13d nearly done

game/script.rpy

@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@ image fangonamp = "images/cgs/finalamp.png"
 image schooloutside normal = "images/backgorunds/outside school.jpg"
 image schooloutside blurred = im.Blur("images/backgrounds/outside school.jpg", 1.8)
 image sodacan blurred = im.Blur("images/other/sodacan.png", 1.8)
-image fangdadlarge = "images/fangparents/fangdad neutral large.png"
+image fangdadlarge = "images/fangparents/fangdadneutral large.png"
 
 image home fang night blurred = im.Blur('images/backgrounds/home fang night.jpg', 2.0)
 image home fang night lessblurred = im.Blur('images/backgrounds/home fang night.jpg', 1.5)

game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy

@@ -126,14 +126,20 @@ label chapter_13C:
     with fade
 
     FM "Lucy will be downstairs in a bit, she’s just getting the last of her makeup on!"
-    hide fangmom with easeoutleft
+    show fangmom neutral flip at sright:
+        ease_cubic 2.5 xpos -0.5
+    pause 2.0    
+    hide fangmom with dissolve 
     FM "In the meantime, take a seat! I’ve got some cookies in the oven that are almost ready!"
 
     A "Er, yes, thank you ma’am."
 
     "I take my seat in the usual spot, sinking in and feeling the pillows conform around my spine."
 
-    hide anon with easeoutright
+    show anon prom neutral at aleft:
+        ease_cubic 2.5 xpos 1.5
+    pause 1.5
+    hide anon with dissolve
 
     scene black with fade
 
@@ -148,7 +154,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     "Now that I think about it, I’m surprised I haven’t seen him yet."
     pause 0.5
-    show fangdadlarge neutral at sleft with easeinleft:
+    show fangdadlarge at sleft with easeinleft:
         xalign -0.5
     FD "So…"
 
@@ -167,6 +173,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
     FD "You’d be surprised how useful staying quiet and stationary can be."
 
     FD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing-"
+    hide fangdadlarge with dissolve
     show fangdad neutral at sleft with dissolve
     show fangmom unimpressed flip at fmcenter with dissolve
 

game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy

@@ -123,15 +123,23 @@ label chapter_13D:
     with fade
 
     FM "Lucy will be downstairs in a bit, she’s just getting the last of her makeup on!"
-    hide fangmom with easeoutleft
+    
+    show fangmom neutral flip at sright:
+        ease_cubic 2.5 xpos -0.5
+    pause 2.0    
+    hide fangmom with dissolve 
+
     FM "In the meantime, take a seat! I’ve got some cookies in the oven that are almost ready!"
 
     A "Er, yes, thank you ma’am."
 
     "I take my seat in the usual spot, sinking in and feeling the pillows conform around my spine."
 
-    hide anon with easeoutright
-
+    show anon prom neutral at aleft:
+        ease_cubic 2.5 xpos 1.5
+    pause 1.5
+    hide anon with dissolve
+        
     scene black with fade
 
     scene home fang night with fade
@@ -145,7 +153,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Now that I think about it, I’m surprised I haven’t seen him yet."
     pause 0.5
-    show fangdadlarge neutral at sleft with easeinleft:
+    show fangdadlarge at sleft with easeinleft:
         xalign -0.5
     FD "So…"
 
@@ -164,6 +172,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     FD "You’d be surprised how useful staying quiet and stationary can be."
 
     FD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing-"
+    hide fangdadlarge with dissolve
     show fangdad neutral at sleft with dissolve
     show fangmom unimpressed flip at fmcenter with dissolve
 
@@ -253,7 +262,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     FD "I’ll scare who I want in my home."
 
-    show fangmom neutral at fmcenter behind fang with easeinleft
+    show fangmom neutral at fmleft behind fang with easeinleft:
+        xalign 0.3
 
     "Fang’s mom saves me, taking the mountainous pterodactyl by his head crest."
 
@@ -268,7 +278,20 @@ label chapter_13D:
     F "Best thing to do is get it over with."
 
