rework ch6 roomba merchant scene with new sprite & dialogue

game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy

@@ -4604,6 +4604,7 @@ label chapter_11:
         "We ended up ditching the last few classes and just go back to my apartment again."
 
         "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+        pause .5
 
         jump .PromAnnouncement
 

game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy

@@ -2557,7 +2557,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     play music "audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg" fadein 1.0
     pause .5
 
-    unknown "{cps=*.6}Her reputation precedes her.{/cps}"
+    unknown "{cps=*.6}Her Reputation,{w=.3} it does so Precede her.{/cps}"
 
     show fang angry with Dissolve(.25)
     "Fang’s pupils contract."
@@ -2579,51 +2579,87 @@ label chapter_6:
     F "WHAT!" with vpunch
     pause .5
 
-    "The shopkeeper shrugs sympathetically."
-
-    unknown "See what I mean."
+    unknown "As you can see,{w=.3} her Reputation,{w=.3} does Precede her."
 
     show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Choke on a platter of cocks."
     pause .5
 
-    unknown "Everyone here knows her family."
+    unknown "Everyone here,{w=.3} knows of her,{w=.4} especially of her family."
 
     show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
     F "A full platter!{w=.5} Stacks high!"
     pause .5
 
-    A "Look,{w=.2} buddy,{w=.4} you’ve gotta know a place that’ll let us play."
-
-    unknown "{cps=*.3}Weeeell,{/cps}{w=.4} maybe I can uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} point ya in the right direction{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-
-    unknown "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}For a price{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    show fritatta:
+        yalign -0.4 xalign 1.5 zoom 0.8
+    show fritatta:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.1
+    with dissolve
     pause .5
 
-    "Oh god damn it."
-
-    show fang angry with Dissolve(.25)
-    F "No way!"
+    "I look at the{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    A "Fine,{w=.4} I’ll pay."
+    "What the fuck am I looking at?!"
 
-    show anon:
-        ease 1 xalign 0.9
-    show fang:
-        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.4
-    show fang considering with dissolve
+    unknown "Do not think thoughts you cannot,{w=.4} Perceive."
+    pause .5
+
+    "Reed’s uncle then."
+
+    unknown "The uncle you seek is elsewhere."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "What"
+    pause .5
+
+    unknown "Yes,{w=.3} I know of that,{w=.3} which you,{w=.3} oh so,{w=.3} Desperately seek."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang surprised with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Wait,{w=.3} you know a venue?{w=.5 } Where?!"
+
+    unknown "But first,{w=.3} the Ritual,{w=.3} that must be Conducted."
+
+    "Finally,{w=.4} progress."
     
-    "I can hear my wallet commit sudoku in my pocket."
+    show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "No way!"
+
+    A "Tell us."
+
+    "Anything to get away from this guy."
     pause .5
 
-    unknown "Buy this here Phone Roomba and I’ll tell ya."
+    unknown "We will,{w=.3}  Partake,{w=.3}  in the ancient humiliation that has slain,{w=.3} my entire lineage."
+
+    unknown "Even my own,{w=.3} Family,{w=.3} offed in this deadly sport before I was even born."
+
+    unknown "The humiliation is diabolically easing,{w=.3} a Clutching,{w=.3} of earthly currency."
+
+    unknown "For as long,{w=.3} as I can stand to hold it."
+
+    unknown "And to the victorious,{w=.3} my own artifact holding me to this flimsy visage,{w=.3} a Phone Roomba."
+    pause .5
 
     A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}A phone roomba."
 
-    unknown "Cleans yer phone.{w=.4} Sorta cute lookin’."
+    unknown "Only the finest tool to clean your phone."
 
-    show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
+    unknown "Here,{w=.3} let me show you it’s brushing majesty."
+
+    "He feels around his fanny-pack for one of the roombas,{w=.4} then holds his phone out on one hand."
+
+    "He puts the device on,{w=.3} and it whirrs to life,{w=.4} slowly crossing the screen."
+    pause .5
+
+    "When it reaches the edge,{w=.3} it beeps and turned around,{w=.4} making a return trip to where it started."
+
+    "After a few trips,{w=.4} the merchant turns the roomba off and gives us an expectant leer."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
     F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I just use my shirt though{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -2644,7 +2680,7 @@ label chapter_6:
 
     label .notBuyingTheFuckingRoomba:
 
-    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+    show anon shrug with dissolve
     A "Fang,{w=.3} we can find the place on our own."
     pause .5
 
@@ -2658,13 +2694,21 @@ label chapter_6:
     show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
 
     label .RoombaConvergence:
-    "I slap down the money on the thieving rhinorex’s booth."
+    "I slap down the money on Reed’s maybe-family’s booth."
 
-    unknown "Good on ya,{w=.2} lad,{w=.4} there’s good ole’ Dino-moe’s a bit west o’ here.{w=.5} Ole Moe loves hostin’ you kids."
+    unknown "Very well,{w=.3} the contest is yours,{w=.3} along with this trinket."
+
+    # changed "bizarre" to "bazaar"
+    unknown "Head east,{w=.3} of this filthy Bazaar,{w=.3} and you will find your Destiny{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    unknown "At Dino-Moe’s."
+    pause .5
 
     A "The pizza chain?"
 
-    unknown "Close,{w=.3} kid.{w=.5} Trust me on this."
+    unknown "You will come to understand my wisdom once you reach it.{w=.5} Fare thee well,{w=.4} seekers of Musical Amphitheaters."
+    pause .5
 
     "The shopkeeper gives one last smug wave to us."
     pause .5
@@ -2674,7 +2718,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     scene black with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
-    "I motion for Fang to follow and start heading in the direction the shopkeeper showed me."
+    "I motion for Fang to follow and start heading in the direction the shopkeeper showed us."
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"