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Fix select comma splices

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There are a lot of comma splices, but “fixing” them all would
totally change the feel of the game.  These two were the only
ones that stood out in any way thus far.
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Seth M. Price
2024-05-27 19:47:05 -04:00
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@ -729,7 +729,7 @@ label chapter_1:
N "I think he means the loan program, sir."
Sp "Tell him to come in later, I’m dealing with another student."
Sp "Tell him to come in later; I’m dealing with another student."
pause .65
play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
@ -2213,7 +2213,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"The halls before class are as crowded as always, with hundreds of students filing in unison towards their homerooms."
"By now I was starting to be able to make my way around on autopilot, I've walked the same path twice already after all."
"By now I was starting to be able to make my way around on autopilot—I've walked the same path twice already after all."
pause .5
"Even after the longest sleep of my life, I still feel miserably tired and ready to crash once again."