     FM "That’s right.{w=0.2} Alright everyone, group together, this one’s going on Christmas postcards for sure!"
-    scene home fang day with fade
+    scene white with fade
+    show black with Fade(0.14, 0, 0, color="#fff")
+    show black
+    show white
+    pause .01
+    show white with Fade(0, 1, 3, color="#fff")
+    pause .01
+    scene home fang night blurred with dissolve
+    pause 0.1
+    scene home fang night lessblurred with dissolve
+    pause 0.1
+    scene home fang night barelyblurred with dissolve
+    pause 0.1
+    scene home fang night with fade
     show anon prom neutral:
         xalign -0.1 yalign 0.1
     show fang d prom neutral behind anon:
@@ -283,6 +306,29 @@ label chapter_13D:
     F "Later."
 
     "The onslaught of flashes continues as the four of us are directed to stand and pose together in every possible combination."
+    scene white with fade
+    show black with Fade(0.14, 0, 0, color="#fff")
+    show black
+    show white
+    pause .01
+    show white with Fade(0, 1, 3, color="#fff")
+    pause .01
+    scene home fang night blurred with dissolve
+    pause 0.1
+    scene home fang night lessblurred with dissolve
+    pause 0.1
+    scene home fang night barelyblurred with dissolve
+    pause 0.1
+    scene home fang night with fade
+    show anon prom neutral:
+        xalign -0.1 yalign 0.1
+    show fang d prom neutral behind anon:
+        xalign 0.1 yalign 0.1
+    show naser prom neutral flip:
+        xalign 0.9 yalign 0.1
+    show naomi prom neutral flip:
+        xalign 1.1 yalign 0.1
+    with fade
 
     "After a millenia Fang’s mother is satisfied, or her camera ran out of storage."
 
@@ -321,7 +367,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     A "But what?"
     show naomi prom angry flip at scenter
 
-    N "But, I mean… Just look at her."
+    N "But, I mean…{w=0.2} Just look at her."
 
     N "The school year’s almost over and she’s barely changed from being that weird punk-goth type."
 
@@ -329,7 +375,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "So?"
 
-    N "I mean, I thought you would try to make her… Presentable, you know?"
+    N "I mean, I thought you would try to make her… {w=0.2}Presentable, you know?"
 
     "Mmm, love me some water."
 
@@ -426,10 +472,10 @@ label chapter_13D:
     A "Bye Naomi, enjoy your hat."
 
     "We leave a speechless Naomi fuming in the kitchen and head towards the front door."
-    scene home fang night
-    show fangmom neutral at fmleft
-    show fang d prom neutral at sright
-    show anon prom neutral at acenter
+    scene home fang night with fade
+    show fangmom neutral at fmleft with dissolve
+    show fang d prom neutral flip at scenter with easeinright
+    show anon prom neutral flip at aright with easeinright
     "...And are promptly intercepted by Fang’s mother still holding her camera."
 
     "I guess she found another card for it."
@@ -461,8 +507,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "I manage a nod as Fang grabs my hand and leads me out the door with her guitar in the other."
 
     scene home fang outside night with dissolve
-    show anon prom neutral at aleft
-    show fang d prom neutral at scenter
+    show fang d prom neutral at scenter with easeinleft
+    show anon prom neutral at aleft with easeinleft
 
     A "Let me call the taxi…"
 
@@ -495,7 +541,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     play music "audio/OST/bayside_revamp.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "The driver turns his head and looks over at us."
 
-    D "Ay, it’s my favorite couple again! How’s the leg, skinnie?"
+    D "Ay, it’s my favorite couple again!{w=0.2} How’s the leg, skinnie?"
 
     "The driver chuckles at his own remark."
 
@@ -505,7 +551,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "This guy must stake out wherever we go."
 
-    "Aren’t there {i}any{/i} other taxi drivers in this town?"
+    "Aren’t there {i}any other{/i} taxi drivers in this town?"
 
     "I open the door for Fang and we climb in the back, fitting her guitar behind the driver’s seat."
     scene taxi night
@@ -572,16 +618,18 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Those nerdy little chinese lanterns are strung about from wall to wall."
 
