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@@ -2315,7 +2315,7 @@ label chapter_1:
scene hallway with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"After what feels like a space decade of walking, or really just half an hour I find the crippled pteradon being accosted by a {cps=*0.1}VERY{/cps} pissed off purple midget."
"After what feels like a space decade of walking, or really just half an hour, I find the crippled pteranodon being accosted by a {cps=*0.1}VERY{/cps} pissed off purple midget."
window hide
window auto
@@ -2341,7 +2341,7 @@ label chapter_1:
show trish:
easein_elastic 0.5 xalign 0.075
play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg' volume .75
T "DON'T CUT ME OFF YOU GRAY PIECE OF SHIT!" with vpunch
T "DON'T CUT ME OFF, YOU GRAY PIECE OF SHIT!" with vpunch
pause .5
show naser unimpressed flip with dissolve
@@ -2477,7 +2477,7 @@ label chapter_1:
N "Oh,{w=0.3} Anon."
show naomi neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
N "Don't worry about it,{w=0.4} it's nothing."
N "Don't worry about it.{w=0.4} It's nothing."
show naser explanatory flip with Dissolve(0.25)
@@ -2523,7 +2523,7 @@ label chapter_1:
window show Dissolve(0.0001)
Sp "{i}ANON MOUS,{w=0.4} IF YOU ARE NOT IN MY OFFICE WITHIN TEN MINUTES I SWEAR ON MY DEAR FAMILY I WILL PERSONALLY MOUNT YOU ON MY WALL.{/i}" with vpunch
Sp "{i}ANON MOUS,{w=0.4} IF YOU ARE NOT IN MY OFFICE WITHIN TEN MINUTES, I SWEAR ON MY DEAR FAMILY I WILL PERSONALLY MOUNT YOU ON MY WALL.{/i}" with vpunch
$ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 1, 'ambient')
play sound "audio/effects/paEndReverb.ogg" volume 0.25
@@ -2543,7 +2543,7 @@ label chapter_1:
show naser considering
with dissolve
Nas "It can wait, the office is down this hall on the right."
Nas "It can wait. The office is down this hall on the right."
A "I know the way, but thanks."
@@ -2738,7 +2738,7 @@ label chapter_1:
pause 1
show reed considering with Dissolve(.25)
unknown "Don't worry man, it happens to new students all the time{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
unknown "Don't worry, man. It happens to new students all the time{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
A "Wha-?"
@@ -2747,7 +2747,7 @@ label chapter_1:
pause .5
show reed happy with Dissolve(.25)
unknown "If you're looking for the office you're gonna wanna go thataway."
unknown "If you're looking for the office, you're gonna wanna go thataway."
A "Oh-{w=0.3} thanks."
@@ -2785,9 +2785,9 @@ label chapter_1:
pause .75
"As I near the office I can feel a heavy tension suffusing the air."
"As I near the office, I can feel a heavy tension suffusing the air."
"In front of the principals' office is Naomi and some other chick, engaged in a heated conversation."
"In front of the principal's office is Naomi and some other chick, engaged in a heated conversation."
window hide
window auto
@@ -2800,7 +2800,7 @@ label chapter_1:
show trish indignant flip with Dissolve(.25)
unknown "Come on, Naomi, there's no reason at all for you to keep us from selling merchandise at school!"
unknown "Come on, Naomi. There's no reason at all for you to keep us from selling merchandise at school!"
show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
@@ -2833,7 +2833,7 @@ label chapter_1:
T "{b}ARGH!{/b}" with vpunch
pause .5
T "I don't have time for this, I need to go track someone down."
T "I don't have time for this. I need to go track someone down."
show trish angry with Dissolve(.25)
hide trish with easeoutright
@@ -2859,9 +2859,9 @@ label chapter_1:
N "Sorry you had to see that, Anon."
pause .5
N "Oh, I didn't notice we were blocking the door from you, my apologies."
N "Oh, I didn't notice we were blocking the door from you. My apologies."
A "The principal asked to see me early, I'm not really in any rush."
A "The principal asked to see me early. I'm not really in any rush."
show naomi neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
N "Very commendable of you, though!"
@@ -2887,7 +2887,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"I open the door to the cramped office, expecting to see a gruff cave of a workspace."
"Instead, it was a fairly well furnished space complete with armchairs and cabinets of old photos."
"Instead, it was a fairly well-furnished space complete with armchairs and cabinets of old photos."
window hide
window auto
@@ -3000,7 +3000,7 @@ label chapter_1:
pause 1.25
"Hello tinnitus my old friend{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
"Hello, tinnitus, my old friend{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
pause 0.5
@@ -3022,7 +3022,7 @@ label chapter_1:
pause 0.75
"Oh god am I stuck like this?"
