
||||
with fade
|
||||
|
||||
FM "Lucy will be downstairs in a bit, she’s just getting the last of her makeup on!"
|
||||
|
||||
show fangmom neutral flip at sright:
|
||||
ease_cubic 2.5 xpos -0.5
|
||||
pause 2.0
|
||||
hide fangmom with dissolve
|
||||
|
||||
FM "In the meantime, take a seat! I’ve got some cookies in the oven that are almost ready!"
|
||||
|
||||
A "Er, yes, thank you ma’am."
|
||||
|
||||
"I take my seat in the usual spot, sinking in and feeling the pillows conform around my spine."
|
||||
|
||||
show anon prom neutral at aleft:
|
||||
ease_cubic 2.5 xpos 1.5
|
||||
pause 1.5
|
||||
hide anon with dissolve
|
||||
|
||||
scene black with fade
|
||||
|
||||
scene home fang night with fade
|
||||
show anon prom neutral flip at aright
|
||||
|
||||
"This thing must cost a fortune."
|
||||
|
||||
"Fang’s dad is a police commissioner if I recall."
|
||||
|
||||
"That explains the luxurious furnishings."
|
||||
|
||||
"Now that I think about it, I’m surprised I haven’t seen him yet."
|
||||
pause 0.5
|
||||
show fangdadlarge at sleft with easeinleft:
|
||||
xalign -0.5
|
||||
FD "So…"
|
||||
|
||||
"I hope I didn’t just ruin these slacks."
|
||||
|
||||
A "Good evening, sir."
|
||||
|
||||
A "I didn’t even see you in your chair, sir."
|
||||
|
||||
A "My apologies."
|
||||
|
||||
FD "Don’t sweat it, son."
|
||||
|
||||
FD "Thing about humans, as well as many charnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement."
|
||||
|
||||
FD "You’d be surprised how useful staying quiet and stationary can be."
|
||||
|
||||
FD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing-"
|
||||
hide fangdadlarge with dissolve
|
||||
show fangdad neutral at sleft with dissolve
|
||||
show fangmom unimpressed flip at fmcenter with dissolve
|
||||
|
||||
FM "Sweetheart."
|
||||
|
||||
FM "No.{w=0.1} Intimidating.{w=0.1} The Suitor."
|
||||
|
||||
"The big guy deflates a bit in his chair."
|
||||
|
||||
FD "Point is,{w=0.1} don’t get any funny ideas."
|
||||
|
||||
A "Yessir."
|
||||
|
||||
hide fangdad with dissolve
|
||||
show naser prom neutral at nleft with easeinleft
|
||||
|
||||
N "We’re all taking the NasCar, right?"
|
||||
|
||||
Nas "Yeah, yeah."
|
||||
|
||||
Nas "Once Fang gets down we’ll skedaddle."
|
||||
|
||||
A "So until then we just sit and chill?"
|
||||
show naomi prom happy at sleft with easeinleft
|
||||
|
||||
N "We could take more pictures!"
|
||||
|
||||
"Please no."
|
||||
|
||||
show fangmom neutral at fmcenter with easeinleft
|
||||
|
||||
FM "Oh! I would love to make this a little photo op!"
|
||||
|
||||
scene white with fade
|
||||
show black with Fade(0.14, 0, 0, color="#fff")
|
||||
show black
|
||||
show white
|
||||
pause .01
|
||||
show white with Fade(0, 1, 3, color="#fff")
|
||||
pause .01
|
||||
scene home fang night blurred with dissolve
|
||||
pause 0.1
|
||||
scene home fang night lessblurred with dissolve
|
||||
pause 0.1
|
||||
scene home fang night barelyblurred with dissolve
|
||||
pause 0.1
|
||||
scene home fang night
|
||||
|
||||
"Thirty photos later and I never want to see another camera again."
|
||||
|
||||
"Fang’s mom decided to take pictures of every possible combination of us."
|
||||
|
||||
"I don’t know which was worse, having to pose with Naomi or Fang’s dad digging his murder claws into my shoulder."
|
||||
|
||||
"I’ve lost nearly all feeling in that arm."
