ch6 tweaks from feedback

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Bowie 2021-08-29 16:58:22 +01:00
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commit 782af8b237
4 changed files with 46 additions and 16 deletions

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@ -6,5 +6,5 @@ WoodSnap.wav - "Snapping, Wooden Fence, N.wav" by InspectorJ (www.jshaw.co.uk) o
firealarm.ogg - "School Fire Alarm" by Cullen Card
shot.ogg - "38 Caliber Gun Shot 5x" by Mike Koenig
wind.wav - "Wind" by Mark DiAngelo
punch.ogg - "Strong Punch" by Mike Koenig
menacing.ogg - "Scaryscape 01" by Suonho (soundcloud.com/suonho) of Freesound.org
rumble.ogg - "CinematicBoomNorm" by Herbert Boland
sizzle.ogg - "Hot Sizzling" by Mike Koenig

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@ -65,7 +65,11 @@ label chapter_6:
"Fang:{fast}{w=.3} Do you want to come with?"
pause .5
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Alone{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}{w=.4} No,{w=.2} shut the fuck up alarms."
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Alone{nw}"
play sound 'audio/effects/alarmklaxonloop.ogg' fadein 0.5
extend "{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}{w=.4} No,{w=.2} shut the fuck up alarms."
stop sound fadeout 3
"Anon:{fast}{w=.3} Why alone?"
@ -82,6 +86,7 @@ label chapter_6:
#cut to Reed in bathroom cg
Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Dude{w=.2} like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} back to the story{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
#cut back to Anon
"Anon:{fast}{w=.3} Alright, where we dropping?"
@ -179,11 +184,14 @@ label chapter_6:
show anon:
easeout_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.1
pause 1.5
pause 1.25
stop ambient fadeout 3
play music "audio/OST/Tracy was fired from her real job.ogg"
show anon:
easein_back 1 xalign 0.1
SV "Some storm,{w=.5} eh?"
pause .5
@ -226,7 +234,9 @@ label chapter_6:
A "Maybe later.{w=.4} Ill keep it in mind."
pause .5
show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
show tracy unimpressed
show anon neutral flip
with dissolve
"I turn to leave,{w=.4} behind me I hear the vendor mutter to herself."
show anon:
@ -291,24 +301,29 @@ label chapter_6:
menu:
"Knock":
stop ambient fadeout 1
pause .5
"Before my knuckles reach the door it swings open."
"Text Fang":
stop ambient fadeout 1
pause .5
"Before I can hit Send the door swings open."
stop ambient fadeout 1
pause .5
play music "audio/OST/Prized Bowling Ball.ogg" fadein 1.0
play music "audio/OST/Prized Bowling Ball.ogg" fadein 0.6
# TODO: thunder or other sudden-but-lingering bassy rumble
play sound 'audio/effects/rumble.ogg'
play ambient 'audio/effects/hungrybeast.ogg' fadein 1
show dimmer_light behind anon
show dimmer_darker behind anon
with vpunch
hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(1)
"{cps=*.5}{i}What is this killing intent?!{/i}{/cps}"
stop ambient fadeout 3
pause .5
show fangdad neutral flip:
@ -319,9 +334,14 @@ label chapter_6:
pause .5
unknown "Hm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5} you Anon?"
play ambient 'audio/effects/alarmclicheloop.ogg' fadein 0.5
show dimmer_lighter behind anon with Dissolve(.25)
"Shitshitshitalarms shut the fuck up right now please I need to think."
pause .5
stop ambient fadeout 1
hide dimmer_lighter with dissolve
A "Y-{w=.1}yeah,{w=.3} Im Anon.{w=.4} P-{w=.2}pleased to m-{w=.4}meet you uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
@ -1176,7 +1196,7 @@ label chapter_6:
scene park
show naser neutral:
xalign 0.1 yalign 0.0
xalign 0.1 yalign 0.1
show fang unimpressed flip:
yalign 0.0 xalign 0.9
show anon neutral flip:
@ -2249,7 +2269,7 @@ label chapter_6:
Nas "Dad said hell do to {i}me{/i} anything that you do to Fang!"
pause .5
"Anon, Fang & Naomi" "{cps=*.3}...What...{/cps}"
"Anon Fang & Naomi" "{cps=*.3}...What...{/cps}"
# F "...What..."
# A "...What..."
@ -2257,7 +2277,7 @@ label chapter_6:
pause .5
Nas "Fang,{w=.4} you gotta promise to not let Anon do anything creepy."
Nas "Fang,{w=.3} you gotta promise to not let Anon do anything creepy."
pause .5
show askfang2 with Dissolve(.25)
@ -2345,9 +2365,13 @@ label chapter_6:
"Now its just the two of us."
"Alone."
pause .5
"Oh and theres the alarms again.{w=.4} I think Im finally starting to tune them out though."
play ambient2 'audio/effects/alarmklaxonloop.ogg' fadein 0.5
pause .5
"Oh and theres the alarms again.{w=.4} {nw}"
stop ambient2 fadeout 4
extend "I think Im finally starting to tune them out though."
pause .5
stop ambient fadeout 3
@ -2524,6 +2548,7 @@ label chapter_6:
A "Living in the ass-end of this place,{w=.4} Ive picked up a thing or two."
pause .5
$ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3, 'ambient')
show black with dissolve
"The two of us check the sparsely located buildings one by one."
@ -2533,6 +2558,7 @@ label chapter_6:
"Several hours pass as both the sun and the temperature drops."
pause .5
$ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 3, 'ambient')
show fang unimpressed
hide black with dissolve
pause .5
@ -2550,6 +2576,8 @@ label chapter_6:
A "Still,{w=.4} we must have checked dozens of places by now."
A "But why wont anyone have a band?"
stop ambient fadeout 4
play music "audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg" fadein 1.0
pause .5
@ -2650,7 +2678,7 @@ label chapter_6:
"He puts the device on,{w=.3} and it whirrs to life,{w=.4} slowly crossing the screen."
pause .5
"When it reaches the edge,{w=.3} it beeps and turned around,{w=.4} making a return trip to where it started."
"When it reaches the edge,{w=.3} it beeps and turns around,{w=.4} making a return trip to where it started."
"After a few trips,{w=.4} the merchant turns the roomba off and gives us an expectant leer."
pause .5
@ -3032,7 +3060,7 @@ label chapter_6:
show fang angry:
easein_back 0.4 xalign 0.05
pause .25
# TODO: possibly some kind of quick sizzle SFX?
play sound 'audio/effects/sizzle.ogg'
show anon:
easein_quart 1 xalign 0.95
pause .1
@ -3097,10 +3125,13 @@ label chapter_6:
show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
F "But the venue{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
stop music fadeout 4
A "We still have time.{w=.5} So,{w=.4} pizza first and then we find a place for your show."
pause .5
Moe "Someone say pizza?"
play music 'audio/OST/Venetian Values.ogg' fadein 1
pause .5
show moe neutral flip behind fang:
@ -3153,7 +3184,6 @@ label chapter_6:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.65
Moe "Mister?{w=.5} Young punk ya don need ta be so formal."
show anon:
easein_back 1 xalign 0.75
show moe: