Only bits and pieces done

This also removes the enum shit that was introduced but never merged to master, because we don't need it.

game/script.rpy

@@ -313,18 +313,17 @@ screen textscroll():
 
 # Naser's position when helping Anon get up
 transform nmidright:
-   xalign 1.5 yalign 0.08
+    xalign 1.5 yalign 0.08
 
 # Naomi's position when handing the brochure to Anon
 transform scloserleft:
-   xalign 0.1 yalign 0.0
+    xalign 0.1 yalign 0.0
 
 
 
 label start:
     $ fangscore = 0
     $ anonscore = 0
-    $ tradwife = False
     $ wingStory = False
     pause 1.0
     call storyline from _call_storyline

game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy

@@ -586,12 +586,12 @@ label chapter_11:
     pause .5
 
     call get_ending from _call_get_ending_1
-    if _return == 4:
-        jump lSortingThings # Golden
-    elif _return == 3:
-        jump lMendingThings # Tradwife
+    if _return == 4: # Golden
+        jump lSortingThings
+    elif _return == 3: # tradwife
+        jump lMendingThings
     else:
-        jump lBreakingThings # Shooter
+        jump lBreakingThings # All else fails, go to shooter.
 
     label lSortingThings:
 
@@ -3847,7 +3847,7 @@ label chapter_11:
         pause .5
 
         show rosa neutral behind moe:
-           yalign 0.2 xalign 0.0
+            yalign 0.2 xalign 0.0
         show rosa:
             easein_back 2 yalign 0.2 xalign 0.9
         with dissolve
@@ -5212,7 +5212,7 @@ label chapter_11:
     pause .5
 
     call get_ending from _call_get_ending_2
-    if _return == 3: #tradwife
+    if _return == 3: # tradwife
 
         "Things are going pretty well. When we discount Trish’s weekly attempt to talk with Fang."
 
@@ -5245,9 +5245,9 @@ label chapter_11:
 
     scene classroom
     show anon neutral:
-       yalign 0.1 xalign 0.2
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.2
     show fang neutral behind anon:
-       yalign 0.0 xalign 0.8
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.8
     with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
@@ -5466,100 +5466,103 @@ label chapter_11:
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
+    # skip this segment if we're doing ending 1
     call get_ending from _call_get_ending_3
-    if _return != 1: # any route except Shooter
-        # duplicated segment from 11B, 11C and 11D transplanted here
-        window hide
-        window auto
-        pause .5
+    if _return == 1: #shooter
+        return
+    
+    # the following segment makes sense in the context of 11B+11C+11D
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause .5
 
-        play music "audio/OST/Appreciating her Company.ogg" fadein 1.0
-        pause .5
+    play music "audio/OST/Appreciating her Company.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    pause .5
 
-        "About fifteen minutes into the assignment, the two of us are just about done."
+    "About fifteen minutes into the assignment, the two of us are just about done."
 
-        "We’re making surprisingly good time."
+    "We’re making surprisingly good time."
 
-        show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
-        F "Uhm{cps=*.1}...{/cps} and you said that the electrons hold the negative charge, right?"
+    show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Uhm{cps=*.1}...{/cps} and you said that the electrons hold the negative charge, right?"
 
-        A "Yeah, yeah."
+    A "Yeah, yeah."
 
-        show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
-        F "Can’t imagine when I’d be using this crap in real life."
+    show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Can’t imagine when I’d be using this crap in real life."
 
-        A "You never know, you might shrink one day."
+    A "You never know, you might shrink one day."
 
-        show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
-        F "Yeah, and you might stop pretending you’re livestreaming on Yousnoot."
-        pause .5
+    show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Yeah, and you might stop pretending you’re livestreaming on Yousnoot."
+    pause .5
 
-        A "As far as you know I might be giving you incorrect answers, you know."
+    A "As far as you know I might be giving you incorrect answers, you know."
 
-        F "Mhm, sure."
-        pause .5
+    F "Mhm, sure."
+    pause .5
 
-        "The teacher is making his rounds checking on the students and gets to our desks."
-        window hide
-        window auto
+    "The teacher is making his rounds checking on the students and gets to our desks."
+    window hide
+    window auto
 
-        show farnsworth:
-            yalign 0.1 xalign 1.6
-        show farnsworth:
-            easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.2
-        with dissolve
-        pause .5
+    show farnsworth:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.6
+    show farnsworth:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.2
+    with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
-        Drf "Hello, Anon. Fang."
+    Drf "Hello, Anon. Fang."
 
-        Drf "Are you two getting along well?"
+    Drf "Are you two getting along well?"
 
-        AnonAndFang "Yes, Doctor Fernsworth."
+    AnonAndFang "Yes, Doctor Fernsworth."
 
-        Drf "Great to hear."
-        pause .5
+    Drf "Great to hear."
+    pause .5
 
-        Drf "You know, I’m real proud of you two."
-        pause .5
+    Drf "You know, I’m real proud of you two."
+    pause .5
 
-        Drf "I remember at the start of the year you were at each other's throats."
+    Drf "I remember at the start of the year you were at each other's throats."
 
-        Drf "And now look at you!"
-        pause .5
+    Drf "And now look at you!"
+    pause .5
 
-        show anon concerned
-        show fang sad
-        with dissolve
-        "The two of us cringe."
-        pause .5
+    show anon concerned
+    show fang sad
+    with dissolve
+    "The two of us cringe."
+    pause .5
 
-        A "Uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Yeah, thanks."
+    A "Uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Yeah, thanks."
 
-        Drf "At any rate, you two understand the material, right?"
+    Drf "At any rate, you two understand the material, right?"
 
-        show anon happy
-        show fang neutral
-        with dissolve
-        A "Oh yeah, Fang and I are fine."
+    show anon happy
+    show fang neutral
+    with dissolve
+    A "Oh yeah, Fang and I are fine."
 
-        show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
-        A "I was just helping them with a few problems."
-        pause .5
+    show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    A "I was just helping them with a few problems."
+    pause .5
 
-        "Phew, remembered it this time."
+    "Phew, remembered it this time."
 
-        Drf "Good, good."
+    Drf "Good, good."
 
-        Drf "I won’t keep you any longer then."
+    Drf "I won’t keep you any longer then."
 
-        show farnsworth:
-            easeout_cubic 1 xalign 1.6
-        pause .5
-        hide farnsworth with dissolve
+    show farnsworth:
+        easeout_cubic 1 xalign 1.6
+    pause .5
+    hide farnsworth with dissolve
 
-        "Fernsworth meanders to pester the next few students."
-        pause .5
+    "Fernsworth meanders to pester the next few students."
+    pause .5
 
-        A "Anyways, where were we?"
+    A "Anyways, where were we?"
 
     return

game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy

@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     show naomi prom neutral:
         yalign 0.0 xalign -0.4
     show naomi prom neutral:
-       easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.125
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.125
     with dissolve
     pause .5
 
@@ -690,13 +690,11 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .5
 
     menu:
-     "Could be worse":
+        "Could be worse":
+            A "Could be worse."
 
-       A "Could be worse."
-
-     "Going great, actually":
-
-       A "Going great, actually."
+        "Going great, actually":
+            A "Going great, actually."
 
     pause .5
     Sp "Where’s your date, I thought I saw the two of you enter."

game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy

@@ -3114,17 +3114,13 @@ label chapter_13D:
     pause .5
 
     menu:
+        "Go to college":
+            A "Well... {w=0.3}Spears convinced me to send out a couple application letters for college."
 
-     "Go to college":
-
-      A "Well... {w=0.3}Spears convinced me to send out a couple application letters for college."
-
-      A "I’m thinking of doing something with music{cps=*.1}...{/cps} maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
-
-     "Not certain just yet":
-      A "I’m not sure yet."
-
-      A "I’m thinking of doing something with music{cps=*.1}...{/cps} maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
+        "Not certain just yet":
+            A "I’m not sure yet."
+    
+    A "I’m thinking of doing something with music{cps=*.1}...{/cps} maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
 
     Re "Oh nice, dude! You can be the band’s sound technician when you’re done!"
 

game/script/14C.good-ending.rpy

@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
     pause .5
 
     show fang:
-       easeout_cubic 1 xalign 1.4
+        easeout_cubic 1 xalign 1.4
     show fang c happy with dissolve
     hide fang with dissolve
     pause 0.5

game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy

@@ -732,7 +732,7 @@ label chapter_4:
     show reed king rex behind anon:
         yalign 0.1 xalign -1.9
     show reed:
-       easein 1 xalign -1.2
+        easein 1 xalign -1.2
     with Dissolve(1)
     pause 1
     Re "It’ll be fine."

game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy

@@ -573,9 +573,9 @@ label chapter_5:
 
     menu:
         "Tug Her Tail":
-           pass
+            pass
         "Tug Her Ankle":
-           pass
+            pass
 
     pause .5
 

game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy

@@ -80,9 +80,9 @@ label chapter_8:
     "Knowing better than to look through the ocean of students, I follow my nose to Reed."
     pause 0.5
     show reed sunglasses:
-       xalign 0.4 yalign 0.1
+        xalign 0.4 yalign 0.1
     show trish neutral behind reed:
-       xalign 0.9
+        xalign 0.9
     with dissolve
 
     "The fetid raptor was sitting in the very last row with Trish."

game/script/x1-chicxulub-gutterlane.rpy

@@ -7,17 +7,17 @@ label chapter_x1:
     pause 1
     play music 'audio/ost/prized bowling shoes.ogg' fadein 0.2
 
-    "It’s a cool autumn’s evening and for some reason I’m squeezed in a car against Moe and Naser."
+    "It's a cool autumn's evening and for some reason, I'm squeezed in a car against Moe and Naser."
 