|
||||
|
||||
"Pretty sure that’ll leave a bruise worse than my accelerated hug with the stair bollard last month."
|
||||
|
||||
"At least the pics with Naser were a nice reprieve."
|
||||
|
||||
"We ended up looking like the blues brothers, standing side by side in fuck ugly suits."
|
||||
|
||||
"Just as I was about to resign myself to premature blindness from the camera flash, my saviour arrives."
|
||||
|
||||
F "Oh, Anon, you’re already here!"
|
||||
play music "audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg" fadein 1.0
|
||||
|
||||
"Fang leans over the railing of the staircase."
|
||||
|
||||
F "Nice suit! Did ya get it from the suit store?"
|
||||
|
||||
scene gold_fang_home_prom_stars with Dissolve(2)
|
||||
pause 1
|
||||
|
||||
"Holy shit, she can really rock that dress."
|
||||
show gold_fang_home_prom_stars with fade
|
||||
|
||||
#Why isn't it him who's saying this
|
||||
# "Fang's Dad" "Ahem."
|
||||
pause 2.0
|
||||
|
||||
FD "Ahem."
|
||||
|
||||
"Ah. {w=0.2}Shit."
|
||||
|
|
@ -420,7 +185,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
|
|||
|
||||
show naomi prom neutral with dissolve
|
||||
|
||||
F "You’d be surprised how useful staying quiet and stationary can be."
|
||||
F "You’d be surprised how effective staying quiet and stationary can be."
|
||||
|
||||
F "How close you can get to someone without them knowing you’re even there."
|
||||
|
||||
|
|
|
|||
|
|
@ -21,44 +21,34 @@ label storyline:
|
|||
call chapter_9
|
||||
call chapter_10
|
||||
call chapter_11
|
||||
#Ending Deciding
|
||||
call get_ending
|
||||
if _return == 4:
|
||||
call chapter_11D
|
||||
call chapter_12D
|
||||
call chapter_13
|
||||
call chapter_13D
|
||||
call chapter_14D
|
||||
elif _return == 3:
|
||||
$ tradwife = True
|
||||
call chapter_11C
|
||||
call chapter_12C
|
||||
call chapter_13
|
||||
call chapter_13C
|
||||
call chapter_14C
|
||||
elif _return == 2:
|
||||
call chapter_11B
|
||||
call chapter_12B
|
||||
# no chapter_13 here since the scene is different enough to the other routes for everything to go into 13C
|
||||
call chapter_13B
|
||||
call chapter_14B
|
||||
elif _return == 1:
|
||||
else:
|
||||
call chapter_11A
|
||||
call chapter_12A
|
||||
call chapter_13
|
||||
call chapter_13A
|
||||
call chapter_14A
|
||||
$ ending_image()
|
||||
$ renpy.quit()
|
||||
else: # this block is redundant since we should never hit it
|
||||
#>>ERROR HANDLING OH SWEET BABY JESUS SHIT HIT THE FAN
|
||||
St "FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK"
|
||||
A "What?"
|
||||
St "Some dipshit developer made broken code and this is the error handling message..."
|
||||
A "What?"
|
||||
St "Basically the if/else statement that handles this shit has failed at catching the score, and someone fucked up."
|
||||
A "Shit... what does that mean?"
|
||||
St "Well... the games broken and will end soon"
|
||||
A "Does this mean that the 3 fucks speedrunning have an easy way to beat the game?"
|
||||
St "Yes, but you have to have something wrong with you to speedrun a visual novel beta"
|
||||
"/dev/non" "well shit. Please do report this bug and all the choices you made that lead to this point. Something fucked up real bad"
|
||||
#just liek maek gaem
|
||||
$ ending_image()
|
||||
call .ending
|
||||
return
|
||||
|
|
@ -73,7 +63,7 @@ label .ending:
|
|||
if tradwife:
|
||||
scene c10 with fade
|
||||
pause 20
|
||||
if anonscore >= 4 and fangscore >= 4:
|
||||
elif anonscore >= 4 and fangscore >= 4:
|
||||
scene ending_d_cg with fade
|
||||
pause 20
|
||||
return
|
||||
|
|
|
|||
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Reference in New Issue