ch3 alterations from feedback

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Bowie 2021-08-02 13:10:28 +01:00
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@ -465,7 +465,7 @@ label chapter_3:
I "Naomi hovers over Naser,{w=.4} who currently has Gucci under his eyes."
pause .5
Nas "So,{w=.3} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Talked to the soccer team earlier."
Nas "So,{w=.3} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} talked to the soccer team earlier."
Nas "Theyre going to make the first game after all."
@ -480,9 +480,9 @@ label chapter_3:
ease 1.5 xalign 1.075
repeat
Nas "I also{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Got the L&L Club to finally take down their christmas decorations{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
Nas "I also{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} got the L&L Club to{w=.4} {cps=*.5}finally take down their{w=.3} christmas decorations{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
Nas "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} The librarys clean again{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
Nas "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} {cps=*.3}{size=-5}the librarys{/size}{size=-10} clean again...{/cps}{/size}"
pause .5
show naser:
@ -592,13 +592,14 @@ label chapter_3:
N "But from Anon?"
A "But from me?"
pause .5
I "Naser continues."
Nas "I asked her what she was doing,{w=.4} and she just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
show naser unimpressed flip
Nas "Just says 'fuck off...',{w=.4} so I think 'maybe dad will help'."
Nas "Just says{w=.2} 'fuck off...',{w=.4} so I think 'maybe dad will help'."
show naser sad flip
Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}He didnt."
@ -620,6 +621,8 @@ label chapter_3:
easeout_quart 1 xalign 1.3 yalign -0.3
pause .5
hide naser with dissolve
show naomi shocked
play sound 'audio/effects/anonHeadbutt.ogg'
with vpunch
stop sound fadeout 1
@ -628,9 +631,10 @@ label chapter_3:
I "Theres a rumbling snore and its clear that Naser has checked out."
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{cps=*.5}Riiiiiiiight{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
show naomi sad with dissolve
I "Naomi looks distraught."
pause .5
N "Hes always like this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -682,7 +686,7 @@ label chapter_3:
play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
I "GOOD LORD HES HEAVY." with vpunch
stop music fadeout 2
stop music fadeout 4
pause .5
N "Alright,{w=.4} the Nurses Office is down the main hall on the left side,{w=.4} near the front desk."
@ -890,6 +894,10 @@ label chapter_3:
stop music fadeout .25
play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
show dimmer_light:
alpha 0
show dimmer_light:
linear 0.25 alpha 1
A "SHIT!" with vpunch
pause .5
@ -899,6 +907,7 @@ label chapter_3:
pause .5
I "Do I really want to pick it up and potentially face a harsh reality?"
pause .5
I "{cps=*.5}Schrodingers crack.{/cps}"
@ -910,15 +919,23 @@ label chapter_3:
I "Its the moment of truth."
pause .5
show anonphone with easeinbottom
pause .5
I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}No cracks?"
pause .5
hide dimmer_light with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg'
I "Thank the Lord."
show fang happy at scenter with Dissolve(1)
show fang happy at scenter behind anonphone with Dissolve(1)
F "Yeah,{w=.3} you got lucky."
hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
F "Yeah,{w=.5} you got lucky."
pause .5
I "Fang has stopped playing and is throwing a small smirk my way."
@ -1150,6 +1167,8 @@ label chapter_3:
I "Oh."
show anon:
easein_back 1 xalign 0.25
I "I step around her and grab the handle,{w=.4} pulling the door wide open."
pause .5
@ -1164,14 +1183,14 @@ label chapter_3:
show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
show fang neutral flip behind anon:
easeout 1 xalign 0.25
pause .4
hide fang with dissolve
pause .25
easeout 1 xalign 0.15
pause .6
play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg'
show anon shocked:
easein_elastic 0.5 yalign -0.05 xalign -0.3
show fang:
linear 0.25 xalign 0.15 alpha 0
A "FUCK!" with vpunch
F "Hurry up already."
@ -1255,19 +1274,27 @@ label chapter_3:
show jewlcase at truecenter:
xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5
xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5 zoom 0.3
linear 0.5 align (.15, .4) knot (0.25, 0.25) rotate 395
show jewlcase behind dimmer_light with dissolve
play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
linear 0.4 align (.15, .4) knot (0.25, 0.25) rotate 395
show jewlcase behind dimmer_light with Dissolve(.4)
play sound 'audio/effects/anonDink.ogg'
show anon:
easein_quart 0.25 xalign -0.3 #-0.275
easein 0.25 xalign -0.275
easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.4
# B: previous iteration of this animation commented out
# easein_quart 0.25 xalign -0.3 #-0.275
# easein 0.25 xalign -0.275
# show jewlcase:
# easein_quart 0.25 xpos 0.14
# easein 0.25 xpos 0.15
# pause 0.5
# show jewlcase:
# easeout_cubic 0.5 ypos 1.1 rotate 445
show jewlcase:
easein_quart 0.25 xpos 0.14
easein 0.25 xpos 0.15
pause 0.5
show jewlcase:
easeout_cubic 0.5 ypos 1.1 rotate 445
pause 1.5
xpos .15 ypos .4
linear 0.5 align (.3, 1.5) knot (0.25, 0.25) rotate 180
pause .2
show anon sad flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause 1
hide jewlcase
show trish angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
T "What the fuck?!"
@ -1275,12 +1302,20 @@ label chapter_3:
I "It strikes against my head with a dull *tonk* and lands on the ground in front of me."
pause .5
show jewlcase:
xalign 0.5
show anon neutral with dissolve
pause .25
show anon:
easein 1 xalign -0.275
pause .5
# leet renpy hax
show jewlcase
show dimmer_light behind jewlcase
show fang behind jewlcase
show trish behind jewlcase
show reed behind jewlcase
hide jewlcase
show jewlcase with easeinbottom:
rotate 20 xalign 0.5 zoom 1.5 yalign 0.5
show dimmer_light as xtra_dimmer behind jewlcase with Dissolve(.25)