finish route A first pass

game/script/14A.KO_OP-ending.rpy

@@ -13,16 +13,16 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "Groggily, I pull myself to my feet."
 
     hide dimmer_darker with dissolve
-    "I pull back the curtain to reveal that a thick sunday fog had rolled in overnight."
+    "I pull back the curtain to reveal that a thick Sunday fog had rolled in overnight."
 
     "What time is it?"
     
-    "Guess I’ll check my phone…"
+    "Guess I’ll check my phone{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     show anonphone at scenter with easeinbottom
     pause .5
 
-    "Ten AM, huh…"
+    "Ten AM, huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
     hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "Damn, I slept a while."
     pause .5
 
-    "...Did Fang sleep well?"
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Did Fang sleep well?"
 
     A "Fang, you up?"
     pause .5
@@ -407,6 +407,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     T "I WAS RIGHT ABOUT YOU!! YOU!!"
 
     "By now her tirade becomes incomprehensible screaming."
+    pause .5
 
     "A teacher has to hold her back and try directing her to a nearby curb to sit."
     pause 1
@@ -534,7 +535,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Guess she didn’t get that ‘perfect highschool life’ in the end."
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    pause .5
+    pause 1
 
     scene black with dissolve
     pause 1
@@ -595,6 +596,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}How long have I been standing here, staring at the doorknob?"
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}How much longer could I get away with putting it off?"
+    pause .5
 
     "As it is, it’s not the worst case scenario."
 
@@ -626,30 +628,37 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "The doorknob is still cold on my hand."
 
     "I turn it and exit to the rooftop."
+    pause .5
+
+    image fangfog = im.Blur(im.MatrixColor("fang/emotive set/fang anguish.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1)), 1.5)
+    scene roof fog 
+    show fangfog:
+        yanchor 0.5 xanchor 0.5
+        ypos 0.6 xpos 0.5
+        alpha 0.25 zoom 0.25
+    with Dissolve(2)
 
-    scene roof fog with Dissolve(2)
     pause .5
 
     "In the dense morning fog the only thing to stand out is the silhouette."
 
     "One that I easily recognize."
-    pause .5
-
-    scene a10 with Dissolve(2)
     pause 1
 
     A "Fang."
-    pause .5
 
     "She’s silent. I can’t even tell if she’s looking at me or not."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Fang, please. Say something."
 
     "My legs feel leaden as I approach her."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "Fang. Come on. T-this is all…"
+    A "Fang. Come on. T-this is all{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "Slowly more and more details come too."
+    "Slowly more and more details come to."
+    pause .5
 
     "The revolver that hung limply from her fingers."
 
@@ -658,229 +667,326 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "Her wings with multiple bald patches on them."
 
     "And the sound of her ragged breaths."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "Fang…"
+    A "Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "My fingers brush against her shoulder."
-    scene black
 
     play sound "audio/effects/shottinnitus.ogg"
+    scene black with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color = "#ff0000")
+    pause 1
 
-    A "ARGH!"
+    A "{i}ARGH!{/i}"
+    pause .5
 
     "Hot, searing pain."
 
     "My left leg crumples under me."
+    pause 1
 
     "As I fall I see Fang’s beautiful amber eyes."
 
     "They’re red and puffy, with makeup-less tears running freely down her cheeks."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "A-Anon… WHY ARE YOU-!"
+    scene a10 with Dissolve(2)
+    pause 1
 
-    A "Aaaah… haaaah… Fang… Why…?"
+    F "A-Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps} WHY ARE YOU-!"
+
+    A "Aaaah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} haaaah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps} why{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?"
 
     F "Y-you weren’t supposed to be here!"
+    pause .5
 
     F "You shouldn’t have come here!"
+    pause .5
 
-    A "Fuck… Because… Because I love you! Haaaaaah."
+    A "Fuck{cps=*.1}...{/cps} because{cps=*.1}...{/cps} because I love you! Haaaaaah."
-
+    pause .5
-    scene a10 with fade
 
     "I struggle to balance on my left leg. The hole in my shin dribbles blood down to the floor."
 
     "I don’t care though."
+    pause .5
 
     "I hobble forward."
+    pause .5
 
     "Fang steps back."
 
     F "S-stay back!"
 
     "The revolver clatters against the concrete, spent on ammo."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "Fang… please…"
+    A "Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps} please{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     "A painful step forward."
 
     "She takes another back."
+    pause .5
 
     F "Anon!"
 
-    A "Just come downstairs with me… It’s not over, it doesn’t have to be this wa-"
+    A "Just come downstairs with me{cps=*.1}...{/cps} It’s not over, it doesn’t have to be this wa-"
 
+    # HL gib sound
+    scene black with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color = "#ff0000")
     "With a crunch, my shin gives out completely, lurching me forward onto my hands and knees."
-
+    pause 1
-    scene black with fade
 
     "I have to keep going."
 
     "Even if it’s on my knees."
+    pause .5
 
     "I can feel myself slowing."
 
     "My thoughts cloudy."
+    pause .5
 
-    "The blood loss..."
+    "The blood loss{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     "The pain is so intense, however."
 
     "It brings some clarity to my mind."
 
     "Enough that I can drag myself forward."
+    pause .5
+
+    image red = "#ff0000"
+    scene a10 
+    show red:
+        alpha 0
+        block:
+            easeout_cubic 0.4 alpha 0.1
+            pause .1
+            easein_cubic 0.4 alpha 0
+            pause .75
+            repeat
+    show dimmer_lighter:
+        alpha 0
+        block:
+            ease_quad 2.5 alpha 1
+            ease_quad 2.5 alpha 0
+            repeat
+
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 1
 
     A "Please, come down with me."
 
-    F "Oh-oh god. Oh my god. S-stop…"
+    F "Oh-oh god. Oh my god. S-stop{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     "The sharp bone pokes and tears through my leg muscle."
+    pause .5
 
     "I briefly look behind me, the trail is spilling out and making my other leg wet."
 
     "Bile rises up my throat at the sight."
+    pause .5
 
     "I swallow hard and look back to Fang."
+    pause .5
 
     "I have to reach her."
 
     "I can still fix this."
 
     "I can still save her."
+    pause .5
 
     "Fang keeps backing away as I try to get closer, remaining out of my reach."
+    pause .5
 
     "Fang stops and catches her balance."
+    pause 1
 
     "Her foot is halfway over the edge."
+    pause 1
 
     "We’ve reached the edge of the rooftop."
+    pause 1
 
     "End of the line."
 
+    hide red 
+    hide dimmer_lighter
+    with Dissolve(2)
+
     A "Fang."
 
     A "Look at me."
 
-    scene a11 with fade
-
     "Her head shakily turns from the concrete below to meet my eyes again."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Back away from there, please."
 
-    F "I-I… I…"
+    F "I-I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "It’s not over."
 
     A "Stay with me here, please."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "I…"
+    F "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Don’t leave me alone."
+    pause .5
 
     "We stare for an eternity, all through the police’s screaming below."
+    pause .5
+
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
 
     "Fang looks below once more, down the three story drop to the walkway below."
 
     "The walkway we’d passed through so many times to get to classes without a second thought."
 
     "The walkway we crossed daily with our friends through all our trials."
+    pause 1
 
-    A "Please…"
+    A "Please{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    scene a11 with Dissolve(2)
+    pause 1
 
     "She looks to me again, less shakily this time."
+    pause 1
 
     "The sides of her mouth curl into a warm smile."
+    pause 1
 
-    "The last of her tears falls."
+    "The last of her tears fall."
-
+    pause 2
-    scene a12 with fade
 
+    scene a12 with dissolve
     "She jumps."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "Fang!"
+    A "{i}Fang!{/i}"
+    pause 2
 
     "I can’t look over."
+    pause .5
 
     "I don’t want to see it."
+    pause 2
 
     "The authorities betray my final wish of death by bursting through the door at that exact minute."
+    pause .5
 
     "I drift into unconsciousness when they start wrapping my leg."
+    pause 1
 
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with Dissolve(3)
+    pause 2
 
-    pause 5
+    "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
-
+    pause 2
-    "..."
 
     "Three weeks pass."
+    pause .5
 
     "Probably."
+    pause 1
 
     "All I can remember is the sterile hospital room and an endless lineup of reporters."
 
     "The whole incident made national news."
+    pause .5
 
     "Apparently I had become ‘the brave soul who took a bullet to stop a school shooting.’"
 
     "But to everyone I know I’m just the one who caused all this."
+    pause .5
 
     "After I refused to answer the constant pestering enough, I was finally left in blissful solitude."
+    pause 1
 
     "I expected a visit from Spears, or Reed, or Stella or someone."
 
     "But they never came."
+    pause 1
 
     "I got discharged just yesterday."
 
     "I’ll need to stay on a crutch for a few months, but that’s hardly the wound I'm worried about."
+    pause 1
 
-    scene a13 with fade
+    scene a13 with Dissolve(3)
+    pause 2
 
-    "...Her funeral was today."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Her funeral was today."
+    pause 1
 
     "I wasn’t invited, of course."
 
     "But I can’t just leave it either."
+    pause .5
 
     "So I wait out of sight several hundreds of feet away for the remaining family members to trickle out of the crowd and go home."
+    pause 2
 
-    scene a14a with fade
+    scene a14a with Dissolve(2)
+    pause 2
 
     "The last figure lingers for over an hour."
 
     "If anyone, he’s the one who deserved this the least."
+    pause 1
 
     "He was right the whole time, about me."
 
     "And here I am, defiling her grave with my presence."
+    pause 1
 
     "Eventually, he too leaves."
+    pause 1
 
-    scene a15 with fade
+    scene a15 with Fade(2, .5, 2)
+    pause 2
 
     "The alternations of footsteps and the crutch make me feel more mechanical than human."
 
     "Then again, that may be true regardless of having a crutch."
+    pause 1
 
-    scene a14 with fade
+    scene a14 with Dissolve(3)
+    pause 2
 
     "The two graves are right next to each other."
 
     "Various flowers pollute the fresh mounds."
+    pause .5
 
-    "In memory of Naser. Loving son and brother."
+    "{cps=*.4}{i}\"In memory of Naser. Loving son and brother.\"{/i}{/cps}"
+    pause 1
 
-    "... I’m sorry, man."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I’m sorry, man."
+    pause 1
 
     "I hobble over to the other headstone."
+    pause .5
 
-    "{i}Here lies dearest Lucy. Heaven restores you in light.{/i}"
+    "{cps=*.4}{i}\"Here lies dearest Lucy. Heaven restores you in light.\"{/i}{/cps}"
+    pause 1
+
+    "They buried her using her real name."
+    pause 2
 
     "God damn it."
 
     "This is all my fault."
+    pause .5
 
     "None of this would have happened if I noticed something was wrong."
 
@@ -889,51 +995,71 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "If I never got between her and her friends by telling her how I felt."
 
     "If I never bothered Fang and just stayed to myself."
+    pause .5
 
-    "...If I never moved to Volcaldera in the first place."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}If I never moved to Volcaldera in the first place."
+    pause .5
 
     "Fuck."
+    pause .5
 
     "And because of me Naomi and Naser and Fang and the others are gone."
 
     "Because I’m too fucking stupid to see any of the warning signs."
+    pause 1
 
     "I should be crying right now."
 
     "I should be screaming to the world why I should have died instead."
 
-    "But I instead I just feel…"
+    "But I instead I just feel{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 1
 
     "My final plea to Fang races through my head."
-    #fade in wind blowing here
+    pause .5
-    play sound "audio/effects/wind.ogg" loop volume 0.3
+
-    "{i}Don’t leave me alone.{/i}"
+    # B: commented this stuff from the original game out so you can decide how to do your thing
+    # play sound "audio/effects/wind.ogg" loop volume 0.3
+    "{i}{cps=*.3}Don’t leave me alone.{/cps}{/i}"
+    pause 1
 
     "I just feel completely and utterly and hopelessly alone."
+    pause 2
 
     "The sprinkling rain stops."
 
     "Seems the world is tired of my monologuing."
+    pause .5
 
     "Like Trish said, I’m just some nobody from the middle of nowhere."
 
     "And the only person I ever cared about is gone."
+    pause .5
 
     "The split second I thought I was somebody, I ruined everything."
 
     "So now, I’m back to being nobody."
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
+    pause 2
 
     "It’s better this way."
     $ quick_menu = False
     window hide
-    play sound "audio/effects/wind.ogg" loop volume 0.2
+
-    play music "audio/OST/Sad!.ogg" fadein 1.0 volume 2.8 noloop
+    pause 4
-    pause 20
+
-    stop sound fadeout 1.0
+    # B: this track is absurdly quiet
-    scene black with fade
+    # play music "audio/OST/Sad!.ogg" fadein 1.0 volume 2.8 noloop
-    pause 30
+
-    scene 1of4 with fade
+    stop sound fadeout 4
-    pause 15
+    scene black with Dissolve(4)
+    pause 2
+
+    scene 1of4 with Dissolve(2)
+    pause
+
+    scene black with Dissolve(3)
+    pause 2
+
     return