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@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ label chapter_2:
show naomi considering with dissolve
N "Really sorry, Anon, but the tour will have to end here."
A "It was fine. Hopefully it just doesn't make my allergies flare."
A "It was fine. Just hope it doesn't make my allergies flare."
window hide
window auto
@@ -363,19 +363,19 @@ label chapter_2:
"Or a mix of the two{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}"
"Either way there's something on her mind."
"Either way, there's something on her mind."
pause .5
"I can't help but think that that must be how I looked on my first day."
"But it was my first day of school, she had been going here all year."
"But that was my first day of school. She had been going here all year."
"What's her excuse then?"
pause .5
"Either way, doesn't look like she recognizes me."
"Objective one out of whatever of the current year is accomplished then, next one is memorizing the class schedule."
"Objective one out of whatever of the current year is accomplished then. next one is memorizing the class schedule."
"And that says it's homeroom in fifteen minutes."
pause .5
@@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ label chapter_2:
show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
F "What? No!"
F "it's multiple!"
F "It's multiple!"
pause .5
A "They're dinosaurs though, right?"
@@ -476,7 +476,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"I call them poison pheromones."
pause .5
"But it is relieving that she didn't recognize me. Guess Naser didn't tell her."
"But it is a relief that she didn't recognize me. Guess Naser didn't tell her."
window hide
window auto
@@ -515,7 +515,7 @@ label chapter_2:
with Dissolve(1.5)
pause .5
"The day passes uneventfully until fourth period, Science Class."
"The day passes uneventfully until fourth period, Science class."
"I find a seat near the back of the room and watch the clock hands tick down the remaining few seconds to the bell."
@@ -547,9 +547,9 @@ label chapter_2:
pause .5
show farnsworth at sright with Dissolve(1)
Drf "Good news everyone!"
Drf "Good news, everyone!"
Drf "Today we'll be having a lab on magnetic fields."
Drf "Today, we'll be having a lab on magnetic fields."
Drf "Find a partner and get prepared."
@@ -577,7 +577,7 @@ label chapter_2:
show farnsworth at sright with dissolve
Drf "Hurry up Mr. Anon, your partner is waiting for you."
Drf "Hurry up, Mr. Anon. Your partner is waiting for you."
window hide
window auto
@@ -597,7 +597,7 @@ label chapter_2:
hide farnsworth with dissolve
pause .5
"I sat in momentary confusion as someone took the seat next to mine."
"I'm left in momentary confusion as someone takes the seat next to mine."
window hide
window auto
@@ -628,7 +628,7 @@ label chapter_2:
hide dimmer_darker with dissolve
pause .5
F "‘Sup."
F "'Sup."
pause .5
A "Thanks, you too."
@@ -662,12 +662,12 @@ label chapter_2:
A "O-oh. You upset right now or something?"
show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
F "What was your first fuckin' clue."
F "What was your first fuckin' clue?"
F "Last time I'll say it, just do the assignment and don't.{w=.4} Bother.{w=.4} Me."
F "Last time I'll say it: just do the assignment and don't.{w=.4} Bother.{w=.4} Me."
pause .5
"Okay! Got to keep coolheaded."
"Okay! Got to keep cool-headed."
pause .5
A "So this assignment, then."
@@ -678,9 +678,9 @@ label chapter_2:
scene black with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"With that we open our books and start on trying to decipher who Lorentz is and why his force is magnetic."
"With that, we open our books and start on trying to decipher who Lorentz is and why his force is magnetic."
"Things are going well for the first few questions, I remember a bit of it from that one time I tried to make a railgun."
"Things are going well for the first few questions. I remember a bit of it from that one time I tried to make a railgun."
window hide
window auto
pause .5
@@ -697,11 +697,11 @@ label chapter_2:
Drf "How are you two doing so far?"
show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
F "We're{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Fine, Dr. Fernsworth."
F "We're{cps=*.1}...{/cps} fine, Dr. Fernsworth."