"Oh God, am I stuck like this?"
pause 0.5
@@ -3030,9 +3030,9 @@ label chapter_1:
stop sound fadeout 2
$ renpy.music.set_volume(1.0, 2, 'music')
Sp "-dismissed Naomi."
Sp "-dismissed, Naomi."
Sp "And just to be absolutely clear, Anon did ask you for this, correct?"
Sp "And just to be absolutely clear, Anon did ask you for this, is that correct?"
show naomi explanatory
@@ -3083,7 +3083,7 @@ label chapter_1:
A "W{w=0.1}-what?"
Sp "Just kidding. You're good to go Anon, and don't forget this."
Sp "Just kidding. You're good to go, Anon. Don't forget this."
show spears:
easein 0.5 xalign 0.9
@@ -3092,18 +3092,18 @@ label chapter_1:
Sp "Just keep in mind,"
Sp "As a senior, this semester is your last, your biggest chance to figure your future out."
Sp "As a senior, this semester is your last — your biggest chance to figure your future out."
Sp "Even if you're new to all of us here at Volcano High, we're here to help you make the most of it."
pause .5
"Huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "Thank you, Mister Spears."
A "Thank you, Mr. Spears."
show spears happy flip
"Mr. Spears nods and gives a small smile."
"Mr. Spears nods and gives me a small smile."
Sp "You can come in anytime. I'm always here to listen."
@@ -3169,7 +3169,7 @@ label chapter_1:
unknown "{b}{cps=*2}IMMAKILLYOUTRIGGA!{/cps}{/b}" with vpunch
pause .5
"The student body collectively rolls their eyes and continues on, choosing to ignore the pissed off trigga as she finally forces the helpless guy to the floor and sits triumphantly on his chest."
"The student body collectively rolls their eyes and continues on, choosing to ignore the pissed off trigga as she finally forces the helpless guy to the floor and sits triumphantly on top of his chest."
pause .5
"I'm pretty sure some would pay good money for this treatment."
@@ -3177,9 +3177,9 @@ label chapter_1:
"The ineffectual pummel-slapping included as she flails at the raptor's face."
pause .5
T "You were there last night weren't you?!"
T "You were there last night, weren't you?!"
unknown "YES, ALRIGHT, I WAS! GET OFF ME YOU PSYCHO BITCH!"
unknown "YES, ALRIGHT, I WAS! GET OFF ME, YOU PSYCHO BITCH!"
T "You owe my band an apology!"
@@ -3270,7 +3270,7 @@ label chapter_1:
show naser unimpressed flip with dissolve
Nas "Anyways, Reed. I'm sorry for how things went last night, I didn't think those assholes would laugh at you."
Nas "Anyways, Reed. I'm sorry for how things went last night. I didn't think those assholes would laugh at you."
show dimmer_light behind anon, naser, reed with dissolve
@@ -3282,9 +3282,9 @@ label chapter_1:
show reed unimpressed
with Dissolve(.25)
Re "Nah man, s'cool."
Re "Nah, man. S'cool."
Re "They called me because they wanted me to kill bugs crawling on the drums with a couple sticks, I don't know why a bunch of people came there to watch it."
Re "They called me because they wanted me to kill bugs crawling on the drums with a couple sticks. I don't know why a bunch of people came there to watch it."
pause .5
Nas "Right{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.4} And you're absolutely sure Trish is taking it okay?"
@@ -3293,7 +3293,7 @@ label chapter_1:
Re "Hell yeah, man. Nothin' goin' on in the Trish department at all."
pause .5
"Reed suddenly reaches into his pocket and retrieves his phone, tapping away at a shockingly long password."
"Reed suddenly reaches into his pocket and retrieves his phone, tapping in a shockingly long password."
pause .5
show reed shocked:
@@ -3364,7 +3364,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"I've been focusing a bit less on class, and more on getting a routine down to avoid unwanted confrontation."
"It's like it's only me and the teacher in class, phasing out everyone else."
"It's like it's only me and the teacher in class, and I'm tuning everyone else out."
play ambient 'audio/effects/schoolLoop.ogg' fadein 3
scene hallway
@@ -3372,23 +3372,23 @@ label chapter_1:
with Dissolve(1.5)
pause .5
"I follow the flow of students towards the lunchroom, mindlessly looking about the halls."
"I follow the flow of students towards the cafetaria, mindlessly looking about the halls."
"Passing by the athletic awards case, a decent amount of group photos have Naser front and center."
"Passing by the athletic awards case, I see a decent amount of group photos with Naser front and center."
