rework ch5 buildup to roof scene

game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy

@@ -2373,190 +2373,563 @@ label chapter_5:
     "I set off for my apartment,{w=.4} body sore but spirit soaring."
 
     "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
+    pause 1
     
     #Heart to Heart
-    play music 'audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg' fadein 1.0
+
-    "One month now. Five to go and I’ve found myself in a predicament."
+    play music 'audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg' fadein 1
+    pause 1
+
+    "One month now.{w=.75} Five to go and I’ve found myself in a predicament."
+    pause .5
+
     "I’m enjoying my time with Fang."
+    pause .5
+
     "Most of the time just talking about stupid shit."
+
     "Like our mutual love for wire-fu and comedy movies."
-    "{alpha=*0.5}{i}We are both ventriloquist, ventriloquist, ventriloquist. We are both ventriloquists and we practice every day.{/i}{/alpha}"
+    pause .5
+
+    "{alpha=*0.5}{i}We are both ventriloquists,{w=.2} ventriloquists,{w=.2} ventriloquists.{w=.4} We are both ventriloquists{w=.1} and we practice every day.{/i}{/alpha}"
+
     F "{alpha=*0.5}{i}He carries a basket{/i}{/alpha}"
+
     A "{alpha=*0.5}{i}He carries a paper roll{/i}{/alpha}"
-    "{alpha=*0.5}{i}and we don’t have cysts. But there is one thing that’s for sure friends, we are ventriloquists.{/i}{/alpha}"
+
+    "{alpha=*0.5}{i}and we don’t have cysts.{w=.5} But there is one thing that’s for sure my friends,{w=.4} we are ventriloquists.{/i}{/alpha}"
+    pause .5
+
     "Almost every day now I’m either at her desk helping her in Science or working on a lab with her."
+
     "Or she’s sat next to me decrypting the mystical arts of Not Sucking at Music."
+    pause .5
+
     "I’m talking more with her than anyone I’ve ever talked with."
-    "Not to mention lunch and after school. It’s less hiding from the tangerine tyrant and Naser these days and more spending time with Fang and Reed."
+
+    "Not to mention lunch and after school.{w=.5} It’s less hiding from the tangerine tyrant and Naser these days and more spending time with Fang and Reed."
+
     "Even if he’s constantly checked out."
+    pause .5
+
     "And smells of burnt skunk."
-    "The fuck is he on, anyway?!"
+    pause .5
+
+    "The fuck is he on,{w=.2} anyway?!"
+    pause .5
+
     scene auditorium
-    show anon neutral at acenter
+    show anon neutral:
-    show reed neutral at sright
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
-    Re "It’s carfe, bro…"
+    show reed neutral flip behind anon:
-    "...what?"
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.3
+    with Fade(0,0,1)
+    pause .5
+
+    show reed explanatory flip
+    Re "It’s carfe,{w=.2} bro{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What?"
+
+    show reed considering flip
     Re "Carfentanyl."
-    "..."
+    pause .5
+    show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .25
+
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
     "Whatever."
-    "Fang and the gang (heh) are pretty alright."
+
-    "Trish though…"
+    "Fang and the gang{w=.3} (heh){w=.3} are pretty alright."
+    pause .5
+
+    "Trish though{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
     "Every day she gives me the same look of distrust and a put-upon sigh."
+
     "As if I’m some kind of chore to deal with."
-    "Whatever. S’not like she matters in the long run."
+    pause .5
+
+    "Whatever.{w=.4} S’not like she matters in the long run."
+
     "But I find myself having these weird thoughts lately."
-    "Like, is any of this real or not?"
+
+    "Like,{w=.3} is any of this real or not?"
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon:
+        easein 0.5 xalign 0.45
+    pause .75
+    show anon fear:
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4
+    with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .5
+
+    show dimmer_light behind anon with Dissolve(.25)
+
     "I tumble backwards."
+
     "Off of the stage."
