Merge branch 'Monster-Update-6'

Reviewed-on: https://git.snootgame.xyz/Cavemanon/SnootGame/pulls/110

README.md

@@ -2,6 +2,7 @@
 
 <h1>Contributing</h1>
 <p>Find an issue and start working. Creating issues is very helpful. Simply emailing patches/updated versions of the script works too. <b>All PRs/Contributions to the main code should go to the patch branch and NOT master as to leave master a stable branch</b>. All contributions belong to you, but are licensed under the GNU AGPL v3 and are adherent to the GPL-Exception in the root of the project file.</p>
+<p>It should be noted that any non-contributor sourced assets for the game MUST be under some form of free licensing that is <a href=https://creativecommons.org/share-your-work/licensing-considerations/compatible-licenses/>compatable with the CC-BY-SA 4.0 (Listed in this link as BY-SA)</a> for it to be added to the game. This includes audio, images, other bits of code, and other copyrightable assets. Compatable licenses include, but aren't limited to, CC-BY, Public Domain, CC-BY-SA 4.0, CC-BY-SA 3.0, The Free Art license, or any other license that is permissive in how it is used.</p>
 
 <h1>Supported OSes</h1>
 <ol>
@@ -49,6 +50,7 @@
 </ul>
 
 <h2>Special thanks to...</h2>
-<p>A random anon on /lit/ saved this project from poor writing after we submitted a beta version of our script. The post goes as follows <b>(minor spoiliers ahead)</b>:</p>
+<p>A random anon on /lit/ saved this project from poor writing after we submitted a beta version of our script. The post goes as follows <b>(minor spoilers ahead)</b>:</p>
 <p>"Aight you kind of get this is an attention seeking thing. But this is as much of a symptom as the gender thing, not the root cause. Bio says she's neglected by her parents because her brother is perfect and gets everything right. He's a goody two shoes with grades and parents, popular, I'm guessing that other girl is his gf too. Fang's response is to adopt an "I need nobody" attitude, and has basically bought an off the shelf personality and identity to compensate. People like this do not feel like they have agency. They lack self actualization. These "store-bought" identities from ideologies like the LGBTQIAAOMGWTFBBQ people and racebaiters offer only the feeling of validation without the essential step of self. This behavior you can find in (You) baiting on 4channel, which is an attempt to find some semblance of "I exist!" instead of realizing you can't get that affirmation from outside. Fang adopting Tradwife, sticking with high school attitudes, or shooting up the school isn't fixing the problem of her gaining agency. You can fix this by having Anon be there as an example of being a self-actualized person, he shouldn't be there to fuck her or save her. Every choice that's not purely cosmetic should be set up with the intent to help her gain agency. She feels like she's always compared to her brother, never judged on her own merits or personhood, so she substitutes this with an identity that comes with excess baggage. It shouldn't matter if she's goth or bisexual, as long as this comes from within, and not because this will make up for her lack of personhood. This is why tradwife is missing the point a bit, it's substituting colored hair and pronouns for Jesus and prayer. She still does it because its an identity without any real substance of the self behind it. Or maybe I am talking out my ass and all she really did need was a man to fuck the degeneracy out of her. You guys do you</p>
 <p>Whoever you are, you changed the writing direction from shitposty, pandering garbage to a genuine story that out preforms what our competators could do. Whoever you are, be proud of your critique and continue to critique. Story makers need vigilant anons like you.</p>
+<b>(Of note, we didn't take /lit/anon's word one-to-one about every detail we said. Nuance exists!)</b>

game/options.rpy

@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ define config.default_sfx_volume = 0.90
 ## This generally should not be changed, and if it is, should always be a
 ## literal string, not an expression.
 
-define config.save_directory = "DinoGirlGamu-1592542119"
+define config.save_directory = "CavemanonSnootGame"
 
 
 ## Icon ########################################################################

game/screens.rpy

@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 ###Updater Python stuff###
+
 init python:
     if renpy.variant("pc"): #Don't run this on mobile, not supported
         if persistent.updateresult is None:

game/script.rpy

@@ -16,8 +16,8 @@
 init -1 python:
     # Modding Support variables
     # All mod rpy files must run a small init python script
-    mod_dir = "mods/";
-    mod_menu_access = [];
+    mod_dir = "mods/"
+    mod_menu_access = []
 
 init python:
     import random
@@ -36,6 +36,7 @@ init python:
     renpy.music.register_channel("ambient","sfx",True,tight=True)
     renpy.music.register_channel("ambient1","sfx",True,tight=True)
     renpy.music.register_channel("ambient2","sfx",True,tight=True)
+    renpy.music.register_channel("ambient3","sfx",True,tight=True)
     if persistent.scroll == True:
         config.keymap['dismiss'].append('mousedown_4')
     elif persistent.scroll == None:
@@ -136,8 +137,13 @@ define Attendant = Character ('Attendant', base, color="#5BF0F8", who_outlines=[
 define Sp = Character ('Spears', base, color="#C7C7C7", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#272727')]) # Light Grey
 define Re = Character ('Reed', base, color="#ED4C5B", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#421014')]) # Bright Red
 define D = Character ('Driver', base, color="#FFECBC", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#563010')]) # Yellow-Orange
+
 define FM = Character ("Fang's Mom", base, color="#FFD8F6", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#521947')]) # Bright Pink
 define FD = Character ("Fang's Dad", base, color="#D8A09A", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#461B1F')]) # Desaturated Orange
+
+define LM = Character ("Lucy's Mom", base, color="#FFD8F6", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#521947')]) # Bright Pink
+define LD = Character ("Lucy's Dad", base, color="#D8A09A", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#461B1F')]) # Desaturated Orange
+
 define Tsuki = Character ('Mr. Tsuki', base, color="#A7F2A2", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#471054')]) # Pear Green
 define unknown = Character ('(???)', base, color="#FFF", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#000')]) # White
 define jingo = Character ('Mr. Jingo', base, color="#CD8283", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#0F0D49')]) # Desaturated Red
@@ -160,6 +166,7 @@ define TeamMember = Character('Team member', base, color="#D32552", who_outlines
 define Everyone = Character('Everyone', base, color="#A45489", who_outline=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#4F5F81')])
 define Chet = Character('Chet', base, color="#B45411", who_outline=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#BF5F81')])
 
+
 #Extra image translations
 #siloettes
 image stellaSilo = im.Flip(im.MatrixColor("stella/stella neutral.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1)), horizontal=True)
@@ -687,6 +694,28 @@ image schooloutside_blur:
    pause 1
    repeat
 
+#Shooter ending blurs
+image fang flash blurred = im.Blur('images/fang/fullbody/fang silo3.png', 8.0)
+image shooterroof blurred = im.Blur('images/backgrounds/shooterroof.jpg', 3)
+image shooterroof normal = "images/backgrounds/shooterroof.jpg"
+image fang shooter blurred = im.Blur('images/fang/fullbody/fang shooter.png', 3)
+image fang shooter normal = "images/fang/fullbody/fang shooter.png"
+
+image blurring_shooterroof:
+    "shooterroof blurred" with Dissolve(2.5)
+    pause 2.5
+    "shooterroof normal" with Dissolve(2.5)
+    pause 2.5
+    repeat
+
+image blurring_shooter:
+    "fang shooter blurred" with Dissolve(2.5)
+    pause 2.5
+    "fang shooter normal" with Dissolve(2.5)
+    pause 2.5
+    repeat
+
+
 #phone bgs for video calls
 #caller bgs
 image anonday_videocall_bg = im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/backgrounds/foodcourt.jpg", 0.9),(0,40,576,920))
@@ -930,7 +959,6 @@ transform wiggle:
       linear 10.0 yalign 1.0 clockwise circles 1
       repeat
 
-
 label start:
     $ fangscore = 0
     $ anonscore = 0

game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy

@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     "It’s the sounds that reach me first.{w=.4} The chatter of people milling about."
     pause .5
 
-    unknown "Bro"
+    unknown "Bro."
 
     unknown "It’s been too long!"
 
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "The fog shrouding gives the school an ominous vibe to it."
 
-    "I look at the name written on the arch over the entrance"
+    "I look at the name written on the arch over the entrance."
     pause .5
 
     "{cps=*0.2}{b}{size=+10}{i}Volcano High{/i}{/size}{/b}{/cps}"
@@ -247,7 +247,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "My feet carry me over the soggy grass as I look for somewhere else to be."
 
-    "On the side of the building is where I find sanctuary"
+    "On the side of the building is where I find sanctuary."
 
     window hide
     window auto
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     unknown "Oh my goodness! Are you okay?"
     pause .5
 
-    "I groan"
+    "I groan."
 
     A "{cps=*0.35}Never better{/cps}"
 
@@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     unknown "Naser!"
 
-    Nas "Right, right"
+    Nas "Right, right."
 
     scene garden
     show naser neutral flip:
@@ -761,7 +761,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     # with fade
 
     # # play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' # already playing
-    # play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 0.2
+    # play ambient 'audio/effects/schoolLoop.ogg' fadein 0.2
 
     # "Instead of using the main entrance Naomi led me to a side entrance.{w=0.7} Inside, the school looked like your stereotypical school hallway."
 
@@ -823,7 +823,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Ohayo gozaimasu curassu. Tudei yu habu e niu curassu-meito tsu Borukeino Hai{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
 
-    "What"
+    "What?"
 
     Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Anon-kun puriizu camu appu zen intorudiusu yooru serfu{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
@@ -1114,7 +1114,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show naomi sad flip with dissolve
 
-    "Naomi is starting to look disappointed I’m only picking up on Naser’s interjections"
+    "Naomi is starting to look disappointed I’m only picking up on Naser’s interjections."
 
     Nas "If you need a bit more extra chow, there’s going to be free refreshments at my si--{w=0.4} uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
@@ -1354,7 +1354,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Nas "You’re good, Anon."
 
-    "And yeah, they’re family but Fang’s just so{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} so{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    Nas "And yeah, they’re family but Fang’s just so{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} so{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
     A "Difficult?"
@@ -1551,7 +1551,7 @@ label chapter_1:
         linear 0.05 xalign 0.605
         repeat
 
-    "Naser grasps at the air unsure what to think or do at the moment.{w=0.5} I think he’s angry"
+    "Naser grasps at the air unsure what to think or do at the moment.{w=0.5} I think he’s angry."
 
     window hide
     window auto
@@ -1863,7 +1863,7 @@ label chapter_1:
         pause 1
         $ i = i + 1
 
-    "Oh God I can’t take this, I’m gonna grow a 6 pack from laughing so much, I’m just gonna grab my pizza and leave"
+    "Oh God I can’t take this, I’m gonna grow a 6 pack from laughing so much, I’m just gonna grab my pizza and leave."
 
     scene auditorium
     show anon neutral flip at aright
@@ -1926,7 +1926,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Sp "Listen here, Anon."
 
-    "{cps=*0.6}You are not the only person in the world.{/cps}"
+    Sp "{cps=*0.6}You are not the only person in the world.{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
     Sp "Everyone’s fighting their own battles."
@@ -2122,7 +2122,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "Soon enough it's time to leave for school. I grab my backpack and slide it over my shoulders."
 
-    "I take my jacket off the hanger and"
+    "I take my jacket off the hanger and{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     show anon unimpressed with dissolve
 
@@ -2221,12 +2221,12 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "I just realized I don’t know what to say to him"
+    "I just realized I don’t know what to say to him."
     pause .5
 
-    "\"I wasn’t laughing AT your sister,{w=0.4} I was laughing WITH the crowd\""
+    "\"I wasn’t laughing AT your sister,{w=0.4} I was laughing WITH the crowd.\""
 
-    "No,{w=0.3} that sounds bad"
+    "No,{w=0.3} that sounds bad."
     pause .5
 
     "\"Weird sisters,{w=0.2} amirite?\""
@@ -2391,7 +2391,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     "She stomps off."
 
     stop music fadeout 1.5
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 3
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/schoolLoop.ogg' fadein 3
     hide trish with Dissolve(1.5)
     pause .5
 
@@ -2597,7 +2597,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     hide reed with easeoutright
 
     stop music fadeout 3
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 2
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/schoolLoop.ogg' fadein 2
     pause 1.5
 
     "The fuck just happened?"
@@ -2772,7 +2772,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     hide trish with easeoutright
     pause 0.5
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 4
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/schoolLoop.ogg' fadein 4
     stop music fadeout 4
 
     "She stomps away, leaving Naomi to deflate a bit."
@@ -2962,7 +2962,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Sp "-dismissed Naomi."
 
-    "And just to be absolutely clear, Anon did ask you for this, correct?"
+    Sp "And just to be absolutely clear, Anon did ask you for this, correct?"
 
     show naomi explanatory
 
@@ -3072,7 +3072,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     label .finding_naser:
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 1.5
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/schoolLoop.ogg' fadein 1.5
     scene hallway with Dissolve(1.5)
     pause .5
 
@@ -3122,7 +3122,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "Wait, she’s in the band that played yesterday?"
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 3
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/schoolLoop.ogg' fadein 3
     stop music fadeout 3
     "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2} Should get out of here."
 
@@ -3212,7 +3212,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Re "Nah man, s’cool."
 
-    Re "They called me because they wanted me to kill bugs crawling on the drums with a couple sticks, I don't know why a bunch of people came there to watch it"
+    Re "They called me because they wanted me to kill bugs crawling on the drums with a couple sticks, I don't know why a bunch of people came there to watch it."
     pause .5
 
     Nas "Right{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.4} And you’re absolutely sure Trish is taking it okay?"
@@ -3256,10 +3256,10 @@ label chapter_1:
     play sound 'audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg'
     "{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.7}DONG {w=0.7}BING-{w=0.7}BONG{/i}{/cps}"
 
-    pause 0.5
-    stop sound fadeout 0.69
     window hide
     window auto
+    pause 0.5
+    stop sound fadeout 0.69
 
     show naser considering flip:
         easein_quad 0.5 xalign 1.7
@@ -3304,7 +3304,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "It’s like it’s only me and the teacher in class, phasing out everyone else."
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 3
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/schoolLoop.ogg' fadein 3
     scene hallway
     show anon neutral at acenter
     with Dissolve(1.5)

game/script/10.an-excellent-reason-to-start-abusing-mod-powers.rpy

@@ -25,6 +25,8 @@ label chapter_10:
     "Welp. No turning back now."
 
     A "Welcome to Casa Del Shithole, occupancy a miserable weeb."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     scene room anon day alt
@@ -42,6 +44,8 @@ label chapter_10:
     pause .5
 
     "The entrance isn’t big enough for both Fang and I, so I leave her supporting shoulder and limp my way to the twin-sized mattress on the floor."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     show anon sad flip:
@@ -52,6 +56,8 @@ label chapter_10:
     pause .5
 
     "It’s so tempting to just drop face-first like usual, but I don’t think I’d survive the shock of the fall."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     show fang neutral flip:
@@ -135,6 +141,8 @@ label chapter_10:
     F "You are such a dweeb, Anon."
 
     "There’s no heat in her words."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     show fang:
@@ -165,6 +173,8 @@ label chapter_10:
     pause .5
 
     A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Fine{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     stop music fadeout 5
     play ambient 'audio/effects/apartmentLoop.ogg' fadein 4
@@ -175,14 +185,17 @@ label chapter_10:
     "I step into my tiny shower stall and turn on the water."
 
     "The shower head sputters before it starts weakly spraying lukewarm water."
-    show black with dissolve
+    window hide
+    window auto
     play sound "audio/effects/showerStart.ogg"
-    pause .75
-    play ambient1 "audio/effects/showerLoop.ogg" fadein 1.75
-    stop ambient fadeout 1.75
-    pause 1.5
+    show black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 4.01
+    play ambient1 "audio/effects/showerLoop.ogg" fadein 1.06
+    stop ambient fadeout 1.106
 
     "The temperature of the water doesn’t help the tension in my muscles or the bruises marring my skin."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     scene wounds02 with Dissolve(2)
@@ -190,6 +203,8 @@ label chapter_10:
     pause .5
 
     "I stretch around and see massive blotches of purple and black splattered across my torso."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 1
 
     stop ambient1 fadeout 1
@@ -199,38 +214,44 @@ label chapter_10:
     pause 1
 
     "Each contusion is hot to the touch under my fingers and the pain is intense."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 1
 
     scene wounds04 with dissolve
     pause 1
 
     "The worst is across my chest where the bollard hit me."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 1
 
-    scene wounds05 with Dissolve(1)
-    stop ambient2 fadeout 0.69
-    pause .5
     play sound "audio/effects/showerMuffledEnd.ogg"
-    pause 1
+    stop ambient2 fadeout 2
+    scene wounds05 with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 1.5
 
     "I eventually get finished examining my wicked wounds and step out of the bathroom."
     
     "Fang is on her phone doing Raptor Jesus knows what."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
-    stop ambient fadeout 3
     stop sound fadeout 3
-    play music 'audio/ost/appreciating her company.ogg' fadein 2
+
     scene wounds06 with Dissolve(1)
     pause 1
 
-    "Fang then pats the bed"
+    "Fang then pats the bed."
     pause .5
 
     F "Come here."
     pause .5
 
     "I walk over and lie down on my stomach."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     scene wounds07 with dissolve
@@ -251,11 +272,13 @@ label chapter_10:
 
     F "Just try to relax."
 
-    "I sigh and try my hardest not to freak out when she touches me"
+    "I sigh and try my hardest not to freak out when she touches me."
 
     "She eventually finds a sweet spot of pressure to apply.  It still hurts a little, but it doesn’t cause me to wince."
     pause .5
 
+    play music 'audio/ost/appreciating her company.ogg' fadein 4
+    stop ambient fadeout 4
     "Her hands are soft."
 
     "I find myself relaxing under Fang’s ministrations."
@@ -267,7 +290,7 @@ label chapter_10:
 
     "My eyes feel heavy as the ointment begins to warm up, drawing away tension from my aching muscles."
 
-    "I can make out a steady thumping on my bed"
+    "I can make out a steady thumping on my bed."
 
     "My senses fade more until all I’m aware of is Fang’s fingers tracing circles over my sore back and the sound of thumping."
     pause .5
@@ -293,6 +316,8 @@ label chapter_10:
     pause .5
 
     "Oh."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     scene wounds08 with Dissolve(1)
@@ -302,6 +327,8 @@ label chapter_10:
     pause .5
 
     "I roll over onto my back."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     scene wounds09 with dissolve
@@ -340,7 +367,7 @@ label chapter_10:
     "I hope{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     play ambient 'audio/effects/apartmentLoop.ogg' fadein 3
-    stop music fadeout 4
+    stop music fadeout 6
     pause 1
 
     "Do you like me, Fang?"
@@ -371,6 +398,8 @@ label chapter_10:
     F "Y-yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "{cps=*.3}Fffffffffff-{/cps}"
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     scene wounds10 with dissolve
 
@@ -380,10 +409,12 @@ label chapter_10:
     pause 1
 
     "A snort escapes from Fang’s beak."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     stop ambient fadeout 3
-    play music 'audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    play music 'audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg' fadein 2.0
     scene wounds11 with dissolve
     pause .5
 
@@ -408,6 +439,8 @@ label chapter_10:
     A "Raptor Jesus on his cross of rock. So for months now-"
 
     F "I’ve known. And{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     show wounds09 with dissolve
     pause .5
@@ -432,9 +465,13 @@ label chapter_10:
 
     scene wounds14
     play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickbigpunch.ogg'
+    window show Dissolve(0.0001)
+    window auto
     A "FUCK!" with vpunch
 
     F "Oh shit sorrysorrysorry-"
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     scene wounds15 with Dissolve(.25)
@@ -459,6 +496,8 @@ label chapter_10:
     pause .5
 
     A "{cps=*.2}Liiike{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps} hug? Maybe? I don-"
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     scene wounds16 with dissolve
 
@@ -492,6 +531,8 @@ label chapter_10:
     pause .5
 
     "Ah, there{cps=*.1}...{/cps} we{cps=*.1}...{/cps} go{size=-5}o{/size}{size=-10}o{/size}{cps=*.1}{size=-10}...{/size}{/cps}"
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     scene black with Dissolve(2)
@@ -500,6 +541,8 @@ label chapter_10:
     "Z{size=-5}z{/size}{size=-10}z{/size}"
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 1
 
     return

game/script/11A.fang-desperately-wants-to-win-prom-night.rpy

@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 label chapter_11A:
     #Announcing a Plan | shooter
+    window hide # Temporary
 
     "I help Fang through the first few questions until she says she has a good grasp on the concept."
 

game/script/11B.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right,-and-she's-smug-about-it.rpy

@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 label chapter_11B:
     #>>doomer | Announcing Nothing Important
+    window hide # Temporary
     stop music fadeout 4
 
     pause .5

game/script/11C.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right,-but-she-tells-him-she's-okay-with-being-called-a-girl.rpy

@@ -291,6 +291,8 @@ label chapter_11C:
 
     show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
     Lucy "Sounds like a second date."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 1
 
     stop music fadeout 4
@@ -298,6 +300,8 @@ label chapter_11C:
     pause .5
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     return

game/script/11D.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right-and-she-teases-him-while-carrying-herself-with-more-confidence.rpy

@@ -194,6 +194,8 @@ label chapter_11D:
     "Splitting the questions between us, Fang and I are able to finish the assignment seconds before the bell."
 
     "Somehow."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     play music "audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg" fadein 2
@@ -224,6 +226,8 @@ label chapter_11D:
 
     Sp "Ah, Fang! There you are, a moment please."
 
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     show anon:
         easein 1 xalign 0.55
@@ -271,6 +275,8 @@ label chapter_11D:
     F "Thank you, Principal Spears. I’ll come after school today."
 
     "Spears nods and heads off."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     show spears:
@@ -326,6 +332,8 @@ label chapter_11D:
     F "Speaking of. I’ll see you at lunch, right?"
 