     F "Gotta wonder who picked decorations that go perfectly with her dress."
-    show fang d prom neutral at sleft
+    show fang d prom neutral at sleft with dissolve
     A "Perks of the job."
-    show anon prom neutral flip at sright
+    show anon prom neutral flip at sright with dissolve
     "Fang leads me to the temporary stage on the other side of the gymnasium where a curtain had been set up."
 
     "Thanks to her guitar lessons I feel like I can actually help get her set up instead of standing around doing nothing."
 
     "We slip behind the curtain and come face to face with King Rex, smoke billowing out of his mouth."
-    show reed king rex flip behind anon:
+    show reed king rex flip behind anon with dissolve:
         xalign 1.3 yalign 0.0
+    show fang d prom neutral at sleft:
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign -0.15
     Re "...’Sup?"
     "Reed must be helping Spears with the sound system."
 
@@ -603,7 +651,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     pause 0.5
     "Reed dusts off his hands and lets out a sigh, releasing another mushroom cloud of smoke from the costume."
 
-    Re "Man… I haven’t talked to you guys in ages, y’know?"
+    Re "Man…{w=0.2} I haven’t talked to you guys in ages, y’know?"
 
     Re "Not since the whole… {w=0.3}projector thing."
 
@@ -668,7 +716,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     show anon prom neutral flip with dissolve
 
-    A "Wh-how? This has got to be at least a month’s worth of food."
+    A "Wh-how?{w=0.2} This has got to be at least a month’s worth of food."
 
     F "I dunno, she just did it."
 
@@ -738,7 +786,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Then she raises an eyebrow and her smile curls a bit more."
 
-    F "Wait, Anon, are you…?"
+    F "Wait,{w=0.2} Anon, are you…?"
     pause 0.5
     F "BAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAAH!"
 
@@ -796,7 +844,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "On my way over to the catering table something catches the corner of my eye."
 
-    show trish prom neutral at sleft
+    show trish prom neutral at sleft with dissolve
 
     "Sitting alone at a table in the back is Trish, blankly staring at her phone and not touching the plate of food in front of her."
     play music "audio/OST/Appreciating her Company.ogg" fadein 1.0
@@ -805,7 +853,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     Re "{alpha=0.5}{i}She’s still suuuuper beating herself up over it, don’t wanna isolate her even more, y’know?{/i}{/alpha}"
 
-    "God… damn it, Reed."
+    "God… {w=0.3}damn it, Reed."
 
     "I really don’t feel like playing therapist again, especially at prom."
 
@@ -818,6 +866,13 @@ label chapter_13D:
     A "Is this seat taken?"
 
     "Trish looks up from her phone and her face flies through a myriad of emotions."
+    show trish prom indignant with Dissolve(.11)
+    show trish prom angry with Dissolve(.11)
+    show trish prom happy with Dissolve(.11)
+    show trish prom neutral with Dissolve(.11)
+    show trish prom angry with Dissolve(.11)
+    pause .1
+    show trish prom neutral at sleft with dissolve
     "At first confused, then fucking pissed, then aroused, then back to fucking pissed, all in the space of an attosecond."
 
     A "Hey…{w=0.3} Lookin’ good in that dress."
@@ -874,7 +929,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Trish is focused completely on me now.{w=0.2} Okay brain, help me out here."
 
-    A "I saw you sat here. No date,{w=0.2} no friends,{w=0.2} no nothing."
+    A "I saw you sat here.{w=0.2} No date,{w=0.2} no friends,{w=0.2} no nothing."
 
     "Ah, bad choice, Trish’s face sunk at each word."
 
@@ -913,6 +968,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "But it’d crush Fang if she never talks with her best friend again."
 
+    stop music fadeout 2.0
+    pause 0.5
     play music "audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
     "Trish’s eyes widen."
@@ -1059,10 +1116,12 @@ label chapter_13D:
     T "Oh, sure. Gimme a bit."
 
     "She heads off and I go sit in the same spot on the bleachers as before."
+    show trish prom neutral at tcenter with dissolve
     hide trish with easeoutright
-
+    pause 0.5
     "Well then.{w=0.2} Got some time to kill, time to shitpo-"
-    scene prom with vpunch
+
+    show anon prom neutral at aleft with vpunch
     "*THUNK*"
 
     A "Whoa, Trish, warn me before you jump into the chair."
@@ -1071,7 +1130,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     Sp "My bad."
 