-    "Fang’s dad was driving, and the passenger seat was taken up by a tote bag holding the family's ancient bowling balls."
+    "Fang's dad is driving, and the passenger seat is taken up by a tote bag holding the family's ancient bowling balls."
     pause .5
 
-    "Every time he looked in the rear view mirror I swear his gaze lingered on me for just a second before returning to the road."
+    "Every time he looks in the rear view mirror, I swear his gaze lingers on me for just a second before returning to the road."
 
-    "The only consolation is that if I don’t live to see the next day, it wouldn’t be because he didn’t have his priorities straight while on the road."
+    "The only consolation is that if I don't live to see the next day, it wouldn't be because he didn't have his priorities straight while on the road."
     pause .5
 
-    "The drive couldn’t have lasted for more than fifteen minutes, but it felt like a good couple of hours."
+    "The drive couldn't have lasted for more than fifteen minutes, but it felt like a good couple of hours."
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     scene parkinglot with Fade(1, 0, 1)
     pause .5
 
-    "When we finally pulled into the parking lot, I step out to stretch my legs while Moe and Naser continued to catch up."
+    "When we finally pull into the parking lot, I step out to stretch my legs while Moe and Naser continue to catch up."
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -37,9 +37,9 @@ label chapter_x1:
     with dissolve
     pause .5
 
-    "Naser was having a blast listening about how Fang and VVURM DRAMA knocked it out of the park at Moe’s."
+    "Naser is having a blast hearing about how Fang and VVURM DRAMA knocked it out of the park at Moe's."
 
-    "Moe was even wearing the apron Trish sold him to our little gathering."
+    "Moe's even wearing the apron Trish sold him to our little gathering."
 
     show anon neutral flip with dissolve
 
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     with dissolve
     pause .5
 
-    Moe "It’sa part o’ ma look, if I ain’ts wearin’ an apron I jus’ don’t feel right."
+    Moe "It'sa part o' ma look. if I ain'ts wearin' an apron, I jus' don't feel right."
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -67,16 +67,16 @@ label chapter_x1:
     with dissolve
     pause 1
 
-    FD "Well, folks, we’re here."
+    FD "Well, folks, we're here."
 
     show anon neutral with dissolve
 
     FD "Black Hole Bowling."
     pause .5
 
-    Moe "It’s been a while, why ole’ Rip n’ me used ta come ’ere err’y weekend when we was your age."
+    Moe "It's been a while. Why, ole' Rip n' me used ta come 'ere err'y weekend when we was your age."
 
-    FD "And with my weekend off I figured I’d take the next generation for a game or two."
+    FD "And with my weekend off, I figured I'd take the next generation for a game or two."
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
 
     Nas "Surprised you brought Anon along, Dad."
 
-    Nas "That’s pretty unlike you."
+    Nas "That's pretty unlike you."
 
     show fangdad unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
     FD "It {i}was{/i} just going to be the three of us{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -98,14 +98,14 @@ label chapter_x1:
     FD "But the {i}missus{/i} thought it would be a {i}grand{/i} idea for him to come along."
     pause .5
 
-    "Moe made an odd hand motion with his tiny limbs."
+    "Moe makes an odd hand motion with his tiny limbs."
 
     "It only made sense when he added a whip crack sound with it."
     pause .5
 
-    FD "Quiet you. I’d have your ass in bars before you’d even know it."
+    FD "Quiet, you. I'd have your ass in bars before you'd even know it."
 
-    Moe "We both knows ya won’t. C’mon kids, ole Moe needs the extra hands to git on his lucky shoes."
+    Moe "We both knows ya won't. C'mon, kids. Ole Moe needs the extra hands to git on his lucky shoes."
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -122,10 +122,10 @@ label chapter_x1:
     hide fangdad with dissolve
     pause .5
 
-    "I ended up having to carry the tote bag of bowling balls inside."
+    "I end up having to carry the tote bag of bowling balls inside."
 
     show naser happy flip with dissolve
-    Nas "You’re not going to make a {i}cripple{/i} carry all those, right?"
+    Nas "You're not going to make a {i}cripple{/i} carry all those, right?"
     window hide
     window auto
 
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     pause .5
 
     show anon unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
-    "Struggling to not fall over or snap in half like a skin-colored twig, I lugged the bag over."
+    "Struggling to not fall over or snap in half like a skin-colored twig, I lug the bag over."
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -150,14 +150,14 @@ label chapter_x1:
     scene bowlingalley with Fade(1, 0, 1)
     pause .5
 
-    "After we got a lane and I placed the balls on the rack, Fangs’ father and I sat in the benches while Naser and Moe went to get some snacks."
+    "After we get a lane and I place the balls on the rack, Fang's father and I sit on the benches while Naser and Moe go to get some snacks."
 
-    "I slouch back in my seat and rest my eyes a bit."
+    "I slouch back in my seat and rest my eyes for a bit."
     pause .5
 
     "Man, those bowling balls were heavy."
 
-    "We parked pretty far away, too, so I had to carry them a good quarter mile or so."
+    "We parked pretty far away too, so I had to carry them a good quarter mile or so."
 
     "At least the benches here are clean."
     window hide
@@ -173,29 +173,29 @@ label chapter_x1:
 
     "Sitting here with{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "Fang’s father{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    "Fang's father{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
     "Alone."
 
     show fangdad neutral flip with dissolve
-    "My eyes widen as Mister Aaron and I face each other."
+    "My eyes widen as Mr. Aaron and I face each other."
 
     show fangdad happy flip with dissolve
     "I feel my blood turn to ice as a look of malevolent glee spreads across his face."
 
     FD "So, Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    FD "We haven’t had a real heart-to-heart yet, have we?"
+    FD "We haven't had a real heart-to-heart yet, have we?"
 
-    A "Haha, really? We’ve spoken before back at your house, haven’t we sir?"
+    A "Haha, really? We've spoken before back at your house, haven't we sir?"
 
-    FD "True, but here we can really have some good ol’ Man Talk, you know?"
+    FD "True, but here we can really have some good ol' Man Talk, you know?"
 
     A "I-I see."
     pause .5
 
-    "Fang’s Mother isn’t here, and Moe’s probably dropped his order twice already."
+    "Fang's mother isn't here, and Moe's probably dropped his order twice already."
 
     "Please come back soon."
 
@@ -203,16 +203,16 @@ label chapter_x1:
 
     FD "Dear Lucy, Naser. Even my old buddy Moe."
 
-    FD "Hear you’re a fast learner in his kitchen."
+    FD "Hear you're a fast learner in his kitchen."
 
     "I swallow hard as I manage a nod."
 
-    "The inside of my mouth felt like the center of the Sahara while my shirt was practically glued to my back from my sweat."
+    "The inside of my mouth feels like the center of the Sahara, while my shirt is practically glued to my back with my sweat."
     pause .5
 
     FD "You know I do actually know a bit about humans, I do."
 
-    FD "In my line of work you need to deal with all types, you know."
+    FD "In my line of work, you need to deal with all types, you know?"
 
     FD "I read this {cps=*.4}{i}reeeeaaaal{/i}{/cps} interesting thing the other day."
     pause .5
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
 
     FD "Makes sense when you think about it, but I guess it never occurred to me."
 
-    A "Uh, y-y-yeah. It k-k-kinda does, doesn’t it?"
+    A "Uh, y-y-yeah. It k-k-kinda does, doesn't it?"
 
     FD "Anyways, the article goes real in-depth about it."
 
@@ -244,17 +244,17 @@ label chapter_x1:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.7
     with dissolve
 
-    Nas "Here you go Anon."
+    Nas "Here you go, Anon."
 
     "Naser drops a pair of old shoes into my lap."
 
     show naser unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
     Nas "I asked for caveman size, but this was all they had, sorry."
 
-    "Thank you Naser, thank you! If these weren’t rentals I’d enshrine them in my home and pay them respect every day for the rest of my life."
+    "Thank you, Naser. Thank you! If these weren't rentals, I'd enshrine them in my home and pay them respect every day for the rest of my life."
 
     show naser neutral with Dissolve(.25)
-    Nas "What’re you guys up to?"
+    Nas "What're you guys up to?"
 
     show moe alt:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 2.3
@@ -262,22 +262,22 @@ label chapter_x1:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.7
     with dissolve
 
-    Moe "Terrorizin’ the poor kid, I bet."
+    Moe "Terrorizin' the poor kid, I bet."
 