"Apparently this school is pretty well known for their track team."
"Apparently, this school is pretty well-known for their track team."
"In a similar vein, Naomi is present in a good deal of the photos in the academic achievement case."
"The last case was reserved for general awards, I guess trophies that don't belong anywhere else."
"The last case was reserved for general awards. I guess that's the trophies that don't belong anywhere else."
pause .5
"The school has a few commendation awards for their efforts to stop bullying."
"Feh, they pass those around to every school."
"Feh, they hand those out to every school."
pause .5
"Looking around, there's several posters on the walls here."
"Looking around, there's several related posters on the walls here."
"All simple slogans to stop the evil bully menace."
@@ -3396,13 +3396,13 @@ label chapter_1:
"They always went all in with those efforts."
"One time they even got the whole student body into the auditorium to watch a short movie."
"One time, they even got the whole student body into the auditorium to watch a short movie."
"Some frail, pasty kid gets pestered by a chubby, buff bully."
"Some frail, pasty kid got pestered by a chubby, buff bully."
"The kid ended up trying to run away and got hit by a car, with the credits scrolling over a scene in the hospital."
"Everyone in class just said things like \"Man,{w=0.2} good thing I'm not like that bully.\", \"Yeah, if I ever see a bully like that I'll help the kid!\""
"Everyone in class just said things like \"Man,{w=0.2} good thing I'm not like that bully.\", \"Yeah, if I ever see a bully like that, I'll help the kid!\""
pause .5
"Then they went right back to talking about me."
@@ -3423,7 +3423,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"I'm here now."
"With the lunch card in my possession I'm able to snag something actually edible."
"With the lunch card in my possession, I'm able to snag something actually edible."
"I should run the math on how much I'll end up owing, but I feel more like indulging myself."
@@ -3432,7 +3432,7 @@ label chapter_1:
pause .5
menu:
"Grab the cookies you fatass":
"Grab the cookies, you fatass":
pass
@@ -3446,7 +3446,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"Hence my tray stacked high with desserts and the tastiest looking sandwich from the lunchline."
pause .5
"Looking around for a place to sit I see the aggravating creamsicle waving at me."
"Looking around for a place to sit, I see the aggravating creamsicle waving at me."
pause .5
stop ambient1 fadeout 6
@@ -3502,7 +3502,7 @@ label chapter_1:
show naomi:
easein 0.5 xalign 0.95
pause 0.5
N "Naser sweetie, you shouldn't play with your food."
N "Naser, sweetie, you shouldn't play with your food."
show naomi:
easein 0.5 xalign 1.0
@@ -3531,7 +3531,7 @@ label chapter_1:
show naser angry flip with dissolve
Nas "Fang stayed home today."
Nas "Fang stayed at home today."
Nas "The concert was a shitshow and they wanted to avoid everyone. I knew I shouldn't have invited all those guys."
@@ -3572,7 +3572,7 @@ label chapter_1:
easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.05
show naomi shocked flip with Dissolve(.25)
A "Whoa whoa, calm down man."
A "Whoa whoa! Calm down, man."
Nas "What else? Did they say anything about Fang?!"
pause .5
@@ -3595,7 +3595,7 @@ label chapter_1:
show naomi:
easein 0.5 xalign 0.9
pause 0.5
N "Naser! Please calm yourself!"
N "Naser! Please calm yourself down!"
show naser:
linear 0.2 xalign .7
@@ -3626,10 +3626,10 @@ label chapter_1:
N "You just need to give her some time, Naser."
"While she said that I noticed a strange expression cross over Naomi's face."
"I noticed a strange expression cross over Naomi's face as she said that."
pause .5
Nas "I know babe. I just wish I could help them more."
Nas "I know, babe. I just wish I could help them more."
pause 0.5
A "Yeah. If you need any help Naser, I owe ya for the pizza."
@@ -3645,15 +3645,15 @@ label chapter_1:
"Day two out of however many left is now out of my way."
pause .5
"I'm fairly certain that if Naser found out I laughed too I'd need to avoid him."
"I'm fairly certain if Naser found out I laughed too, I'd need to avoid him."
"Those cheeto covered claws look like they'd freakin' hurt, man."
"Those Cheeto-covered claws look like they'd freakin' hurt, man."
stop music fadeout 6
pause .5
"With that drama now past me I can just disappear and cheese through the rest of the year like I'm invisible."
"With that drama now past m,e I can just disappear and cheese through the rest of the year like I'm invisible."
"Oh when June hits it's gonna be so sweet."
"Oh, it's gonna be so sweet when June hits."
pause .5
"Amen to that."