-    A "Oh {cps=*0.5}ffff{/cps}-flint, hello Principal Spears."
+    A "Oh {cps=*0.25}ffff{/cps}-flint, hello Principal Spears."
 
     A "Is Fang doing alright?"
 
@@ -1089,7 +1148,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     Sp "I can tell you’re going places, son."
 
-    A "I-I see. Thanks."
+    A "I-I see.{w=0.2} Thanks."
 
     "Principal Spears leans over and places one of his gargantuan hands on my shoulder."
 
@@ -1105,7 +1164,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "Giving Naomi and Naser their crowns?"
 
-    Sp "Heh. It’s a bit obvious, but I won’t ruin their moment."
+    Sp "Heh.{w=0.3} It’s a bit obvious, but I won’t ruin their moment."
 
     Sp "Alright, be seeing you."
 
@@ -1132,7 +1191,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Whatever."
 
-    "Three… Two… One…"
+    "Three… {w=0.3}Two…{w=0.3} One…"
 
     "Refreshing…"
 
@@ -1166,7 +1225,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Spears takes to the stage with mic in hand for once."
     scene prom
-    show spears neutral at scenter
+    show spears neutral at scenter with dissolve
     Sp "Alright everyone. Before we end tonight’s prom we have a couple of items to take care of."
     stop music fadeout 1.0
 
@@ -1202,8 +1261,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
     show spears neutral with easeinleft:
         xalign -0.2 yalign 0.0
     show naser prom happy at sleft with easeinleft
-    show naomi prom happy flip with easeinleft:
+    show naomi prom happy with easeinleft:
         xalign 0.9 yalign 0.0
+    show naomi prom happy flip with dissolve     
     "Spears backs out of the spotlight, giving a polite applause to the pair as they rush onstage to accept."
 
     "The rest of the class is in a celebratory uproar."
@@ -1358,7 +1418,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "It’s a picture-perfect moment."
 
-    "Wait. Missing one thing."
+    "Wait.{w=0.2} Missing one thing."
 
     "I extend one arm out toward Naomi, who I know is suffering from rectal-ragnarok by now, and raise one finger in particular at her."
 
@@ -1369,11 +1429,11 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     label FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh:
     #Fast Times at Volcano High
-    "-Two Weeks Later-"
+    "{cps=*0.2}--  Two Weeks Later --{/cps}"
 
     scene beach with fade
 
-    show anon neutral at acenter
+    show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve
     play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg"
     "Time seemed to fly after prom, honestly."
 
@@ -1401,7 +1461,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "It was Fang’s job to get the pizza."
 
-    "I, the broke fuck that I am, was put in charge of the fire and finding a good pit for it."
+    "I,{w=0.2} the broke fuck that I am,{w=0.2} was put in charge of the fire and finding a good pit for it."
 
     Nas "{i}You people are good at making fires, right Anon?{/i}"
 
@@ -1422,39 +1482,45 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Right as I reach into my pocket for my phone, a van chugs onto the sand from the distance."
 
     "It stops right in front of me and Trish flies out the side door, gasping for breath."
-    show anon neutral flip at aright with move
+    show anon neutral flip at aright with ease
     show trish neutral at scenter with easeinleft
-    T " *huff*, *huff*..."
+    T " *huff*{w=0.2}, *huff*..."
 
     A "You look like you just got choked out by Spears."
 
+    show trish neutral flip at scenter with dissolve
     "She just points back to the van."
 
     "The drivers’ door opens, letting out a gust of smoke from within."
 
     "Reed emerges from the cloud as if nothing’s wrong."
 
-    T "Reed... *huff*... Your car.... *huff*..."
+    T "Reed... {w=0.2}*huff*... {w=0.2}Your car.... {w=0.2}*huff*..."
     show reed explanatory at sleft with easeinleft
     Re "Oh yeah, you like it? It’s an electric!"
 
+    show trish neutral at scenter with dissolve:
+      xalign 0.0
+      ease_cubic 0.5 rotate -90 yalign -0.5
+
     "Trish collapses in the sand."
 
     "Before I can check if she’s still breathing, a stereotypical mariachi car horn catches my attention."
-
+    show anon neutral at aright with dissolve
     "I swing around and catch Stella and Rosa exiting a hot pink Prius, each with a pair of phone speakers in their hands."
-
+    show anon neutral flip at aright with dissolve
     "Waving to them, my focus returns to Reed now helping Trish off the ground."
+    show trish neutral at scenter with dissolve:
+      xalign 0.0
+      ease_cubic 0.5 rotate 0 yalign 0.2
+
     show reed with move:
         xalign -0.55
     show trish with move:
-        xalign -0.05
+        xalign -2.1
     show anon neutral with move:
         xalign 0.25 yalign 0.0
-    show fang neutral behind anon with easeinright:
-        xalign 0.45
-    show naser neutral flip with easeinright:
-        xalign 0.85
+
     show rosa neutral flip with easeinright:
         xalign 1.05
     show stella neutral flip with easeinright:
@@ -1472,6 +1538,11 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Fang emerges from the backseat and waves at me."
 
     "She hunches into the car to get out the pizza boxes and starts striding towards us."
+    show fang neutral flip behind anon with easeinright:
+        xalign 0.45
+    show naser neutral flip with easeinright:
+        xalign 0.85
+    show fang neutral behind anon with dissolve
 
     Nas "...c’mon babe, please. You know she didn’t do it on purpose!"
 
@@ -1484,7 +1555,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Naomi erupts from the car in a frothing rage, her shirt noticeably stained an orange-red."
 
-    show naomi angry flip behind naser with move:
+    show naomi angry flip behind naser with easeinright:
         xalign 0.70
 
     F "Ha! Wish I did."
@@ -1493,7 +1564,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     N "How on *EARTH* did you throw a pizza on me from the backseat and get it back in the box?!"
 
-    Re "Naser, bro... you were driving the whole time, right?"
+    Re "Naser, bro...{w=0.2} you were driving the whole time, right?"
 
     Nas "Yeah, why?"
 
@@ -1506,7 +1577,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     Nas "Here, take my jacket."
 
     "Naser starts sliding the jacket off his back and…"
-
+    pause 0.5
     "What the-...?"
 
     "What is this noneuclidean bullshit I see before me."
@@ -1576,7 +1647,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     show naomi neutral flip
     with dissolve
 
-    Nas "You… Whatever, I’ll try to keep Naomi from calling the police, fine."
+    Nas "You… {w=0.3}Whatever, I’ll try to keep Naomi from calling the police, fine."
 
     Re "You’re a real bro, man…"
     show naser neutral flip with dissolve
@@ -1598,15 +1669,15 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     N "Her song wasn’t even that good! *hic*"
 
-    N "Why was it us who gets *hic*, gets the short end of the stick?!"
+    N "Why was it us who gets *hic*{w=0.3}, gets the short end of the stick?!"
 
-    Nas "I mean, I mean, I liked it…"
+    Nas "I mean{w=0.2}, I mean, I liked it…"
 
     N "You’ve said that a dozen times already…"
 
     Re "Y’know, I’m something of a gardener myself."
 
-    Ro "Oh! Really? You should have joined the gardening club back at school, we had the loveliest little poppy bed."
+    Ro "Oh!{w=0.2} Really? You should have joined the gardening club back at school, we had the loveliest little poppy bed."
 
     Re "Poppies, you say? The coincidences keep piling up, don’t they…"
 
@@ -1672,9 +1743,10 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Reed glances behind him before throwing his head back in laughter."
 
     Re "Little party trick, bro…"
-
+    #empty can throw?
     "He grabs one of Naser’s empty cans and tosses it in my lap."
 
+    #get can held up, blur bg?
     "Holding it up to the light, I barely make out the words ‘NON ALCOHOLIC’ written in microscopic font."
 
     A "So you mean they’re-"
@@ -1697,11 +1769,11 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "The two virgin drunks turn their attention to us, Naser clearly ‘deep’ in thought."
 
-    Nas "Aw, man, like… I’m gonna be- gonna go and be a nur- nyros- sturgon."
+    Nas "Aw, man, like… {w=0.5}I’m gonna be-{w=0.2} gonna go and be a nur-{w=0.2} nyros-{w=0.1} sturgon."
 
     #show naomi neutral with dissolve
 
-    N "My bad boy’s soooooooooo smart!"
+    N "My bad boy’s {cps=*0.5}soooooooooo{/cps} smart!"
 
     "Gross."
 
@@ -1719,7 +1791,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Reed lets out a sigh and turns back towards me."
 
-    Re "So, like, for real though... what are you gonna do now that school’s over, man?"
+    Re "So, like, for real though... {w=0.2}what are you gonna do now that school’s over, man?"
 
     menu:
 
@@ -1739,7 +1811,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     #show reed explanatory with dissolve:
     #   xalign -0.55
 
-    A "Yeah, something like that… What about you?"
+    A "Yeah, something like that…{w=0.2} What about you?"
 
     Re "Me? Flow with the go, dude. Like the dinos of old, gotta get in sync with the universe first, y’know?"
 
@@ -1749,7 +1821,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "The miniature triceratops bursts out from the other side of the bonfire, catching me off guard."
 
-    T "We’ll do hair and horns and piercings and- oh! Engravings too! Fang even said-"
+    T "We’ll do hair and horns and piercings and-{w=0.2} oh! Engravings too! Fang even said-"
 
     F "That I’d be your first customer, I’ve told you a million times by now"
 
@@ -1763,7 +1835,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "You’re not going to burn your yearbook, are you? That thing was like, eighty bucks!"
 
-    F "What? No! How drunk are you, you dork?"
+    F "What?{w=0.2} No! How drunk are you, you dork?"
 
     A "This many."
 
@@ -1771,7 +1843,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Hmmmm… Gonna need some more beer to fix that."
 
-    F "God, Anon, I was thinking we could all… I dunno… sign it? I saw a lot of others doing that."
+    F "God, Anon, I was thinking we could all…{w=0.2} I dunno… {w=0.2}sign it? I saw a lot of others doing that."
 
     A "Oh…"
 
@@ -1797,7 +1869,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     St "Oh I know exactly what to write! First let me do a palm reading!"
 
-    Re "Heh… I’ll sign it too."
+    Re "Heh…{w=0.2} I’ll sign it too."
 
     N "WOOOOOOOOOO!"
 
@@ -1815,7 +1887,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "{i}Even the most wilted flower flourishes under God’s light. -Rosa{/i}"
 
-    "I think reading that one counts for my next few church visits. Amen, Raptor Jesus."
+    "I think reading that one counts for my next few church visits. {w=0.2}Amen, Raptor Jesus."
 
     "{i}The future is something that you build by yourself. - Stella{/i}"
 
@@ -1823,9 +1895,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "I can’t decipher either Naser or Naomi’s. Naser’s looks like a bunch of chicken scratched scribbles, while Naomi’s looks like her chickens went to college and got a doctorate."
 
-    F "Anon? Hellooooo. You’ve been staring at the page for the past five minutes."
+    F "Anon? {w=0.2}Hellooooo.{w=0.2} You’ve been staring at the page for the past five minutes."
 
-    A "Right right. Just uh… thinking of what to put."
+    A "Right right. Just uh… {w=0.2}thinking of what to put."
 
     "Okay, Anon, something meaningful. Something that’ll remind Fang of you every time she reads it."
 
@@ -1855,7 +1927,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     stop music fadeout 1.0
     scene black with fade
     label tink:
-    "-Six months later-"
+    "{cps=*0.2}-- Six months later --{/cps}"
 
     play music "audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "After prom night and graduation life slowed down."
@@ -1869,7 +1941,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Though I don’t think I can talk about some of the things I’ve seen."
 
     "I’ll never be able to look at marinara the same way."
-
+    pause 0.5
     "But pasta-based trauma aside, it’s now the day after Christmas."
 
     "I’m sitting in my bed, looking through one of my favorite presents."
@@ -1878,7 +1950,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "As I look through the scrapbook spread across my lap I can’t help but reminisce about the best year of my life."
 
-    F "*SSSSNRRRRRRK*"
+    F "*{cps=*0.6}SSSSNRRRRRRK{/cps}*"
 
     "I have to contain my laugh, but Fang looks ridiculously cute curled up beside me in my bed."
 
@@ -1890,7 +1962,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "*Beep boop beep*"
 
-    "*VRRRRRRRRRMMMM*"
+    "*{cps=*0.6}VRRRRRRRRRMMMM{/cps}*"
 
     F "‘M UP!"
 
@@ -1907,7 +1979,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Reed was right, the carpet really helped to tie the room together."
 
-    F "...Anon? You here?"
+    F "...Anon? {w=0.3}You here?"
 
     A "On the floor."
 
@@ -1917,7 +1989,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "...Yoga?"
 
-    F "Riiiiight."
+    F "{cps=*0.6}Riiiiight{/cps}."
 
     show anon neutral at aleft with moveinbottom
 
@@ -1962,7 +2034,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Her face glows a soft pink in embarrassment."
 
-    A "D’aaaaawww… Someone’s embarrassed."
+    A "D’aaaaawww…{w=0.2} Someone’s embarrassed."
 
     F "And someone is about to be on the floor again."
 
@@ -1980,7 +2052,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Not like Fang can do what a staircase could."
 
-    F "Stop. Cuddles now. Scrapbook later."
+    F "Stop.{w=0.3} Cuddles now.{w=0.3} Scrapbook later."
 
     A "Hahahahalright. Cuddles it is."
 
@@ -2016,7 +2088,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "I kiss the snoot one final time and get another elbow as my reward."
 
-    F "In.suf.fer.a.ble."
+    F "In.{w=0.2}suf.{w=0.2}fer.{w=0.2}a.{w=0.2}ble."
 
     "I snatch the scrapbook at last."
 

game/script/14C.good-ending.rpy

@@ -5,11 +5,11 @@ label chapter_14C:
     scene park fair with fade
     play music "audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
-    "Volcaldera Bluffs. New duty station. Recruiting teens to suffer just like I did."
+    "Volcaldera Bluffs. {w=0.2}New duty station.{w=0.2} Recruiting teens to suffer just like I did."
 
     "Good times, good times."
 
-    show anonc neutral at aleft
+    show anonc neutral at aleft with dissolve
     "With my rucksack on my back and a cheap rolling case at my side I make my way down to my old stomping ground for some cheap living."
 
     "Three years. I wonder if Lucy still lives here."
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "Stupid?"
 
-    F "Yeah- no, I mean careless. Innocent."
+    F "Yeah- no, I mean careless.{w=0.2} Innocent."
 
     A "Suppose we were."
 
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "Kids can be, Jack mean to each other."
 
-    F "But not cruel. The world makes them cruel."
+    F "But not cruel.{w=0.4} The world makes them cruel."
 
     F "Until then...{w=0.3}they're free. We gotta protect their freedom. Save them from our mistakes."
 
@@ -525,7 +525,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     F "Anon, I-"
 
-    "Her fingers lightly roll across the keys"
+    "Her fingers lightly roll across the keys."
 
     "She retracts herself."
 
@@ -726,7 +726,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
     stop music fadeout 1.0
     scene city morning with fade
     play sound "audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance.ogg" fadein 5.0
-    "We made our way towards her car door, but before getting in, she once again embraces me, This time a little stronger."
+    "We made our way towards her car door, but before getting in, she once again embraces me, this time a little stronger."
 
     show c09 with dissolve
 

game/script/9.anons'-dirty-laundry-gets-put-up-to-air.rpy

@@ -1181,7 +1181,7 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     "I peel myself from around the bollard, feeling every bone in my body creak painfully."
 
-    scene schooloutside blurred at wiggle
+    scene schooloutside_blur at wiggle
     #scene outside school
     show anon neutral at aleft:
       xalign 0.5 yalign 0.0 rotate -90