     A "Yeah, of course."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     show fang behind anon:
@@ -334,6 +342,8 @@ label chapter_11D:
     pause .5
 
     "Fang pecks me on the cheek and starts down the hall to her next class."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     show fang:
         easeout_cubic 1.2 xalign 2.0
@@ -344,6 +354,8 @@ label chapter_11D:
 
     show anon grin with dissolve
     "I feel my lips spread into a grin. It’s kind of weird to think of it, but I’m actually excited for prom."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     stop music fadeout 4
@@ -353,6 +365,8 @@ label chapter_11D:
     "Man, I hope dad’s suit has actually been to the cleaner, I don’t wanna disappoint."
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     return

game/script/12.5C.prom-night-intro.rpy

@@ -0,0 +1,422 @@
+label chapter_12_5C:
+
+    #Prom intro
+    pause 1
+
+    "{cps=*.2}-- One Month Later --{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg' fadein 0.5
+    pause .5
+
+    "It’s prom night."
+
+    "My old man was kind enough to send over his old tuxedo from his time at high school."
+
+    "It took a bit of sewing, but I got it looking pretty good."
+    pause .5
+
+    "Judging by the wine stains on the sleeves, Dad’s made a lot of important announcements in this tuxedo."
+
+    "Gives it a bit of history, I guess."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
+
+    scene home fang outside night
+    show naomi prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.6
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    "When I arrive at Fang’s place with a cheap corsage I see the Pomegranate Parasite waiting outside the front door."
+
+    "Great."
+    pause .5
+
+    "And dear god, how can she move in that dress."
+
+    "The top half looks like it’s been shrink-wrapped to her body."
+    pause .5
+
+    "And I'm one hundred percent certain there's nothing beneath the bottom half."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.5
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.1
+    with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    show naomi prom neutral with dissolve
+    N "Oh, I already knocked Anon."
+
+    N "Naser will be out in a moment to invite us in, I’m sure Fang will be getting ready too."
+
+    N "I’ve heard the two of you are going to prom together!"
+    pause .5
+
+    "Ladies and gentlemen, the next Sherlock Holmes."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "No, I just happen to be here in a suit to go golfing."
+
+    "I ignore her, focusing instead on not stabbing my palm even more on this flower’s thorns."
+    pause .5
+
+    "Fuck it, free is free."
+
+    "And nothing more free than a five finger discount from the neighbor’s yard."
+    pause .5
+
+    N "You and Fang just make the cutest couple! Did you two sign up for prom king and queen?"
+
+    A "Nah. She said something about the ‘fascist sexist monarchy system’."
+
+    show naomi prom happy with dissolve
+    N "Well, Naser and I have entered and we are going to be prom royalty. Ooooh, I can not wait to wear that beautiful tiara, I picked it out and everything and the crown for Naser-"
+
+    "I’ve already tuned her out."
+
+    pause .5
+    show naomi prom neutral with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    "Naser opens the door."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    show naser prom neutral behind naomi:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.3
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    show naomi prom neutral flip with dissolve
+
+    "Well if that isn’t the fanciest jacket I’ve seen in a while."
+
+    "It’s certainly better than the background of Avatar he always wears."
+    pause .5
+
+    Nas "Sorry to keep you waiting, Naomi."
+
+    show naser prom unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
+    Nas "This thing is a nightmare to get over my wings."
+    pause .5
+
+    show naser prom happy with Dissolve(.25)
+    Nas "Oh, Anon! Come on in, didn’t know you were already here."
+
+    "He waves for the two of us to enter, pecking Naomi on the cheek when she passes."
+    stop music fadeout 4
+    pause .5
+
+    scene home fang night
+    show anon prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+    show naser prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.3
+    show naomi prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 1.2
+    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+    pause .5
+
+    "Fang’s Mother speaks up from the kitchen."
+
+    LM "Oh! Oh! Is that Anon?"
+    pause .5
+
+    play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' fadein 0.5
+
+    Nas "Here we go."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
+
+    show fangmom neutral:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.5
+    show fangmom:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
+    with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    "The small pterodactyl comes out, a bowl she’s struggling to stir in her arms."
+
+    LM "My, aren’t you handsome."
+    pause .5
+
+    LM "Pictures! I need to get pictures of you and Lucy!"
+
+    "She sets the bowl aside on the coffee table to frantically search for a polaroid camera."
+
+    LM "To think Lucy would have such a wonderful young man to take her to prom!"
+    pause .5
+
+    show fangmom:
+        easein_back 1 xalign -0.2
+    LM "Aha! Found it. Hold still, dear."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg' ## CC0
+    pause .275
+
+    show white with Dissolve(.15)
+    pause .5
+
+    "ARGH! Like getting slapped in the face by the Sun’s dick!"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon prom sad flip
+    show white:
+        linear 2 alpha 0
+    pause .5
+
+    "I blink the blindness away. So that’s why Naser has those fucking aviators."
+    hide white
+    pause .5
+
+    LM "Lucy will be downstairs in a bit, she’s just getting the last of her makeup on!"
+
+    LM "In the meantime, take a seat! I’ve got some cookies in the oven that are almost ready!"
+
+    show anon prom neutral flip with dissolve
+    A "Er, yes, thank you ma’am."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    show fangmom:
+        easeout_cubic 1.2 xalign -1.5
+    pause .2
+    show fangmom neutral flip with dissolve
+    hide fangmom with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon:
+        easein_back 1.5 xalign 0.4
+    show anon prom neutral with dissolve
+
+    "I take my seat in the usual spot, sinking in and feeling the pillows conform around my spine."
+    pause .5
+
+    "This thing must cost a fortune."
+
+    "Fang’s dad is a police commissioner if I recall."
+
+    "That explains the luxurious furnishings."
+    pause .5
+
+    "Now that I think about it, I’m surprised I haven’t seen him yet."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
+
+    show fangdad neutral:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.1
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    LD "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    show anon:
+        easein_back 0.75 xalign 0.5
+    show anon prom neutral flip with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    "I hope I didn’t just ruin these slacks."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "Good evening, sir."
+
+    A "I didn’t even see you in your chair, sir."
+
+    A "My apologies."
+    pause .5
+
+    LD "Don’t sweat it, son."
+
+    LD "Thing about humans, as well as many carnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement."
+
+    LD "You’d be surprised how effective staying quiet and stationary can be."
+
+    show fangdad happy with dissolve
+    LD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing-"
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickbigpunch.ogg'
+    show fangdad unimpressed:
+        easein_elastic 1 xalign -0.05
+    LM "Sweetheart." with vpunch
+    pause .5
+
+    LM "No.{w=.3} Intimidating.{w=.3} The suitor."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fangdad:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign -0.1
+    show fangdad neutral with dissolve
+    "The big guy deflates a bit in his chair."
+
+    LD "Point is, don’t get any funny ideas."
+
+    A "Yessir."
+    pause .5
+
+    show naomi:
+        ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
+        ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
+    N "We’re all taking the NasCar, right?"
+
+    Nas "Yeah, yeah."
+
+    Nas "Once Fang gets down we’ll skedaddle."
+
+    show anon prom neutral with dissolve
+    A "So until then we just sit and chill?"
+    pause .5
+
+    show naomi prom happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    N "We could take more pictures!"
+    pause .5
+
+    show dimmer_light behind fangdad, anon, naser, naomi with Dissolve(.25)
+    "{cps=*.3}Please no.{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    show dimmer_light:
+        linear 1 alpha 0
+
+    show fangmom neutral:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.5
+    show fangmom:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
+    with dissolve
+    LM "Oh! I would love to make this a little photo op!"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
+
+    scene black with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
+    pause .275
+    scene home fang night
+    show naser prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.1
+    show anon prom sad flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+    show naomi prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.8
+    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+
+    pause .25
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
+    pause .275
+    scene home fang night
+    show anon prom unimpressed flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+    show naomi prom happy flip:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.1
+    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+
+    pause .25
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
+    pause .275
+    scene home fang night
+    show anon prom grin flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+    show naser prom happy flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2
+    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+
+    pause .25
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
+    pause .275
+    scene home fang night
+    show fangdad happy flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
+    show anon prom shock flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+
+    pause .25
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
+    pause .275
+    scene home fang night
+    show fangmom unimpressed:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.2
+    show anon prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+    show fangdad neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.0
+    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+
+    pause .25
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
+    pause .275
+    scene home fang night
+    show anon prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+    show fangdad unimpressed flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
+    show fangmom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.6
+    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+
+    pause .25
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
+    pause .275
+    scene home fang night
+    show fangmom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.15
+    show fangdad neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.2
+    show anon prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5
+    show naser prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1
+    show naomi prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 1.05
+    with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
+
+    pause .25
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/cameraMult.ogg'
+    pause .275
+    scene black with Fade(.1, 1, 2, color="#fff")
+
+    "Thirty photos later and I never want to see another camera again."
+
+    "Fang’s mom decided to take pictures of every possible combination of us."
+
+    "I don’t know which was worse, having to pose with Naomi or Fang’s dad digging his murder claws into my shoulder."
+
+    "I’ve lost nearly all feeling in that arm."
+
+    "Pretty sure that’ll leave a bruise worse than my accelerated hug with the stair bollard last month."
+    pause .5
+
+    "At least the pics with Naser were a nice reprieve."
+
+    "We ended up looking like the blues brothers, standing side by side in fuck ugly suits."
+    pause .5
+
+    stop music fadeout 4
+    "Just as I was about to resign myself to premature blindness from the camera flash, my saviour arrives."
+    pause .5
+
+    Lucy "Oh, Anon, you’re already here!"
+
+    return

game/script/12.5D.prom-night-intro.rpy

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-label chapter_13:
+label chapter_12_5D:
 
     #Prom intro
     pause 1
@@ -19,6 +19,8 @@ label chapter_13:
     "Judging by the wine stains on the sleeves, Dad’s made a lot of important announcements in this tuxedo."
 
     "Gives it a bit of history, I guess."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     scene home fang outside night
@@ -38,6 +40,8 @@ label chapter_13:
     pause .5
 
     "And I'm one hundred percent certain there's nothing beneath the bottom half."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     show anon prom neutral flip:
@@ -82,6 +86,8 @@ label chapter_13:
     pause .5
 
     "Naser opens the door."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     show naser prom neutral behind naomi:
         yalign 0.1 xalign -0.3
@@ -126,6 +132,8 @@ label chapter_13:
     play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' fadein 0.5
 
     Nas "Here we go."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     show fangmom neutral:
@@ -150,6 +158,8 @@ label chapter_13:
     show fangmom:
         easein_back 1 xalign -0.2
     FM "Aha! Found it. Hold still, dear."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg' ## CC0
@@ -159,6 +169,8 @@ label chapter_13:
     pause .5
 
     "ARGH! Like getting slapped in the face by the Sun’s dick!"
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     show anon prom sad flip
@@ -176,6 +188,8 @@ label chapter_13:
 
     show anon prom neutral flip with dissolve
     A "Er, yes, thank you ma’am."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     show fangmom:
         easeout_cubic 1.2 xalign -1.5
@@ -199,10 +213,15 @@ label chapter_13:
     pause .5
 
     "Now that I think about it, I’m surprised I haven’t seen him yet."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
+
+    show fangdad neutral:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.1
+    with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
-    show fangdadlarge at sleft with easeinleft:
-        xalign -0.85
     FD "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     show anon:
@@ -221,11 +240,6 @@ label chapter_13:
     pause .5
 
     FD "Don’t sweat it, son."
-    show fangdad neutral:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.1
-    hide fangdadlarge
-    with Dissolve(1)
-    pause .5
 
     FD "Thing about humans, as well as many carnivores, is that their vision is based largely on movement."
 
@@ -245,7 +259,7 @@ label chapter_13:
 
     show fangdad:
         ease_cubic 1 xalign -0.1
-    show fangdad neutral with dissolve 
+    show fangdad neutral with dissolve
     "The big guy deflates a bit in his chair."
 
     FD "Point is, don’t get any funny ideas."
@@ -265,7 +279,7 @@ label chapter_13:
     show anon prom neutral with dissolve
     A "So until then we just sit and chill?"
     pause .5
-    
+
     show naomi prom happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
     N "We could take more pictures!"
     pause .5
@@ -273,7 +287,7 @@ label chapter_13:
     show dimmer_light behind fangdad, anon, naser, naomi with Dissolve(.25)
     "{cps=*.3}Please no.{/cps}"
     pause .5
-    
+
     show dimmer_light:
         linear 1 alpha 0
 
@@ -283,11 +297,13 @@ label chapter_13:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
     with dissolve
     FM "Oh! I would love to make this a little photo op!"
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     scene black with dissolve
     pause .5
-    
+
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
     pause .275
     scene home fang night
@@ -374,7 +390,7 @@ label chapter_13:
     show naomi prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 1.05
     with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
- 
+
     pause .25
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/cameraMult.ogg'
@@ -403,4 +419,4 @@ label chapter_13:
 
     F "Oh, Anon, you’re already here!"
 
-    return
+    return

game/script/12A.music-museum-date.rpy

@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/city loop.ogg' fadein 3
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/cityLoop.ogg' fadein 3
     scene museum with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
         easeout 1 xalign 1.3
     show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
     hide anon
-    hide fang 
+    hide fang
     with dissolve
 
     scene black with Dissolve(1)
@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
     "Either way, I snap several pictures from various angles while Fang continues her sermon."
 
     F "Alright, what’s next?"
-    
+
     show fang:
         ease_cubic 1 xalign -0.6
     pause .55
@@ -284,8 +284,8 @@ label chapter_12A:
     "It was a clip of Stygy playing the national anthem as a protest song or something."
 
     "It sounded kinda cool, I’ll give him that much."
-    
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 4
+
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg' fadein 4
     stop music fadeout 4
     pause .5
 
@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
     show fang:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.75
     with dissolve
-    
+
     show anon:
         easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.25
     show anon fear with Dissolve(.25)
@@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
 
     "She drags me away from the screen to whatever it is she wants to take ‘inspiration’ from."
     pause .5
-    
+
     stop ambient fadeout 4
     play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadein 1.0
     scene black with Dissolve(1)
@@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
     A "I’m pretty sure we got everything, you could probably reconstruct the entire exhibit using only these pictures I took."
 
     F "I guess{cps=*.1}...{/cps} just can’t have this part of the plan go wrong, you know?"
-    
+
     show anon:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.15
     show anon neutral with dissolve
@@ -380,7 +380,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
 
     show fang:
         easein_back 0.75 xalign 0.85
-    show fang shocked flip with Dissolve(.25) 
+    show fang shocked flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "OH WAIT!"
 
     stop music fadeout 4
@@ -430,7 +430,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
 
     "I hand her back her phone."
     pause .5
-    
+
     show fang:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.75
     show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
@@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
     F "Right, so I’ll tell her we should meet at-"
 
     A "Actually, Fang, hold on a second{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    
+
     show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Hm?"
 
@@ -481,7 +481,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
     "Instead of Fang dragging me through the museum, we walked out casually hand in hand."
     pause .5
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/city loop.ogg' fadein 4
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/cityLoop.ogg' fadein 4
     scene museum
     show anon neutral flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.3
@@ -737,13 +737,13 @@ label chapter_12A:
     pause 1
 
     "I place the basket of fries in front of Fang and she immediately starts digging in."
-    
+
     "So much for not being hungry."
 
     show reed happy sunglasses flip with Dissolve(.25)
     "Reed gives me a thumbs up, wearing his giant oversized sunglasses again."
 
-    show reed sunglasses flip 
+    show reed sunglasses flip
     show trish unimpressed flip
     with dissolve
 
@@ -805,7 +805,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
 
     "Trish looks smug. What did I agree to?"
     pause .5
-    
+
     F "Great! We can try Trish’s new song in the next rehearsal!"
 
     T "I’m surprised you agreed to that, I would have thought you wanted us to play some anime song instead."
@@ -825,7 +825,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
 
     "Know what. I don’t care any more."
 
-    show fang neutral 
+    show fang neutral
     show trish neutral flip
     with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Maybe{cps=*.1}...{/cps} but let’s talk about that later. I’m cravin’ a milkshake now."
@@ -907,7 +907,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
     F "What’d I miss?"
 
     T "Just talking to White Knight about his taste in music."
-    pause .5 
+    pause .5
 
     show dimmer_light behind anon, fang, trish, reed with Dissolve(.25)
     "Fuck this."
@@ -937,7 +937,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
 
     Re "Peace, dude."
     pause .5
-    
+
     show anon:
         easein_cubic 0.75 xalign 0.225
         ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.3
@@ -962,4 +962,4 @@ label chapter_12A:
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 1
 
-    return
+    return

game/script/12C.anon-fang-lovey-dovey.rpy

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
     hide fang
     hide anon
     show kissu1
-    with fade
+    with dissolve
 
     Lucy "You're so good to me."
 
@@ -162,6 +162,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
     scene room anon day
     show kissu2
     with fade
+    pause .5
 
     Lucy "See? Getting better."
 
@@ -189,13 +190,16 @@ label chapter_12C:
 
     scene campsite
     show anon neutral at acenter
-    with fade
+    with dissolve
 
     "And now I’m setting up a pair of tents."
 
     "Alone."
 
     "Despite being in a group of four."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
 
     show flashbacktitlecard
     show grain_effect
@@ -230,7 +234,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
 
     show sepiastella neutral flip with dissolve 
     show sepiarosa neutral flip behind grain_effect at sright with easeinright:
-        xalign 1.2
+        xalign 1.4
     Ro "{i}Oh, yes!{/i}"
  
     Ro "{i}My backyard is very big. Long bus ride to school.{/i}"
@@ -264,6 +268,10 @@ label chapter_12C:
     pause 0.5
     A "{i}As long as we have tents.{/i}{w=0.2} Me and my stupid fucking mouth."
 
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
+
     show flashbackfincard
     show grain_effect
     with dissolve
@@ -308,9 +316,9 @@ label chapter_12C:
     Lucy "Come on, quit teasing him."
 
     Lucy "Who cares if he hasn’t evolved to fire yet?"
+    stop music fadeout 1.0
 
     "I trip into the tent and tear the whole thing down."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
     play music "audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "By the time I get both of the tents standing, the sun is nearing the horizon."
 
@@ -319,7 +327,8 @@ label chapter_12C:
     "Luckily Lucy carries around a lighter for her cigarettes so I was able to start a small fire."
 
     "I slump on one of the logs around the firepit and try to massage my shoulders."
-    show rosa neutral flip at sright with dissolve
+    show rosa neutral flip with dissolve:
+        xalign 1.2
     Ro "Hello, An-on."
 
     A "Oh, is the food ready?"
@@ -345,7 +354,8 @@ label chapter_12C:
     "Rosa waves them over."
     show stella neutral:
         xalign -0.1
-    show fang neutral at sleft
+    show fang neutral behind stella:
+        xpos -0.05
     with easeinleft
     show anon neutral flip at acenter with dissolve
     stop music fadeout 3.0
@@ -369,7 +379,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
     A "Then why didn’t she just say that?"
 
     "Rosa and Stella take their plates of imposter kebabs and start walking to the other end of Rosa’s yard."
-    show fang neutral at sleft with dissolve
+    show fang neutral with dissolve
     
     play music "audio/OST/middle_of_nowhere.ogg" fadein 1.0
     hide rosa
@@ -611,6 +621,8 @@ label chapter_12C:
     pause .5
 
     "..."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 1
     
     return

game/script/12D.aquarium.rpy

@@ -50,9 +50,9 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     "Looking through one of the map kiosks, I try to make a mental plan for the trip."
 
-    show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
-    show fang neutral at sright with dissolve
-
+    show anon neutral at aleft
+    show fang neutral at sright
+    with dissolve
 
     A "Uhh… {w=0.2}They got exhibits for the deep sea, the gulf of Mexico, the dopefish, tropical reefs…"
 
@@ -74,8 +74,9 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     F "Look at these cute little shits, I love them!"
 
-    show fang adorable at sleft with dissolve
-    show anon neutral at aright with dissolve 
+    show fang adorable at sleft 
+    show anon neutral at aright
+    with dissolve 
 
     A "Yeah, I see them."
 
@@ -129,6 +130,8 @@ label chapter_12D:
     
     #Fang has the zoomies
     F "And what’s over there? Are those seahorses{cps=*1.5} holy crap I have to take a video of this.{/cps}"
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     #old method
     # show fang adorable at sleft with dissolve: #maybe try this with a block: statement? removed: at sleft - no change 
@@ -176,13 +179,15 @@ label chapter_12D:
         pause 1.0
         repeat
 
-    pause 1.0
+    pause 2.0
     "I shrug apologetically at the attendant who has given up entirely."
 
 
     "But watching Fang zoom between the exhibits to gush over each oddly cute sea animal was just too much."
 
     "Subtly my phone finds its way into my jacket pocket, already set to record."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     show anonphone at scenter with dissolve # moveinbottom
 
@@ -191,6 +196,8 @@ label chapter_12D:
     "But it’d be a good death."
     pause 0.5
     "Wait, where’d she go?"
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     hide anonphone with dissolve #moveoutbottom
 
@@ -277,6 +284,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
     A "Well… if we go outside we can see the dolphin pools. That way it loops back through the deep sea exhibits."
 
     "With Fang in agreement I lead her towards the exit marked with a large dolphin sign."
+    stop music fadeout 3
 
     scene aquariumoutside with dissolve
 
@@ -365,8 +373,9 @@ label chapter_12D:
     scene aquariumtube with fade
 
     "From within the glass walkway we’re surrounded by a myriad of colorful marine life swimming around us."
-    show fang surprised at sright with dissolve
-    show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
+    show fang surprised at sright
+    show anon neutral at aleft
+    with dissolve
 
     "Fang’s eyes are wide as she tries to follow the different schools of fish that dart to and fro about."
 
@@ -413,6 +422,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
     
 
     "Despite her claim otherwise I can feel how tense she is by how her fingernails dig into my hand."
+    stop music fadeout 2
     scene black with fade
     "I lead her into the darkened room, what little light there is coming from the various animals within."
     play music "audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg" fadein 1.0
@@ -463,7 +473,12 @@ label chapter_12D:
     F "A bit. I’ll feel even more rested after some lunch though."
 
     A "Sounds like a plan."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
+
     scene aquariumoutside with dissolve
+    pause .5
     "The rest of our rest day was spent just relaxing on the pier."
 
     "Snacks on the boardwalk."
@@ -484,6 +499,8 @@ label chapter_12D:
     pause .5
 
     "..."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 1
 
     return

game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy

@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
 label chapter_13A:
     #Prom is Complicated
 
+    window hide # Temporary
     play music 'audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg' fadein 0.5
     pause .5
 
@@ -114,7 +115,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     show naomi prom neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     pause .2
     hide anon
-    hide naomi 
+    hide naomi
     with dissolve
 
     "Before I can even say anything, Naomi’s dragging me by the shoulder into the kitchen."
@@ -130,7 +131,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     with Fade(1, 0, 1)
     pause 1
 
-    "She gives me a death stare for what seems like a solid minute before she begins yelling at me"
+    "She gives me a death stare for what seems like a solid minute before she begins yelling at me."
 
     play music 'audio/ost/protestra_punk.ogg' fadein 1
 
@@ -177,13 +178,13 @@ label chapter_13A:
         pause .75
         easein_back 1 xalign 0.65
     "Naomi sighs and walks away, shoving into my shoulder on the way out, completely disregarding my presence."
-    
+
     show anon prom neutral with dissolve
 
     N "Just go, get out of here."
 
     N "This conversation is over."
-    
+
     show naomi:
         easeout_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.6
     pause .15
@@ -209,7 +210,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     "The arguing from the other room quickly and very loudly breaks my train of thought and I stride back to where everybody is gathered."
     pause .5
-    
+
     scene home fang night
     show fangdad unimpressed flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1
@@ -258,7 +259,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     show fang a prom unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
     pause .2
     hide anon
-    hide fang 
+    hide fang
     with dissolve
 
     "Without a word she grabbed me by the wrist and dragged me through the front door, guitar in her other hand."
@@ -293,7 +294,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     "The driver chuckles at his own remark."
     pause .5
 
-    A "We’re doing fine, take us to Volcano high"
+    A "We’re doing fine, take us to Volcano High."
 