Drf "I see, and you Anon?"
A "Yeah what she said."
A "Yeah, what she said."
window hide
window auto
@@ -748,7 +748,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"Oh Raptor Jesus almighty this is the absolute worst case scenario."
pause .5
"The infuriated pteradactyl's wings spread wide and her taloned finger jabs my chest."
"The infuriated pterodactyl's wings spread wide and her taloned finger jabs my chest."
pause .5
show fang:
@@ -761,11 +761,11 @@ label chapter_2:
show fang:
easein_quad 0.2 xalign -0.48
F "I. Am.{fast} Non.{w=0.5}{nw}"
F "I. Am.{fast} Non-{w=0.5}{nw}"
show fang:
easein_back .4 xalign -0.3
F "I. Am. Non.{fast} Binary."
F "I. Am. Non-{fast}binary."
"How was I supposed to know something so trivial would set something like this off?!"
pause .5
@@ -821,7 +821,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"All eyes are on Fang."
"And in Fangs' eyes I see something flash briefly."
"And in Fang's eyes, I see something flash briefly."
"Judging by those exaggerated movements and the eloquent speech, this is something Fang had been practicing."
pause .5
@@ -829,10 +829,10 @@ label chapter_2:
"This was supposed to be a big moment where she stopped an evil bigot and the whole class would clap."
pause .5
"In all her planning and practice Fang had made one crucial error."
"In all her planning and practice, Fang had made one crucial error..."
pause 1
"Nobody cared."
"...nobody cared."
window hide
window auto
@@ -858,7 +858,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"Dr. Fernsworth turns a sympathetic look towards me."
Drf "Forgive them, Anon, you must understand that Fang is{cps=*.1}...{/cps} experiencing issues."
Drf "Forgive them, Anon. You must understand that Fang is{cps=*.1}...{/cps} experiencing issues."
window hide
window auto
@@ -899,7 +899,7 @@ label chapter_2:
show fang sad flip at sright with Dissolve(2)
pause .5
"After a few moments Fang comes back in and sits down without a word."
"After a few moments, Fang comes back in and sits down without a word."
pause .5
show fang sad flip:
@@ -980,7 +980,7 @@ label chapter_2:
pass # use this instead when the outcome doesnt matter - copy-pasting identical dialogue should always be avoided
"Sorry Fang I should have known from your feminine appearance and dress that you are, in fact, non-binary...":
"Sorry, Fang. I should have known from your feminine appearance and dress that you are, in fact, non-binary...":
pass
@@ -1004,9 +1004,9 @@ label chapter_2:
"There's a brief pause until Fang speaks up again."
pause .5
F "Yes. Naser's my baby brother, why do you ask?"
F "Yes. Naser's my baby brother. Why do you ask?"
A "I was just curious, Naser has been helping me settle into the school."
A "I was just curious. Naser has been helping me settle into the school."
F "Of course he did. {w=.4}{nw}"
show fang unimpressed
@@ -1700,7 +1700,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"He holds out my backpack to me."
Re "‘Ere ya go, man."
Re "'Ere ya go, man."
pause .5
show reed:
@@ -1795,7 +1795,7 @@ label chapter_2:
A "Hrmmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
Re "‘s fine for you to be worried."
Re "'s fine for you to be worried."
Re "You'll see, she's plenty nice."
pause .5
@@ -2025,7 +2025,7 @@ label chapter_2:
A "When did you-{w=.5} {i}How{/i}?!"
show reed explanatory flip
Re "Come on, man, I've got a mean case of munchies."
Re "Come on, man, I've got a mean case of the munchies."
show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
window hide
window auto
@@ -2067,7 +2067,7 @@ label chapter_2:
show trish neutral
show fang unimpressed
with dissolve
F "What do you mean my halter top is ‘out' right now? I haven't noticed a difference."
F "What do you mean my halter top is 'out' right now? I haven't noticed a difference."
show trish explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
T "I'm telling you, the next thing is going to be leotards."