     "Moe sets a tray of fountain drinks and snack foods on the table with his grabby claw hands."
 
-    Moe "Ya know, Rip, jus cause yer in-law made ya piss yer britches don’t means ya gots ta do the same ta the kid."
+    Moe "Ya know, Rip, jus cause yer in-law made ya piss yer britches don't means ya gots ta do the same ta the kid."
 
     show fangdad neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    FD "No clue what you’re talking about."
+    FD "No clue what you're talking about."
 
     Moe "Sure, Rip, sure."
 
     show fangdad unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    FD "Let’s just play already."
+    FD "Let's just play already."
     pause .5
 
-    "Eager to escape his clutches I bolted for the console and started entering our names."
+    "Eager to escape his clutches, I bolt for the console and start entering our names."
     window hide
     window auto
 
@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     scene black with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
-    "Fang’s dad was up first, and for some reason his solid flesh-tone ball seemed a lot newer than the others."
+    "Fang's dad is up first, and for some reason his solid flesh-tone ball seems a lot newer than the others."
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -301,9 +301,9 @@ label chapter_x1:
         yalign 0.1 xalign 0.0
     with Dissolve(1)
 
-    "He made a show of inserting his clawed fingers into each of the holes while making sure I had a real good angle."
+    "He makes a show of inserting his clawed fingers into each of the holes while making sure I have a real good angle."
 
-    "He even oriented the ball so that the holes lined up into a little screaming face."
+    "He's even oriented the ball so that the holes line up into a little screaming face."
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -318,9 +318,9 @@ label chapter_x1:
     pause 2.5
     show fangdad happy with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    Nas "Wow pops, another strike!"
+    Nas "Wow, Pops. Another strike!"
 
-    FD "S’all in the form, Naser."
+    FD "S'all in the form, Naser."
 
     show fangdad neutral flip with dissolve
     FD "If ya picture the pins as something you {i}really{/i} despise{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -337,7 +337,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     "I think I just made bam in my pants."
     pause .5
 
-    Moe "Sheesh Rip. Give it a break for a bit."
+    Moe "Sheesh, Rip. Give it a break for a bit."
 
     "Yes. Maybe two bits even."
     window hide
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     hide fangdad with dissolve
     pause .5
 
-    Moe "Alrights Anon, yer up."
+    Moe "Alrights, Anon. Yer up."
 
     "I nod and get up from my seat."
     window hide
@@ -363,27 +363,27 @@ label chapter_x1:
     with dissolve
     pause .5
 
-    "The ball I’ve got is borrowed from the bowling lane, it’s logo making creative use of the finger holes."
+    "The ball I've got is borrowed from the bowling lane, its logo making creative use of the finger holes."
 
-    "A shame the only one they had left was a size too small and my fingers barely fit."
+    "A shame the only one they had left was a size too small and my fingers barely fit into it."
     pause .5
 
     "I heft the smaller ball and take my cues from all my best attempts in Ninpebble Stick Bowling."
 
-    "Lining up the shot I look down the lane at the pins."
+    "Lining up the shot, I look down the lane at the pins."
 
     show anon pissed
     show dimmer_light behind anon
     with dissolve
-    "Using Rip’s advice I picture Naomi’s face on the pins."
+    "Using Rip's advice, I picture Naomi's face on the pins."
 
-    "Sorry not sorry Naser."
+    "Sorry not sorry, Naser."
 
     show anon:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
         pause .25
         easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.2
-    "With a big wind up that threatens to pull my arm from it’s socket I launch the ball."
+    "With a big wind up that threatens to pull my arm from its, socket I launch the ball."
 
     stop music fadeout 4
     "Right into the back of my foot."
@@ -435,7 +435,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
 
     A "WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS FUCKING TOM AND JERRY BULLSHIT HOW THE FUCK DOES THIS FUCKING HAPPEN!"
 
-    A "DON’T JUST STAND THERE AND GAWK YOU JACKASSES GET A FUCKING FIRST AID BOX OR SOMETHING FOR FUCKS SAKE! YOU USELESS FUCKING ASSHOLES HOLY SHIT THIS HURTS LIKE HELL!"
+    A "DON'T JUST STAND THERE AND GAWK YOU JACKASSES GET A FUCKING FIRST AID BOX OR SOMETHING FOR FUCKS SAKE! YOU USELESS FUCKING ASSHOLES HOLY SHIT THIS HURTS LIKE HELL!"
 
     A "AAAAAA FUCK MY FUCKING FOOT I THINK I BROKE MY FUCKING FOOT!"
 
@@ -453,25 +453,25 @@ label chapter_x1:
     with dissolve
     pause 1
 
-    "When I finally stop to catch my breath I realize all eyes in the building are on me."
+    "When I finally stop to catch my breath, I realize all eyes in the building are on me."
 
     "Naser has his phone set on me."
 
-    "Even Fang’s father is staring with a dumbfounded look on his face."
+    "Even Fang's father is staring with a dumbfounded look on his face."
 
-    "I break out into a sweat again, eyes darting to find the nearest bathroom."
+    "I break out into a sweat again, my eyes darting for the nearest bathroom."
     pause .5
 
-    "Moe gestures to Mister Ripley."
+    "Moe gestures to Mr. Ripley."
 
-    Moe "That beats your record, don’t it?"
+    Moe "That beats your record, don't it?"
 
     "An attendant throws his hands in the air."
 
-    Attendant "It does! It’s a new record!"
+    Attendant "It does! It's a new record!"
     pause .5
 
-    "All at once all the patrons of the bowling alley burst into cheers and applause."
+    "All at once, all the patrons of the bowling alley burst into cheers and applause."
 
     show anon:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.95
@@ -505,7 +505,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     Moe "The last record was only five minutes and some change."
 
     show anon unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    A "That’s nice and all but MY FOOT IS STILL FUCKING BROKEN!"
+    A "That's nice and all but MY FOOT IS STILL FUCKING BROKEN!"
 
     Nas "Does it even still hurt?"
 
@@ -525,11 +525,11 @@ label chapter_x1:
     "Moe knocks a fist against the bottom of his skull, a metallic thump echoing out."
     pause .5
 
-    Attendant "The manager’s approved a reward for beating out the twenty-year-old record!"
+    Attendant "The manager's approved a reward for beating out the twenty-year-old record!"
 
     A "Oh, cool, a bowling ball of my own?"
 
-    Attendant "Those shoes you’re wearing, they’re yours."
+    Attendant "Those shoes you're wearing, they're yours."
     pause .5
 
     "Naser stifles a cough."
@@ -540,7 +540,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     Moe "Either way, we should probably get a first aid kit."
 
     show naser considering with Dissolve(.25)
-    Nas "Think I saw one by the entrance, let’s go get it."
+    Nas "Think I saw one by the entrance. Let's go get it."
     window hide
     window auto
 
@@ -556,14 +556,14 @@ label chapter_x1:
 
     "The two go hunting for the first aid kit, and I am left alone with Mister Ripley again."
 
-    "I don’t really care anymore right now, I’m just worn out."
+    "I don't really care anymore right now. I'm just worn out."
     pause .5
 
-    FD "Y’know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    FD "Y'know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "Here we go."
 
-    FD "I didn’t know you had it in you."
+    FD "I didn't know you had it in you."
     pause .5
 
     A "Had what in me?"
@@ -586,9 +586,9 @@ label chapter_x1:
     A "O-oh, thank you, sir."
     pause 1
 
-    A "Does that mean you’re okay with-"
+    A "Does that mean you're okay with-"
 
-    FD "You set foot near second base I’ll finish the job that bowling ball couldn’t."
+    FD "You set foot near second base, I'll finish the job that bowling ball couldn't."
 
     A "Understood."
     pause .5
@@ -596,7 +596,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
     show fangdad happy with Dissolve(.25)
     FD "Good talk."
 
-    FD "Next time, we oughtta go fishing together."
+    FD "Next time, we oughta go fishing together."
 
     A "Next time?"
 

game/script/x2-the-mous-pad.rpy

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ label chapter_x2:
     with Dissolve(1)
     pause 2
 
-    A "Right, you’re recording?"
+    A "Right, you recording?"
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -35,13 +35,13 @@ label chapter_x2:
     pause .5
 
     show anon happy flip with dissolve
-    A "Heyyy, what’s up? It’s ya boy, Anon, and this is my criiiiiiiiiiiib!"
+    A "Heyyy, what's up? It's ya boy, Anon, and this is my criiiiiiiiiiiib!"
     pause .5
 
     F "Dork{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    A "Quiet you!"
+    A "Quiet, you!"
 