     D "Prom I’m guessing?  Ya’ two high school sweet-hearts should stay safe out there! Crazy worl’ out there innit’?"
     pause .5
@@ -341,7 +342,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     D "Sure, sure."
 
-    "The Driver sighs a little"
+    "The Driver sighs a little."
     pause .5
 
     play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorloop.ogg' fadein 3
@@ -377,7 +378,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     "The taxi pulls away from the curb and rounds the corner back onto the main road."
     pause .5
-    
+
     stop ambient fadeout 4
     play music 'audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg' fadein 1.0
 
@@ -389,7 +390,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     A "Sounds like we got plenty of time."
 
     F "You’d be surprised. Come on."
-    
+
     scene black with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
@@ -501,7 +502,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     play music 'audio/OST/Many Such Cases of Being So True.ogg' fadein 1.0
     show fang a prom sad
-    show trish prom sad flip 
+    show trish prom sad flip
     with dissolve
     pause .5
 
@@ -578,7 +579,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     "But I’m following Moe’s advice and supporting Fang, right?"
     pause .5
 
-    play music "audio/effects/prom chatter loop 2.ogg" fadein 3
+    play music "audio/effects/promChatterLoop2.ogg" fadein 3
     scene prom
     show anon prom neutral:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.3
@@ -628,7 +629,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
      "Going great, actually":
 
-       A "Going great, Actually"
+       A "Going great, actually."
 
     pause .5
     Sp "Where’s your date, I thought I saw the two of you enter."
@@ -672,7 +673,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     "I swirl the punch in my cup around before chugging the last of it."
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I just want to go home{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    
+
     hide dimmer_light with dissolve
     Sp "-ake responsibility and take it seriously."
 
@@ -696,7 +697,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     "Everyone moves out of his way as he cuts his way across the room to the small stage."
 
     stop music fadeout 5
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 5
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg' fadein 5
     scene black with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
@@ -745,14 +746,14 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .5
 
     Sp "{cps=*.3}Aaaaaare{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    
+
     stop ambient fadeout 0.25
     play sound 'audio/effects/drumrollend.ogg' fadein 0.25
     pause 1
 
     Sp "{cps=*.3}Naaaaaser aaaaand Naaaaoooomiiiiii!{/cps}"
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 1
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg' fadein 1
     "He tosses the paper over his shoulder and yanks out the crowns from a pocket inside his jacket."
 
     # show spears neutral with moveinleft:
@@ -809,7 +810,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     hide naomi
     with dissolve
     pause .5
-    
+
     show spears:
         ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
     show dimmer_darker behind spears with Dissolve(1)
@@ -1070,7 +1071,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .5
 
     play music 'audio/ost/summertime synth.ogg' fadein 2
-    scene auditorium 
+    scene auditorium
     show dimmer_darker
     show dimmer_darker as dimmer_xtra
     with Dissolve(1)
@@ -1283,7 +1284,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 1
-    
+
     stop ambient fadeout 0.5
     play sound 'audio/effects/showermuffledend.ogg' fadein 0.25
     "Some minutes later with my knife and I hear the shower sputter to a stop."
@@ -1493,7 +1494,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     stop music fadeout 5
     scene roomthrash7 with Dissolve(.25)
-    A "THAT’S ENOUGH"
+    A "THAT’S ENOUGH!"
     pause 1
 
     "While Fang is recoiling, I take the moment to grab her by the wrists and rush her over to sit on the bed."
@@ -1514,7 +1515,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     scene roomthrash9 with hpunch
 
-    "Before I can finish, Fang plants her foot on my chest and pushes my away with all her strength." 
+    "Before I can finish, Fang plants her foot on my chest and pushes my away with all her strength."
 
     "The force makes me stumble back several feet."
 
@@ -1596,7 +1597,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     A "Look{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "You're tired, I'm tired, let's just sleep and think it over tomorrow"
+    A "You're tired, I'm tired, let's just sleep and think it over tomorrow."
     pause .5
 
     "As I drape the blanket over her shoulders, she reaches out to squeeze my hand."
@@ -1647,4 +1648,4 @@ label chapter_13A:
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 1
 
-    return
+    return

game/script/13B.fang-breaks-up-with-anon.rpy

@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 label chapter_13B:
     #Prom is For Suckers
+    window hide # Temporary
     "{cps=*.2}-- One Month Later --{/cps}"
 
     play music 'audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg' fadein 2
@@ -524,7 +525,7 @@ label chapter_13B:
     "Now it’s just us. Alone."
 
     stop music fadeout 4
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/beach loop 1.ogg' fadein 3
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/beachLoop1.ogg' fadein 3
     pause .5
 
     "I take Fang by the hand and we make our way down to the beach."
@@ -748,7 +749,7 @@ label chapter_13B:
     pause .5
 
     stop music fadeout 4
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/beach loop 2.ogg' fadein 5
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/beachLoop2.ogg' fadein 5
     F "Fix?"
     pause .5
 

game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy

@@ -12,6 +12,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
     pause 1
 
     "Holy shit, she can really rock that dress."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 2.0
 
     FD "Ahem."
@@ -49,9 +51,14 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     F "Later."
 
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    #photo op
+
     scene black with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
-    
+
     play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
     pause .275
     scene home fang night
@@ -129,17 +136,19 @@ label chapter_13D:
     show naomi prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 1.05
     with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
- 
+
     pause .25
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/cameraMult.ogg'
     pause .275
     scene black with Fade(.1, 1, 2, color="#fff")
     pause .5
-    
+
     "The onslaught of flashes continues as the four of us are directed to stand and pose together in every possible combination."
-    
+
     "After a millenia Fang’s mother is satisfied, or her camera ran out of storage."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     scene home fang night blurred with dissolve
@@ -173,11 +182,20 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "Thanks."
 
+    stop music fadeout 3
     scene kitchen
-    show anon prom neutral at aleft
-    show naomi prom neutral flip at scenter
+    show anon prom neutral flip at aleft
     with fade
     "While pouring my glass of water Naomi walks in after me."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    show naomi prom neutral flip at scenter:
+        xalign 1
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
+    show anon prom neutral at aleft
+    with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
 
     A "Oh, you need a cup too? I’ll grab you one."
 
@@ -185,6 +203,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     N "Actually, Anon, can I speak with you for a moment?"
 
+    play music 'audio/ost/intercept.ogg' fadein 1
     "Oh boy."
 
     A "Go ahead."
@@ -194,7 +213,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "I take a long, slow sip."
 
     A "But what?"
-    show naomi prom angry flip at scenter
+    show naomi prom angry flip at scenter with dissolve
 
     N "But, I mean…{w=0.2} Just look at her."
 
@@ -238,11 +257,17 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     N "Oh, really? That’s grea-"
 
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0.02, 'music')
+    stop music fadeout 0.1
+
     A "And how does that make you feel, Fang?"
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'music')
     play music "audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
     "Naomi goes white as a sheet."
-    show fang d prom happy flip at sright with easeinright
+    show fang d prom happy flip at sright with dissolve:
+        xalign 1.7
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.3
     F "Well since you’ve asked,{w=0.2} Anon,{w=0.2} I’d be glad to share."
 
     N "O-oh, Fang,{w=0.2} I d-didn’t see you there."
@@ -286,11 +311,17 @@ label chapter_13D:
     F "So basically, fuck your stupid plan, {w=0.2}fuck your prom crown,{w=0.2} and fuck you."
 
     "In a flash Fang strikes Naomi right across the face."
+    window hide Dissolve(0.0001)
+    window auto
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
+    show white
     hide anon
     hide fang
-    show naomi slapped with hpunch:
+    show naomi slapped:
         xalign 0.5 yalign 0.4
-    with dissolve
+    show white:
+        linear 0.2 alpha 0
+    with hpunch
     #Johnny test whip sound effect
     F "...And your dress sucks."
 
@@ -335,7 +366,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "I manage a nod as Fang grabs my hand and leads me out the door with her guitar in the other."
 
-    scene home fang outside night with dissolve
+    stop music fadeout 2
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/nightLoop.ogg' fadein 2
+    scene home fang outside night with fade
     show fang d prom neutral at scenter with easeinleft
     show anon prom neutral at aleft with easeinleft
 
@@ -367,6 +400,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     D "Was in the neighborhood."
 
+    stop ambient fadeout 1
     play music "audio/OST/bayside_revamp.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "The driver turns his head and looks over at us."
 
@@ -383,7 +417,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Aren’t there {i}any other{/i} taxi drivers in this town?"
 
     "I open the door for Fang and we climb in the back, fitting her guitar behind the driver’s seat."
-    scene taxi night
+    scene taxi night with dissolve
     D "So where’re you two lovebirds heading dressed all snazzy like that?"
 
     A "Volcano High, it’s prom night."
@@ -420,9 +454,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     D "Just have fun, you two."
 
-    scene outside school night
+    scene outside school night with fade
 
-    play music "audio/effects/prom chatter loop.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    play music "audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
     "We climb out the back of the cab and the driver gives me a wink before the taxi screeches away in a cloud of carbon monoxide."
 
@@ -438,7 +472,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "The line to get in isn’t too long, and it only takes a few minutes to get inside."
 
-    scene prom
+    play music 'audio/effects/promChatterLoop1.ogg' fadeout 3 fadein 3
+    scene prom with fade
 
     "Inside is about as well decorated as outside."
 
@@ -489,6 +524,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
     Re "Bro, I would but like… {w=0.3}don’t wanna leave Trish alone."
 
     Re "She’s still suuuuper beating herself up over it, don’t wanna isolate her even more, y’know?"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
 
     menu:
         "I’m sure Trish’ll be fine soon enough.":
@@ -576,6 +614,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     F "What I like are the bones in my feet."
 
     A "Woooooow."
+    stop ambient fadeout 2
     play music "audio/OST/its_footloose_now.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
     "Fang takes my hand and leads me into the crowd of dancing teenagers."
@@ -627,6 +666,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "At least I’m not flossing like some of the faggots here."
 
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
     show reed king rex behind fang with easeinleft:
         xalign -1.1 yalign 0.1
     show anon prom neutral flip at aright
@@ -662,6 +704,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
     hide reed king rex with easeoutright
 
     "Fang gives me a brief hug before following Reed out of the crowd, leaving me alone amongst the sea of sweaty teenagers."
+    stop music fadeout 3
+    play music 'audio/effects/promChatterLoop1.ogg' fadein 2
 
     hide fang d prom neutral with easeoutright
 
@@ -676,6 +720,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     show trish prom neutral at sleft with dissolve
 
     "Sitting alone at a table in the back is Trish, blankly staring at her phone and not touching the plate of food in front of her."
+    stop ambient fadeout 2
     play music "audio/OST/Appreciating her Company.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
     "I really don't pay any mind to her, my focus solely on getting to the buffet table."
@@ -691,11 +736,15 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "After getting another plate of tiny greasy delights, I begin to approach Trish."
 
     "Worst case scenario I get gored on her horn, and it’s not as threatening as staircases."
-    show anon prom neutral flip at acenter with move
+    show anon prom neutral flip at acenter with ease
     A "Is this seat taken?"
 
     "Trish looks up from her phone and her face flies through a myriad of emotions."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
     show trish prom indignant with Dissolve(.11)
+    pause .1
     show trish prom angry with Dissolve(.11)
     show trish prom happy with Dissolve(.11)
     show trish prom neutral with Dissolve(.11)
@@ -754,7 +803,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "Alright, alright. I was just thinking."
 
-    A "And like.{w=0.3} How do I say this."
+    A "And like,{w=0.3} how do I say this..."
 
     "Trish is focused completely on me now.{w=0.2} Okay brain, help me out here."
 
@@ -794,10 +843,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
     A "But…"
 
     F "{alpha=0.5}{i}I’ve… been meaning to, but…{/i}{/alpha}"
-
+    stop music fadeout 2.0
     A "But it’d crush Fang if she never talks with her best friend again."
 
-    stop music fadeout 2.0
     pause 0.5
     play music "audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
@@ -856,16 +904,16 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     T "I want to dance, and so help me Raptor Jesus I’m getting a dance."
 
-    play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadeout 1 fadein 1
 
     "Trish grabs me by the elbow and pulls me to the dance floor."
     scene black with fade
     "When Trish finds a spot she’s satisfied with, away from most of the other couples and open, she turns back to me."
-    scene prom with fade
+    scene prom
     show trish and anon cuck fang:
         xalign 0.5 yalign 0.5
         pause 3
-
+    with fade
     T "Left hand on my hip. Now!"
     "Oh wow, she is short as hell."
 
@@ -912,8 +960,11 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "One song and dance grew into three or four, I lost track."
 
     "But as we ease into the next song, I realize that Trish is starting to smile at last."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
 
-    play music "audio/effects/prom chatter loop 2.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    stop music fadeout 1
 
     "*{cps=*0.5}GRRRRRRRRRLLLL{/cps}*"
 
@@ -928,12 +979,14 @@ label chapter_13D:
     T "Er- yeah. Sorry."
 
     A "For what? Come on."
+    play music "audio/effects/promChatterLoop2.ogg" fadein 1.0
     scene black with fade
 
     "I lead Trish out of the crowd back in the general direction of the buffet."
-    scene prom with fade
+    scene prom
     show anon prom neutral at aleft
     show trish prom neutral flip at tcenter
+    with fade
     A "Thanks for teaching me to dance."
 
     T "I’m coming for you if I hear Fang’s got a broken toe."
@@ -945,17 +998,22 @@ label chapter_13D:
     T "Oh, sure. Gimme a bit."
 
     "She heads off and I go sit in the same spot on the bleachers as before."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     show trish prom neutral at tcenter with dissolve
     hide trish with easeoutright
     pause 0.5
     "Well then.{w=0.2} Got some time to kill, time to shitpo-"
 
-    show anon prom neutral at aleft with vpunch
-    "*THUNK*"
+    play sound 'audio/effects/anonDeskSlam.ogg'
+    "*THUNK*" with vpunch
 
     A "Whoa, Trish, warn me before you jump into the chair."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     show spears neutral flip at scenter with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
     Sp "My bad."
 
@@ -968,6 +1026,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     Sp "I just wanted to have a word with you. Got a minute?"
 
     A "Sure."
+    pause .5
 
     Sp "When you first got here I noticed you were a bit on the egotistical side, if I may say so."
 
@@ -1001,19 +1060,19 @@ label chapter_13D:
     label chadshark:
     "He marches away to get ready for the announcement."
     scene prom with fade
-    show anonphone with moveinbottom
+    show anonphone with easeinbottom
     "I check my phone to make my post."
 
     "hey fagets guess whos at prom? later virgins"
     "pic rel is my date :^)"
 
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
     scene prom
     show chadshark:
         xalign 0.4
     show stella prom neutral flip:
         xalign 0.65
-    with fade
+    with dissolve
     "I attach a picture I took of Stella earlier when her date was in the restroom."
 
     "How did she end up with the football captain, anyway?"
@@ -1029,7 +1088,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     show anonphone
     with fade
 
-    hide anonphone with moveoutbottom
+    hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
     show anon prom neutral at aleft with dissolve
     show trish prom neutral flip at tcenter with easeinright
     T "Alright, sorry, I’m back."
@@ -1053,10 +1112,14 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "The music fades until all that’s left is chatter."
 
     "Spears takes to the stage with mic in hand for once."
-    scene prom
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    hide anon
+    hide trish
+    with dissolve
     show spears neutral at scenter with dissolve
     Sp "Alright everyone. Before we end tonight’s prom we have a couple of items to take care of."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
+    stop music fadeout 3.0
 
     Sp "First thing is-"
 
@@ -1075,6 +1138,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "He smiles and nods, pressing one of the myriad of buttons on the block."
 
     "A mediocre recording of the drumline plays over the speakers as Spears clears his throat and tears open the envelope."
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/drumroll.ogg' fadein 0.69
 
     Sp "And your winners."
 
@@ -1084,9 +1148,15 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     Sp "Aaaaaare…."
 
+    play sound 'audio/effects/drumrollEnd.ogg' fadein 1
+    stop ambient fadeout 1
     Sp "Naaaaaser aaaaand Naaaaoooomiiiiii!"
 
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/crowdCheerLoop.ogg' fadein 2
     "He tosses the paper over his shoulder and yanks out the crowns from a pocket inside his jacket."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
     show spears neutral with easeinleft:
         xalign -0.2 yalign 0.0
     show naser prom happy at sleft with easeinleft
@@ -1100,6 +1170,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Spears offers the crowns to Naomi, who puts the larger one on Naser’s crest to droop off, and then dons the tiara.."
 
     "The whole moment is picturesque, just like Naomi wanted."
+    stop ambient fadeout 5
 
     N "Thank you all so much, Volcano High!"
 
@@ -1123,8 +1194,10 @@ label chapter_13D:
     Sp "Now I know she’s played before with… mixed results, but please give her a second chance."
 
     Sp "To finish up, please welcome Fang!"
+    window hide
+    window auto
     hide spears with dissolve
-    show fang d prom happy at scenter
+    show fang d prom happy at scenter with dissolve
     "Spears puts the microphone up and gives a welcoming applause as the cheap curtains draw open."
 
     "Fang is standing onstage front and center, guitar."
@@ -1135,6 +1208,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     unknown "I’ll just start recording…"
 
+    show fang d prom sad with dissolve
+
     "She scans the room, a nervous look creeping onto her face."
 
     scene prom
@@ -1159,12 +1234,21 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Fang notices us and some of the nervousness melts off her face."
 
     "She takes a deep breath and starts strumming the first notes of her song."
-
-    scene fang d ending preformance 1
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
+    scene black with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
     "It took half a year but she finally completed the song from the roof."
 
     play music 'audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance - Live.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
+
+    scene fang d ending preformance 1 with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
     "The cascade of chords is a slow build that increases tempo gradually."
 
@@ -1216,6 +1300,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Her voice shakes as the words trail off, delivering a meteoric finale to her show."
     stop music fadeout 1.0
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/crowdCheerLoop.ogg' fadein 4
     "The guitar echoes for several seconds before applause begins to fill the air, cheers that I didn’t initiate this time."
 
     "I begin to join in, but take notice of Fang’s utterly stiff posture."
@@ -1235,6 +1320,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "I can see the embarrassed mirth playing across her beautiful eyes."
     scene fang d ending preformance 4 with dissolve
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1.4, 2, 'ambient')
+    pause 1
     "No thought at all, I press my lips against hers."
 
     "Behind me I can hear the audience’s cheers grow louder."
@@ -1250,6 +1337,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "I extend one arm out toward Naomi, who I know is suffering from rectal-ragnarok by now, and raise one finger in particular at her."
 
     "There, picture-perfect."
+    stop ambient fadeout 2
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 2, 'ambient')
     scene black with fade
     stop music fadeout 1.0
     pause 0.5
@@ -1260,9 +1349,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "The cool night air feels absolutely amazing after we spent so long in the sweatbox of a gym."
 
     show anon prom neutral at acenter with dissolve:
-        xalign 1.1 yalign -0.1 zoom 1.35 
+        xalign 0.8 #yalign -0.1 zoom 1.35 
     show fang d prom happy with dissolve:
-        xpos -0.15 yalign -0.1 zoom 1.35
+        xpos 0 #yalign -0.1 #zoom 1.35
 
     "When I had brought up calling the taxi to take us home, Fang insisted on walking instead."
 
@@ -1274,7 +1363,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "Yeah, nice and breezy."
     show fang d prom happy:
-        ease_cubic 1.0 xpos 0.0
+        ease_cubic 1.0 xpos 0.05
+    show anon prom neutral:
+        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.65
 
 
     "My arm finds its way around her waist, and Fang takes the hint and starts walking closer with me."
@@ -1286,11 +1377,13 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "It’s as we pass by the park we had visited so many months ago that my phone buzzes in my pocket."
 
     "...and Fang’s hip."
+    show fang d prom shock with dissolve
 
     "The startled noise from Fang’s mouth was part eardrum shattering and part fucking hilarious."
     pause 0.5
     A "Bahahahahahaha!"
 
+    show fang d prom happy with dissolve
     F "Shut up!"
 
     "Her hip collides with mine, forcing my still buzzing phone roughly against my leg."
@@ -1353,22 +1446,25 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "I chuckle as my hands finds its place on her hip and takes her other."
 
-    scene park_night with fade
-
-    show fanganon_promdance with dissolve:
-        ease_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.2
-        pause 3
-        ease_cubic 1.5 xpos -0.2
-        pause 3
-        ease_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.2
-        pause 3
-        ease_cubic 1.5 xpos -0.2
-        pause 3
-        repeat
+    hide anon
+    hide fang
+    show fanganon_promdance
 
+    with dissolve
 
     A "Alright, I think she said like this…"
 
+    show fanganon_promdance:
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.7
+        pause 3
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.3
+        pause 3
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.7
+        pause 3
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.3
+        pause 3
+        repeat
+
     "I try to explain Trish’s instructions to Fang as we slowly move to the barely audible rhythm."
 
     "And between the too-quiet music, the constant foot stomps from Fang, and my own idiocy giving bad instructions."
@@ -1385,9 +1481,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
     #Fast Times at Volcano High
     "{cps=*0.2}--  Two Weeks Later --{/cps}"
 
-    scene beach with fade
-
-    show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve
+    scene beach
+    show anon neutral at acenter
+    with fade
     play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg"
     "Time seemed to fly after prom, honestly."
 
@@ -1452,10 +1548,18 @@ label chapter_13D:
     T "Reed... {w=0.2}*huff*... {w=0.2}Your car.... {w=0.2}*huff*..."
     show reed explanatory at rleft with easeinleft
     Re "Oh yeah, you like it? It’s an electric!"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    show reed neutral with dissolve
+    pause .25
+
+    show trish neutral flip at scenter:
+      yalign 0.185
+      easeout_cubic 0.7 rotate -90 yalign -0.75
+    pause .65
+    play sound 'audio/effects/anonGardenFall.ogg'
+    with vpunch
 
-    show trish neutral at scenter with dissolve:
-      xalign 0.0
-      ease_cubic 0.5 rotate -90 yalign -0.5
 
     "Trish collapses in the sand."
 
@@ -1464,16 +1568,21 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "I swing around and catch Stella and Rosa exiting a hot pink Prius, each with a pair of phone speakers in their hands."
     show anon neutral flip at aright with dissolve
     "Waving to them, my focus returns to Reed now helping Trish off the ground."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
     show trish neutral at scenter with dissolve:
       xalign 0.0
-      ease_cubic 0.5 rotate 0 yalign 0.2
+      ease_cubic 1 rotate 0 yalign 0.2
 
-    show reed with move:
+    pause .5
+
+    show reed with ease:
         xalign -0.55
-    show trish with move:
+    show trish with ease:
         xalign -2.1
-    show anon neutral with move:
-        xalign 0.25 yalign 0.0
+    show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25):
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.25
 
     show rosa neutral flip with easeinright:
         xalign 1.05
@@ -1486,22 +1595,31 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Diverting my attention back at my masterpiece of a firepit, the realization slowly dawns on me that I have nothing to start the fire with."
 