-    show anon neutral at aleft:
+
-       xalign 0.5 yalign -0.1
+    hide dimmer_light
-       linear 1 rotate -90
+    play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg'
-    hide anon neutral with dissolve
+    show anon shocked with Dissolve(.1):
+        yanchor 0.2
+        easeout_quad .5 rotate -90 yalign -0.1 xpos 0.3
+    pause .15
+    hide anon with Dissolve(.25)
+    show reed shocked flip
+    play sound "audio/effects/anonDeskSlam.ogg"
+    with vpunch
+    pause 1
+
     "Woah"
-    A "ow…"
+    pause .5
-    Re "bro….. That sucks….."
+
-    "It’s lunch time now, and I guess I dozed off."
+    A "ow{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    
+    show reed explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    Re "Bro{cps=*.1}.....{/cps}{w=.3} that sucks{cps=*.1}.....{/cps}"
+    show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+
+    "It’s lunch time now,{w=.4} and I guess I dozed off."
+
     "Too many late night ‘study’ sessions."
-    Re "You like… need help?"
+
-    A "ffff…. Just fix the projector Reed."
+    show reed unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    Re "‘Kay… Almost done…"
+    Re "You like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} need help?"
-    show anon neutral at aleft:
+    pause .5
-       xalign -0.8 yalign 0.0
+
-       linear 1 rotate 0
+    A "{cps=*.25}ffff....{/cps}{w=.4} just{w=.3} fix the projector Reed."
-       ease 1.0 xalign 0.0 yalign 0.1
+
-    "I hobble to my feet, feeling out the bruise blossoming on my shoulder."
+    show reed happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    A "Hrrrrg… Stupid fuckin’ stage."
+    Re "‘Kay{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} almost done{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    "I consider jumping back up, but find the stairs up more appealing."
+    stop music fadeout 5
-    scene hallway
+    pause .5
-    show anon neutral flip at acenter
+
-    show trish unimpressed at tleft
+    show reed:
-    play music 'audio/OST/i_have_no_clue_what_im_doing.ogg' fadein 1.0
+        easeout 1 xalign 2.5
-    "Going up the stairs, Trish suddenly grabs my shoulder, pinning it to the wall."
+    pause .2
-    "She leans in close, looking me dead in the eyes."
+    hide reed with dissolve
-    A "Uhh…"
+    pause .5
+    
+    show anon sad:
+        alpha 0
+        yalign -0.8 xalign -0.1
+    show anon:
+        easein 0.5 yalign -0.45 alpha 1
+
+    "I hobble to my feet,{w=.4} feeling out the bruise blossoming on my shoulder."
+    show anon:
+        alpha 1 yalign -0.45
+    pause .5
+
+    A "Hrrrrg{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} stupid fuckin’ stage."
+
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
+    "I consider jumping back up,{w=.4} but find the stairs up more appealing."
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon:
+        easeout_cubic 1 xalign 0.4 yalign -0.35
+    with None
+    pause .5
+
+    show trish neutral flip with dissolve:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.6
+
+    show anon:
+        easeout_back 0.5 xalign 0.2
+    show trish:
+        easeout_back 0.5 xalign 0.5
+    pause .5
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
+    with hpunch
+    pause .5
+
+    play music 'audio/OST/i_have_no_clue_what_im_doing.ogg'
+    pause 1
+
+    "Going up the stairs,{w=.3} Trish suddenly grabs my shoulder,{w=.4} pinning it to the wall."
+
+    "She leans in close,{w=.4} looking me dead in the eyes."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "Uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
     A "Can I help you?"
+    pause .25
+
+    show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
     T "Don’t play dumb."
+
     T "Something’s up with Fang today."
+
+    show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
     "She gestures to where Fang is sitting."
-    "Fang’s picking at her lunch with a fork, not eating a bite."
+    pause .5
-    "Now that I think about it, she has been a bit distant today."
+
+    "Fang’s picking at her lunch with a fork,{w=.4} not eating a bite."
+
+    "Now that I think about it,{w=.4} she has been a bit distant today."
+    pause .5
+
     T "They’ve been like this since band practice yesterday."
-    "Wait, what?"
+    pause .5
-    show trish angry with dissolve
+
+    "Wait,{w=.4} what?"
+
+    show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .25
     T "Did you do something to them?"
-    "Do something? What does she mean?"
+    pause .5
-    "Does she think that Fang and I…"
+
+    "Do something?{w=.4} What does she mean?"
+
+    "She doesn't think that Fang and I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    # B: what is THIS
     #if persistent.lewd == True:
     #  show howlewd at truecenter with dissolve
     #  pause 3
     #  hide howlewd with dissolve
 
+    show trish angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.15
     T "OI!"
-    A "What? No! I don’t think at least."
+
+    A "What?{w=.4} No!{w=.4} I don’t think at least."
+
     A "Why are you so concerned?"
-    A "Everyone has a bad day every now and then, right?"
+
+    A "Everyone has a bad day every now and then,{w=.4} right?"
+    pause .25
+
+    show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
+    pause .25
     T "Fang and I have been friends for ten years now."
+
     T "Not once have I seen them this upset."
+
     T "You’re the only new thing around here."
+    pause .5
+
     T "It can’t be anyone else."
-    T "So. What did you do?"
+
+    T "So.{w=.5} What did you do?"
+    pause .5
+
     A "I swear I haven’t done anything with Fang."
-    A "Look, we’ve got music next. I’ll ask Fang what’s up then."
+    pause .5
-    "Trish glowers. We both glance at Fang to see her still sitting there with her untouched food."
+
-    T "You’ll talk to Fang? You’ll probably make it worse. I should be the one to talk with them."
+    A "Look,{w=.4} we’ve got music next.{w=.5} I’ll ask Fang what’s up then."
+    pause .5
+
+    "Trish glowers.{w=.5} We both glance at Fang to see her still sitting there with her untouched food."
+
+    show trish:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.55
+    T "{i}You’ll{/i} talk to Fang?{w=.6} You’ll probably make it worse.{w=.6} {i}I{/i} should be the one to talk with them."
+    pause .5
+    
     A "So why haven’t you?"
-    show trish unimpressed with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
     "Trish’s mouth shuts with a click."
+
     "I stare her down."
+    pause .5
+
+    show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
     "Her eyes harden and she finally speaks."
-    show trish annoyed at tleft with dissolve
+    pause .5
-    T "...Fine… but you better not fuck up."
+
-    "She lets go of my shoulder, stuffing her hands in her jacket pockets with a huff."
+    show trish annoyed flip with dissolve
-    hide trish with moveoutright
+    pause .5
+
+    T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Fine{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} but you better not fuck up."
+    show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
+
+    "She lets go of my shoulder,{w=.4} stuffing her hands in her jacket pockets with a huff."
+    pause .5
+
+    show trish:
+        easein 1 xalign 0.9
+    pause .2
+    show trish neutral with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1.5 yalign 0.1 xalign 0.4
+    pause .5
+
     "I finally return to where I was sitting on the stage to continue finishing my lunch."
-    scene bandroom
+
     "Right when I plant myself on the ground Reed speaks up."
-    show anon neutral at aleft
+
-    show reed neutral at scenter
+    show anon:
-    show trish neutral flip at sright
+        easein 1 xalign 0.0
-    Re "Aaaaand… Done!"
+    show trish:
-    A "Done? With the projector?"
+        easein 1 xalign 0.45
-    Re "That’s right, man… Now we can watch movies… Shows… Pornos… All that."
+    with None
+    show reed neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.5
+    show reed:
+        easein 1 xalign 1.2
+    with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    show reed explanatory flip
+    Re "{cps=*.3}Aaaaand{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} done!"
+    show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .5
+
+    A "Done?{w=.5} With the projector?"
+
+    show reed considering flip
+    Re "That’s right,{w=.2} man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} now we can watch movies{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} shows{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} pornos{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {nw}"
+    show reed explanatory flip
+    extend "all that."
+    show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .25
+
+    show trish explanatory
     T "We’re not watching porn in school."
-    A "Not with that attitude…"
+    show trish neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .25
+
+    A "Not with that attitude{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    show trish:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.7
+    pause .2
+    show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .5
+    play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg'
+    show trish:
+        easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.65
+    pause .2
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapStickPunch.ogg'
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign -0.05
+
     "Trish throws an orange slice at me."
-    Re "So what do you guys wanna watch…?"
+    show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+
+    show reed explanatory flip
+    Re "So what do you guys wanna watch{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}"
+    show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .25
+
     "I can’t think of anything that would be appropriate around normal highschoolers."
+    pause .5
+    
+    show trish:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
+    show trish happy with Dissolve(.25)
     "Trish raises her hand and jumps in place."
+
     T "How about the Count of Monte Cristo?"
-    Re "Oh, I know that one! The actors in that one are pretty great…"
+    
-    A "Oh yeah. I love the VA work."
+    show reed explanatory flip
+    Re "Oh,{w=.3} I know that one!{w=.4} The actors in that one are pretty great{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .25
+
+    stop music fadeout 3
+    A "Oh yeah.{w=.4} I love the VA work."
+    pause .5
+
+    show reed:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.25
+    pause .2
+    show trish:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.55
+    with None
+    show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .5
+    
     "Trish and Reed stop and stare at me."
-    play music 'audio/OST/The.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    pause .5
-    T "..."
+
-    Re "..."
+    T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    "Crap, was it something I said?"
+
+    Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    "Crap,{w=.4} was it something I said?"
+    pause .5
+
+    show trish explanatory flip
     T "What-"
-    "*DING-DONG BING-BONG*"
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg'
+    I "{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.7}DONG {w=0.65}BING-{w=0.7}BONG{/i}{/cps}"
+
+    show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25) 
+    pause 0.5
+
+    play music 'audio/OST/The.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    stop sound fadeout 1
+
     "Saved by the bell!"
+
     "I look to Fang and-"
+    pause .5
+
     "Oh."
+
     "When did she leave?"
-    A "Oh, Fang left already. I’ll go catch up with her."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "Oh,{w=.3} Fang left already.{w=.4} I’ll go catch up with her."
+
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.2
     A "BYE!"
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
+    show anon:
+        easeout 0.5 xalign -0.5
+    hide anon with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
     scene black with fade
-    "I make record time out of the auditorium, leaving a still confused Trish and Reed."
+
-    "..."
+    "I make record time out of the auditorium,{w=.4} leaving a still confused Trish and Reed."
-    scene classroom with fade
+
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    stop music fadeout 3
+    pause .5
+    scene bandroom with fade
+
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/classroomLoop.ogg' fadein 3
+
     "Fang isn’t in music class when I get there."
-    "I tap out a quick message to her on my phone. I take a spot next to her seat and wait."
+
+    "I tap out a quick message to her on my phone.{w=.4} I take a spot next to her seat and wait."
+
     "Maybe she just needed to use the bathroom."
-    "..."
+
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
     "It’s been about twenty minutes."
+
     "I’m starting to get worried."
-    T "{i}{alpha=0.5}Something’s up with Fang today.{/alpha}{/i}"
+    pause .5
-    "Hmmm..."
+
-    "I looked at my phone, and the message I sent her way just before class started."
+    T "{i}{alpha=0.75}\"Something’s up with Fang today.\"{/alpha}{/i}"
-    show anonphone at scenter
+    pause .5
-    A "Hey. Wanna talk?"
+
+    "Hmmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    show anonphone with easeinbottom
+
+    "I looked at my phone,{w=.4} and the message I sent her way just before class started."
+
+    A "\"Hey. Wanna talk?\"{fast}"
+    pause .5
+
     "Still unseen?"
-    "..."
+
-    T "{alpha=0.5}{i}you better not fuck up.{/i}{/alpha}"
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    
+    hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
+    pause .5
+
+    T "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"You better not fuck up.\"{/i}{/alpha}"
+    pause .5
+
     "God damn it."
+    pause .5
+
     A "Mr. Jingo! I need to use the bathroom!"
-    "..."
+
+    stop ambient fadeout 3
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    scene hallway with Dissolve(1)
+
     "One guitar-shaped bathroom pass later I’m scrambling through the halls."
-    scene hallway with dissolve
+    pause .5
-    "If I were a non-binary teenage pterodon having a crisis, where would I hide?"
+
-    "Someplace only Fang would go..."
+    "If I were a non-binary teenage pterodon having a crisis,{w=.4} where would I hide?"
+
+    "Someplace only Fang would go{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
     "The family bathrooms!"
+
     "There are only two in the building."
-    "I sprint to the first bathroom, closer to the back of the school and nestled away in the special needs area."
+
-    "My knuckles rap against the door, locked and preoccupied."
+    "I sprint to the first bathroom,{w=.4} closer to the back of the school and nestled away in the special needs area."
-    A "Fang? You’re missing class and I seriously need help with this sheet music."
+    
-    play music 'audio/OST/Dino Destiny Reader.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    "My knuckles rap against the door,{w=.4} locked and preoccupied."
-    unknown "The one you seek is elsewhere."
+    pause .5
-    "Who the fuck… Wait…"
+
-    A "You’re that weird stego chick…Stella?"
+    A "Fang?{w=.4} You’re missing class and I seriously need help with this sheet music."
-    St "That’s very rude… And I’m not weird…"
+    pause .5
-    A "Whatever, do you know where Fang is?"
+
-    St "...Not here… Can you please leave? I have a nervous bladder."
+    play music 'audio/OST/Dino Destiny Reader.ogg'
+    pause .5
+
+    unknown "{cps=*.4}The one you seek is elsewhere.{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+    
+    "Who the fuck{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    A "You’re that weird stego chick{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Stella?"
+    pause .5
+
+    St "That’s very rude{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} And I’m not weird{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    A "Whatever,{w=.4} do you know where Fang is?"
+
+    St "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Not here{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Can you please leave?{w=.4} I have a nervous bladder."
+    pause .5
+
     "I turn away from the door and sprint to the front of the school where the other bathroom is."
+
     "It’s while I’m moving briskly through the empty corridors of the school with un-tuned guitar in hand that I find divine providence."
+
     "Or rather."
+
     "The feathers floating by the window provide me with the clue I need."
-    "I look out the window, and while I can’t look up to see for sure, the shadow that she is casting on the ground below is enough verification required."
+    pause .5
-    "My feet climb the steps easily, but my mind is ill at-ease."
+
+    "I look out the window,{w=.4} and while I can’t look up to see for sure,{w=.4} the shadow that she is casting on the ground below is enough verification required."
+
+    "My feet climb the steps easily,{w=.4} but my mind is ill at-ease."
+
     "The hell is wrong with me right now."
+
     "Why do I feel anxious right now?"
-    T "{alpha=0.5}{i}What did you do?{/i}{/alpha}"
+    pause .5
+
+    T "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"What did you do?\"{/i}{/alpha}"
+
     "What if I did do something?"
-    T "{alpha=0.5}{i}Fang and I have been friends for ten years now.{/i}{/alpha}"
+    pause .5
-    "I’ve known her for barely a month. And why is it my problem to fix?"
+
-    T "{alpha=0.5}{i}Not once have I seen them this upset.{/i}{/alpha}"
+    T "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"Fang and I have been friends for ten years now.\"{/i}{/alpha}"
+
+    "I’ve known her for barely a month.{w=.5} And why is it my problem to fix?"
+    pause .5
+
+    T "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"Not once have I seen them this upset.\"{/i}{/alpha}"
+    stop music fadeout 4
+    pause .5
+
     "I can’t stop the gnawing feeling in my chest."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
+    pause .5
+
     scene roof day
     show fang neutral:
         xalign -0.2