     A "Ignore the hired help."
     pause .5
@@ -53,18 +53,18 @@ label chapter_x2:
     show anon:
         easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.8
     show anon shrug flip with dissolve
-    A "We’re right in the heart of Skin Row, one of Volcaldera Bluff’s most historic cultural districts!"
+    A "We're right in the heart of Skin Row, one of Volcaldera Bluff's most historic cultural districts!"
     pause .5
 
-    F "Yeah, if you call crack ‘cultural’{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    F "Yeah, if you call crack ‘cultural'{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}CULTURAL districts!"
     pause .5
 
-    A "I’ve been living here for almost seven months and I wouldn’t trade it for anywhere else in the state."
+    A "I've been living here for almost seven months and I wouldn't trade it for anywhere else in the state."
 
     show anon neutral flip with dissolve
-    A "So let’s head on inside for the grand tour!"
+    A "So let's head on inside for the grand tour!"
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -84,20 +84,20 @@ label chapter_x2:
     with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
-    F "What’s so ‘grand’ about a one-room apartment? My bedroom is bigger than this!"
+    F "What's so 'grand' about a one-room apartment? My bedroom is bigger than this!"
 
-    A "Fang I swear to god, don’t make me ask Reed to do this instead."
+    A "Fang I swear to god, don't make me ask Reed to do this instead."
     pause .5
 
     A "So this is the kitchen area, loaded with all the essentials I need to get me through the week. Alfredo, carbonara, pesto, you name it and I can cook it."
 
-    F "Carbonara is pretty good, I’ll give you that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    F "Carbonara is pretty good, I'll give you that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "Moving on- Fang! You don’t need to show the refrigerator!"
+    A "Moving on- Fang! You don't need to show the refrigerator!"
 
-    F "You call thirty energy drinks ‘essential’?"
+    F "You call thirty energy drinks 'essentials'?"
 
-    A "You try getting through a 48 hour Rock Ring 2 marathon without those!"
+    A "You try getting through a 48-hour Rock Ring 2 marathon without those!"
     pause .5
 
     A "Anyways, make sure you get a good pan view of the apartment."
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ label chapter_x2:
     with dissolve
     pause .5
 
-    "This is what I call the ‘Mous Pad’."
+    "This is what I call the 'Mous Pad'."
     pause .5
 
     F "You have literally never called it that before."
@@ -120,14 +120,14 @@ label chapter_x2:
     F "Wait. Why are you doing this again?"
 
     show anon neutral flip with dissolve
-    A "My forum pen-pal dared me to do it."
+    A "My forum penpal dared me to do it."
     pause .5
 
-    F "Your{cps=*.1}...{/cps} pen-pal? You’re trying to impress some weirdo on the Internet with{cps=*.1}...{/cps} this."
+    F "Your{cps=*.1}...{/cps} penpal? You're trying to impress some weirdo on the Internet with{cps=*.1}...{/cps} this?"
 
-    A "Yeah, her screen name’s StegoStar231. I’m pretty sure she’s from Japan. Cool, huh?"
+    A "Yeah, her screen name's StegoStar231. I'm pretty sure she's from Japan. Cool, huh?"
 
-    F "‘Her’? You’re sure you aren’t just being groomed?"
+    F "'Her'? You sure you aren't just being groomed?"
 
     A "No, shut up."
 
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ label chapter_x2:
 
     A "And THIS little guy is Metal Gear RAYmba! Custom modified with a railgun for stealth launches at the science teacher!"
 
-    F "Some weirdo forced him to buy a phone roomba on our first date and he decided to keep it."
+    F "Some weirdo forced him to buy a phone Roomba on our first date and he decided to keep it."
 
     A "And it was the best decision I made that day!"
     pause .5
@@ -169,9 +169,9 @@ label chapter_x2:
     show anon neutral with dissolve
     pause .25
 
-    A "My TV, XROX hooked up and ready to play Rock Ring at a moment’s notice."
+    A "My TV, XROX hooked up and ready to play Rock Ring at a moment's notice."
 
-    A "And my closet, with all the clothes I’ll ever need."
+    A "And my closet, with all the clothes I'll ever need."
     pause .5
 
     F "What the fuck? I thought you just kept cleaning the same shirt over and over. Why do you have so many?"
@@ -179,22 +179,22 @@ label chapter_x2:
     show anon neutral flip with dissolve
     A "Am I giving a tour to StegoStar or you?"
 
-    F "Tell me more about this ‘StegoStar’ character. What’s ‘her’ deal?"
+    F "Tell me more about this 'StegoStar' character. What's 'her' deal?"
 
-    A "Dunno what there is to say. She likes anime and- wait, you aren’t jealous, are you?"
+    A "Dunno what there is to say. She likes anime and- wait, you aren't jealous, are you?"
 
-    F "I’d be jealous if it was an actual girl you were talking to, you dweeb."
+    F "I'd be jealous if it was an actual girl you were talking to, you dweeb."
 
-    A "Good. Between you and me, she’s not really my type."
+    A "Good. Between you and me, she's not really my type."
     pause .5
 
-    F "And you’re taken."
+    F "And you're taken."
 
-    A "And I’m happily taken."
+    A "And I'm happily taken."
     pause .5
 
     show anon happy flip with dissolve
-    A "Anyways, uh, I think that’s about it for my crib tour. Hope you enjoyed, StegoStar. Make sure you get back to me about the new Lucky Star episode, too."
+    A "Anyways, uh, I think that's about it for my crib tour. Hope you enjoyed, StegoStar. Make sure you get back to me about the new Lucky Star episode, too."
 
     show anon neutral flip with dissolve
     A "And done."
@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ label chapter_x2:
 
     F "So, does StegoStar have any other hobbies?"
 
-    A "I, err, think she’s into card games?"
+    A "I, err, think she's into card games?"
 
     show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Hmmmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Card games, huh? Anything else you know of?"
@@ -239,21 +239,21 @@ label chapter_x2:
     show fang:
         easein_quart 1 xalign 0.05
     show fang surprised with Dissolve(.25)
-    F "This is Stella’s garden."
+    F "This is Stella's garden."
     pause .5
 
-    A "Whaaaat, no it isn’t. See?"
+    A "Whaaaat, no it isn't. See?"
 
     show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
-    F "Anon, this is Stella’s yard."
+    F "Anon, this is Stella's yard."
     pause .5
 
-    A "Nah, you’re just jea-"
+    A "Nah, you're just jea-"
 
     show fang:
         easein_back 1 xalign 0.2
     show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
-    F "Here’s her fucking instaglyph, you idiot."
+    F "Here's her fucking Instaglyph, you idiot."
     pause .5
 
     show anon:
@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ label chapter_x2:
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "YOU FUCKING KNOW WHAT!"
+    A "YOU FUCKING KNOW WHAT!?"
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
@@ -338,7 +338,7 @@ label chapter_x2:
 
     A "OH SHUT UP THAT WAS TWO YEARS AGO!"
 
-    F "{cps=*.4}d’aaaaaawww{/cps}. Anon had a {cps=*.5}{i}cruuuush{/i}{/cps}."
+    F "{cps=*.4}d'aaaaaawww{/cps}. Anon had a {cps=*.5}{i}cruuuush{/i}{/cps}."
 
     A "And I HAVE a girlfriend!"
 
@@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ label chapter_x2:
 
     A "Apology not accepted!"
 
-    A "Oh and by the way your husbando is shit!"
+    A "Oh, and by the way, your husbando is shit!"
     pause .5
 
     "*click*"

game/script/x4-passion-of-the-trigga.rpy

@@ -16,10 +16,10 @@ label chapter_x4:
 
     "I lean back against the wall, my freshly polished horns feeling fantastic today."
 
-    "I deserve it after all the shit I deal with at school. Not to mention the tiny terrors at home{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    "I deserve it after all the shit I've dealt with at school. Not to mention the tiny terrors at home{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    "A part of me wants to feel bad that I left Fang on their own the other day."
+    "A part of me wants to feel bad for leaving Fang on their own the other day."
 
     "Especially with that useless skinnie."
 
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ label chapter_x4:
     with dissolve
     T "Our chance to make VVURM DRAMA the hit it deserves to be!"
 
-    "Our celebration continues until someone, probably one of the teachers passing by, knocks on the music room’s door several times."
+    "Our celebration continues until someone, probably one of the teachers passing by, knocks on the music room's door several times."
 
     show fang happy
     show trish considering flip
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ label chapter_x4:
     "Then I remember the person responsible."
     pause .5
 
-    "Ah, maybe skinnie isn’t so bad."
+    "Ah, maybe Skinnie isn't so bad."
     pause .5
 
     "Pffft, nah. I probably coulda convinced that fucking fossil too."
@@ -78,14 +78,14 @@ label chapter_x4:
     show trish neutral flip with dissolve
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "I look at Fang and notice them with a look on their face I haven’t seen in a very long time."
+    "I look at Fang and notice them with a look on their face I haven't seen in a very long time."
 
-    "Like they’re daydreaming again."
+    "Like they're daydreaming again."
     pause .5
 
-    "It’s kinda weird. Like they’re too{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    "It's kinda weird. Like they're too{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "Embarrassed looking? Hmm?"
+    "Embarrassed-looking? Hmm?"
     pause .5
 
     T "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps} You two do anything else all day?"
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ label chapter_x4:
     T "You sure he's not just trying to get into your pants or something?"
 
     show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
-    "Fang sighs and looks up. Their snout waves back and forth as they stare up at the dirty looking ceiling while thinking."
+    "Fang sighs and looks up. Their snout waves back and forth as they stare up at the dirty-looking ceiling while thinking."
     pause .5
 
     F "I don't know{cps=*.1}...{/cps} he has this thing he does where he mumbles{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I don't think he knows he does it."
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ label chapter_x4:
     show trish:
         easein_back 1 xalign 0.775
     show trish surprised flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    "What! With Anon! Him!"
+    "What!? Anon!? Him!?"
 
     show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
     T "Fang, are you for real right now?"
@@ -158,25 +158,25 @@ label chapter_x4:
     show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
     "They huff and cross their arms."
 
-    F "I’m just saying. Anon’s a good friend."
+    F "I'm just saying. Anon's a good friend."
     pause .5
 
     show trish considering flip with dissolve
-    "A friend? The way they said it doesn’t sound like friend shit."
+    "A friend? The way they said it doesn't sound like friend shit."
 
     "Not like with me."
 
     show trish neutral flip with dissolve
-    T "Puhlease, Fang. Anon’s just like every other guy at Volcano High."
+    T "Puhlease, Fang. Anon's just like every other guy at Volcano High."
 
     show trish smug flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    T "Only worse because he’s broke and from the boonies."
+    T "Only worse because he's broke and from the boonies."
 
     show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
-    F "C’mon Trish, you’re being harsh on him. You don’t even know Anon."
+    F "C'mon, Trish. You're being harsh on him. You don't even know Anon."
 
     show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    T "I don’t need to know him to know he’s just like the rest of them."
+    T "I don't need to know him to know he's just like the rest of them."
     pause .5
 
     show fang:
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ label chapter_x4:
 
     F "Maybe{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    T "No maybes about it, Fang. Their type are all the same. Nothing but loser assholes."
+    T "No maybes about it, Fang. His type are all the same. Nothing but loser assholes."
 
     show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
     F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -233,11 +233,11 @@ label chapter_x4:
 
     "I hand Fang the blue strat, which they immediately set to tuning just right."
 
-    "Mr. Jingo really needs to get some new gear, these things aren’t maintained at all."
+    "Mr. Jingo really needs to get some new gear; these things aren't maintained at all."
 
     stop music fadeout 4
     pause .5
-    "Even this bass, no one ever even uses it."
+    "Even this bass. No one ever even uses it."
     pause .5
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"

game/script/x6-passion-of-the-trigga.rpy

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
 
     A "You sure you got enough paper plates and stuff?"
 
-    Re "We got all of it, man. Quit worryin’ alright?"
+    Re "We got all of it, man. Quit worryin' alright?"
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -32,9 +32,9 @@ label chapter_x6:
     with Dissolve(2)
     pause .5
 
-    "Reed, Fang, Rosa, Stella, and I are walking to Trish’s place with armfuls of plastic bags of groceries."
+    "Reed, Fang, Rosa, Stella, and I are walking to Trish's place with armfuls of plastic bags of groceries."
 
-    "It’s her birthday today, and Fang wanted to throw a surprise party."
+    "It's her birthday today, and Fang wanted to throw a surprise party."
     pause .5
 
     "A shame Reed ruined that surprise."
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     "At least all the presents will still be a surprise."
     pause .5
 
-    A "I’ve never been to this part of town before."
+    A "I've never been to this part of town before."
 
     A "Almost reminds me of my place."
 
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     F "Her mother works two jobs overtime just so Trish can go to school with us instead of Reef City Continuation."
 
     show anon shrug with dissolve
-    A "What’s so bad about Reef City anyway?"
+    A "What's so bad about Reef City anyway?"
     window hide
     window auto
 
@@ -80,15 +80,15 @@ label chapter_x6:
     "Reed nearly trips over his own feet."
     pause .5
 
-    Re "It’s uhhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    Re "It's, uhhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    Re "You know ‘bout Alcatraz?"
+    Re "You know 'bout Alcatraz?"
     pause .5
 
-    Re "It’s like that, but mixed with Auschwitz."
+    Re "It's like that, but mixed with Auschwitz."
     pause .5
 
-    A "That doesn’t sound {i}that{/i} bad{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    A "That doesn't sound {i}that{/i} bad{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     show reed unimpressed flip with dissolve
     Re "Rio de Janeiro, then."
@@ -100,20 +100,20 @@ label chapter_x6:
     F "I went there for a week last September because Spears caught me slashing tires."
 
     show fang nonxmas pendant sad with dissolve
-    F "It’s hell."
+    F "It's hell."
 
     show reed considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
     Re "I looked into it once{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     Re "The people in charge of the place used some{cps=*.1}...{/cps} legal loopholes to get the place off the map."
 
-    Re "So it’s legal for the teachers there to use paddles."
+    Re "So it's legal for the teachers there to use paddles."
     pause .5
 
     show rosa neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    Ro "Why don’t we change the subject?"
+    Ro "Why don't we change the subject?"
 
-    Ro "We’re getting close to Trish’s place, no?"
+    Ro "We're getting close to Trish's place, no?"
 
     show anon neutral
     show fang nonxmas pendant neutral
@@ -122,24 +122,24 @@ label chapter_x6:
     show rosa considering flip
     with dissolve
     pause .5
-    St "I hope she’s alright with all this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    St "I hope she's alright with all this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     show reed happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    Re "She’ll love it! It’s exactly what she needs right now{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    Re "She'll love it! It's exactly what she needs right now{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     show reed neutral flip with dissolve
 
-    A "Why’s that?"
+    A "Why's that?"
 
     show fang nonxmas pendant considering with Dissolve(.25)
-    F "It’s summer vacation."
+    F "It's summer vacation."
 
     A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}And?"
 
     show fang nonxmas pendant happy with dissolve
-    F "You’ll see."
+    F "You'll see."
     pause .5
 
-    F "It’s this building, we’re here."
+    F "It's this building, we're here."
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -149,10 +149,10 @@ label chapter_x6:
     scene black with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
-    "Fang stops in front of one of the many large brick buildings we’ve been walking past and points to a door on the second floor."
+    "Fang stops in front of one of the many large brick buildings we've been walking past and points to a door on the second floor."
     pause .5
 
-    Ro "How exciting, I haven’t gotten to visit Trish at her place before!"
+    Ro "How exciting, I haven't gotten to visit Trish at her place before!"
     pause .5
 
     "We all go upstairs, and what sounds like muffled uproars hit my ears, growing louder the closer we get to the door."
@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     show reed:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.95
     show reed considering with dissolve
-    Re "Don’t push that unless you want to get shocked."
+    Re "Don't push that unless you want to get shocked."
 
     A "!!"
 
@@ -195,10 +195,10 @@ label chapter_x6:
 
     T "Comi- {w=.4}{nw}"
     play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickpunch.ogg'
-    extend "TREVOR DON’T YOU DARE!" with vpunch
+    extend "TREVOR DON'T YOU DARE!" with vpunch
     pause .5
 
-    "There’s a clacking of what has to be twelve locks in sequence and finally the door opens to reveal{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    "There's a clacking of what has to be twelve locks in sequence and finally the door opens to reveal{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
     "Raptor Jesus in Jurassic Heaven."
@@ -217,10 +217,10 @@ label chapter_x6:
     pause 1
 
     show trish indignant flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    T "You’re here! Finally!"
+    T "You're here! Finally!"
 
     show trish annoyed flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    T "I can’t deal with these little monsters anymore!"
+    T "I can't deal with these little monsters anymore!"
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .25
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
 
     stop ambient fadeout 3
     play music 'audio/ost/bayside bumming it.ogg'
-    unknown "Who’s dis gay trigga?"
+    unknown "Who's dis gay trigga?"
 
     show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
     T "Riley! These are my friends."
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     T "And Anon."
     pause .5
 
-    A "What’s that supposed to mean?"
+    A "What's that supposed to mean?"
 
     F "Sorry we took so long, Trish."
 
@@ -252,22 +252,22 @@ label chapter_x6:
 
     Riley "Man fuck this party."
 
-    Riley "Ain’t no hot bitches here, so it ain’t a real party trigga."
+    Riley "Ain't no hot bitches here, so it ain't a real party trigga."
 
     show stella sad with Dissolve(.25)
     St "Ow."
 
     show rosa neutral with Dissolve(.25)
-    Ro "He’s so cute! Trish why did you not tell us you had a kid brother?"
+    Ro "He's so cute! Trish why did you not tell us you had a kid brother?"
 
     show fang nonxmas pendant considering with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Because-"
 
     show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    T "Because they’re little monsters!"
+    T "Because they're little monsters!"
 
     show reed explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
-    Re "She’s got two brothers and three sisters."
+    Re "She's got two brothers and three sisters."
 
     show reed neutral
     show rosa considering
@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     show riley conspiratorial flip with dissolve
     Riley "Trigga is you dumb?"
 
-    Riley "Dat shit’s just the feds tryna make sure we don’t make mo of us!"
+    Riley "Dat shit's just the feds tryna make sure we don't make mo of us!"
     window hide
     window auto
     show riley neutral flip with dissolve
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     show stella neutral
     show trish considering flip
     with dissolve
-    T "Sure. Let’s use the grill down in the courtyard though. Tana tried making a mac and cheese bowl but forgot to put water in."
+    T "Sure. Let's use the grill down in the courtyard though. Tana tried making a mac and cheese bowl but forgot to put water in."
     pause .5
 
     "That would explain the burning smell and the layer of smoke along the ceiling."
@@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     Re "Finally, I get to use this!"
     show reed neutral flip with dissolve
 
-    "Reed hefts the silver briefcase he’d been lugging around onto one of the tables."
+    "Reed hefts the silver briefcase he'd been lugging around onto one of the tables."
 
     "He flips the latches open to reveal a charcoal tray."
 
@@ -343,7 +343,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     Re "Good question{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    Re "Who’s got the frozens?"
+    Re "Who's got the frozens?"
 
     A "Oh, I do."
 
@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
         ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.95
     pause 1
 
-    "Trish’s little siblings are already wrestling each other in the grass, and Trish herself collapses onto the bench."
+    "Trish's little siblings are already wrestling each other in the grass, and Trish herself collapses onto the bench."
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -373,33 +373,33 @@ label chapter_x6:
     T "Thirteen hours a day, I have to watch them."
 
     show stella considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    St "Isn’t there an easier way to distract them?"
+    St "Isn't there an easier way to distract them?"
 
     show trish neutral
     show stella neutral flip
     with dissolve
-    T "There’s only one tablet, and one TV."
+    T "There's only one tablet, and one TV."
 
     show trish considering with Dissolve(.25)
-    T "There’s always at least one running around screeching."
+    T "There's always at least one running around screeching."
 
     show fang nonxmas pendant happy with Dissolve(.25)
-    F "Trish, why don’t you invite us over more often?"
+    F "Trish, why don't you invite us over more often?"
 
-    F "I’d be glad to help when I don’t have classes{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    F "I'd be glad to help when I don't have classes{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    T "No, you don’t need to put up with these little cretins."
+    T "No, you don't need to put up with these little cretins."
 
-    T "Besides, it’s just until summer break’s over, then I can move out and Riley will be in charge."
+    T "Besides, it's just until summer break's over, then I can move out and Riley will be in charge."
 
     show trish neutral with Dissolve(.25)
-    T "There’s a scary thought{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    T "There's a scary thought{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
     Riley "YO IS DA FOOD READY YET?"
 
     show reed explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    Re "It’s comin’, it’s comin’{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    Re "It's comin', it's comin'{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     Re "Fang, you wanna help a bit?"
 
@@ -417,9 +417,9 @@ label chapter_x6:
     "Reed gives Fang the extendable spatula and starts getting the food from the other bags ready."
     pause .5
 
-    Ro "It’s nice for all of us to get together like this."
+    Ro "It's nice for all of us to get together like this."
 
-    F "I only wish I came up with the idea for a party sooner, I didn’t have much time to get everything together."
+    F "I only wish I came up with the idea for a party sooner; I didn't have much time to get everything together."
 
     show fang nonxmas pendant happy with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Like, imagine if we rented a bouncy house?"
@@ -436,7 +436,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     A "I always just called them bounce walk."
 
     show trish considering with Dissolve(.25)
-    T "That’s the dullest name I’ve heard for them. Anyways, it’s called a ‘castlehop’."
+    T "That's the dullest name I've heard for them. Anyways, it's called a 'castlehop'."
 
     show anon neutral
     show rosa considering flip
@@ -445,11 +445,11 @@ label chapter_x6:
     Ro "I agree with Fang, actually."
 
     show reed considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    Re "Officially, they’re called ‘closed inflatable trampolines’."
+    Re "Officially, they're called 'closed inflatable trampolines'."
     show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     pause 1
 
-    Re "Fang, the one on the left’s burning a bit{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    Re "Fang, the one on the left's burning a bit{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     show fang:
         easein_quart 1 xalign -0.25
@@ -494,10 +494,10 @@ label chapter_x6:
     with dissolve
     pause 1.5
 
-    "Two of Trish’s siblings look up at me with toothy grins and hands behind their backs."
+    "Two of Trish's siblings look up at me with toothy grins and hands behind their backs."
     pause .5
 
-    Trevor "I’ve never talked to a real, live human before!"
+    Trevor "I've never talked to a real, live human before!"
     pause .5
 
     A "Live?"
@@ -521,7 +521,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
 
     A "Yes, actually."
 
-    A "But it doesn’t work if you’re staring, so first you need to turn around and count to ten."
+    A "But it doesn't work if you're staring, so first you need to turn around and count to ten."
 
     "Trevor & Tana" "Okaaay!"
 
@@ -571,7 +571,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     show anon grin flip with Dissolve(.25)
     A "Now behold, small children{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "Palm thoroughly coated, I flick the pink lighter’s striker wheel with my thumb."
+    "Palm thoroughly coated, I flick the pink lighter's striker wheel with my thumb."
 
     "The split second of sparks is enough to ignite the gas still caught in my hand."
     window hide
@@ -613,7 +613,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     show anon neutral flip
     with dissolve
 
-    Trevor "That you’ll get one of mommy’s belts if we play with it?"
+    Trevor "That you'll get one of mommy's belts if we play with it?"
 
     "Jeez, that seems a bit harsh."
 
@@ -622,7 +622,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     pause .5
 
     show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    T "Stella and Rosa are telling another story you two, so why don’t you join Tali and Tayler?"
+    T "Stella and Rosa are telling another story you two, so why don't you join Tali and Tayler?"
 
     Tana "But I wanna see more magic caveman fire!"
 
@@ -641,13 +641,13 @@ label chapter_x6:
     hide trevor with dissolve
     hide tana with dissolve
 
-    "The two scamper off to follow their elders’ orders, and my phone buzzes."
+    "The two scamper off to follow their elders' orders, and my phone buzzes."
     pause .5
 
     "Almost ready."
     pause .5
 
-    Re "Alright, that’s everything{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    Re "Alright, that's everything{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     window hide
     window auto
 
@@ -721,13 +721,13 @@ label chapter_x6:
     show reed explanatory
     with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    Re "I got the burnt one and it’s still pretty great."
+    Re "I got the burnt one and it's still pretty great."
     show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
     pause .25
 
-    "Fang isn’t paying attention."
+    "Fang isn't paying attention."
 
-    "She’s entirely focused on her greasy prey."
+    "She's entirely focused on her greasy prey."
 
     show fang phappy flip with dissolve
 
@@ -765,9 +765,9 @@ label chapter_x6:
         easeout_cubic 0.5 yalign 0.1
 
     show fang embarass flip with dissolve
-    F "Nuh uh, no fuckin’ way."
+    F "Nuh uh, no fuckin' way."
 
-    "Fangs’ wings shield her face in embarrassment."
+    "Fangs' wings shield her face in embarrassment."
 
     show tana neutral flip with dissolve
 
@@ -776,7 +776,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     stop music fadeout 4
     play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorloop.ogg' fadein 5
     show reed explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
-    Re "You’re popular today, Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    Re "You're popular today, Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     Re "Something up?"
     show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
@@ -792,7 +792,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     show fang nonxmas pendant surprised with dissolve
     pause .5
 
-    A "If you’d all follow me back out front of the building{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    A "If you'd all follow me back out front of the building{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 1
@@ -802,13 +802,13 @@ label chapter_x6:
 
     "The party follows me none the wiser to what I have planned."
 
-    "And I desperately hope this isn’t about to backfire."
+    "And I desperately hope this isn't about to backfire."
     pause .5
 
     "I turn the corner to see Naser making his final touches to the package on a flatbed trailer hitched to the NasCar."
     pause .5
 
-    "Given his driving, I’m more than a bit impressed it’s all still in one piece."
+    "Given his driving, I'm more than a bit impressed it's all still in one piece."
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -841,13 +841,13 @@ label chapter_x6:
     pause .5
 
     show trish explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    T "What’s Naser doing here?"
+    T "What's Naser doing here?"
 
     show trish neutral flip
     show stella explanatory flip
     with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    St "What’s with the trailer?"
+    St "What's with the trailer?"
     show stella neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     pause .5
 
@@ -975,13 +975,13 @@ label chapter_x6:
     pause .5
 
     stop music fadeout 5
-    T "So let’s go!"
+    T "So let's go!"
     pause .5
 
     T "Wait, wait, what song, um, um{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    T "Let’s do ‘I Gave The Special Kids The Jonestown Special And Now I’m Going To Jail’!"
+    T "Let's do 'I Gave The Special Kids The Jonestown Special And Now I'm Going To Jail'!"
     pause .5
 
     "Fang and Reed nod and ready their instruments."
@@ -999,7 +999,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
 
     F "JIM JONES DID NOTHING WRONG!{w=.4}{nw}"
     extend "\nHIS FLAVORAID WAS MAGIC,{w=.4}{nw}"
-    extend "\nIF SOME WOULD SAY IT’S STRONG."
+    extend "\nIF SOME WOULD SAY IT'S STRONG."
     pause .5
 
     "Man Reed needs to chill on the carfe-lyric writing."
@@ -1011,12 +1011,12 @@ label chapter_x6:
     extend "\nIT WAS MADE FOR THEIR LUNCH."
     pause .5
 
-    "Speaking of kids, Trish’s siblings were cheering her on the most."
+    "Speaking of kids, Trish's siblings were cheering her on the most."
 
     "Even Riley, though he tried to hide it with a shaky scowl."
     pause .5
 
-    "Trish’s tempo increases as her plucking slowly turns into shredding."
+    "Trish's tempo increases as her plucking slowly turns into shredding."
 
     F "JIM JONES DINDU NUFFIN,{w=.4}{nw}"
     extend "\nAND SO I WENT AND DID WHAT HE DID.{w=.4}{nw}"
@@ -1043,10 +1043,10 @@ label chapter_x6:
 
     "I can see VVURM DRAMA were also happy to be playing together again."
 
-    "I’d say the plan was a success."
+    "I'd say the plan was a success."
     pause 1
 
-    "Even if there was now a bunch of trash being tossed our way from the complex’s windows."
+    "Even if there was now a bunch of trash being tossed our way from the complex's windows."
     pause .5
 
     "Eh, fuck them. No good taste in music these days."
@@ -1083,13 +1083,13 @@ label chapter_x6:
 
     T "We made that sequel track we never got to play!"
 
-    Re "I still ‘member it."
+    Re "I still 'member it."
     pause .5
 
     T "Alright, here we have the sequel to our hit song \"The\"!"
     pause .5
 
-    T "Presenting \"It’s\"!"
+    T "Presenting \"It's\"!"
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -1104,7 +1104,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     # appreciating her company
     # appreciating the atmosphere
     play music 'audio/ost/appreciating the atmosphere.ogg' fadein 0.5
-    "After a full set of songs the three look exhausted."
+    "After a full set of songs, the three look exhausted."
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -1121,7 +1121,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     with Dissolve(1.5)
     pause .5
 
-    Re "Alright, that’s{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {i}huff{/i}{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Probably enough{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    Re "Alright, that's{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {i}huff{/i}{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Probably enough{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Fang, I got a bottle of water here."
 
@@ -1138,22 +1138,22 @@ label chapter_x6:
 
     "I motion over to Naser, busy securing everything back down to the flatbed."
 
-    A "Moe loaned us the flatbed for his boat and helped us set up the stage."
+    A "Moe lent us the flatbed for his boat and helped us set up the stage."
 
     show trish explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
-    T "But why? Why go through all the effort?"
+    T "But why? Why go to all that effort?"
     show trish neutral with Dissolve(.25)
 
     "Why indeed."
     pause .5
 
-    "I looked at the kids, all exhausted and ready for bed."
+    "I look at the kids - they're all exhausted and ready for bed."
 
-    "It’s surprising how draining cheering a band on is."
+    "It's surprising how draining cheering a band on is."
     pause .5
 
     show anon shrug flip with dissolve
-    A "What can I say, I’m a fan of VVURM DRAMA."
+    A "What can I say? I'm a fan of VVURM DRAMA."
     show anon neutral flip with dissolve
 
     show trish:
@@ -1162,7 +1162,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     "That earned me a surprised squeak from Trish."
     pause .5
 
-    A "You know, I always wondered why you were set on making it big."
+    A "You know, I always wondered why you were so set on making it big."
 
     A "But I think I get it now."
 
@@ -1174,30 +1174,30 @@ label chapter_x6:
 
     "I motion to Stella and Rosa carefully carrying her siblings back to the apartment."
 
-    "There’s a softness in Trish’s eyes as she sees her tired family being cared for by the two."
+    "There's a softness in Trish's eyes as she sees her tired family being cared for by the two."
     pause 1
 
     "I really should have tried talking with her sooner."
     pause .5
 
-    A "I’m sorry."
+    A "I'm sorry."
 
     A "For never getting to really know you."
 
     show trish considering with dissolve
     "Trish sighs and shakes her head."
 
-    T "It’s fine, Anon. But you’re still a dweeb."
+    T "It's fine, Anon. But you're still a dweeb."
 
-    A "Never said I wasn’t."
+    A "Never said I wasn't."
 
     show trish smile with dissolve
-    "The diminutive girl giggles lightly and I can’t help but smile."
+    "The diminutive girl giggles lightly and I can't help but smile."
     pause .5
 
     Nas "Yo!"
 
-    "Naser finished laying out the tarp and is now walking over with a small cake on a tray."
+    "Naser has finished laying out the tarp and is now walking over with a small cake on a tray."
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -1211,7 +1211,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
 
     Nas "Anon, got a light? Birthday girl still needs to make her wish."
 
-    "I hold up Fang’s lighter."
+    "I hold up Fang's lighter."
 
     show anon:
         ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.7
@@ -1219,7 +1219,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
         ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.0
     pause 1
 
-    "The candles reading ‘19’ are lit, and everyone gathers around with Trish in the center."
+    "The candles reading '19' are lit, and everyone gathers around with Trish in the center."
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -1257,7 +1257,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     with dissolve
     pause 1.5
 
-    "Looks like they’re about to sing happy birthday."
+    "Looks like they're about to sing \"Happy Birthday\"."
     pause .5
 
     # no way of showing that Tana was still on Anon's shoulders
@@ -1266,14 +1266,14 @@ label chapter_x6:
         ease_cubic 2 xalign 1.15
     "I back away a bit past the edge of the crowd."
 
-    "It feels like I’d be ruining Trish’s moment if I stayed."
+    "It feels like I'd be ruining Trish's moment if I stayed."
     pause .5
 
     show rosa considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    Ro "Anon, you’re going to sing too, right?"
+    Ro "Anon, you're going to sing too, right?"
     pause .5
 
-    A "Err{cps=*.1}...{/cps} my singing voice isn’t that great."
+    A "Err{cps=*.1}...{/cps} my singing voice isn't that great."
     pause .5
 
     "A familiar set of claws wrap around my fingers."
@@ -1292,7 +1292,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    "Fuck, she’s even doing the cute eyes."
+    "Fuck, she's even doing the cute eyes."
     pause .5
 
     A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Alright."
@@ -1312,13 +1312,13 @@ label chapter_x6:
     "Trish inhales sharply and blows out the candles."
 
     show reed explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
-    Re "So, what’d you wish for{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?"
+    Re "So, what'd you wish for{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?"
     show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    T "You’re not supposed to tell, you stoner mong."
+    T "You're not supposed to tell, you stoner mong."
 
     show riley smirk with Dissolve(.25)
-    Riley "Should’ve wished that the skinnie there wasn’t tone deaf."
+    Riley "Should've wished that the skinnie there wasn't tone deaf."
 
     T "I should've, yeah."
     window hide
@@ -1328,7 +1328,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     show trish happy with dissolve
     T "Thank you all so much for doing this again{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    T "This is the best birthday i’ve had in awhile{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    T "This is the best birthday I've had in a while{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -1368,7 +1368,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     with dissolve
     pause .5
 
-    "Before we can escape from the manic hispanic, her arms capture Fang, Trish, and me in an embrace that threatens my spine and lungs."
+    "Before we can escape from the manic Hispanic, her arms capture me Fang and Trish in an embrace that threatens my spine and lungs."
 