     Re "Need a light, amigo?"
+    window hide
+    window auto
     show anon neutral flip with dissolve:
         xalign 0.5
-    show lighter at sleft with dissolve:
+    show lighter with dissolve:
+        xpos 0.1
+        ypos 0.3
         zoom 0.42
         rotate 40
-        ease_cubic 0.6 yalign 0.5 xalign 0.5
+        linear 0.6 align (0.5, 0.5) knot (0.45, 0.10) rotate -270
     hide lighter with dissolve
     "Before I can respond, he reaches into his pocket and fishes out a lighter which is promptly tossed my way."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     show lighter at scenter with easeinbottom:
         yalign 0.5 zoom 2.0 
+    pause 1
     "Catching it out of the air, I only briefly catch the words ‘FUCK COMMUNISM’ engraved in its side when I hear yet another car approaching."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     hide lighter with easeoutbottom
-    show anon neutral with move:
-        xalign 0.25 yalign 0.0
+    show anon neutral with ease:
+        xalign 0.25 #yalign 0.0
     "Recognizing it by sound alone, I see the NasCar glide to a halt next to Rosa’s car."
 
     "That name might still be dumb as hell, but I gotta admit it’s growing on me."
@@ -1509,25 +1627,40 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Fang emerges from the backseat and waves at me."
 
     "She hunches into the car to get out the pizza boxes and starts striding towards us."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    show reed:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign -0.70
+    show trish:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign -2.8
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
+    show rosa:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 1.2
+    show stella:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 1.15
     show fang neutral flip behind anon with easeinright:
-        xalign 0.45
+        xalign 0.25
     show naser neutral flip behind rosa with easeinright:
-        xalign 0.85
+        xalign 0.90
     show fang neutral behind anon with dissolve
 
     Nas "...c’mon babe, please. You know she didn’t do it on purpose!"
 
-    show naser neutral flip with move:
-        xalign 1.25
-    show rosa with move:
-        xalign 1.35
-    show stella neutral flip with move:
-        xalign 1.25
+    show naser neutral flip:
+        xalign 1.2
+    show rosa:
+        xalign 1.3
+    show stella neutral flip:
+        xalign 1.2
+    with ease
 
     "Naomi erupts from the car in a frothing rage, her shirt noticeably stained an orange-red."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     show naomi angry flip behind naser with easeinright:
-        xalign 0.70
+        xalign 0.60
 
     F "Ha! Wish I did."
 
@@ -1615,7 +1748,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     Re "Yeah, I got a special brand just for the two of you. Great beginner stuff."
 
     show naser annoyed flip
-    show naomi neutral flip
+    show naomi unimpressed flip
     with dissolve
 
     Nas "You… {w=0.3}Whatever, I’ll try to keep Naomi from calling the police, fine."
@@ -1623,6 +1756,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     Re "You’re a real bro, man…"
     show naser neutral flip with dissolve
     Re "If everyone’s ready then let’s get started!"
+    stop music fadeout 2
     show black with fade
     "Soon enough the pizza and booze are passed out and we’re all sitting in the sand around the blazing fire and the weekly top-forty list playing on the speakers."
     play music "audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg" fadein 1.0
@@ -1723,6 +1857,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
         yalign 0.4
         zoom 1.3
     "Holding it up to the light, I barely make out the words ‘NON ALCOHOLIC’ written in microscopic font."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     hide nonalcoholic with easeoutbottom
     scene d01 with dissolve
@@ -1770,6 +1906,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Reed lets out a sigh and turns back towards me."
 
     Re "So, like, for real though... {w=0.2}what are you gonna do now that school’s over, man?"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
 
     menu:
 
@@ -1801,7 +1940,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     T "We’ll do hair and horns and piercings and-{w=0.2} oh! Engravings too! Fang even said-"
 
-    F "That I’d be your first customer, I’ve told you a million times by now"
+    F "That I’d be your first customer, I’ve told you a million times by now."
 
     "Fang returns from wherever it is she went, now carrying an object in her hands."
     #show fang neutral flip with easeinright:
@@ -1878,10 +2017,12 @@ label chapter_13D:
     A "Right right. Just uh… {w=0.2}thinking of what to put."
 
     "Okay, Anon, something meaningful. Something that’ll remind Fang of you every time she reads it."
+    pause .5
 
     #show anon neutral flip with dissolve
 
     $ renpy.input("What will you write?")
+    pause .5
 
     "Perfect."
 
@@ -1906,6 +2047,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     scene black with fade
     label tink:
     "{cps=*0.2}-- Six months later --{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     play music "audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "After prom night and graduation life slowed down."
@@ -1946,12 +2088,14 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     F "‘M UP!"
 
-    play music "audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    play music "audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg" fadeout 1 fadein 1
     "The loud noise of Trish’s present makes Fang bolt upright."
 
     A "OOF!"
 
     "And sends me tumbling onto Reed’s present."
+    window hide Dissolve(0.0001)
+    window auto
     play sound "audio/effects/anonHeadbutt.ogg"
     scene room anon day with vpunch #dissolve
     "The new Metal Gear RAYmba Mk.II bumps against my face, turns, and continues eating the crumbs off my new carpet."
@@ -1996,8 +2140,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
     F "Hurry up! You’re letting the warm escape."
 
     "I slide into the blanket next to her, my arms automatically wrapping around Fang’s waist and drawing her against my chest."
-    hide anon neutral dissolve
-    scene room anon day with fade
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    hide anon neutral with dissolve
 
     F "Mmmm."
 
@@ -2086,6 +2231,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     F "Like you making out with an anime girl again?"
 
     A "Okay not that embarrassing."
+    stop music fadeout 2
 
     "I turn onto my back and Fang adjusts herself to lean on my shoulder."
 
@@ -2241,8 +2387,11 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "She examines the box carefully before removing the paper packaging."
 
     "Sliding the box open reveals an amber pendant on a silver chain."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
-    scene d02b
+    scene d02b with dissolve
+    pause 1
 
     "I take the necklace from the box and hold it up for both of us to inspect."
 
@@ -2330,6 +2479,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "My momentary fear of it being a potential addict or murderer are quelled upon opening the door, revealing-"
 
     A "Principal Spears? What are you doing here?"
+    window hide
+    window auto
     show anon monkey flip at aright with easeinright:
         xalign 0.7
     pause 0.1
@@ -2392,7 +2543,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "Alright. Thanks again for stopping by."
 
-    play music "audio/OST/Appreciating her Company.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    play music "audio/OST/Appreciating her Company.ogg" fadeout 1 fadein 1
     Sp "Had to do it at least once before you leave next month."
 
     Sp "Be seeing you. Fang."
@@ -2521,7 +2672,10 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     scene black with fade
     stop music fadeout 4.0
-    pause 6
+    pause 4
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 2
     "..."
 
     return

game/script/14A.KO_OP-ending.rpy

@@ -1,5 +1,9 @@
+image fangfog = im.Blur(im.MatrixColor("fang/emotive set/fang anguish.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1)), 1.5)
+image red = "#ff0000"
+
 label chapter_14A:
     #Bowling for Volcano High
+    window auto
     scene room anon day alt
     show dimmer_darker
     with Dissolve(1)
@@ -12,21 +16,30 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     "Groggily, I pull myself to my feet."
 
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
+
     hide dimmer_darker with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
     "I pull back the curtain to reveal that a thick Sunday fog had rolled in overnight."
 
     "What time is it?"
-    
+
     "Guess I’ll check my phone{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
     show anonphone at scenter with easeinbottom
-    pause .5
 
     "Ten AM, huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    pause .5
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
-    pause .5
 
     "Damn, I slept a while."
     pause .5
@@ -115,6 +128,9 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "The XROX is still running, might as well finish Rock Ring."
 
     "It’ll take my mind off things at least."
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     scene black with Dissolve(1)
@@ -130,6 +146,9 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "Guess I’ll play the next one, I really don’t feel like doing anything else today."
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     scene room anon night alt with Dissolve(1)
@@ -139,15 +158,18 @@ label chapter_14A:
     pause .5
 
     "Really wish I could just float away in an iceberg like Master Grug after last night."
-    pause .5
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     show anonphone with easeinbottom
-    pause .5
+
     "I glance at my phone and realize I spent ten hours playing Rock Ring."
 
     "My mind was turned off for most of that, guess I just lost track of time."
 
-    pause .5
+    window hide
+    window auto
     show anon neutral behind anonphone:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5 alpha 0
         linear 0.5 alpha 1
@@ -169,6 +191,9 @@ label chapter_14A:
         easein_quart 1.5 xalign -0.1
     show anon fear with dissolve
     "Before I can search for my knife, the door opens to reveal{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     play music "audio/OST/appreciating_the_scenery.ogg" fadein 1.0
@@ -233,11 +258,14 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     show fang:
         ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.7
-    show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) 
+    show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "It isn’t, Anon."
 
     A "But-"
 
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
     show fang:
         easeout_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.0
     show fang neutral flip with dissolve
@@ -262,6 +290,9 @@ label chapter_14A:
     pause 1
 
     "{cps=*0.05}...{/cps}"
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 1
 
     "Sometime in the night the bed shifts."
@@ -274,6 +305,8 @@ label chapter_14A:
     pause .5
 
     "Eventually my internal clock wakes me up."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
     scene room anon day alt with Dissolve(2)
     pause .5
@@ -292,7 +325,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     "Oh shit, Fang and I are beyond late."
     pause .5
-    
+
     "Wait, where is Fang?"
 
     "Her backpack is gone, too."
@@ -322,20 +355,26 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     "This almost reads like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    pause .5
-    play music 'audio/ost/sage goes in all fields.ogg' fadein 0.5
     pause .5
 
     "The adrenaline pushes my feet back into a desperate bolt towards the school."
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     scene black with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
+    #Alexa, play In The House, In a Heartbeat
+    play ambient "audio/effects/windLightLoop.ogg" fadein 4
+    pause 5
+
     "The whole time my mind floods with horrid worst-case scenarios."
 
     "I tell myself I’m just worrying, but my mad sprint betrays the lie."
 
+    play ambient1 "audio/effects//teenageCrowdMurmurLoop.ogg" fadein 3
     scene outside school fog with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
@@ -353,13 +392,17 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "There’s just a fire in the school that scared people."
 
     "She’s in this crowd somewhere."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
-    stop music fadeout 0.5
-    play music1 'audio/ost/many such cases of being so true.ogg' fadein 0.5
     scene a02 with fade
     pause 1
 
+    stop ambient1 fadeout 3
+    play ambient2 'audio/effects/radioChatterLoop.ogg' fadein 3 volume 0.05
+    play ambient3 'audio/effects/hungrybeast.ogg' fadein 3 volume 0.1
+
     T "{b}YOU!!{/b}"
     pause 1
 
@@ -396,7 +439,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     T "LEAVE US ALREADY!!"
 
-    T "YOU SHOW UP, GET THEIR ATTENTION, AND NOW{cps=*.1}...{/cps} AND NOW{cps=*.1}...{/cps}!"
+    T "YOU SHOW UP, GET THEIR ATTENTION, AND NOW{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} AND NOW{cps=*.1}...{/cps}!"
 
     "She chucks her phone through the air."
 
@@ -404,16 +447,25 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     T "I WAS RIGHT ABOUT YOU THE WHOLE TIME!!"
 
-    T "I WAS RIGHT ABOUT YOU!! YOU!!"
+    T "I WAS RIGHT ABOUT YOU!!{w=.4} YOU!!"
 
     "By now her tirade becomes incomprehensible screaming."
     pause .5
 
     "A teacher has to hold her back and try directing her to a nearby curb to sit."
+    stop ambient3 fadeout 4
+    stop ambient2 fadeout 3
+    stop ambient fadeout 5
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 1
 
     scene black with Dissolve(2)
-    pause .5
+    pause 2
+
+    play ambient "audio/effects/windLightLoop.ogg" fadein 5
+    play ambient1 "audio/effects/teenageCrowdMurmurLoop.ogg" fadein 10
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I don’t have time for this."
 
@@ -423,12 +475,20 @@ label chapter_14A:
     pause .5
 
     "I turn around and dash away into the fog as Trish is being consoled by a group of students."
-    pause .5
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3, 'ambient')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3, 'ambient1')
 
-    stop music1 fadeout 4
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 3
+
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient1')
+    stop ambient1
+    play ambient "audio/effects/schoolSilentLoop.ogg" fadein 3
     scene hallway 
     show dimmer_lighter
-    with Dissolve(1)
+    with Dissolve(2)
     pause .5
 
     "The side door is still unlocked, and I’m able to slip in without being noticed."
@@ -442,12 +502,16 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "It’s third period now, Fang always talks about having to deal with Naomi in Econ."
 
     "That’s not on this floor, fuck!"
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     scene black with dissolve
     pause .5
 
     "I pause when I reach the stairwell upwards."
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 40, 'ambient')
     pause 1
 
     "I can’t say for sure what, but my instincts are screaming at me to not go up, to turn back now."
@@ -455,10 +519,11 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I can’t."
 
     "My hand lightly glides along the handrail while I cautiously cross the stairs to the second floor."
-    pause 1
 
-    play music 'audio/ost/sadist.ogg' fadein 0.5
-    pause 1.5
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 15, 'ambient')
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 2.5
 
     "The first thing that hits me is the smell."
     pause .5
@@ -466,6 +531,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "That electric, almost metallic stench of wet ozone."
 
     "I’ve never been in a real fight before, but even so{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 7, 'ambient')
 
     "It’s a smell everyone instinctively knows."
     pause .5
@@ -473,10 +539,15 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "I couldn’t tell what sound I made, because I frankly don’t remember."
 
     "All I will ever remember from this is the sight of my former classmates splattered across the halls like bags of waste."
+
+    stop ambient fadeout 2
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
-    scene a04 with Dissolve(2)
-    pause 2
+    scene a04 with Dissolve(4)
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient')
+    pause .5
 
     "The spills and trails of blood tell the story of their final moments."
     pause 1
@@ -489,7 +560,6 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     "And the last one, who tried fighting back, now clumped in the middle of the hallway soaked in the collective pooling blood."
     pause .5
-    stop music fadeout 4
     pause 1
 
     "It was Naser."
@@ -535,11 +605,17 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Guess she didn’t get that ‘perfect highschool life’ in the end."
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 1
 
-    scene black with dissolve
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
     pause 1
 
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0, 'ambient2')
+    play ambient "audio/effects/schoolSilentLoop.ogg" fadein 60 volume 0.8
+
     "The stairs."
 
     "There’s only one place she can be."
@@ -575,6 +651,9 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "His hand makes a wet slap against the hard tiles one last time while I start up the stairs."
     pause 1
 
+    play ambient2 "audio/effects/policeSirensLoop.ogg"
+    play ambient1 "audio/effects/policeSirensReverbLoop.ogg" fadein 60 volume 0.8
+
     "Somehow, the remaining two flights of stairs have gained another several hundred steps."
     pause .5
 
@@ -628,34 +707,66 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "The doorknob is still cold on my hand."
 
     "I turn it and exit to the rooftop."
-    pause .5
 
-    image fangfog = im.Blur(im.MatrixColor("fang/emotive set/fang anguish.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1)), 1.5)
-    scene roof fog 
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3.5, 'ambient') #schoolSilentLoop
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3.5, 'ambient1') #policeSirenReverbLoop
+    pause 3
+
+    play sound "audio/effects/windStart.ogg" volume 1
+    show white
+    with Dissolve(1.5)
+    stop ambient #schoolSilentLoop
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0, 'ambient1') #policeSirenReverbLoop
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient3')
+    scene roof fog
     show fangfog:
         yanchor 0.5 xanchor 0.5
         ypos 0.6 xpos 0.5
         alpha 0.25 zoom 0.25
-    with Dissolve(2)
 
+    play ambient "audio/effects/windShooterLoop.ogg" fadein 5 volume 0.7
+    play ambient3 "audio/effects/radioChatterLoop.ogg" fadein 5 volume 0.3
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.5, 5, 'ambient2') #policeSirenLoop
+
+    show white
+    pause .5
+    hide white
+    with Dissolve(3)
     pause .5
 
     "In the dense morning fog the only thing to stand out is the silhouette."
 
     "One that I easily recognize."
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 1
 
+    stop ambient2 fadeout 5
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 5, 'ambient1') #policeSirenReverbLoop
+    scene shooterroof:
+        size(1920, 1080)
+    show fang silo1
+    with Dissolve(2)
+    pause 2
+
     A "Fang."
+    stop ambient3 fadeout 20
+    stop ambient1 fadeout 20
+    stop ambient fadeout 30
+    pause .5
 
     "She’s silent. I can’t even tell if she’s looking at me or not."
     pause .5
 
-    A "Fang, please. Say something."
+    A "Fang, please.{w=.4} Say something."
 
     "My legs feel leaden as I approach her."
-    pause .5
 
-    A "Fang. Come on. T-this is all{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    A "Fang.{w=.4} Come on.{w=.4} T-this is all{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "Slowly more and more details come to."
     pause .5
@@ -673,13 +784,47 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     "My fingers brush against her shoulder."
 
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3.5, 'ambient')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3.5, 'ambient1')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3.5, 'ambient2')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3.5, 'ambient3')
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 1.5
+
+    hide fang silo1
+    show fang silo2
+    with Dissolve(.75)
+    pause .5
+
+    hide fang silo2
+    show fang silo3
+    with Dissolve(.25)
+
     play sound "audio/effects/shottinnitus.ogg"
-    scene black with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color = "#ff0000")
+    scene fang shoot
+    pause 0.02
+
+    scene black
+    show red
+    show white
+    hide white with Dissolve(0.06)
+    show fang flash blurred:
+        alpha 0.3
+    hide red
+    with Dissolve(0.4)
+    hide fang flash blurred with Dissolve(2)
     pause 1
 
     A "{i}ARGH!{/i}"
     pause .5
 
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient1')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient2')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient3')
+
     "Hot, searing pain."
 
     "My left leg crumples under me."
@@ -688,14 +833,32 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "As I fall I see Fang’s beautiful amber eyes."
 
     "They’re red and puffy, with makeup-less tears running freely down her cheeks."
+    stop sound fadeout 7
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
-    scene a10 with Dissolve(2)
-    pause 1
+    play audio 'audio/effects/shooterWitnessed.ogg' volume 0.6
+    play ambient1 'audio/effects/hungrybeast.ogg' volume 0.05 fadein 2
+
+    scene shooterroof blurred:
+        size(1920,1080)
+    #Yes, this is necessary because renpy doesn't display images in the top left when it's not the default aspect ratio or something.
+    show fang shooter blurred:
+        ypos  0
+    with Dissolve(2)
+    pause 0.5
+
+    scene shooterroof:
+        size(1920, 1080)
+    show fang shooter:
+        ypos  0
+    with Dissolve(2)
 
     F "A-Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps} WHY ARE YOU-!"
 
-    A "Aaaah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} haaaah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps} why{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?"
+    A "Aaaah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} haaaah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} why{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?"
 
     F "Y-you weren’t supposed to be here!"
     pause .5
@@ -703,7 +866,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     F "You shouldn’t have come here!"
     pause .5
 
-    A "Fuck{cps=*.1}...{/cps} because{cps=*.1}...{/cps} because I love you! Haaaaaah."
+    A "Fuck{cps=*.1}...{/cps} because{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} because I love you!{w=.4} Haaaaaah."
     pause .5
 
     "I struggle to balance on my left leg. The hole in my shin dribbles blood down to the floor."
@@ -711,8 +874,28 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "I don’t care though."
     pause .5
 
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.2, 0, 'ambient')
+
     "I hobble forward."
-    pause .5
+
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/deepLoop.ogg' fadein 10
+    play sound 'audio/effects/shooterAnonStep.ogg' volume 0.7
+
+    scene shooterroof:
+        size(1920, 1080)
+        xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+        ease 1 zoom 1.04
+    show fang shooter:
+        ypos 0
+        xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.396 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+        ease 1 zoom 1.04
+    pause 1
+
+    show fang shooter:
+        ypos 0
+        xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.396 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+        ease 1 zoom 1
+    pause 1
 
     "Fang steps back."
 
@@ -725,18 +908,67 @@ label chapter_14A:
     pause .5
 
     "A painful step forward."
+    play sound 'audio/effects/shooterAnonStep.ogg'
+
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.4, 3, 'ambient')
+
+    scene shooterroof:
+        size(1920, 1080)
+        zoom 1.04
+        xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+        ease 1 zoom 1.08
+    show fang shooter:
+        ypos 0
+        xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.396 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+        ease 1 zoom 1.04
+    pause 1
+
+    show fang shooter:
+        ypos 0
+        xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.396 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+        ease 1 zoom 1
+    pause 1
 
     "She takes another back."
     pause .5
 
     F "Anon!"
 
-    A "Just come downstairs with me{cps=*.1}...{/cps} It’s not over, it doesn’t have to be this wa-"
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 6, 'ambient')
+
+    A "Just come downstairs with me{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} It’s not over, it doesn’t have to be this wa-{w=.4}{nw}"
+
+    window hide Dissolve(0.02)
+    window auto
 
     # HL gib sound
-    scene black with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color = "#ff0000")
+    stop ambient fadeout 0.69
+    stop ambient1 fadeout 0.69
+    play sound "audio/effects/anonShooterFall.ogg" volume 0.8
+    scene shooterroof:
+        size(1920, 1080)
+        zoom 1.08
+        xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+        easeout_cubic 0.7 ypos 0.40 zoom 1.20
+    show fang shooter:
+        ypos 0
+        xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.396 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+        easeout_cubic 0.7 ypos 0.25 zoom 1.20
+    show red:
+        alpha 0
+        linear .1 alpha 0.25
+        easein .5 alpha 0
+    pause 0.65
+
+    scene black with Fade(.05, 0, .4, color = "#ff0000")
+    pause 0.5
+
     "With a crunch, my shin gives out completely, lurching me forward onto my hands and knees."
-    pause 1
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    pause 2
 
     "I have to keep going."
 
@@ -756,31 +988,34 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "It brings some clarity to my mind."
 
     "Enough that I can drag myself forward."
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
-    image red = "#ff0000"
-    scene a10 
-    show red:
-        alpha 0
-        block:
-            easeout_cubic 0.4 alpha 0.1
-            pause .1
-            easein_cubic 0.4 alpha 0
-            pause .75
-            repeat
+    play sound 'audio/effects/shooterAnonStep.ogg'
+    play ambient2 'audio/effects/hungrybeast.ogg' volume 0.1 fadein 1.5
+    play ambient "audio/effects/heartbeat.ogg" loop fadein 3 volume 0.2
+    show blurring_shooterroof:
+        size(1920,1080)
+        xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+        zoom 1.08
+    show blurring_shooter:
+        ypos 0
     show dimmer_lighter:
-        alpha 0
+        alpha 1
         block:
-            ease_quad 2.5 alpha 1
             ease_quad 2.5 alpha 0
+            ease_quad 2.5 alpha 1
             repeat
-
     with Dissolve(1)
     pause 1
 
     A "Please, come down with me."
 
-    F "Oh-oh god. Oh my god. S-stop{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    play ambient1 "audio/effects/deepLoop.ogg" fadein 50
+
+    F "Oh-oh god.{w=.4} Oh my god.{w=.4} S-stop{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
     "The sharp bone pokes and tears through my leg muscle."
@@ -799,7 +1034,54 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "I can still fix this."
 
     "I can still save her."
-    pause .5
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/shooterFinalReach.ogg'
+    hide dimmer_lighter
+    show shooterroof blurred:
+        size(1920,1080)
+        xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+        zoom 1.08
+    show fang shooter blurred:
+        ypos 0
+    show dimmer_lighter:
+        alpha 1
+    with Dissolve(1)
+
+    show shooterroof blurred:
+        size(1920, 1080)
+        xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+        zoom 1.08
+        ease 1 zoom 1.12
+    show fang shooter blurred:
+        ypos 0
+        xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.396 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+        ease 1 zoom 1.04
+    pause 1
+
+    show fang shooter blurred:
+        ypos 0
+        xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.396 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+        ease 1 zoom 1
+    pause 1
+
+    hide shooterroof blurred
+    hide fang shooter blurred
+    hide dimmer_lighter
+    show blurring_shooterroof:
+        size(1920,1080)
+        xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+        zoom 1.12
+    show blurring_shooter:
+        ypos 0
+    show dimmer_lighter:
+        alpha 1
+        block:
+            ease_quad 2.5 alpha 0
+            ease_quad 2.5 alpha 1
+            repeat
 
     "Fang keeps backing away as I try to get closer, remaining out of my reach."
     pause .5
@@ -814,11 +1096,21 @@ label chapter_14A:
     pause 1
 
     "End of the line."
+    window hide
 
-    hide red 
+    stop ambient fadeout 3
     hide dimmer_lighter
-    with Dissolve(2)
+    hide blurring_shooterroof
+    hide blurring_shooter
+    scene shooterroof:
+        size(1920,1080)
+        xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+        zoom 1.12
+    show fang shooter:
+        ypos 0
+    with Dissolve(3)
 
+    window auto
     A "Fang."
 
     A "Look at me."
@@ -841,11 +1133,14 @@ label chapter_14A:
     pause .5
 
     "We stare for an eternity, all through the police’s screaming below."
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
+    stop ambient2 fadeout 10
     scene black with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
-
     "Fang looks below once more, down the three story drop to the walkway below."
 
     "The walkway we’d passed through so many times to get to classes without a second thought."
@@ -854,6 +1149,9 @@ label chapter_14A:
     pause 1
 
     A "Please{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause .5
 
     scene a11 with Dissolve(2)
@@ -865,32 +1163,67 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "The sides of her mouth curl into a warm smile."
     pause 1
 
-    "The last of her tears fall."
+    "The last of her tears falls."
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 2
 
-    scene a12 with dissolve
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3, 'ambient1')
+    scene shooterroof:
+        size(1920,1080)
+        #xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+        #zoom 1.12
+    with Dissolve(3)
+    stop ambient1
+    pause 1
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient1')
+
     "She jumps."
     pause .5
 
     A "{i}Fang!{/i}"
-    pause 2
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    play sound 'audio/effects/shooterFangJumps.ogg' volume 0.7
+    pause 6
 
     "I can’t look over."
     pause .5
 
     "I don’t want to see it."
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 2
 
     "The authorities betray my final wish of death by bursting through the door at that exact minute."
     pause .5
 
     "I drift into unconsciousness when they start wrapping my leg."
-    pause 1
 
-    scene black with Dissolve(3)
-    pause 2
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 1
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient2')
+    play ambient "audio/effects/windShooterLoop.ogg" fadein 4 volume 0.2
+    play ambient1 "audio/effects/radioChatterLoop.ogg" fadein 4 volume 0.4
+    play ambient2 "audio/effects/policeSirensReverbLoop.ogg" fadein 4 volume 0.3
+    scene black with Dissolve(5)
+    stop ambient fadeout 12
+    stop ambient1 fadeout 10
+    stop ambient2 fadeout 8
+    stop sound fadeout 4
+    pause 5
 
     "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 2
 
     "Three weeks pass."
@@ -920,8 +1253,15 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "I got discharged just yesterday."
 
     "I’ll need to stay on a crutch for a few months, but that’s hardly the wound I'm worried about."
-    pause 1
 
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
+
+    play sound "audio/effects/rainStart.ogg"
+    pause 7.2
+
+    play ambient "audio/effects/rainLoop.ogg" fadein 1
     scene a13 with Dissolve(3)
     pause 2
 
@@ -934,6 +1274,9 @@ label chapter_14A:
     pause .5
 
     "So I wait out of sight several hundreds of feet away for the remaining family members to trickle out of the crowd and go home."
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 2
 
     scene a14a with Dissolve(2)
@@ -950,17 +1293,22 @@ label chapter_14A:
     pause 1
 
     "Eventually, he too leaves."
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 1
 
+    stop ambient fadeout 5
+    play ambient1 "audio/effects/drizzleLoop.ogg" fadein 3
+    play ambient2 "audio/effects/windLightLoop.ogg" fadein 3
     scene a15 with Fade(2, .5, 2)
     pause 2
 
     "The alternations of footsteps and the crutch make me feel more mechanical than human."
 
     "Then again, that may be true regardless of having a crutch."
-    pause 1
 
-    scene a14 with Dissolve(3)
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 2
 
     "The two graves are right next to each other."
@@ -981,6 +1329,9 @@ label chapter_14A:
     pause 1
 
     "They buried her using her real name."
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 2
 
     "God damn it."
@@ -1018,13 +1369,19 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "My final plea to Fang races through my head."
     pause .5
 
-    # B: commented this stuff from the original game out so you can decide how to do your thing
-    # play sound "audio/effects/wind.ogg" loop volume 0.3
+    stop ambient1 fadeout 10
+    stop ambient2 fadeout 20
+    play ambient "audio/effects/windShooterLoop.ogg" fadein 20
+
     "{i}{cps=*.3}Don’t leave me alone.{/cps}{/i}"
     pause 1
 
     "I just feel completely and utterly and hopelessly alone."
-    pause 2
+
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3, 'ambient1')
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 3
 
     "The sprinkling rain stops."
 
@@ -1041,25 +1398,28 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "So now, I’m back to being nobody."
 
     "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     pause 2
 
     "It’s better this way."
     $ quick_menu = False
     window hide
+    
+    stop ambient fadeout 20
 
-    pause 4
+    pause 7
 
-    # B: this track is absurdly quiet
-    # play music "audio/OST/Sad!.ogg" fadein 1.0 volume 2.8 noloop
+    
+    scene black with Dissolve(10.0)
+    pause 2.5
+    play music "audio/OST/Sad!.ogg" fadein 15.0 volume 2.8 noloop
+    scene 1of4 with Dissolve(9.0)
+    pause 11
 
-    stop sound fadeout 4
-    scene black with Dissolve(4)
-    pause 2
+    stop music fadeout 22
+    scene black with Dissolve(17.0)
+    pause 5
 
-    scene 1of4 with Dissolve(2)
-    pause
-
-    scene black with Dissolve(3)
-    pause 2
-
-    return
+    return

game/script/14B.bad-ending.rpy

@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ label chapter_14B:
 
     "As I walk through the front of the building I feel the burning bright light of the setting sun searing my eyes."
 
-    # play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoor ambience.ogg' fadein 3
+    # play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorLoop.ogg' fadein 3
     scene white with dissolve
     A "Argh, fuck! It’s like getting skullfucked by one of Stony’s light bars!"
     pause .5
@@ -327,7 +327,7 @@ label chapter_14B:
     window hide
     pause 2
 
-    scene 2of4 with Dissolve(2)
+    scene e2of4 with Dissolve(2)
     pause
 
     scene black with Dissolve(3)

game/script/14C.good-ending.rpy

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 label chapter_14C:
     #Volcano Highschool Musical
-    scene black with fade 
+    scene black with fade
 
     "{cps=*0.2}-- Three years later --{/cps}"
 
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
     play music "audio/OST/intercept.ogg" fadein 1.0
     Lucy "ANON!{w=0.2} YOU REMEMBERED!"
 
-    scene c02
+    scene c02 with dissolve
 
     "What."
 
@@ -92,13 +92,13 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     # A "{i}Us both. Better persons.{/i}"
 
-    # F "{i}Ok.{/i}"
+    # Lucy "{i}Ok.{/i}"
 
-    # F "{i}I'll be a better person.{/i}"
+    # Lucy "{i}I'll be a better person.{/i}"
 
-    # F "{i}But you have to promise me something too.{/i}"
+    # Lucy "{i}But you have to promise me something too.{/i}"
 
-    # F "{i}That you'll come back.{/i}"
+    # Lucy "{i}That you'll come back.{/i}"
 
     # "{i}I mutter.{/i}"
 
@@ -106,13 +106,14 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     # "{i}She mutters.{/i}"
 
-    # F "{i}Ok. Good.{/i}"
+    # Lucy "{i}Ok. Good.{/i}"
 
     # "{i}It's settled, then.{/i}"
 
+    stop music fadeout 1.0
+
     A "That I’d come back and be with you. How could I forget?"
 
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
     play music "audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
     "I finally have a chance to take Lucy in."
@@ -208,7 +209,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     "Lucy’s giggles slowly melt away and a trickling tear leaves from her eye."
     play music "audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg" fadein 1.0
-    show fang c sad4 flip
+    show fang c sad4 flip with dissolve
 
     Lucy "You’re really back…"
 
@@ -223,33 +224,33 @@ label chapter_14C:
     Lucy "Of course. That promise means the world to me, Anon."
 
     "We stay embraced in the hot sun for just a moment longer before I let go again."
-    
+
 
     "Lucy’s gaze lingers on the children, her eyebrows knit together in contemplation."
     show fang c happy flip with dissolve
-    F "Look at them, Anon."
+    Lucy "Look at them, Anon."
 
     "Fang points toward the kids screaming and falling over each other."
 
-    F "We were all like this at some point."
+    Lucy "We were all like this at some point."
 
     A "Stupid?"
 
-    F "Yeah- no, I mean careless.{w=0.2} Innocent."
+    Lucy "Yeah- no, I mean careless.{w=0.2} Innocent."
 
     A "Suppose we were."
 
     "She lets out a sigh."
 
-    F "One day they’re gonna start thinking and doing all the wrong things we thought and did when we were teenagers..."
+    Lucy "One day they’re gonna start thinking and doing all the wrong things we thought and did when we were teenagers..."
 
-    F "I wish I could stop it from happening. They're perfect just like this."
+    Lucy "I wish I could stop it from happening. They're perfect just like this."
 
     A "Kids can be, mean to each other."
 
-    F "But not cruel.{w=0.4} The world makes them cruel."
+    Lucy "But not cruel.{w=0.4} The world makes them cruel."
 
-    F "Until then...{w=0.3}they're free. We gotta protect their freedom. Save them from our mistakes."
+    Lucy "Until then...{w=0.3}they're free. We gotta protect their freedom. Save them from our mistakes."
 
     "That’s quite a statement to hear from her."
 
@@ -259,36 +260,36 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "I'm glad to see you're doing good. How’s everyone else?"
 
-    F "Everyone else?"
+    Lucy "Everyone else?"
 
     A "Y’know, Naser, Trish, Naomi, Reed, all those guys?"
 
-    F "Oh!{w=0.3} Naser went to medical school..."
+    Lucy "Oh!{w=0.3} Naser went to medical school..."
 
     "She closes her eyes as though trying to recall a lost memory."
 
-    F "I haven’t seen Naomi, though."
+    Lucy "I haven’t seen Naomi, though."
 
     A "And the others?"
 
-    F "Haven't seen them since either."
+    Lucy "Haven't seen them since either."
 
     pause 0.5
-    F "But you’re here now!"
+    Lucy "But you’re here now!"
 
-    F "And now that you’re back, I’m never letting you go again."
+    Lucy "And now that you’re back, I’m never letting you go again."
 
     A "I’m not going anywhere… {w=0.3}Sweet Tooth."
 
     "Lucy rolls her eyes."
 
-    F "You know, if you had said that back then I’d have hit you."
+    Lucy "You know, if you had said that back then I’d have hit you."
 
     A "Yeah, and then I’d have just done it again because you’re cute when you’re annoyed."
 
     A "I guess we’ve both changed since then."
 
-    F "Oh yeah?{w=0.3} How so?"
+    Lucy "Oh yeah?{w=0.3} How so?"
 
     A "I mean, when I first enrolled I had every intention of just laying low and not sticking out."
 
@@ -296,13 +297,13 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "As long as I didn’t get bullied any more, I was glad to just blend in."
 
-    F "Guess that plan fell apart."
+    Lucy "Guess that plan fell apart."
 
     A "It did, yeah."
 
     A "I kinda blame you for that development."
 
-    F "Ha{w=0.3}, I made you care about people."
+    Lucy "Ha{w=0.3}, I made you care about people."
 
     A "You did."
 
@@ -312,7 +313,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "I'd love to check out the town, see what else is different."
 
-    F "I’d love to! I’ll go ask, I might get a few minutes to step away."
+    Lucy "I’d love to! I’ll go ask, I might get a few minutes to step away."
 
     A "Yeah, and we could go and check Volcano High again, for old time's sake."
 
@@ -320,7 +321,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     "She freezes for a second."
 
-    F "I-I’d rather not Volcano High.{w=0.3} Too many bad memories."
+    Lucy "I-I’d rather not Volcano High.{w=0.3} Too many bad memories."
 
     scene black with fade
 
@@ -330,11 +331,11 @@ label chapter_14C:
     show fang c happy flip at scenter with dissolve
     show anonc neutral at aleft with dissolve
 
-    F "They said I deserve it after a hard day's work."
+    Lucy "They said I deserve it after a hard day's work."
 
     A "You do look exhausted dealing with the ankle biters."
 
-    F "Not at all! {w=0.3}Truth be told, Anon. I love doing what I do."
+    Lucy "Not at all! {w=0.3}Truth be told, Anon. I love doing what I do."
 
     scene black with fade
 
@@ -342,137 +343,140 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     scene c04 with fade
     stop music fadeout 1.0
-    play ambient "audio/effects/beach loop 2.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    play ambient "audio/effects/beachLoop2.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "Catching up with Lucy was the happiest I felt in years, the memories came rushing back as we walked under the hot sun."
-    play music "audio/OST/appreciating_the_scenery.ogg" fadein 1.0
+
     A "So you don’t know at all how Reed and Trish are doing?"
 
-    F "OH! {w=0.3}...When was the last time I spoke with them…?"
+    Lucy "OH! {w=0.3}...When was the last time I spoke with them…?"
 
     A "Hope Trish is alright, the two of you were friends for the longest time."
 
-    F "I guess I… {w=0.3}Didn’t feel the need to see them again?"
+    Lucy "I guess I… {w=0.3}Didn’t feel the need to see them again?"
 
-    F "Looking back, they were terrible influences."
+    Lucy "Looking back, they were terrible influences."
 
     A "I guess so..."
     pause 0.5
     A "And Stella and Rosa?"
 
-    F "Haven't seen them either."
+    Lucy "Haven't seen them either."
 
     A "Seems weird, considering Rosa was of such help to us."
 
-    F "Don't get me wrong, Anon. I love what Rosa did for me, Naser and you, but I guess I...{w=0.3}just didn't need to see her anymore."
+    Lucy "Don't get me wrong, Anon. I love what Rosa did for me, Naser and you, but I guess I...{w=0.3}just didn't need to see her anymore."
 
-    F "I didn't want to see anyone else, for that matter."
+    Lucy "I didn't want to see anyone else, for that matter."
 
-    F "You must've had friends in the army, back at rock bottom, or even before that, right?"
+    Lucy "You must've had friends in the army, back at rock bottom, or even before that, right?"
 
-    F "They're gone from your life too, there's nothing wrong with that."
+    Lucy "They're gone from your life too, there's nothing wrong with that."
 
     A "Haven't you looked for them?"
 
-    F "I don't want to."
+    Lucy "I don't want to."
 
     "The scenery here seems familiar..."
 
     "Oh, this is my old path to school. Maybe I will get to see it after all."
 
-    F "L-let's turn away. {w=0.3}To Moe's, or somewhere."
+    Lucy "L-let's turn away. {w=0.3}To Moe's, or somewhere."
 
     A "Aww, I wanted to see the school again though."
 
-    F "NO, Anon."
+    Lucy "NO, Anon."
 
     A "..."
 
-    F "Seems like we just repeat each other, I get upset over nothing, and I apologize."
+    Lucy "Seems like we just repeat each other, I get upset over nothing, and I apologize."
 
-    F "Sorry, I just… {w=0.3}don't want to remember Volcano High, I just…"
+    Lucy "Sorry, I just… {w=0.3}don't want to remember Volcano High, I just…"
     pause 0.3
-    F "I did too much dumb stuff there, you know?"
+    Lucy "I did too much dumb stuff there, you know?"
 
-    F "I just want to forget all that happened."
+    Lucy "I just want to forget all that happened."
 
     A "Moe’s is fine, too. I do want to see how that fossil is doing."
 
-    F "Er,{w=0.2} actually, Moe retired! He sold his franchise."
+    Lucy "Er,{w=0.2} actually, Moe retired! He sold his franchise."
 
     A "Oh. Well, we can still go check it out."
 
-    stop ambient fadeout 2.0
+    stop ambient fadeout 2
 
-    scene outside moes
+    play ambient1 "audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg" fadein 1.0
+
+    scene outside moes with dissolve
 
     "It took a while to get there, getting to be nearly five when we arrived at Moe's, we ordered our usual and picked a table."
 
-    scene moes pizza
+
     show anonc neutral at aleft
     show fang c happy flip at sright
-    with fade
-    play ambient "audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    with dissolve
+
     "I can see the old piano in my peripheral vision."
 
     A "I’ve been asking so much about what you’re doing now, but what happened while I was away?"
     play music "audio/OST/Appreciating the atmosphere.ogg" fadein 1.0
-    F "I remembered your promise."
+    stop ambient1 fadeout 3
+    Lucy "I remembered your promise."
 
     show fang c sad flip with dissolve
 
-    F "I tried improving myself, like, really tried."
+    Lucy "I tried improving myself, like, really tried."
 
-    F "But things kept getting difficult. For a while I gave up."
+    Lucy "But things kept getting difficult. For a while I gave up."
 
-    F "There were times I’d cry. I would think back to when you were here and miss you so much."
+    Lucy "There were times I’d cry. I would think back to when you were here and miss you so much."
 
-    F "I...{w=0.3}don't wanna worry you with the details of what I did during that time, but…"
+    Lucy "I...{w=0.3}don't wanna worry you with the details of what I did during that time, but…"
 
-    F "I guess I realized something."
+    Lucy "I guess I realized something."
 
-    F "All this time I was a huge dick to my family, I idealized things too much and lashed out at them for not being on the same page as me."
+    Lucy "All this time I was a huge dick to my family, I idealized things too much and lashed out at them for not being on the same page as me."
 
-    F "I wanted to be a rockstar, so I wanted them to behave a certain way I think it would fit for that lifestyle."
+    Lucy "I wanted to be a rockstar, so I wanted them to behave a certain way I think it would fit for that lifestyle."
 
-    F "I was being unfair and unrealistic towards them, I wanted them to hate me and somehow that was gonna further my career."
+    Lucy "I was being unfair and unrealistic towards them, I wanted them to hate me and somehow that was gonna further my career."
 
-    F "Looked like it worked for a lot of famous people."
+    Lucy "Looked like it worked for a lot of famous people."
 
-    F "I didn't want to make my family sad anymore, so I just did what I've always should have done and learned to love them, to thank them for all they did for me."
+    Lucy "I didn't want to make my family sad anymore, so I just did what I've always should have done and learned to love them, to thank them for all they did for me."
 
     A "So you kept playing? I'd love to see what else you've composed over the years. I'm sure it's great."
 
     show fang c sad2 flip with dissolve
 
-    F "No...{w=0.3}I just gave that up."
+    Lucy "No...{w=0.3}I just gave that up."
 
     A "What?{w=0.2} Really?{w=0.1} It was such a huge part of you!"
 
     show fang c sad3 flip with dissolve
 
-    F "I didn't need it anymore, plus it reminded me too much of Trish, I've put away the instruments somewhere and never played anything ever again."
+    Lucy "I didn't need it anymore, plus it reminded me too much of Trish, I've put away the instruments somewhere and never played anything ever again."
 
     A "Then what have you been doing all these years?"
 
     show fang c sad4 flip with dissolve
 
-    F "Dad needed help with a charity event, he bought food and he needed me to help him carry it around since Naser was away in college."
+    Lucy "Dad needed help with a charity event, he bought food and he needed me to help him carry it around since Naser was away in college."
 
-    F "I thought it was just going to be a boring evening with a bunch of brats, but I saw something..."
+    Lucy "I thought it was just going to be a boring evening with a bunch of brats, but I saw something..."
 
-    F "I saw the children, they ran around me, they offered me toys to play with, I joined them."
+    Lucy "I saw the children, they ran around me, they offered me toys to play with, I joined them."
 
-    F "I lifted them from the ground, some clung to my legs as I moved about-"
+    Lucy "I lifted them from the ground, some clung to my legs as I moved about-"
 
-    F "No one ever played with me like that, no one ever approached me like that, it was so pure, so innocent."
+    Lucy "No one ever played with me like that, no one ever approached me like that, it was so pure, so innocent."
 
-    A "Should have shown them a picture of you in your high school clothes"
+    A "Should have shown them a picture of you in your high school clothes."
 
     show fang c happy flip with dissolve
 
-    F "THAT would be hilarious."
+    Lucy "THAT would be hilarious."
 
-    F "But yeah, I enjoyed my time with the children so much...{w=0.3}I asked around in my church and eventually I got a gig dealing with preschoolers."
+    Lucy "But yeah, I enjoyed my time with the children so much...{w=0.3}I asked around in my church and eventually I got a gig dealing with preschoolers."
 
     "She looks so happy right now. I feel like I would ruin the mood to bring up Trish, Reed and the others again."
 
@@ -482,11 +486,11 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     "She just smiles and gives a small laugh."
 
-    F "The amount of guys I had to tell that my boyfriend was just deployed and coming home soon…"
+    Lucy "The amount of guys I had to tell that my boyfriend was just deployed and coming home soon…"
 
     "She begins stroking my hand on the table."
 
-    F "Anon,{w=0.3} I’d never forget about you or our promise."
+    Lucy "Anon,{w=0.3} I’d never forget about you or our promise."
 
     "Part of me is glad she's saying this to me, but I still have too many questions."
 
@@ -500,74 +504,74 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     show fang c happy with dissolve
 
-    F "What about it?"
+    Lucy "What about it?"
 
     A "You think they’d let us play it?"
 
-    F "I don't know, it's probably out of tune..."
+    Lucy "I don't know, it's probably out of tune..."
 
     A "Might be worth a shot, come on."
 
-    F "But you can't play..."
+    Lucy "But you can't play..."
 
     A "Then {i}you{/i} play."
-    stop ambient fadeout 20.0
+    stop music fadeout 10.0
     scene c05 with fade
 
     "As we sit by the piano, I think she understands why I'm teasing her like that."
 
     "I open the lid, the keys look rather pristine."
 
-    F "Anon, I-"
+    Lucy "Anon, I-"
 
     "Her fingers lightly roll across the keys."
 
     "She retracts herself."
 
-    F "I haven't played in a long time...{w=0.3}I don't know if I can still do it."
+    Lucy "I haven't played in a long time...{w=0.3}I don't know if I can still do it."
 
     A "I bet you still remember how to do it."
 
     "She positions her hands just above the keys."
 
-    F "I haven't done this in years.{w=0.3} I don't even know which song to play."
+    Lucy "I haven't done this in years.{w=0.3} I don't even know which song to play."
 
     A "I wanna see you play, that's all. I wanna hear you after all this time away."
 
-    F "Alright."
+    Lucy "Alright."
 
     "She gave out a sigh, but then..."
 
-    F "What to play?"
+    Lucy "What to play?"
 
     "Her eyes seem to glimmer for a moment."
 
-    F "I know."
+    Lucy "I know."
 
     play music 'audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance - Piano.ogg' fadein 3.0
 
-    F "Remember this?"
+    Lucy "Remember this?"
 
-    F "It was our song, remember?"
+    Lucy "It was our song, remember?"
 
-    F "We made it together."
+    Lucy "We made it together."
 
-    F "Ha!{w=0.3} I still got it!"
+    Lucy "Ha!{w=0.3} I still got it!"
 
-    F "I always thought of this melody when I thought about you..."
+    Lucy "I always thought of this melody when I thought about you..."
 
-    F "Guess I never forgot how to do it. Thought I'd be rusty with the piano."
+    Lucy "Guess I never forgot how to do it. Thought I'd be rusty with the piano."
 
     A "You play beautifully."
 
-    F "...Thank you..."
+    Lucy "...Thank you..."
     stop music fadeout 1.0
 
     "I sit closer to Lucy, she rests her head on my shoulder. Her hands are still resting on the keys, eager to play again."
     play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 1.0
     A "You shouldn't have abandoned music."
 
-    F "..."
+    Lucy "..."
 
     "We talked about what we would do now, especially since it was getting dark outside and the street lights were coming on."
 
@@ -577,24 +581,27 @@ label chapter_14C:
     show fang c sad flip at sright
     with fade
 
-    F "I don't know, Anon!{w=0.2} It's just so WEIRD!{w=0.2} A music teacher?"
+    Lucy "I don't know, Anon!{w=0.2} It's just so WEIRD!{w=0.2} A music teacher?"
 
     A "I don't know, Fang, it could be cool if you tried."
 
     "Fang is shivering, the colder air setting in."
 
     A "Here, this'll get you warmer."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     hide anonc
     hide fang
     show c06 at center
     with dissolve
+    pause 1
 
     "I draw Lucy close to my chest."
 
     "She snuggles up to me."
 
-    F "Thank you."
+    Lucy "Thank you."
 
     "She's precious. Being taller now, I guess the animal part of my brain is telling me to protect my smaller and more fragile mate."
 
@@ -602,45 +609,48 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     "Lucy stirs. She doesn’t like the idea."
 
-    F "Anon...{w=0.3}please don't ask me to do that.{w=0.3} I'm not ready."
+    Lucy "Anon...{w=0.3}please don't ask me to do that.{w=0.3} I'm not ready."
 
     A "How are you not ready?"
 
-    F "I lied, Anon. Ok?"
+    Lucy "I lied, Anon. Ok?"
 
-    F "I lied, I disappointed you, I promised I would get better, but you're clearly not happy with how I turned out."
+    Lucy "I lied, I disappointed you, I promised I would get better, but you're clearly not happy with how I turned out."
 
     A "Nonsense, you have no idea how proud I am of you."
 
-    F "I'm still broken, Anon."
+    Lucy "I'm still broken, Anon."
 
-    F "I’ve even started preening again because I had no one, but remembering I promised you and Naser I wouldn't do it anymore hurt even more so."
+    Lucy "I’ve even started preening again because I had no one, but remembering I promised you and Naser I wouldn't do it anymore hurt even more so."
 
-    F "But that was years ago. I swear, I tried getting better."
+    Lucy "But that was years ago. I swear, I tried getting better."
 
-    F "Forgive me."
+    Lucy "Forgive me."
 
     "I'm the one sighing this time."
 
     A "..."
 
-    F "You wanted me to live my own life, be this great person you wanted me to be, yet I'm here doing menial church tasks and dealing with children."
+    Lucy "You wanted me to live my own life, be this great person you wanted me to be, yet I'm here doing menial church tasks and dealing with children."
 
-    F "I got no friends, no new songs, nothing going on for me."
+    Lucy "I got no friends, no new songs, nothing going on for me."
 
-    F "I know I needed to be a famous musician to make you happy, I know I needed to have forgiven Trish and the others, but it just didn't work out.{w=0.3} I couldn't do it."
+    Lucy "I know I needed to be a famous musician to make you happy, I know I needed to have forgiven Trish and the others, but it just didn't work out.{w=0.3} I couldn't do it."
 
-    F "I'm lonely, Anon.{w=0.3} You're all that's left for me."
+    Lucy "I'm lonely, Anon.{w=0.3} You're all that's left for me."
 
     A "You didn't need to be all that to be happy, I still think you're the best."
 
     A "Forget it, Lucy. What's done is done. We're here."
 
     A "That's all it matters."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     hide c06
     show c07
     with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
     "I embrace her, I could tell she was getting tense, but slowly she relaxes in my arms."
 
@@ -648,30 +658,31 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "I'm here."
 
-    F "And I still can't believe it."
+    Lucy "And I still can't believe it."
 
     "Lucy is shaking with excitement in my arms now."
 
-    F "I already am thinking up all kinds of things we could do!"
+    Lucy "I already am thinking up all kinds of things we could do!"
 
-    F "Fuck, just knowing I won't see you until tomorrow already hurts me."
+    Lucy "Fuck, just knowing I won't see you until tomorrow already hurts me."
 
-    F "I can take you to see Mom and Dad!{w=0.1} Right now!{w=0.1} They would get a kick out of seeing you like this."
+    Lucy "I can take you to see Mom and Dad!{w=0.1} Right now!{w=0.1} They would get a kick out of seeing you like this."
 
     A "Ah!{w=0.3} Not right now. That would be too much for them to take in."
 
     A "And I have to unpack too, I got a little room in a motel for now."
 
-    F "Would you like some help?"
+    Lucy "Would you like some help?"
 
     "I thought to deny her, but Lucy’s eyes are pleading with me to say yes."
 
     A "I’ve got quite a bit, you sure Lucy?"
 
-    F "All the more reason for me to help!"
+    Lucy "All the more reason for me to help!"
 
     A "...Alright then. My motel isn’t too far from here."
-    play ambient "audio/effects/apartment loop.ogg" fadein 5.0
+    play ambient "audio/effects/apartmentLoop.ogg" fadein 5.0
+    stop music fadeout 5
     scene apartment morning with dissolve
 
     "I wasn’t kidding when I said I had a lot to unpack."
@@ -694,9 +705,9 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "Mmm… {w=0.3}How about we get some breakfast? My treat."
 
-    F "A breakfast date sounds nice."
+    Lucy "A breakfast date sounds nice."
 
-    F "Say, how about we invite my family. I’m sure mom would love to see you again."
+    Lucy "Say, how about we invite my family. I’m sure mom would love to see you again."
 
     "Probably would, too. However…"
 
@@ -704,34 +715,37 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     "I grin as I watch Lucy’s face turn beet red."
 
-    F "You were never this smooth a talker, Anon…"
+    Lucy "You were never this smooth a talker, Anon…"
 
-    F "Fine. But I definitely want them to see you."
+    Lucy "Fine. But I definitely want them to see you."
 
     A "Tomorrow then?"
 
-    F "Tomorrow."
+    Lucy "Tomorrow."
 
-    F "I'll tell them first! Get them hyped to see you!"
+    Lucy "I'll tell them first! Get them hyped to see you!"
 
     A "That would be great. So...{w=0.3}tomorrow then?"
 
-    F "Tomorrow, yes."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
+    Lucy "Tomorrow, yes."
     stop ambient fadeout 1.0
+    stop music fadeout 3
     scene city morning with fade
     play sound "audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance.ogg" fadein 3.0
     "We made our way towards her car door, but before getting in, she once again embraces me, this time a little stronger."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     show c09 with dissolve
+    pause 1
 
     A "Urgh-- {w=0.3}it's ok, Lucy."
 
-    F "I was so lonely, Anon."
+    Lucy "I was so lonely, Anon."
 
     A "You don't need to be alone, you know."
 
-    F "I'm so glad you're here. I missed you."
+    Lucy "I'm so glad you're here. I missed you."
 
     A "I missed you too, Lucy."
 
@@ -739,9 +753,12 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     $ quick_menu = False
     window hide
-    scene 3of4 with fade
-    stop music fadeout 15.0
+    scene e3of4 with fade
+    stop sound fadeout 15.0
     pause 16
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 2, 'sound')
     scene black with fade
     pause 1
+    stop sound
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'sound')
     return

game/script/14D.gold-ending.rpy

@@ -2,6 +2,8 @@ label chapter_14D:
     #Fast Times at Volcano High
 
     "{cps=*0.2}-- Five Years Later --{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorLoop.ogg' fadein 2
 
     "July seventeenth."
 
@@ -28,7 +30,11 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "But to see them again in person?"
     #renpy is jank so this doesn't do loop all that well buuut
     #play sound "audio/effects/teenageCrowdLoop.ogg" fadein 2.0
-    $renpy.sound.play("audio/effects/teenageCrowdLoop.ogg", loop=True, fadein=2.0)
+    #$renpy.sound.play("audio/effects/teenageCrowdLoop.ogg", loop=True, fadein=2.0)
+
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.8, 8, 'ambient')
+    play ambient2 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdMurmurLoop.ogg' volume 1.4 fadein 8.0
+
     pause 0.3
     "It’s the sounds that reach me first. The chatter of people milling about."
 
@@ -41,6 +47,10 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "I can make out the building now. I use the sleeve of my shirt to wipe the sweat from my eyes and brow."
 
     "I look at the name written on the arch over the entrance."
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.7, 0, 'ambient1')
+    stop ambient fadeout 2
+    stop ambient2 fadeout 2
+    play ambient1 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg' fadein 2.0
     scene outside school fog with fade
     "Volcano High."
 
@@ -54,8 +64,6 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     show anond neutral at aleft with dissolve
 
-    show reed future explanatory at rright with dissolve
-
     A "Yo, this the line?"
     show reed future explanatory flip at rright with dissolve:
         xalign 1.15
@@ -63,8 +71,11 @@ label chapter_14D:
     Re "Anon?"
     show reed future explanatory flip:
         ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.75
-    stop sound fadeout 1.0
+    stop ambient1 fadeout 1.0
     play music "audio/OST/Those Other Two Weirdos.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 1, 'ambient')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 1, 'ambient1')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 1, 'ambient2')
     "A hobo raptor at the top of the steps pulls his oversized shades down to peer at me."
 
     Re "Ayyy Anon, what’s up dude?"
@@ -128,8 +139,9 @@ label chapter_14D:
     scene reunion with fade
     A "Man, it really hasn’t changed. Takes me back."
     show anond neutral at aleft
-    show reed future explanatory flip at rright with dissolve:
+    show reed future explanatory flip at rright:
         xalign 1.15
+    with dissolve
 
     Re "Yeah, takes me back too, man."
 
@@ -190,6 +202,8 @@ label chapter_14D:
     A "Sorry to keep you so long, I’ll get out of here."
 
     N "Thanks for catching up, Anon. When I’m done here we can chat more."
+    stop music fadeout 3
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdInteriorLoop.ogg' fadein 3
 
     scene reunion
     show anond neutral at aleft
@@ -205,9 +219,16 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "I follow him over to the minibar. Trish is sitting in one of the seats, huddled over an empty glass."
 
-    show rosa future at scenter with dissolve
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
+    stop ambient fadeout 1
     play music "audio/OST/Ramo de Rosas.ogg" fadein 1.0
+
+    show rosa future flip at sright behind reed with easeinright:
+        xalign 0.75
+    pause .5
+
     "Rosa is pouring drinks for the few other drunkards when she spots us approach."
 
     Ro "Oh! An-on, it is great to see you after all this time!"
@@ -215,12 +236,16 @@ label chapter_14D:
     Ro "Please, sit and talk awhile!"
 
     A "Trish, glad we found you here!"
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
-    show reed future at rright with ease:
+    show reed future at rright:
         xalign 1.5
-    show rosa future flip at sright with ease:
+    show rosa future flip at sright:
         xalign 1.0
+    with ease
     show trish future neutral flip at tcenter with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
     "She looks up from her sulking and her face lights up at the sight of us."
 
@@ -279,6 +304,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
     Ro "Anything more than a regular piercing is an abomination before our Lord."
     show trish future unimpressed flip
     "I finish my drink and Reed downs his in one shot, tossing a few dollars on the counter."
+    stop music fadeout 2
 
     "I look up to see the one person I’m most anxious and excited to talk with again approaching."
 
@@ -287,7 +313,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
         xalign 0.1
     A "Fang! You’re here!"
     show fang d shock with easeinleft:
-     xalign -0.6
+     xalign -0.7
     F "Wha- {w=0.2}I- {w=0.2}dammit Anon, I told you to stop calling me that!"
 
     Re "Isn’t that the name Lucy used back in senior year?"
@@ -299,6 +325,10 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "Lucy covers her eyes with her hands."
     show fang d happy with dissolve
     F "You haven’t changed a bit, I swear."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    stop music fadeout 2
+    pause 2
 
     play music "audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
@@ -361,7 +391,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "She puts the mic back on its stand and jumps offstage."
 
     show fang d happy with easeinleft:
-     xalign -0.6
+     xalign -0.7
 
     "Reed pats my shoulder."
 
@@ -370,7 +400,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
     A "I can walk, but thanks."
 
     show fang d happy flip with dissolve:
-     xalign -0.6
+     xalign -0.7
     # pause 0.2
     hide fang d happy flip with easeoutleft
     "Lucy returns to the minibar, where Rosa is waiting with the last of the alcohol."
@@ -379,7 +409,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
     show rosa future flip at sright with easeinright:
         xalign 1.3
     show fang d happy with easeinleft:
-     xalign -0.6
+     xalign -0.7
 
     Re "Alright, great seeing you guys. I’ll bounce."
 
@@ -446,6 +476,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "Oh hey, they finally replaced the door."
     stop music fadeout 3.0
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/nightLoop.ogg' fadein 3
     label kino:
     scene roof night with fade
     show fang d neutral at sleft
@@ -553,6 +584,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "We chuckle together."
 
     play music "audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance - Demo.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    stop ambient fadeout 5
     A "Hey, Lucy…"
 
     "I keep my eyes on the stars, even when Lucy turns to look at me."
@@ -599,7 +631,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     F "You’re such a dweeb."
     #ENDING 4 THEME GOES HERE
-    stop music fadeout 2.0
+    stop music fadeout 1.0
     A "I know."
     #play music
     play music 'audio/OST/ending_14D.ogg' fadein 1.0
@@ -638,7 +670,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
     "Our lips meld together as we embrace just like we were teens again."
     $ quick_menu = False
     window hide
-    scene 4of4 with fade
+    scene e4of4 with fade
     stop music fadeout 15.0
     pause 16
     scene black with fade

game/script/2.fourth-day-of-school.rpy

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     "{cps=*0.2}-- Two Days Later --{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    "Alarm is off"
+    "Alarm is off."
     pause .5
 
     "You know the drill."
@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@ label chapter_2:
 
     "I should be getting to homeroom soon, too."
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 3
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/schoolLoop.ogg' fadein 3
     scene hallway
     show anon neutral flip at aright
     with Fade(1, 0, 1)
@@ -557,7 +557,7 @@ label chapter_2:
 
     show farnsworth at sright with dissolve
 
-    Drf "Hurry up Mr. Anon, your partner is waiting for you"
+    Drf "Hurry up Mr. Anon, your partner is waiting for you."
 
     window hide
     window auto
@@ -565,7 +565,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     hide dimmer_light with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
-    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What"
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What?"
     pause .5
 
     Drf "Very well."
@@ -634,7 +634,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     # TODO: fill this dead air with some relatively upbeat music to make Fang getting mad more dramatic
     play music 'audio/ost/Appreciating the Moment.ogg'
 
-    "CHAD RECOVERY SUCCESSFUL"
+    "CHAD RECOVERY SUCCESSFUL."
     pause .5
 
     F "None of your business. Just do the damn assignment and don’t bother me."
@@ -644,7 +644,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
     F "What was your first fuckin’ clue."
 
-    "Last time I’ll say it, just do the assignment and don’t.{w=.4} Bother.{w=.4} Me."
+    F "Last time I’ll say it, just do the assignment and don’t.{w=.4} Bother.{w=.4} Me."
     pause .5
 
     "Okay! Got to keep coolheaded."
@@ -712,7 +712,7 @@ label chapter_2:
         easein_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.45
     pause 1
 
-    Drf "Oh dear"
+    Drf "Oh dear."
     pause .5
 
     "Mistakes have been made."
@@ -966,7 +966,7 @@ label chapter_2:
 
     pause .5
     show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
-    F "Non-binary people don't owe you androgyny"
+    F "Non-binary people don't owe you androgyny."
     pause .5
 
     "Doesn’t seem like it’s something she wants to hear right now."
@@ -1397,7 +1397,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     show anon:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.1
 
-    "I drag my chair backwards and clumsily rise from my seat"
+    "I drag my chair backwards and clumsily rise from my seat."
 
     A "It was great meeting you guys, I’ll be going back to my desk, though{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
@@ -1523,7 +1523,7 @@ label chapter_2:
 
     stop sound fadeout 2
     stop music fadeout 3
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 1.5
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/schoolLoop.ogg' fadein 1.5
     scene hallway
     with fade
 
@@ -2097,7 +2097,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
-
+    
     menu:
 
         "Look the link up":
@@ -2547,7 +2547,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     A "Uhhhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I guess I’ll have to go now, see you around."
     pause .5
 
-    "Be a little nicer, Anon"
+    "Be a little nicer, Anon."
 
     show anon happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
     A "Ask if you need anything, I’ll help you out."

game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy

@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ label chapter_3:
 
     A "You guys need something?"
 
-    T "Nah, just wanted to chat a bit since we got the time"
+    T "Nah, just wanted to chat a bit since we got the time."
     show trish neutral flip with dissolve
 
     "There’s something in her tone of voice{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -579,7 +579,7 @@ label chapter_3:
     show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25)
     N "Why don’t you wipe that alfredo sauce off your cute little face."
 
-    "She’s so saccharine she’d give a third world country diabetes"
+    "She’s so saccharine she’d give a third world country diabetes."
     pause .5
 
     Nas "It’s my sister again{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -743,7 +743,7 @@ label chapter_3:
 
     # CH 3 SCENE 3 - Steganography
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 3
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/schoolLoop.ogg' fadein 3
     scene hallway with Dissolve(1.5)
     pause .5
 
@@ -1126,9 +1126,9 @@ label chapter_3:
     # TODO: cheesy record scratch?
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0.02, 'music')
 
-    "Uhp"
+    "Uhp."
 
-    "Fuck"
+    "Fuck."
     pause .5
 
     "I almost said 'the audience at the concert' to her out loud."
@@ -2257,7 +2257,7 @@ label chapter_3:
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "Ok, just for one second"
+    "Ok, just for one second."
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5

game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy

@@ -430,7 +430,7 @@ label chapter_4:
     show dimmer_light behind anon, trish with dissolve
     pause .25
 
-    "What the fuck am I doing? I’m dead if I out myself whilst outnumbered here"
+    "What the fuck am I doing? I’m dead if I out myself whilst outnumbered here."
     pause .5
 
     "Trish tore at me like she knew I was there."
@@ -463,12 +463,12 @@ label chapter_4:
 
     "Reed puts the projector in the corner of the room, and Trish makes for the exit with Fang."
 
-    "I follow after, cheeks still filled with food"
+    "I follow after, cheeks still filled with food."
 
 
     # CH 4 SCENE 3
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 2
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/schoolLoop.ogg' fadein 2
     scene hallway with Fade(1, 0, 1)
 
     pause .5
@@ -538,7 +538,7 @@ label chapter_4:
     F "{cps=*.4}AHAHAHAHAHAHHA.{/cps} {w=.4}{nw}"
     show fang:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.9
-    extend "God you are such a dweeb"
+    extend "God you are such a dweeb."
 
     show anon grin with dissolve
     "I flash her my biggest shit-eating grin."
@@ -653,7 +653,7 @@ label chapter_4:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.1
     pause .1
     show fang shocked flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    "She jumps in her chair"
+    "She jumps in her chair."
 
     show fang surprised flip with dissolve
     F "How’d you get-{w=.4} {nw}"
@@ -921,10 +921,10 @@ label chapter_4:
     "Anon then realized, he is horrendously fucking stupid."
 
     show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    F "I’ve been into playing music since pre-k"
+    F "I’ve been into playing music since pre-k."
     pause .5
 
-    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Roll with it"
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Roll with it."
 
     A "So does it take that long to learn that horrid thing?"
 
@@ -1155,7 +1155,7 @@ label chapter_4:
 
     "She left her phone on the desk."
 
-    "I can see the imprint of the password being illuminated by the room’s lamps"
+    "I can see the imprint of the password being illuminated by the room’s lamps."
     pause .5
 
     show anon neutral flip with dissolve

game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ init python:
             renpy.play('audio/effects/carKick1.ogg', channel='audio')
         else:
             renpy.play('audio/effects/carKick2.ogg', channel='audio')
-        renpy.play('audio/effects/carSuspension1.ogg', channel='audio')
+        # renpy.play('audio/effects/carSuspension1.ogg', channel='audio')
 
 label chapter_5:
 
@@ -1348,7 +1348,7 @@ label chapter_5:
     "The world spins and I land on my ass where we were weeding."
     pause .5
 
-    "At least something broke my fall"
+    "At least something broke my fall{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
     "Wait.{w=.4} Isn’t this the flowerbed?"
@@ -1658,7 +1658,7 @@ label chapter_5:
 
     A "except I’m sorry."
 
-    A "I messed up and that was a dick move"
+    A "I messed up and that was a dick move."
 
     A "But if you keep this up we’ll both be going-"
 
@@ -2638,7 +2638,7 @@ label chapter_5:
     with vpunch
     pause 1
 
-    "Woah"
+    "Woah."
     pause .5
 
     A "Ow{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -4178,7 +4178,7 @@ label chapter_5:
     "Fang points at my oversized hall pass."
     pause .5
 
-    A "Yeah, sure"
+    A "Yeah, sure."
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -4388,10 +4388,10 @@ label chapter_5:
     play sound 'audio/effects/rooftopDoorSmash.ogg'
     with vpunch
 
-    show anon ohshit: 
+    show anon ohshit:
         ease_cubic 0.2 xpos -0.2
-    show fang surprised: 
-        ease_cubic 0.2 xpos -0.05 
+    show fang surprised:
+        ease_cubic 0.2 xpos -0.05
 
     show door blurred flip behind anon, fang:
         subpixel True
@@ -4402,12 +4402,11 @@ label chapter_5:
         zoom 3
         block:
             linear 0.6 xpos 0.45 ypos 0.50 zoom 0.60 rotate -270
-          
         linear 0.25 xpos 0.30 ypos 0.55 zoom 0.18 rotate -360
     pause .55
     show roof day broken behind anon, fang
     hide door with Dissolve(.25)
-    #door has flown    
+    #door has flown
 
     pause 1.75
     show roof day broken behind anon, fang

game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy

@@ -619,7 +619,7 @@ label chapter_6:
 
     FD "You ever play golf before, boy?"
 
-    "Don't say Wii Golf don't say Wii Golf don't say Wii golf"
+    "Don't say Wii Golf don't say Wii Golf don't say Wii golf-"
 
     A "N-no, not on a proper green before."
     pause .5
@@ -1184,7 +1184,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     window auto
     pause .5
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/city loop.ogg' fadein 4
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/cityLoop.ogg' fadein 4
     hide black
     show fang unimpressed
     with Dissolve(1.5)
@@ -1858,7 +1858,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     F "Pssh."
     pause .5
 
-    "Suddenly an image of Fang’s dad pops in my mind and I realize I probably shouldn’t be seen alone with her behind a public restroom"
+    "Suddenly an image of Fang’s dad pops in my mind and I realize I probably shouldn’t be seen alone with her behind a public restroom."
 
     "Under penalty of ‘holy shit my spleen is outside my body’."
     pause .5
@@ -2063,7 +2063,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     "She’s on the verge of fratricide too right now."
     pause .5
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/city loop.ogg' fadein 5
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/cityLoop.ogg' fadein 5
     stop music fadeout 3
 
     show naomi neutral
@@ -2351,7 +2351,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     F "Ehh, might as well try."
 
     stop music fadeout 4
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/city loop.ogg' fadein 5
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/cityLoop.ogg' fadein 5
     show fang happy with dissolve
     F "Hey, Stephen Ha-Wing!"
 
@@ -2516,7 +2516,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     label .postAsking:
 
     stop music fadeout 3
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/city loop.ogg' fadein 4
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/cityLoop.ogg' fadein 4
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
@@ -2811,7 +2811,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     unknown "The uncle you seek is elsewhere."
     pause .5
 
-    A "What"
+    A "What?"
     pause .5
 
     unknown "Yes,{w=.3} I know of that,{w=.3} which you,{w=.3} oh so,{w=.3} Desperately seek."
@@ -4388,7 +4388,7 @@ label chapter_6:
 
     A "Maybe it’s not your job."
 
-    A "I mean, you go out of your way to try and help her"
+    A "I mean, you go out of your way to try and help her."
 
     A "Hell even Naomi has tried."
 

game/script/7.concert-day.rpy

@@ -1,5 +1,3 @@
-
-
 label chapter_7:
     #Concert Day
     "{cps=*0.2}-- One Week Later --{/cps}"
@@ -44,12 +42,12 @@ label chapter_7:
     "And I’m drooling like an idiot as I watch Fang bend over a large Amp."
     pause .5
 
-    unknown "Ahem"
+    unknown "Ahem."
 
     "Even now her tail wags to that mysterious beat in her head."
     pause .5
 
-    unknown "AHEM"
+    unknown "AHEM."
 
     "Not to mention the way those jeans hug her hips and ass-"
     pause .5
@@ -211,7 +209,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     if anonscore >= 3 and fangscore >= 4:
     #>>golden
-       St "Upright Strength"
+       St "Upright Strength."
        St "OH! {w=.3} I don’t think you need to worry about what’s to come, Anon."
     elif anonscore >= 3 and fangscore <= 3:
     #>>tradwife
@@ -465,7 +463,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     A "Don’t worry so much."
 
-    A "Just don't fret about it, you’ll be fine"
+    A "Just don't fret about it, you’ll be fine."
 
     show fang happy flip with dissolve
 
@@ -516,7 +514,7 @@ label chapter_7:
       show reed neutral flip at rright:
          xalign 1.3
       with dissolve
-      "Showtime"
+      "Showtime!"
 
       F "All right! Next up we got 'The!'"
 
@@ -547,16 +545,16 @@ label chapter_7:
       "They were on the last song of the night, the bizarrely long name of which I missed."
 
       F "I JUST GOTTA ASK:"
-      F "WHY IS HITLER"
-      F "RIDING MY BIKE"
-      F "PRETENDING TO BE"
-      F "A MONKEY"
+      F "WHY IS HITLER,"
+      F "RIDING MY BIKE,"
+      F "PRETENDING TO BE,"
+      F "A MONKEY!"
 
       "Oh right… Reed definitely wrote this one."
 
       "The band really has improved, as opposed to booing and pointing at the audience is listening intently."
 
-      F "AT THREEEEEEE AAAAAAAA MMMMM"
+      F "AT THREEEEEEE AAAAAAAA MMMMM-"
       F "IN THE MORNIIIIIING!"
       F "ON A FUCKIN’ TUESDAAAAY!"
 
@@ -651,7 +649,7 @@ label chapter_7:
         ease 0.75 xalign 0.45
         repeat
 
-      F "OHMYGOD OHMYGOD WE DID IT WE DID IT"
+      F "OHMYGOD OHMYGOD WE DID IT WE DID IT!"
 
       F "THEY ACTUALLY LOVE VVURM DRAMA!"
 
@@ -762,7 +760,7 @@ label chapter_7:
       show reed neutral flip at rright:
          xalign 1.3
       with dissolve
-      "Showtime"
+      "Showtime!"
 
       "I take my eyes off the stage to get a read on the crowd."
 
@@ -775,10 +773,10 @@ label chapter_7:
       "They were on the last song of the night, the bizarrely long name of which I missed."
 
       F "I JUST GOTTA ASK:"
-      F "WHY IS HITLER"
-      F "RIDING MY BIKE"
-      F "PRETENDING TO BE"
-      F "A MONKEY"
+      F "WHY IS HITLER,"
+      F "RIDING MY BIKE,"
+      F "PRETENDING TO BE,"
+      F "A MONKEY!"
 
       "Oh right… Reed definitely wrote this one."
 
@@ -786,7 +784,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
       "And nobody has tripped so far."
 
-      F "AT THREEEEEEE AAAAAAAA MMMMM"
+      F "AT THREEEEEEE AAAAAAAA MMMMM-"
       F "IN THE MORNIIIIIING!"
       F "ON A-"
 
@@ -1213,7 +1211,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     A "Oh, uh, actually…"
 
-    "THINK OF SOMETHING THINK OF SOMETHING THINK OF SOMETHING"
+    "THINK OF SOMETHING THINK OF SOMETHING THINK OF SOMETHING!"
 
     A "I had to leave because of, uh…"
 

game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy

@@ -783,7 +783,7 @@ label chapter_8:
         pause .5
         show fang unimpressed flip:
             easein_cubic 0.5 xpos 1.3
-        pause .5
+        pause .75
         # play sound 'audio/effects/anonDink.ogg'
         #show guitarpick with dissolve:
         #    subpixel True
@@ -792,15 +792,21 @@ label chapter_8:
         #    block:
         #        ease_cubic 0.3 xpos 0.70
         play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg'
+        show fang unimpressed flip:
+            easein_cubic 0.5 xpos 1.2
         show guitarpick:
             subpixel True
             xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5
             xpos 0.65 ypos 0.5
             linear 0.15 xpos 0.46 ypos 0.16 rotate -360
             easein_cubic 0.4 xpos 0.7 ypos -0.15 rotate -360
-        pause 0.1
-        play sound 'audio/effects/anonDink.ogg'
-        show anon fear with dissolve
+
+        pause .1
+        play audio 'audio/effects/anonDink.ogg'
+        show anon:
+            easein_cubic 0.5 xalign -0.1
+        show anon fear with Dissolve(.25)
+        pause .5
         "A guitar pick bounces off my eye."
 
         A "Gah!"
@@ -847,12 +853,19 @@ label chapter_8:
         F "Yeah. Just try and play whatever."
         stop music
         "And then…{w=0.3} All hell broke loose."
+        window hide
+        window auto
         # hide fanganonhug with dissolve
-        show fang shocked flip at sright with dissolve
+        show fang shocked flip with dissolve:
+            ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.5
+        show anon neutral flip with dissolve:
+            ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.65
         show fangdad neutral at sleft with easeinleft:
             yalign 0
-        show anon concerned with dissolve
+        #show anon concerned with dissolve
         FD "What the {b}HELL{/b} are you doing here, Anon?"
+        window hide
+        window auto
         play music 'audio/OST/you can_t sage here.ogg' fadein 1.0
 
         pause 0.5
@@ -879,13 +892,18 @@ label chapter_8:
         "I at least hope someone deleted my browser history."
 
         "Anyways, back to the show."
+        window hide
+        window auto
 
         hide anonfacecloseup at truecenter with fade
 
         FD "Out. {w=0.3}{b}Now{/b}."
+        window hide
+        window auto
         show fangdad with move:
-            ease_cubic 0.2 xalign 0.2 yalign -0.2
+            ease_cubic 0.2 xalign 0.2
 
+        show fang sad flip with dissolve
         show fangdad at sleft 
         show anon concerned at scenter
         with move 
@@ -896,7 +914,7 @@ label chapter_8:
         pause 0.2
         hide fangdad 
         hide anon 
-        with moveoutleft
+        with easeoutleft
         pause 0.1
         show black with fade
         "It takes all my strength to prevent my bladder from doing its best Stella impression right about now."
@@ -909,18 +927,21 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         "PTERO-CLAWS HURT LIKE CRAP, MAN."
 
-        scene home fang outside night with fade
+        scene home fang outside with fade
 
         FD "The next time I catch you alone with my daughter, I will use your head as a rubix cube."
+        window hide
+        window auto
         
-        show anon fear flip at acenter with easeinright
-        show fangdad unimpressed flip behind anon at sright with easeinright
+        show anon fear flip at acenter
+        show fangdad unimpressed flip behind anon at sright
+        with easeinright
         
         show anon neutral flip with dissolve
         show fangdad unimpressed at sright with dissolve
         hide fangdad unimpressed with easeoutright
         "He gives me a shove off the porch and I hear the door slam behind me."
-        show anon neutral flip at turnaround
+        show anon neutral with dissolve
 
         stop music fadeout 1.0
         "I can hear her father’s raised voice from here."
@@ -930,12 +951,15 @@ label chapter_8:
         "Or maybe some Carfe…"
         pause 0.5
         "God dammit Reed."
-        show anon neutral with dissolve 
-        hide anon neutral with easeoutleft
+
         "I turn away from the luxurious home and walk down the pathway to the sidewalk."
+        window hide
+        window auto
+        show anon neutral flip with dissolve 
+        hide anon neutral flip with easeoutleft
 
         scene skinrow with fade
-        show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
+        show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve
         play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' fadein 1.0
         "Shit. And things were getting…"
 
@@ -966,9 +990,11 @@ label chapter_8:
         "*Bzzz bzzz*"
 
         "A text? Shit, that’s rare."
+        window hide
+        window auto
 
         hide anon neutral with dissolve
-        show anonphone at scenter with moveinbottom
+        show anonphone at scenter with easeinbottom
 
         "Fang: Hey"
 
@@ -1008,6 +1034,7 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         "..."
 
+        stop music fadeout 2
         scene black with fade
 
         "{cps=*0.2}-- Two weeks later --{/cps}"
@@ -1066,6 +1093,10 @@ label chapter_8:
             "{i}Never make anything again. Ever.{/i}"
 
             "Ah, just a day in the life of an underappreciated artist."
+            window hide
+            window auto
+            pause .5
+
         return
 
     label GetStartedOnStudy:

game/script/9.anons'-dirty-laundry-gets-put-up-to-air.rpy

@@ -18,6 +18,9 @@ label chapter_9:
     "Watching shitty movies and playing games on Reed’s Xrox."
 
     N "Why are you so deep in thought, Anon?"
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     show naomi neutral at scenter with dissolve
     "The Mandarin Manchurian rips me away from my monologue."
 
@@ -27,10 +30,14 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     Sp "ASSES IN THOSE SEATS NOW!"
 
-    scene hallway
-    show anon neutral at aleft
-    show naomi neutral flip at sright
-    with fade
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    show naomi:
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.8
+    show anon neutral with dissolve:
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.25
+    pause 1
 
     "Naomi has taken the opportunity to walk with me through the hallways."
 
@@ -64,20 +71,25 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     "The less I can think of Naser’s body the better."
 
-    scene auditorium with dissolve
+    stop music fadeout 2
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg' fadein 2
+    scene auditorium with fade
 
     "We get to the auditorium once again and I look to the back row to find our spot."
-    play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' fadein 1.0
 
     "Empty?"
 
+    play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' fadein 1.0
+    stop ambient fadeout 2
     F "OVER HERE, ANON!!"
 
     "Fang and Trish are sitting in the front row."
-    show fang happy at scenter with dissolve:
+    show fang happy at scenter:
       xalign 0.1
-    show trish neutral at tleft with dissolve:
+    show trish neutral at tleft:
       xalign -0.1
+    with dissolve
+
 
     "Next to them is Reed huddling behind a cart with the projector he’d fixed on it, messing with the cords."
 
@@ -111,11 +123,11 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     T "Since we’re seniors it’s probably some other stupid pep talk about ‘Our Futures’."
 
-    show reed explanatory flip with dissolve
-
+    show reed explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25)
     Re "I bet it’s a fundraiser…"
 
     Re "I’m like, good at selling things and stuff..."
+    show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
 
     A "I’m sure."
 
@@ -176,17 +188,35 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     A "Yeah, yeah, sure. You just don’t want to share."
 
+    show reed neutral with dissolve
+
     "The last of the seniors trickle in and take seats near the front."
 
     "Eventually Spears takes the stage."
 
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    hide reed
+    hide anon
+    hide trish
+    hide fang
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    show spears neutral flip at scenter with dissolve:
+        xalign 1.5
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
+    pause .5
     "He pauses to make sure everyone’s covering their ears before beginning."
 
-    hide reed with easeoutleft
-    scene auditorium with fade
-    show spears neutral at scenter with dissolve
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
     stop music fadeout 1.0
-    play sound 'audio/effects/spearYellVoice.ogg'
+    show spears angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    play sound 'audio/effects/spearYellRumbleVoice.ogg'
+    window show Dissolve(0.0001)
     Sp "ALLLRIGHT!" with vpunch
 
     Sp "AS YOU ALL KNOW, GRADUATION’S COMING UP SOON."
@@ -196,9 +226,17 @@ label chapter_9:
     Sp "BUT FIRST THE STUDENT COUNCIL HAS A BRIEF PRESENTATION TO GIVE ON THE SUBJECT."
 
     Sp "FLOOR’S ALL YOURS, STUCO."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
-    hide spears with easeoutright
-    show naomi neutral flip at sright with dissolve
+    show spears:
+        xalign 0.5
+        easeout_cubic 1 xalign 1.5
+    hide spears with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 0.25
+    show naomi neutral flip with dissolve:
+        xalign 1.5
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.8
 
     play music 'audio/OST/The Top of the Social Ladder.ogg' fadein 1.0
     "Spears gestures his hand towards Naomi and Naser, who show up from behind the stage curtains."
@@ -213,7 +251,7 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     N "Why, thank you, Principal Spears!"
 
-    "The projector comes to life, displaying a basic slideshow title card reading"
+    "The projector comes to life, displaying a basic slideshow title card reading."
 
     A "Reed, how do you know when to move it forward?"
 
@@ -232,29 +270,39 @@ label chapter_9:
     "But keeping them closed was an even worse one."
 
     "At least there’s cute little designs on the slides."
-    scene projector1
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    scene projector1 with dissolve
     "There’s a little penguin with a graduation cap…"
-    scene projector2
+    scene projector2 with dissolve
     "There’s the school mascot in a party hat… even has the fogged up window..."
-    scene projector3
+    scene projector3 with dissolve
     "A lineup of various graduates with a token human at the end for diversity.{w=0.3} Typical."
-    scene projector4
+    scene projector4 with dissolve
     "There’s some scientists and engineers holding hands…"
-    scene projector5
+    scene projector5 with dissolve
     "There’s a triceratops holding onto a branch with the text ‘hang in there, baby!"
-    scene projector6
+    scene projector6 with dissolve
     "There’s me two years ago when I photoshopped myself with an anime girl."
-    stop music
+    window hide Dissolve(0.001)
+    window auto
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0.02, 'music')
+    stop music fadeout 0.2
     scene projector7
+    pause 2
 
     "..."
 
     "..."
 
     "..."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 2
 
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'music')
     play music 'audio/OST/you can_t sage here.ogg' fadein 1.0
-    "What the fuck"
+    "What the fuck-"
 
     "{i}HOW!{/i}"
 
@@ -291,25 +339,29 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     Re "I-I am!"
 
-    scene projector8
+    scene projector8 with dissolve
 
     "More pictures. So many more pictures."
 
     "Each one more and more embarrassing than the last."
 
-    show projector9_blur at wiggle
+    show projector9_blur at wiggle with dissolve
     # scene projector9  
 
     "I…{w=0.3} oh god…"
 
     Nas "Shit!"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
     pause .14
     show black with Fade(0.14, 0, 0, color="#fff")
+    play sound 'audio/effects/anonTheaterFall.ogg' #Temporary
     show black
     pause .06
+    stop music
     show black with Fade(0, 1, 3, color="#fff")
     pause .5
-    play sound 'audio/effects/anonTheaterFall.wav'
     "There’s a loud crash right next to me and the entire room becomes black."
 
     "Did I faint?"
@@ -320,6 +372,7 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     "Still awake.{w=0.2} Fuck."
 
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg' fadein 2
     scene auditorium with fade
 
     show anon sad at acenter with dissolve
@@ -356,7 +409,9 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     "Even lifts her up.{w=0.2} By her face.{w=0.2} With one hand."
 
-    Sp "ALL OF YOU GET YOUR ASSES BACK TO CLASS."
+    play sound 'audio/effects/spearYellRumbleVoice.ogg'
+    stop ambient fadeout 1
+    Sp "ALL OF YOU GET YOUR ASSES BACK TO CLASS." with vpunch
 
     "Spears motions for me to follow him but I feel paralyzed by everything that just happened."
 
@@ -364,7 +419,9 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     "This is Rock Bottom all over again."
 
-    show fang sad flip at sright with dissolve
+    show fang sad flip with dissolve:
+        xalign 1.8
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.3
 
     "Fang tugs at my arm, trying to get me to follow."
 
@@ -381,8 +438,10 @@ label chapter_9:
     "What the fuck just happened?"
 
     scene hallway
+    play music 'audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg' fadein 1
     show anon neutral flip at aright
-    show fang sad at sleft
+    show fang sad at sleft behind anon
+    with fade
     with dissolve
     F "Hey…"
 
@@ -423,11 +482,12 @@ label chapter_9:
     F "Just needs some time to forget it happened."
 
     "The squeak of sneakers catches my attention and I turn to see Reed approaching us down the hall."
-    stop music fadeout 2.0
-    play music 'audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg' fadein 1.0
-
-    show reed unimpressed at rleft with easeinleft
-
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 0.5
+    show reed sad at rleft with easeinleft:
+        xalign -0.4
+    pause 0.5
     F "Reed...? I thought Spears sent everyone back to class."
 
     Re "Can't just sit in class while all my hombres are going through some pretty heavy stuff, y'know?"
@@ -441,8 +501,10 @@ label chapter_9:
     A "Wait, get what off your chest?"
 
     A "Were…{w=0.2} were you in on it?"
-    # hide fang sad 
-    show fang angry flip at scenter with dissolve
+    # hide fang sad
+    show reed shocked
+    show fang angry flip at scenter
+    with dissolve
 
     "Fang’s questioning glare makes Reed shudder."
 
@@ -532,6 +594,9 @@ label chapter_9:
     Re "Like, I know it sucks. Trish tricked me and all too, and that hurts, y’know?"
 
     Re "But maybe try and think why Trish did this, alright bro?"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
 
     menu:
       "Not exactly in the introspective sort of mood right about now.":
@@ -541,11 +606,12 @@ label chapter_9:
       "I guess Reed might have a point…":
         "Trish can still burn in hell for all I care."
 
-    show anon neutral flip at aright
-    show fang neutral at scenter
-    show reed neutral at rleft
-    with dissolve
+
     stop music fadeout 1.0
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 1
+
     Sp "Three MONTHS!"
 
     Sp "THREE MONTHS from graduation and you PULL A STUNT LIKE THIS?!"
@@ -556,16 +622,18 @@ label chapter_9:
     "Good! She deserves it!"
 
     Sp "I’ve half a mind to have campus security escort you out of here and send you to Reef City Continuation!"
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
-    show fang angry at scenter with dissolve
-    show reed angry at rleft with dissolve
+    show fang angry with dissolve
+    show reed angry with dissolve
 
     "Fang and Reed both hiss at that."
 
     "What the fuck does that mean?"
 
-    show fang neutral at scenter
-    show reed neutral at rleft
+    show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    show reed unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
     with dissolve
     Sp "You have five minutes to explain why I shouldn’t do that right now."
 
@@ -598,7 +666,7 @@ label chapter_9:
     "What does Fang have to do with any of this?!"
 
     "She wasn’t the one bitching about every damn thing I do!"
-    show fang sad at scenter with dissolve
+    show fang sad with dissolve
     "I glance over to Fang whose expression seems even worse now."
 
     F "..."
@@ -621,20 +689,29 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     "Reed gives a silent nod. No thumbs up this time."
 
-    scene office spears with dissolve
+    scene office spears
+    show trish sad at tleft
+    show spears neutral flip at scenter behind anon, trish
+    with fade
 
     "I enter Spears’ office and my eyes are immediately drawn to Trish sitting in front of his desk surrounded by crumpled up tissues."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve:
+        xalign 2
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.1
 
-    show trish sad at tleft  
-    show anon neutral flip at aright 
-    show spears neutral at scenter 
-    with dissolve
     Sp "Trish, is there anything you would like to tell Anon?"
 
     "I’ve never seen her like this."
 
+    pause .5
     T "It’s all your fault."
 
+    show trish fury with dissolve:
+        yalign 10.0
+
     T "Who are you to come here and take Fang away!"
 
     T "You’re just some nobody from the middle of nowhere who only cares about yourself!"
@@ -651,6 +728,9 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     T "Because you’re a selfish control freak!"
 
+    show trish fury point with dissolve:
+        yalign 10.0
+
     T "Everything has to revolve around you!"
 
     T "Fang and Reed and me were going to make it to the top!"
@@ -659,17 +739,25 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     T "No one understands us!"
 
+    show trish sad with dissolve:
+        yalign 0.1
+
     "Trish is cut off by a horrid sob, her head falling into her hands and new tears spilling from her eyes."
 
     "Raptor Jesus on his cross of rock that’s a lot to unpack."
 
     "It’s like you didn’t even try to understand me either."
 
+    show spears neutral with dissolve
+
     Sp "Anon, is there anything you want to add?"
 
     "Like how she’s not worth the oxygen?"
 
     "But if this really is all about Fang…"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
 
     $ TalkedWithTrish = 0
 
@@ -775,21 +863,24 @@ label chapter_9:
 
 
     "I open the door to see Fang again, expression complex, leaning against the door’s frame."
-    play music 'audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg' fadein 1.0
-    scene hallway with fade
-    show fang sad at sleft with dissolve:
-      xalign 0.5
-    show reed considering at sleft with dissolve
+    play music1 'audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    stop music fadeout 1
+    scene hallway
+    show fang sad at sleft
+    show reed considering flip:
+      xalign 1.4
+    with fade
    
     "Reed has taken my place beside her with a comforting arm around her shoulder."
     
     "If this was any other situation I might have felt a bit jealous."
-    
-    show reed considering flip:  
-      xalign 1.4
-    show fang sad at sleft
-    show anon neutral flip:
-      xalign 0.75
+   
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    show anon neutral flip behind reed:
+      xalign 1.5
+      easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.75
     with dissolve
     F "Hey."
 
@@ -824,6 +915,7 @@ label chapter_9:
     $   anonscore += 1
 
     play music 'audio/OST/fighter.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    stop music1 fadeout 1
     A "You worried about her, too?"
 
     "Fang turns her head down to her shoes."
@@ -861,6 +953,7 @@ label chapter_9:
     A "You can go first."
 
     "Fang gives a small nod, and the three of us slide down the wall into sitting positions."
+    pause .5
 
     "The minutes pass."
 
@@ -939,6 +1032,8 @@ label chapter_9:
     T "Fang wait-"
 
     F "Bye."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     show fang sad at scenter with dissolve
     hide fang sad with easeoutright
@@ -947,14 +1042,19 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     F "I’ll wait by the exit while you talk, Anon."
 
+    show reed happy flip with dissolve
+
     "Reed gets up as she passes by and begins to follow, giving me a thumbs up."
 
     Re "Give you some privacy, amigo."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
     show reed neutral flip with dissolve:
       xalign 1.4   
     hide reed with easeoutright
 
+    stop music fadeout 1
     "..."
 
     play music 'audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg' fadein 1.0
@@ -995,8 +1095,8 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     "Part of me wonders if she’ll use that against me, but right now it just feels good to get it out of my system."
     scene hallway with fade
-    "As I begin looking for Fang, Reed stops me in the hallway."
     show anon neutral at acenter with easeinleft
+    "As I begin looking for Fang, Reed stops me in the hallway."
     show reed explanatory flip at rright with easeinright:
       xalign 1.2
 
@@ -1032,6 +1132,7 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     "That can wait."
 
+    stop music fadeout 2
 
     scene black with fade
     "I catch up to Fang near the front of the school as I mentally prepare myself for what’s coming."
@@ -1043,6 +1144,7 @@ label chapter_9:
     label GoHomeEarly:
 
     play music 'audio/OST/fighter.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    stop music1 fadeout 1
     A "Sure, let’s get out of here."
 
     show reed unimpressed flip with dissolve
@@ -1051,12 +1153,14 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     Re "Gonna stick around. Try and talk with Trish n’all."
 
-    show reed sad flip with dissolve
-
     F "Reed, I… {w=0.3}I’m taking a break from the band."
 
+    show reed shocked flip with dissolve
+
     "Reed’s expression shifts to one of sadness and shock."
 
+    show reed sad flip with dissolve
+
     F "I just…{w=0.3} need time to think,{w=0.2} alright?"
 
     Re "Like, y’know that’ll crush Trish..."
@@ -1077,6 +1181,9 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     "We make our way to the front of the school as I mentally prepare myself for what’s coming."
 
+    stop music fadeout 1
+    scene black with dissolve
+
     jump WalkOfShame
 
     label WalkOfShame:
@@ -1086,7 +1193,7 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     scene hallway
     show anon neutral at acenter
-    with dissolve
+    with fade
     "As I make my way through the hall I do my best to ignore the passing jeers from teens I don’t even know."
 
     "I guess it’s already spread to the lower years too."
@@ -1111,9 +1218,10 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     scene outside school with fade
 
-    show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
-    show fang sad flip at scenter with dissolve:
+    show anon neutral at aleft
+    show fang sad flip at scenter behind anon:
       xalign 1.1
+    with dissolve
 
     "Within an hour I’ve fallen back to square one."
 
@@ -1125,20 +1233,31 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     "I nod at that, moving for the stairs."
 
+    stop music fadeout 3
     unknown "HEY LOSER, THINK FAST!"
 
     show anon neutral flip at aleft with dissolve
     "I turn towards the voice, and the world slows down."
     
     
-    show anon fear flip at aleft with dissolve
+    show anon fear flip at aleft
+    show fang surprised flip behind anon
+    with dissolve
     "My field of vision is filled with a soda can, and I freeze up like a deer in headlights."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/hungrybeast.ogg' fadein 1 volume 0.3
 
     show sodacan blurred:
       yalign -0.2
       xalign -0.1
       zoom 0.25
-      ease_cubic 0.1 xalign 0.15 yalign 0.12 rotate 60
+      easeout_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.15 yalign 0.12 rotate 60
+    play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg'
+    show dimmer_darker behind anon, sodacan with Dissolve(.25)
+
+
     menu:
       "Duck.":
         "The can smacks me in the forehead while I was mid-stride, and I shift my footing to try and regain balance."
@@ -1146,36 +1265,73 @@ label chapter_9:
         "The can smacks me in the forehead while I was mid-stride, and I shift my footing to try and regain balance."
       "Catch it out of the air.":
         "The can smacks me in the forehead while I was mid-stride, and I shift my footing to try and regain balance."
+
+    window hide Dissolve(0.0001)
+    window auto
     
-    play sound "audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg"
+    stop ambient fadeout 1
+    hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(.25)
+
     show sodacan blurred:
-      ease_cubic 0.1 xalign 0.3 yalign 0.22 rotate 90
-      ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.5 yalign 1.7 rotate 60
+        linear 0.15 xalign 0.22 yalign 0.22 rotate 90
+    play sound "audio/effects/anonDink.ogg" volume 0.5
+
+    pause 0.1
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.2
+
+    show sodacan blurred:
+        xalign 0.22 yalign 0.22
+        linear 0.5 align (.05, 1.5) knot (0, 0.25) rotate -270
+
     hide sodacan blurred with dissolve  
-    show fang shocked flip with dissolve
+    #show sodacan blurred:
+    #  ease_cubic 0.1 xalign 0.3 yalign 0.22 rotate 90
+    #  ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.5 yalign 1.7 rotate 60
+
+    pause .2
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/hungrybeast.ogg' fadein 0.69 volume 0.3
+    show dimmer_darker behind anon with Dissolve(.25)
+
     "Except my foot catches on the edge of the stairlip and slips."
-    hide fang with dissolve
+    show fang surprised flip behind anon #Fucking thing keeps wanting to be infront of anon
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
-    show anon with easeinleft:
-      parallel:
-        ease_cubic 1.0 rotate 90 
-      parallel:
-        ease_cubic 0.1 yalign 0.0
-        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign -0.1
-        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign -0.2
-        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign -0.2
+    hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(.25)
+    stop ambient fadeout 1
+    show anon shocked flip with Dissolve(.1):
+        xpos -1
+        yanchor 0.2
+        easeout_quad .6 rotate 90 yalign -0.05
+    play sound 'audio/effects/anonStairFall.ogg'
+    show fang shocked flip behind anon with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause 0.1
+    scene black
 
-    scene outside school with vpunch
-    pause 0.5
-    scene outside school with hpunch
-    play sound 'audio/effects/anonDumbassFall.ogg' fadeout 0.5 
-    pause 0.5
-    scene outside school with vpunch
-    pause 0.5
-    scene outside school with hpunch
-    play sound 'audio/effects/anonHeadbutt.ogg' fadeout 0.5
+    #show anon with easeinleft:
+    #  parallel:
+    #    ease_cubic 1.0 rotate 90 
+    #  parallel:
+    #    ease_cubic 0.1 yalign 0.0
+    #    ease_cubic 0.3 yalign -0.1
+    #    ease_cubic 0.3 yalign -0.2
+    #    ease_cubic 0.3 yalign -0.2
+
+    pause 5.5
+
+
+    #scene outside school with vpunch
+    #pause 0.5
+    #scene outside school with hpunch
+    #play sound 'audio/effects/anonDumbassFall.ogg' fadeout 0.5 
+    #pause 0.5
+    #scene outside school with vpunch
+    #pause 0.5
+    #scene outside school with hpunch
+    #play sound 'audio/effects/anonHeadbutt.ogg' fadeout 0.5
     #scene imfreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeefaaaaaaallllllliiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
-    scene black with fade
+    #scene black with fade
     "..."
 
     A "Uuurg."
@@ -1190,7 +1346,8 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     "I peel myself from around the bollard, feeling every bone in my body creak painfully."
 
-    scene schooloutside_blur at wiggle
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorLoop.ogg' fadein 2
+    scene schooloutside_blur #at wiggle
     #scene outside school
     show anon neutral at aleft:
       xalign 0.5 yalign -0.4 rotate -90
@@ -1203,8 +1360,13 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     A "Am I? Ow."
 
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    show schooloutside blurred behind anon with Dissolve(0.25)
+
     show anon with ease:
-      yalign -0.1
+      yalign 0.15
+    hide schooloutside blurred with Dissolve(0.25)
     "Nothing seems to be broken…{w=0.3} I’ve been in worse."
 
     "Honestly my ego’s more injured than I am."
@@ -1216,38 +1378,36 @@ label chapter_9:
     A "This’s nothing compared to field day back at my old school."
 
     "I try taking a step and my knee involuntarily twists in a direction it’s not supposed to."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    show anon:
+        easeout_cubic 0.5 yalign -0.5 alpha 0
+    stop music fadeout 5
+    scene black with dissolve
+
+    pause .5
 
     "Suddenly, I’m doing the Seth McFarlane pose again."
     #Have you ever tried not being ironic for once in your life
-    show outside school
-    scene black with fade
+
     F "Oh no. Ohhh no. Let me help you up."
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
+
     show schooloutside blurred
-    show fangcarriesanon at aright 
-    with dissolve 
+    show fangcarriesanon
+    with Dissolve(1.5)
+    pause .5
 
     "She tucks her arms around my shoulder and pulls me to my feet again."
     F "Let’s just get to the bench over there."
 
-    pause 0.5
-    show fangcarriesanon:
-      ease_cubic 2.0 xpos 0.3
-    pause 1.0
-    show fangcarriesanon:
-      ease_cubic 2.0 xpos -0.5
-    pause 0.2
-
-
-    hide fangcarriesanon with dissolve   
-    scene outside school
-    show anon neutral at acenter
-    show fang neutral flip at sright
-    with fade
-
-
     F "The taxi will be here in like five minutes."
 
     play music 'audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    stop ambient fadeout 1
     "Using Fang as a second foot, I eventually make it to the bench."
 
     "I still can’t bend either leg, so I just sort of splay against the sidewalk."
@@ -1334,6 +1494,7 @@ label chapter_9:
     "Fang must have noticed since she kept silent after that."
 
     D "Alrighty, end of the line."
+    stop music fadeout 2
 
     D "That’ll be fifteen bucks even."
 
@@ -1343,7 +1504,6 @@ label chapter_9:
     "I manage to limp out of the car and Fang drops a few crumpled bills in her seat and slams the door behind her."
 
     "The car peels out and disappears around the corner."
-    scene black with fade
     scene skinrow with fade
 
     A "Well, {w=0.2}no place to go but home."

game/script/x1-chicxulub-gutterlane.rpy

@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     pause 1
 
     FD "Well, folks, we’re here."
-    
+
     show anon neutral with dissolve
 
     FD "Black Hole Bowling."
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     Nas "Surprised you brought Anon along, Dad."
 
     Nas "That’s pretty unlike you."
-    
+
     show fangdad unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
     FD "It {i}was{/i} just going to be the three of us{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     pause .5
     hide naser with dissolve
     pause .5
-    
+
     show anon unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
     "Struggling to not fall over or snap in half like a skin-colored twig, I lugged the bag over."
     pause .5
@@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     show moealt:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.7
     with dissolve
-    
+
     Moe "Terrorizin’ the poor kid, I bet."
 
     "Moe sets a tray of fountain drinks and snack foods on the table with his grabby claw hands."
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     pause .5
 
     "Eager to escape his clutches I bolted for the console and started entering our names."
-    
+
     show anon:
         easeout_cubic 1 xalign -0.5
     pause .25
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     show fangdad neutral:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.0
     with Dissolve(1)
-    
+
     "He made a show of inserting his clawed fingers into each of the holes while making sure I had a real good angle."
 
     "He even oriented the ball so that the holes lined up into a little screaming face."
@@ -305,7 +305,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     "His eyes linger on me for a moment."
     pause .5
 
-    FD "You can put some real force into it and {w=.2}{nw}" 
+    FD "You can put some real force into it and {w=.2}{nw}"
     show fangdad:
         easein_back 0.75 xalign 0.7
     extend "{i}BAM{/i}."
@@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
 
     Moe "Alrights Anon, yer up."
 
-    "I nod and get up from my seat." 
+    "I nod and get up from my seat."
     pause .5
 
     show anon neutral:
@@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
 
     "Lining up the shot I look down the lane at the pins."
 
-    show anon pissed 
+    show anon pissed
     show dimmer_light behind anon
     with dissolve
     "Using Rip’s advice I picture Naomi’s face on the pins."
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg'
     pause .2
     play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickbigpunch.ogg'
-    show anon fear 
+    show anon fear
     with hpunch
     pause 1
 
@@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
 
     A "WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS FUCKING TOM AND JERRY BULLSHIT HOW THE FUCK DOES THIS FUCKING HAPPEN!"
 
-    A "DON’T JUST STAND THERE AND GAWK YOU JACKASSES GET A FUCKING FIRST AID BOX OR SOMETHING FOR FUCKS SAKE! YOU USELESS FUCKING ASSHOLES HOLY SHIT THIS HURTS LIKE HELL"
+    A "DON’T JUST STAND THERE AND GAWK YOU JACKASSES GET A FUCKING FIRST AID BOX OR SOMETHING FOR FUCKS SAKE! YOU USELESS FUCKING ASSHOLES HOLY SHIT THIS HURTS LIKE HELL!"
 
     A "AAAAAA FUCK MY FUCKING FOOT I THINK I BROKE MY FUCKING FOOT!"
 
@@ -417,7 +417,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
 
     show anon:
         easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.7 yalign 0.1
-    show anon sad 
+    show anon sad
     hide dimmer_light
     with dissolve
     pause 1
@@ -577,4 +577,4 @@ label chapter_x1:
     scene black with Dissolve(2)
     pause 1.5
 
-    return
+    return

game/script/x3-PTA-meeting.rpy

@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ label chapter_x3:
 
     stop music fadeout 1.0
     show spears angry with dissolve
-    play sound "audio/effects/spearYellVoice.ogg"
+    play sound "audio/effects/spearYellRumbleVoice.ogg"
     Sp "ON THE SUBJECT OF FUNDRAISING!" with vpunch
     show farnsworth concerned with dissolve
     "My voice is powerful enough to draw everyone’s eyes to me."

game/script/x6-passion-of-the-trigga.rpy

@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     "A feathered elbow pierces my side."
 
     show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
-    F "Her mother works two jobs overtime just so Trish can go to school with us instead of Reef City Continuation." 
+    F "Her mother works two jobs overtime just so Trish can go to school with us instead of Reef City Continuation."
 
     show anon shrug with dissolve
     A "What’s so bad about Reef City anyway?"
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     Ro "Why don’t we change the subject?"
 
     Ro "We’re getting close to Trish’s place, no?"
-    
+
     show anon neutral
     show fang neutral
     show reed neutral flip
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.3
     with dissolve
     pause 1
-    
+
     show trish indignant flip with Dissolve(.25)
     T "You’re here! Finally!"
 
@@ -235,12 +235,12 @@ label chapter_x6:
     A "What’s that supposed to mean?"
 
     F "Sorry we took so long, Trish."
-    
+
     F "And hey there Riley. Ready for the party?"
     pause .5
 
     Riley "Man fuck this party."
-    
+
     Riley "Ain’t no hot bitches here, so it ain’t a real party trigga."
 
     show stella sad with Dissolve(.25)
@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     show rosa neutral flip:
         yalign 0.2 xalign 1.2
     show stella neutral flip:
-        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1  
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1
     show reed neutral flip:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.8
     with Fade(1, .5, 1)
@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     show stella considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
     St "Isn’t there an easier way to distract them?"
 
-    show trish neutral 
+    show trish neutral
     show stella neutral flip
     with dissolve
     T "There’s only one tablet, and one TV."
@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
 
     Re "Fang, you wanna help a bit?"
 
-    show reed neutral flip 
+    show reed neutral flip
     show fang neutral
     with Dissolve(.25)
 
@@ -413,7 +413,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     show stella explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25)
     St "You mean a moon jump?"
 
-    show anon shrug 
+    show anon shrug
     show stella neutral flip
     with dissolve
     A "I always just called them bounce walk."
@@ -421,7 +421,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     show trish considering with Dissolve(.25)
     T "That’s the dullest name I’ve heard for them. Anyways, it’s called a ‘castlehop’."
 
-    show anon neutral 
+    show anon neutral
     show rosa considering flip
     show trish neutral
     with dissolve
@@ -544,7 +544,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     show trevor neutral
     show tana neutral
     with dissolve
-    "The two swirl back around"
+    "The two swirl back around."
     pause .5
 
     "With the hidden lighter between my hands I let the combustible gas slowly coat the palm of my hand."
@@ -641,7 +641,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     show rosa :
         easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.2
     show stella:
-        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.1  
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.1
     show reed:
         easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.95
     with None
@@ -688,8 +688,8 @@ label chapter_x6:
     show stella explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
     St "These came out really well, Fang!"
 
-    show stella neutral 
-    show reed explanatory 
+    show stella neutral
+    show reed explanatory
     with Dissolve(.25)
 
     Re "I got the burnt one and it’s still pretty great."
@@ -699,7 +699,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     "Fang isn’t paying attention."
 
     "She’s entirely focused on her greasy prey."
-    
+
     show fang happy flip with dissolve
 
     "After a few test bites she throws the whole thing in the air{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -737,7 +737,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     F "Nuh uh, no fuckin’ way."
 
     "Fangs’ wings shield her face in embarrassment."
-    
+
     show tana neutral flip with dissolve
 
     "My phone goes off again."
@@ -809,7 +809,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     T "What’s Naser doing here?"
 
     show trish neutral flip
-    show stella explanatory flip 
+    show stella explanatory flip
     with Dissolve(.25)
 
     St "What’s with the trailer?"
@@ -823,7 +823,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     "I give Naser a wave and he rips the tarp off."
     show anon neutral flip with dissolve
     pause 1
-    
+
     play music 'audio/ost/bayside_revamp.ogg' fadein 0.5
     show trish:
         easein_quart 1.5 xalign 0.7 #0.7
@@ -866,7 +866,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     "The flatbed has been made into a makeshift stage, and gleaming in the sunlight is the complete equipment set of VVURM DRAMA, speakers and all."
     pause .5
 
-    show anon grin with dissolve 
+    show anon grin with dissolve
 
     A "Sorry, Fang, I kind of stole your idea for a surprise."
 
@@ -954,7 +954,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
 
     F "JIM JONES DID NOTHING WRONG!{w=.4}{nw}"
     extend "\nHIS FLAVORAID WAS MAGIC,{w=.4}{nw}"
-    extend "\nIF SOME WOULD SAY IT’S STRONG"
+    extend "\nIF SOME WOULD SAY IT’S STRONG."
     pause .5
 
     "Man Reed needs to chill on the carfe-lyric writing."
@@ -1010,7 +1010,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     F "POPPED SOME RAT POISON RIGHT DOWN THEIR DRINKS,{w=.4}{nw}"
     extend "\nALL THE OTHER PIECE OF SHIT INMATES LOOK AT ME WEIRD AND WAIL,{w=.4}{nw}"
     extend "\nI SWEAR TO RAPTOR JESUS, I'M AT MY BRINK!{w=.4}{nw}"
-    extend "\nI GAVE THE SPECIAL KIDS THE JONESTOWN SPECIAL"
+    extend "\nI GAVE THE SPECIAL KIDS THE JONESTOWN SPECIAL!"
 
     stop music fadeout 6
     F "{cps=*.5}AND NOW I'M GOING TO {cps=*.4}JAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIL{/cps}!{/cps}"
@@ -1214,7 +1214,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     "It feels like I’d be ruining Trish’s moment if I stayed."
     pause .5
 
-    show rosa considering flip with Dissolve(.25) 
+    show rosa considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
     Ro "Anon, you’re going to sing too, right?"
     pause .5
 
@@ -1252,7 +1252,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     "The song ends with no one thankfully laughing at me."
 
     "Trish inhales sharply and blows out the candles."
-    
+
     show reed explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
     Re "So, what’d you wish for{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?"
     show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
@@ -1340,11 +1340,11 @@ label chapter_x6:
 
     stop music fadeout 5
     pause 1
-    
+
     scene black with Dissolve(2)
     pause .5
-    
+
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 2
 
-    return
+    return

game/script/x8-naomi-tribulations.rpy

@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ label chapter_x8:
     with fade
     Sp "... And lastly, here is your own desk to work at."
 
-    play sound "audio/effects/Slam.ogg"
+    play sound "audio/effects/anonDeskSlam.ogg"
     "My principal slaps the top of an aged, yet official looking table furnished with a lamp and its own drawers." with vpunch
 
     "Most students in any school would only ever be seated behind the regular ‘board on some sticks’ model, maybe one with a little cubbyhole built in for binders if the school were old enough."

game/storyline.rpy

@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 init -1 python:
     def ending_image():
-        #0b0000, ABCD, flash the bits with |=, check with &
+        #0b0000, DCBA, flash the bits with |=, check with &
         endings = 0b0000
         _e = 0b1
         for i in range(1, 5):
-            fn = str(i)+"of4"
+            fn = "e"+str(i)+"of4"
             endings |= (_e * renpy.seen_image(fn))
             _e = _e << 0b1
         persistent.endings = endings
@@ -25,14 +25,14 @@ label storyline:
     if _return == 4:
         call chapter_11D
         call chapter_12D
-        call chapter_13
+        call chapter_12_5D
         call chapter_13D
         call chapter_14D
     elif _return == 3:
         $ tradwife = True
         call chapter_11C
         call chapter_12C
-        call chapter_13
+        call chapter_12_5C
         call chapter_13C
         call chapter_14C
     elif _return == 2:
@@ -86,6 +86,6 @@ label .ending:
        pause 20
     elif anonscore >= 4 and fangscore >= 4:
        scene ending_d_cg with Dissolve(1.5)
-       pause 20 
+       pause 20
     scene black with Dissolve(2)
     return