     "Stella, in her infinite wisdom, decides to force the rest of us into the same hug."
     window hide
@@ -1402,7 +1402,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
     St "{i}Hai!{/i} It was so sweet, like one of my Japanese animes!"
     pause 1
 
-    T "{cps=*.3}{size=-10}I can’t breeve!{/size}{/cps}"
+    T "{cps=*.3}{size=-10}I can't breeve!{/size}{/cps}"
     window hide
     window auto
 

game/script/x7-naomi-tribulations.rpy

@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ label chapter_x7:
     pause .5
     show trish happy with dissolve
 
-   #show trish happy behind dimmer_darker at tleft with easeinleft
+    #show trish happy behind dimmer_darker at tleft with easeinleft
 
     T "Fang! It took a while but Reed’s distracted!"
 

game/src/credits.rpy

@@ -242,7 +242,8 @@ image d_credits_text = Composite(
 
 label lending:
     call get_ending from _call_get_ending_4
-    if _return == 4:
+    $ cached_ending = _return
+    if cached_ending == 4:
         pause 0.5
         show snootgame_big with dissolve: # Renpy not allowing you to grab images from the gui folder is serious bullshit
             subpixel True
@@ -272,7 +273,7 @@ label lending:
         pause 50
         queue music 'audio/OST/amberlight brillance live end.ogg'
         queue music "<silence 1.0>" loop
-    elif _return == 3:
+    elif cached_ending == 3:
         play music "audio/OST/Dino Destiny Reader.ogg"
         pause 0.5
         show c_credits_text:
@@ -304,12 +305,12 @@ label lending:
     stop music fadeout 5
     scene black with Dissolve(3)
     pause 2
-    if tradwife:
+    if cached_ending == 3:
         scene c10 with Dissolve(1.5)
         pause 20
         scene black with Dissolve(2)
         pause 1
-    elif anonscore >= 4 and fangscore >= 4:
+    elif cached_ending == 4:
         scene golden ending with Dissolve(1.5)
         pause 20
         scene black with Dissolve(2)

game/src/definitions.rpy

@@ -1548,28 +1548,28 @@ image fang very sad blur flip = im.Flip("highres/bluralt/fang very sad blur.webp
 image naomi neutral blur flip = im.Flip("highres/bluralt/naomi neutral blur.webp", horizontal=True)
 
 image fang pneutral blur = Composite(
-   (1412, 1500),
-   #(2683, 2850),
-   (0, 0), "highres/bluralt/fang neutral blur.webp",
-   (0, 0), "highres/bluralt/amberpendant1 blur.webp"
+    (1412, 1500),
+    #(2683, 2850),
+    (0, 0), "highres/bluralt/fang neutral blur.webp",
+    (0, 0), "highres/bluralt/amberpendant1 blur.webp"
 )
 image fang pbird happy blur = Composite(
-   (1412, 1500),
-   #(2683, 2850),
-   (0, 0), "highres/bluralt/fang flip off happy blur.webp",
-   (0, 0), "highres/bluralt/amberpendant1 blur.webp"
+    (1412, 1500),
+    #(2683, 2850),
+    (0, 0), "highres/bluralt/fang flip off happy blur.webp",
+    (0, 0), "highres/bluralt/amberpendant1 blur.webp"
 )
 image fang pneutral blur flip = Composite(
-   (1412, 1500),
-   #(2683, 2850),
-   (0, 0), im.Flip("highres/bluralt/fang neutral blur.webp", horizontal=True),
-   (0, 0), im.Flip("highres/bluralt/amberpendant1 blur.webp", horizontal=True)
+    (1412, 1500),
+    #(2683, 2850),
+    (0, 0), im.Flip("highres/bluralt/fang neutral blur.webp", horizontal=True),
+    (0, 0), im.Flip("highres/bluralt/amberpendant1 blur.webp", horizontal=True)
 )
 image fang pbird happy blur flip = Composite(
-   (1412, 1500),
-   #(2683, 2850),
-   (0, 0), im.Flip("highres/bluralt/fang flip off happy blur.webp", horizontal=True),
-   (0, 0), im.Flip("highres/bluralt/amberpendant1 blur.webp", horizontal=True)
+    (1412, 1500),
+    #(2683, 2850),
+    (0, 0), im.Flip("highres/bluralt/fang flip off happy blur.webp", horizontal=True),
+    (0, 0), im.Flip("highres/bluralt/amberpendant1 blur.webp", horizontal=True)
 )
 
 image raymba2 flip = im.Flip("raymba/raymba2.webp", horizontal=True)

game/storyline.rpy

@@ -30,7 +30,6 @@ label storyline:
         call chapter_13D from _call_chapter_13D
         call chapter_14D from _call_chapter_14D
     elif _return == 3:
-        $ tradwife = True
         call chapter_11C from _call_chapter_11C
         call chapter_12C from _call_chapter_12C
         call chapter_12_5C from _call_chapter_12_5C
@@ -42,7 +41,7 @@ label storyline:
         # no chapter_13 here since the scene is different enough to the other routes for everything to go into 13C
         call chapter_13B from _call_chapter_13B
         call chapter_14B from _call_chapter_14B
-    else:
+    else: # if all else fails, we just assume that we got Endings.Shooter
         call chapter_11A from _call_chapter_11A
         call chapter_12A from _call_chapter_12A
         call chapter_12_5D from _call_chapter_12_5D_1

game/tl/es/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy

@@ -4099,24 +4099,12 @@ translate es FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_94e85886:
     # A "Well... {w=0.3}Spears convinced me to send out a couple application letters for college."
     A "Bueno... {w=0.3}Spears me convenció de enviar un par de letras de aplicación para la universidad."
 
-# game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy:3121
-translate es FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_4e617de4:
-
-    # A "I’m thinking of doing something with music{cps=*.1}...{/cps} maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
-    A "Estoy pensando en hacer algo con música{cps=*.1}...{/cps} ¿quizás convertirme en ingeniero de sonido?"
-
 # game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy:3124
 translate es FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_a2735d38:
 
     # A "I’m not sure yet."
     A "Todavía no estoy seguro."
 
-# game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy:3126
-translate es FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_4e617de4_1:
-
-    # A "I’m thinking of doing something with music{cps=*.1}...{/cps} maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
-    A "Estoy pensando en hacer algo con música{cps=*.1}...{/cps} ¿quizás convertirme en ingeniero de sonido?"
-
 # game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy:3128
 translate es FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_5ce0f5f5:
 
@@ -6127,3 +6115,11 @@ translate es strings:
     old "Not certain just yet"
     new "Todavía no estoy seguro"
 
+# TODO: Translation updated at 2023-05-07 00:20
+
+# game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy:3123
+translate es FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_4e617de4:
+
+    # A "I’m thinking of doing something with music{cps=*.1}...{/cps} maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
+    A "Estoy pensando en hacer algo con música{cps=*.1}...{/cps} ¿quizás convertirme en ingeniero de sonido?"
+

game/tl/es/script/7.concert-day.rpy

@@ -2226,48 +2226,6 @@ translate es PostCableConundrum_797b4809:
     # "Right into Trish’s trap, {w=0.3}hook, {w=0.3}line, {w=0.3}sinker and rod."
     "Justo en la trampa, {w=0.3}el anzuelo, {w=0.3}la línea, {w=0.3}la plomada y en la caña de Trish."
 
-# game/script/7.concert-day.rpy:1539
-translate es PostCableConundrum_afcbc2bb:
-
-    # A "I do NOT have a thing for Incontineisha."
-    A "La incontinencia NO es mi fetiche."
-
-# game/script/7.concert-day.rpy:1542
-translate es PostCableConundrum_afcbc2bb_1:
-
-    # A "I do NOT have a thing for Incontineisha."
-    A "La incontinencia NO es mi fetiche."
-
-# game/script/7.concert-day.rpy:1545
-translate es PostCableConundrum_afcbc2bb_2:
-
-    # A "I do NOT have a thing for Incontineisha."
-    A "La incontinencia NO es mi fetiche."
-
-# game/script/7.concert-day.rpy:1548
-translate es PostCableConundrum_afcbc2bb_3:
-
-    # A "I do NOT have a thing for Incontineisha."
-    A "La incontinencia NO es mi fetiche."
-
-# game/script/7.concert-day.rpy:1551
-translate es PostCableConundrum_afcbc2bb_4:
-
-    # A "I do NOT have a thing for Incontineisha."
-    A "La incontinencia NO es mi fetiche."
-
-# game/script/7.concert-day.rpy:1554
-translate es PostCableConundrum_afcbc2bb_5:
-
-    # A "I do NOT have a thing for Incontineisha."
-    A "La incontinencia NO es mi fetiche."
-
-# game/script/7.concert-day.rpy:1557
-translate es PostCableConundrum_afcbc2bb_6:
-
-    # A "I do NOT have a thing for Incontineisha."
-    A "La incontinencia NO es mi fetiche."
-
 # game/script/7.concert-day.rpy:1560
 translate es PostCableConundrum_afcbc2bb_7:
 
@@ -2630,3 +2588,11 @@ translate es strings:
     old "No."
     new "No."
 
+# TODO: Translation updated at 2023-05-07 00:20
+
+# game/script/7.concert-day.rpy:1556
+translate es PostCableConundrum_afcbc2bb:
+
+    # A "I do NOT have a thing for Incontineisha."
+    A "La incontinencia NO es mi fetiche."
+

game/utility.rpy

@@ -1,13 +1,12 @@
 ## Utility functions for game setup, debugging etc.
 
-label initstats(anon=0, fang=0, trad=False):
+label initstats(anon=0, fang=0):
     # Sets various game-related global variables
     # :param int anon:  Anon's score
     # :param int fang:  Fang's score
     # :param bool trad: Tradwife ending flag
     $ anonscore = anon
     $ fangscore = fang
-    $ tradwife = trad
     return
 
 label get_ending: